"Reading this book has given me a profound education. This sick sentence can be changed like this:

Change the law to 1, delete "read" and comma, and change it to "This book has made me deeply educated."

Change the second law, delete "stone" and change it to "I read this book and am deeply educated."

The method of modifying sick sentences: improper collocation

1, improper collocation of subject and predicate

Exodus: His amiable smile and persuasive teaching always appear in front of my eyes.

The reason for this sentence lies in the improper collocation of subject and predicate, and the subject head word "teach" does not match the predicate head word "appear", so "persuasive teaching" is deleted.

2. Improper collocation of verbs and objects

Example: We visited the experience of heroic activities in this school.

The reason for this sentence lies in the improper collocation of verb and object, and the head word "visit" of the predicate does not match the head word "experience" of the object. Just change "visit" to "study".