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"Flowers and Roots" Composition
Writing materials and requirements In life, you often see such scenes: almost all the roots and flowers are not gorgeous, but the branches, leaves and flowers that grow on the ground are mostly beautiful ... What associations or inspirations do these scenes give you? Please choose an angle to conceive your composition, and determine your own thinking, style (except poetry) and topic. The example shows the blooming flowers in the back ... I have heard two dialogues: the flower said to the root: root, I want to bloom in the most perfect posture. The root said to the flower: My flower, please believe me, I will provide you with blooming nutrients continuously. Even if I can only be buried in the soil and can't see the sunshine all day, I will choose the most fertile land to provide you with sufficient nutrients and let you accept the brightest sunshine. Not far from the flowers and roots, the child said to his mother, mom, I want to grow up in my way. The mother looked at the child affectionately and said, my child, please trust your mother. Mom is your strongest backing on your growth path. It doesn't matter whether you are tired or not. As long as you can grow up healthily and happily, it is my greatest wish. Yes, in our life, parents are like the roots that constantly provide life nutrients for flowers. They try to absorb every nutrient in the "soil" and then supply it to children in the form of love. Just like flowers bloom, children gain the motivation of life and become healthy and happy babies. However, while paying attention to children's success, we pay too little attention to parents' sweat and hard work, and think too little about why their manes have a lot of white hair and why their bodies are getting thinner and thinner. They devoted their whole lives to their children. Why can Ding Junhui, a "billiards prodigy", beat the top seed of seven consecutive championships at the age of 18? In fact, success naturally has a lot to do with his talent and diligence, but more importantly, his father's persistent support. In order to give Xiaoding a better practice environment, my father sold the non-staple food factory that he had operated for many years, bought seven billiard tables and opened a small shop. No matter how busy the business is, he will definitely set aside a table for Xiaoding to practice. In order to give Xiaoding a better chance to practice, his father moved many times. Ding Junhui's success is not accidental, but his father provided him with nutrients for growth. The success of Hu Yihu, the famous host of Phoenix TV, also stems from his father's support. Hu Yihu was born in a slum in Taiwan Province province. His father deeply blamed himself for not giving the tiger a good learning environment. He made up his mind to save money and leave it to the best school. With the best education, Hu Yihu is successful today. While seeing the aura of Ding Junhui and Hu Yihu, parents who have contributed to their success should also cast admiring eyes. It is they who give children a steady stream of nutrients, spirit and material motivation. You have to ask me, why are the flowers beautiful but the roots ugly? I want to tell you that the flower is beautiful because it absorbs a steady stream of oxygen from the root, and the root dedicated its most beautiful years to the flower, so that the flower can bloom. It didn't have a chance to enjoy the sunshine, so it passed on its beauty to the flowers. Therefore, flowers should be grateful to roots. Children should be grateful to their parents for their growth. The author chooses the material composition. The material summarizes a phenomenon in daily life-the underground roots and flowers are not beautiful in shape, and the branches and leaves growing on the ground are beautiful in posture. We should correctly understand the relationship between roots and flowers: first, the causal relationship. Roots and peanuts produce flowers, and only roots and flowers can produce flowers. Secondly, the contrast relationship, the ugliness of roots and the beauty of flowers ... The author thinks of children and mothers from the relationship between flowers and roots, which is linked with cause and effect. Taking Ding Junhui and Hu Yihu as examples, it is natural to draw such a view: flowers should thank the roots for their blooming, and children should thank their parents for their growth, and they are deeply cordial after reading them. Revelation: The beauty of the article lies not only in rhetoric, but also in broad vision and profound understanding. In fact, the flower root is more beautiful (52 points). There is such a fable: One day, the rose on the ground carried Jiao Yan's head and proudly said to the flower root under the ground, "Ugly root, why do you want to cling to my beautiful body?" After listening to it, Huagen was silent for a long time and only said, "Because of your beauty, I need to work hard to transport nutrients up." It is precisely because of the nutrition conveyed by the flower root that the rose can hold its head proudly, and it is precisely because the flower root has worked hard to convey nutrition to the flowers that the flower root has become rough and ugly. In the real world, we can also see these hard "flower roots". Migrant workers in cities are one of the "flower roots". With the rapid development of China's economy, the tall buildings in big cities are getting taller. The life of city people is as rich and happy as that beautiful rose. But do you know what supports the beautiful life of city people? It's the exhausted migrant workers who work day and night! Migrant workers are overworked with meager wages. The road in the city is flatter and wider than the road under their feet; The tall buildings in the city are more magnificent and modern in their hands. But has the life of migrant workers become as beautiful as the city? We can't see it. We will only think of migrant workers after dinner and pay attention to their living conditions. Migrant workers, as the flower roots supporting the big flowers in the city, have worked hard, but their efforts also make us admire and sigh for their beautiful efforts. There is also a kind of person who tries his best to deliver more nutrition to one flower after another without expecting anything in return. This man is Yuan Longping. Yuan Longping has fed thousands of "flowers", and his hybrid rice has solved the global hunger problem, making 2% of the world's population only satisfy 7% of China's land. Having made such a great contribution, the state wanted to allocate funds to Yuan Longping, but Yuan Longping rebuffed it. "I just did what I had to do." Yuan Longping said. Thousands of "flowers" in Qian Qian are thriving and becoming more beautiful under the "flower root" of Yuan Longping, while "flower root" Yuan Longping is still doing what he should do in obscurity and living a simple life. The spirit of "Flower Root" has been interpreted more meaningfully in Yuan Longping. It is often seen in life that flowers are more beautiful than flower roots. But it is precisely because of the support of flower roots that the beauty of flowers is more vivid and real. Can you deny that the roots of roses are more beautiful than roses? This is also an ingredient associated with cause and effect. The author associates Hua Gen with migrant workers in the city and Yuan Longping. It is their efforts that make the city develop and alleviate the hunger problem. The composition material is close to life, which is worth learning from. Revelation: The ancients said that "those who love literature are classics", so writing must choose materials with true feelings. Behind the beauty (55 points), roots and flowers extend in the soil in an ugly posture, sucking a little nutrition, and the roots become rough and unsightly due to friction and other factors. But flower roots support the beauty of branches, leaves and flowers in the dark land, so that they can face the sun and show their graceful appearance in the sun. Four seasons cycle. Since there is lush spring, there are also fallen leaves in autumn; Since there is enthusiasm in summer, there will be snow in winter. Behind the beauty, there are always countless efforts, but the process is always ignored. Without roots, there can be no enchanting flowers; Without falling many times, how can there be an eagle flying high and despising life? Without the accumulation of every stone, there would be no magnificent pyramid; Without the unremitting efforts of scientists, there would be no throb of Yang Liwei and others boarding space. Luo Yingzhen, a familiar name, touched people's hearts. She used the simplest method of traditional women in China to explain her constancy to her lover. What people saw was that her husband, who had been lying in the hospital bed for a long time, finally broke free from the devil's hand and woke up under her unremitting call, but she didn't know that Luo Yingzhen shed tears for her youth. Is it the miracle of life or the power of mind? There must be endless bitterness behind this. Liu Xiang, a hero in people's hearts. Behind his success, there are dozens of training programs tailored by coaches for him; How many people's efforts are involved behind his success! When he has a rest after training, the staff will sort out and analyze the collected data, and then work out the training tasks for the next day. Just for the coach to get the data the next morning, the staff couldn't rest and even forgot dinner. Behind the beauty, there are always silent devotees. Perhaps, all difficulties and obstacles are paving stones for success in life; Perhaps, every thunderbolt is jazz that resounds through youth. There is no road without turning, and there is no success in one step. When others succeed, we should see the efforts behind them. When we succeed, we should always look back behind them. Although those efforts are not worth mentioning, they are also beautiful and come on. The golden color of autumn shines with gold. When we are satisfied, we should always think of spring. The courage to break through the cold has created life and brought a trace of spring. Think about summer, it is full of nutrition, still standing in the hot sun, standing with the rain, strong. Beauty contains too much expectation. Hard work brings a lot of pain. This is also an article that makes sense from the perspective of causality. The root is Luo Yingzhen and the flower is her husband; The root is Liu Xiang's coach and staff, and the flower is Liu Xiang ... "Perhaps, difficulties and obstacles are the paving stones for success in life; Perhaps, every thunder and lightning is jazz that resounds through youth. " Full of literary metaphors, shining with the brilliance of philosophy. And the author's problem-solving skills are worth learning. Revelation: Only with the understanding of the device, when the understanding of the device is the first, it will be the last. Waiting for flowers to bloom (52 minutes) Ugly Rose Root has always had a dream. One day, laughing at its undercurrent will see its enchanting flowers on the ground and the beauty extending from ugliness ... Ugly flower root has always believed in this dream, because he knows that as long as he believes, it will always bloom. Not only the flower root, but almost all of us have the belief that flowers bloom at the flower root stage. It is precisely because of this belief that we will smile when we accumulate energy in the dark, and we can wait firmly in contempt and ridicule. As long as we believe that flowers will bloom! Demosthenes is an ugly flower root. He stuttered since he was a child, but he wanted to be an orator, mocking and discriminating. He is as silent as a flower root and tortures his tongue with stones every day. Finally, one day, his hard work burst into amazing splendor. Wang Bo is also such an ugly flower root. He is brilliant but frustrated, but he doesn't believe it. He knew that one day he would shine, and Preface to Wang Tengting made this genius an immortal legend! Believe in dreams, dreams will blossom and bear fruit one day, but how many people can really understand the meaning of being a flower root in life? Can you really grasp the period of being a flower root? Are you, me or him mediocre? Who will be devastated by the ridicule of others? Who gives up on himself when his conditions are not good? Who gave up halfway in the process of chasing dreams? Is that you? If so, please remember: without the courage to be a flower root, you will never get the joy of flowering, and without the firm belief of waiting for flowering, you will always be an ugly flower root. A person must have such a firm belief, and a nation also needs such a belief. After World War II, Japan was in ruins, but it emerged as the second largest country in the world economy in just a few decades. Behind the flowering is the Japanese people's forbearance towards the United States, the encouragement to "refuel" every day, and the pain of gritting their teeth. Japan, with its iron-like faith, has successfully extended the dazzling flower of national rejuvenation from the ugly flower root. Friends, when we are just an ugly flower root, we must believe in the future. Now please be patient silently, secretly collect and wait quietly ... One day, today's pain and hardship will extend into gorgeous flowers! Wait, your flowers are blooming. From the perspective of material comparison, this paper associates that everyone's life, including the development of each nation, has a process from flower roots to flowers, with a prominent center and a clear theme. This article is deeply emotional, and the author carefully chooses examples. The relationship between "root" and "flower" is very clear. This article is rich in content, elegant in language and strong in emotion. It is really a beautiful and durable article. Enlightenment: If there are more than two use cases in an exam composition, we should learn the ideas and skills of this article.