Keywords: 600 words in the sixth grade of primary school

Words: 600 words composition

This article applies to: the sixth grade of primary school.

Composition source:

This composition is about 600 words in grade six of primary school. The title is "That taught me". Everyone is welcome to contribute enthusiastically.

In the past, zebra crossings were rarely used when crossing the road, and so were many students. But since that happened, I never dare to do it again.

On the day of the final exam, I came home after the exam. Father told me sadly that grandma had a car accident and is now lying in the hospital.

When I arrived at the hospital, my grandmother was lying in the hospital bed screaming with pain, and tears were swirling in her eyes. My aunt told me about the process of my grandmother being hit by a car at the bedside: my aunt came to visit my grandmother, and then they went shopping at Guoguang supermarket opposite. Grandma didn't take the zebra crossing as usual when crossing the road. Who knows, just halfway through, a motorcycle roared. Maybe it was too fast to stop the car, or maybe the cyclist panicked. As a result, the car quickly fell to the ground and pressed heavily on grandma's calf, causing grandma's calf fracture.

That day, I went to the hospital to visit my grandmother again. As soon as I walked to the door of the ward, I heard grandma lying in bed mumbling. I stopped and pricked up my ears. It turns out that grandma is deeply blaming herself!

"Why don't you take the zebra crossing? Now I am in harmony. I have suffered a lot in old bones. I've been lying in bed for half a month, and I haven't been able to go home for several years. I also brought trouble to the children. I bring tea and rice every day, and my urine is poured out? Alas!

I wonder how much it will cost!

When I looked up and saw that I was coming, grandma said to me seriously, "Yang Yang, you should never cross the road like grandma. Grandma is good at this. What if it's not good? !

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This incident not only made grandma regret it, but also deeply educated me. From then on, every time I cross the road, I honestly take the zebra crossing and never dare to violate the traffic rules again.

Teacher's comment: Because grandma who didn't walk the zebra crossing as usual was in a car accident, she didn't spend money because of the pain, and even kept her home busy, which made her deeply educated. With the help of menstruation, the author tells the story of the car accident, and also tells the consequences of violating the traffic rules with grandma's narrative. This is the biggest writing highlight of this article, and it is also a very good practice to echo the topic before and after.

Liang Yangyang, Class 4, Xijin Road Primary School, zhanggong district, Ganzhou City, Jiangxi Province (1)