2. Appreciation of three good sentences 1: "Under our feet, the waves gently kissed the rocks as if they were sleepy."
Appreciation: A verb "kiss" describes the intimate and gentle modality of the waves.
2. "The sea is surging, engulfing islands far and near."
Appreciation: "Crazy", "Surge" and "Swallow" are powerful words, depicting the fearless character of the sea.
3. "The forest is majestic, covering the sky and boundless. The wind is like a green sea, and the night is as quiet as a solid wall. "
Appreciation: Taking "sea" and "wall" as metaphors, I wrote vast expanse, an indestructible forest. Through the glossary, we can understand the author's love and appreciation of the forest.
Counting white sails, like several white feathers, fluttering lightly on this golden sea.
Appreciation: Metaphorically compare a sailboat to a feather, and the size of the sailboat sets off the size of the sea.
5. The sea water is so blue that people feel that the color of jadeite is too light and the color of sapphire is too dark, which is hard for the master to describe.
Appreciation: paint the color of sea water by contrast; Use the difference between "shallow" and "deep" to express the subtlety and indescribability of seawater blue.
6. I can't forget the refreshing and humid sea breeze with the smell of talking about the sea, blowing people's hair, cheeks and body. As attractive as a gorgeous and rich woman.
Appreciation: Using metaphor, the indescribable sea breeze is charming and moving, which shows the wonderful feeling brought by the sea breeze to the fullest.
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I want to appreciate three good sentences. Appreciation of Cen Can's Good Sentences 1: How many times can you laugh in life? Fight for wine, and Cen Can will get drunk. "Liangzhou 1 Pavilion and Judge 2 Night Collection" 1 Liangzhou: now Wuwei, Gansu.
Tangxi drug rehabilitation center is located. (2) Judge: the subordinates of the envoys and observation envoys of our time in the Tang Dynasty.
The seven-character ancient poem "Liangzhou Pavilion and Night Collection of Judges" describes the poet's trip to the Northern Dynasties through Liangzhou, a detoxification mansion in Hexi, and his party and banquet with his old friends. These two sentences mean that laughter broke out from time to time at the party. It's rare to get together and laugh like this. When old friends get together, it's rare to get drunk and not return! With wine to entertain, happy, hearty laughter, heroic optimism, from the expressions of the characters, we can feel the pulse of the prosperous Tang Dynasty.
Appreciation of Cen Can's Famous Poems (Ⅱ): Sleeping on the Pillow? Ok, Wan Li Road is in the south of the Yangtze River. Cen Can's "Spring Dream" and "Spring Dream" are a four-line poem. These two sentences are to remember the beauty in the distance-I walked thousands of miles south of the Yangtze River to meet you when I was sleeping on my pillow for a moment.
The contrast between "A Time" and "A Thousand Miles" not only shows the confusion in dreams, but also implies the usual affection, that is, the speed of time and the breadth of space, showing the intensity and depth of feelings. Although it's too short, it feels good in the end.
Poetry and dreams sincerely express the feelings contained in the heart. Appreciation of Cen Can's Famous Sentences (3): Steaming the stone with sand ① Burning the cloud ②? Boiling waves, burning waves and speculating on the moon in the Han Dynasty ③ Cen Can's Rehai ④ Sending Cui Shi back to Beijing ① Shi Shuo: Melting the stone.
(2) Lu Yun: Clouds in border areas. Blow up the moon: It's so hot that the moon looks like it's been blown up.
(4) Rehai: Lake Issyk-Kul in Central Asia was under the jurisdiction of my envoy Anxi in the Tang Dynasty.
4. Excerpts and appreciation of three sentences The First Phoenix Flower evokes not only the memory of "Becoming a Butterfly" when he was a child, but a pity when he dreamed of the phoenix. The impression of a fiery red flower, coupled with the song of the jackal, blew the teenager's dream and realized that he was neither a phoenix bird nor a buttonwood tree. Finally, I saw my face in a broken dream. It turned out to be just a teenager. It turned out to be a nightmare.
Appreciation: I always thought that Lin Qingxuan's words were Zen or fable, but I didn't expect such lyrical and beautiful words. The author wrote the phoenix flower, as well as the noble plane tree, the nirvana phoenix and the young hymn. As time goes by, parting always makes us sad and helpless, but the phoenix flower still blooms so enthusiastically, which reflects the sadness of parting. The next day is the sky, the mountains stretch, and clusters of white flowers are like flowing rivers. It seems that all life in the world should come by appointment. At this moment, in the sunshine as transparent as honey, they cheered at the same time and rotated at the same time, turning into countless floating points.
Such an afternoon full of white flowers always feels deja vu, and always feels that it is an aggregation that can be put into any kind of time and space. It can be put into the Book of Songs, Chu Ci, classicism and post-impressionism-there should be such an afternoon and such an early summer in any beautiful record of mankind.
Appreciate:
This passage depicts the beautiful scenery of tung flowers in full bloom with vivid and beautiful brushstrokes. The combination of vision and hearing, dynamic and static, is full of vitality and movement. The author compares the prosperous and blooming scene to a flowing river, and compares the sunlight to alcohol and honey, and describes this scene beautifully. The last sentence strengthens the language situation, making people feel the vitality of the eruption when tung flowers are in full bloom, as if the whole hillside is covered with tung flowers, and the tension of life is infinitely extended.
The author's imagination is full of romantic dreams.
Third, now that the sun is rising and the fog is gradually dispersing, Yuan Ye is green and looks soft, which makes me feel that even if I accidentally fall from this mountain, I won't scratch a piece of skin, and I will be bounced twice at most, and I will get green that a sock can't wash off. And the river around the foot of the mountain is also green. It is another kind of green, bright, as if mixed with oil. As for the mountain, it's still green, but it's just a bunch of dark green, which makes people feel that no matter where you start, you can't open a crack. People think that even if you dig it down two floors, its green color will not fade. In addition, my screen window is also green, very light green, really as ethereal as the gauze skirt of ancient beauty under the sunlight.
-Zhang Xiaofeng's "Green Letter"
Appreciate:
The author fully mobilized his vision and touch, and wrote the green in spring. Metaphors are used in many places, and the images are vivid. I like this passage because it is very warm after reading it. Where does this warmth come from? I think it flowed from those warm words. "Bright", "rich" and "full of vitality" are more poetic and beautiful because they are written for children. The green color in the author's works seems to be alive and flowing, as if it appeared in the letter. I like green, too. I like this piece of green written by the author. Their energy makes people feel happy and hopeful.
I hope it helps you ~
5. Excerpt and appreciation of good sentences and paragraphs 1. Life is the most precious thing for people.
Everyone has only one life. A man's life should be spent like this: looking back, he will not regret wasting his time, nor will he be ashamed of his meanness and vulgarity; On his deathbed, he can say, "My life and all my energy have been devoted to the most magnificent cause in the world-the struggle for the liberation of all mankind."
Seize the time and live quickly, because an inexplicable disease or an unexpected tragic event will interrupt life. Appreciation: This is a famous saying in How Steel was Tempered.
Paul thought it difficult to take part in the work because he was injured. When he recovered, he walked in the street and walked near the tomb of the martyrs. Paul is very sad. This is a famous monologue that inspires generations of young people to move forward.
It expounds the meaning of life from the perspective of Marxist proletarian outlook on life. It reflects Paul's disappointment that he can't contribute to the people because of his injury.
Paul therefore had the idea of cherishing time and living fast. 2. A snowstorm suddenly struck.
Gray clouds are low on the ground, moving and filling the sky. Heavy snow fell one after another.
In the evening, there was a strong wind, and the chimney made a whining roar. The wind chased the rapidly circling snowflakes in the forest, flashing left and right, screaming bitterly and stirring the whole forest.
The snowstorm roared all night. The shabby house on the station can't keep the heat at all. Although the fire burned all night, everyone was frozen from the inside out.
When I went to work the next morning, the snow was deep and I couldn't walk, but there was a red sun hanging on the treetops and there was not a cloud in the blue sky. Appreciation: this is the weather when the railway is being dug, and the severe cold makes it more difficult to build roads that are not easy.
This scene description shows the harsh environment at that time, creates a gloomy atmosphere, and highlights the difficulty of the project and the urgency of time. ",the chimney purred.
The wind chased the rapidly circling snowflakes in the forest, flashing left and right, screaming bitterly and stirring the whole forest. The anthropomorphic technique is used here to show the magnitude of the snowstorm, which shocked everything and made people clearly aware of the bad weather.
Like a big tree. Strong roots are deeply rooted in the soil.
Even if the treetops are cut off. It will never wither.
Appreciate: Know why you died. The problem is different.
Someone who knows this. There will be strength.
If you think the truth is on your side. You'll even relax.
This is how the hero's behavior is produced. 4. Put the gun away.
Don't tell anyone. Even if.
Life is unbearable, but stick to it. Only in this way can life become valuable.
Appreciation: Any fool can end himself at any time! This is the most cowardly and easiest way out. Even if life is unbearable.
Find a way to live. Life is always useful.
5. "There is no need to hold a mass meeting. No one here needs publicity and encouragement.
Tokarev. What you said is very accurate.
They are really priceless. This is how steel is made! "Zhu He.
Appreciation: Go forward bravely. Tempered into steel in the struggle.
Open the road to freedom. Stand up and go to war! This is how steel is made! 6. Suddenly, people began to stir up. A rider fell on his back and galloped along the road.
Appreciation: This sentence uses exaggerated rhetoric, which highlights people's panic about the arrival of the army, and at the same time shows that people hope that the Red Army will come to the town to rescue them as soon as possible and hope to live a peaceful and happy life. From "A rider falls on his back and gallops along the road"
It can be seen from this sentence that the situation is urgent. 7. "I said, old woman, your clothes are not neat enough.
Since you wear military uniform, you have to wear leather crotch breeches, budyonny pointed hat and saber. Otherwise, you are the invincible' four unlike'. Appreciation: This sentence has two meanings.
1, highlighting the harsh living environment and conditions of the Red Army. 2. Show the dauntless spirit of the Red Army not bowing to difficulties.
As a soldier, we should not look at his appearance and clothes, but have the spirit that a soldier should have. 8. Like a loach, he kept looking around and deliberately avoided direct reply. He subconsciously felt that danger was approaching.
Appreciation: Here, a figurative rhetorical device is used to compare "baldness" to loach, which vividly describes that he is afraid to answer the questions raised by his superiors and shows his anxiety that his superiors are satisfied with his work department and dismiss him. It can be seen that the author is angry with such a person who leads the first-class rations but does not contribute to the country and does not think about the people. 9. The old man let go of the fishing line first, then shouted and tried his best to close the line, but the fish refused to give in easily. Instead of swimming an inch upstream, he swam slowly.
The old man carried the fishing line on his back to increase the tension on the marlin, but it didn't do much. He watched the ship drift northwest. The old man thought that the fish would die soon if he pushed too hard, but four hours later, the fish dragged the boat to the vast sea, and the old man still carried the fishing line on his back without any slack.
They are fighting. At this time, the old man looked back and saw that the land had disappeared from his sight.
The sun sets in the west and the sky is full of stars. According to the observation of the stars, the old man judged that the big fish had not changed direction all night. It was very cold at night, and the old man's sweat dried up. He felt cold all over.
He put a sack under the fishing line on his shoulder to reduce friction, and then bent down and leaned against the bow. He felt much more comfortable. In order to persist, he kept talking to fish, birds and the sea, constantly recalling the past and thinking about Manorine. He said to himself loudly, "if only the child were here, so that he could help me and look at all this."
Appreciation: the article vividly writes the scene of the old man fighting with the big fish, which makes people feel the vicissitudes and sophistication of the old man. Words such as "as always" and "untiring" describe the persistence and perseverance of the elderly.
The old fisherman's fighting spirit is not afraid of difficulties. Like him, we should not be satisfied with the status quo, be positive, persevere in everything, and face difficulties when encountering difficulties.
6. A good sentence describing the character's movements plus appreciation (three sentences each) Excitement and excitement are like a flood that burst its banks, pouring out of his mind in a mighty way, which can no longer conceal his gentleness. Run, run, run! His heart is excited, and his happiness can no longer be expressed in our shallow language. It seems that every hair on his body has a description of the beating and happiness of the characters' movements, and the most important thing is to pay attention to observation.
In daily life, we should pay special attention to the behaviors and actions of people around us, pay special attention to the characteristics of different people's actions, and grasp the characteristics to observe them carefully and repeatedly. Take the following example: Xiaoli pursed her mouth, hunched over, crept up and approached it step by step.
Approaching, approaching, I saw her quietly reaching out her right hand to the butterfly, and her open fingers closed and caught the butterfly's wings. Xiaoli jumped and jumped with joy.
He bent down, the basketball kept flapping back and forth, left and right under his hand, and his eyes turned around, looking for a chance to "break through". Suddenly, he quickened his pace, then turned left and right, rushed through two layers of defense lines and came to the basket. After a tiger jump, he turned to shoot, and the basketball drew a beautiful arc in the air and landed in the basket impartially.
Catching butterflies and playing basketball are our common activities, and some students have even participated in them in person. But the writing is not specific.
Due to careful observation, the author described the movements and demeanor of catching butterflies and playing basketball vividly. Second, we should grasp the action description that can best highlight the characteristics of the characters.
Look at this example: he is over 50 years old. Wearing a pair of glasses with high myopia.
He carefully took off his glasses and wiped them with the hem of his clothes. "Uh-huh ..." He was about to speak when he suddenly remembered something. He fumbled in the plate, then quickly reached into his pocket and took out a box of matches. Only then did he say "uh-huh" again, stood up straight and said in a particularly loud voice, "Now start watching the teacher do the experiment!" There is an unpleasant smell of smoke in the classroom.
Teacher Mao stood at the door panting. His head was steaming, and there were several glistening beads of sweat on the tip of his nose. His eyebrows were raised angrily, but his mouth smiled. Seeing us, he blinked in surprise, and the muscles on his face suddenly froze and did not move, just like the "freeze" in the movie.
We were all nailed there like wood. The old man's hands are dexterous.
In just a few minutes, a clay figurine was born in his hands. Watch him pick up another lump of mud, knead it into a circle first, and then rub it gently with his hands to make it soft and slippery.
Then, rub on it and gradually separate the head, body and legs. He held a clay figurine in his left hand and fiddled with his right hand on his head. Soon, the clay figurine put on his hat.
The above three paragraphs all capture the movements that can best highlight the characteristics of the characters. Example 1 is about an old teacher with high myopia.
Through the description of actions such as "wiping glasses with the hem of clothes", "scrambling in the plate" and "rushing into the pocket", the characteristics of an old teacher with high myopia, clumsy movements and a little "confused" are written. Example 2 mainly describes the characteristics of facial expressions and actions of grumpy people when they are angry. Such as: "standing at the door panting", "steaming head", "raising eyebrows angrily", "grinning down" and "muscles motionless". When angry, the facial expression is vivid and lifelike.
The third example is to grasp the action characteristics of clay figurines and write an image of an ingenious old artist. Third, we should use verbs accurately and appropriately.
Read the following examples to see what the dotted words in each paragraph do. It's too late to say now, but it's too soon.
The athlete who fell to the ground stood up suddenly with his hands propped up and tiptoed. The left foot points to the starting line, and the knee bends and squats firmly.
Hands are like two wooden pillars stuck in the ground, and the whole body leans forward slightly, like an eagle spreading its wings. In these short sentences, 65,438+00 verbs are used to accurately and realistically describe the starting posture of athletes.
She squeezed into the gate and put the burden on the ground; He stepped forward, grabbed the grass on the ground, held it down with his knees, leaned forward, tied his waist with his hands, lifted it up and threw it into a corner of the courtyard wall. These dotted verbs in the paragraph are appropriate.
Wrote the image of a capable, agile, energetic and skilled rural girl. She saw grandma stand up and lift the lid with both hands.
I struggled to open it several times before I opened a crack a little. A thick smoke rushed out of the stove mouth and almost smoked grandma's face.
Grandma casually brushed her wrinkled face with her sleeve, shook her head again and said to herself, "It's no use getting old!" " "This passage describes the action of an old woman doing housework. With verbs such as "uncovering, rushing, pulling, brushing and shaking", the characteristics of the old people's work movements are accurately and aptly written.
The above examples show that in order to write the dynamic image of the characters vividly, we must use accurate and appropriate verbs to describe the actions of the characters. Words describing dancing learning (1) The words describing learning attitude include diligent, diligent, earnest, diligent, open-minded, studious, diligent and practical, shameless, perfectionist, questioning, forgetting to eat or sleep, hungry, persistent and meticulous (2) words about studying, concentrating, holding one's breath, gazing intently and enjoying. Concentrate (3) Xiao Fei sat in his seat, writing and writing, as if there were a steady stream of spring water flowing out of his pen. I wrote a composition in less than one class.
Xiaohong just sat facing the window, and the afternoon sun shone on her round face, making her cheeks more rosy; She holds her chin with a pen, her eyes are wide open, her bright eyes are swimming slowly, and her plump chin is slightly upturned-this is the expression that the math teacher is familiar with and loves whenever she thinks of a more ingenious way to solve a math problem. Whenever I do my homework, the nib rustles, as if a bird is singing to me, and as if to encourage me: "If you are not afraid of difficulties, climb the peak bravely."
She stood up and answered so accurately, so naturally, so smoothly, as if she had been prepared. She recited in cadence, with a beautiful tone and expression, and moved her seat.
7. Excerpt, appreciation, theme, composition name (three sentences appreciation) My accumulated good words:
It is lucky to see the tragedy with your own eyes. After all, it is gorgeous and charming.
A dazzling sea of people crowded with colorful comings and goings.
Endless magnificence slowly passes through the dizzying world.
Deafening, waving, echoing, throwing, shining.
Bright and dazzling, grotesque and endless, shining and handsome.
Charm, clap your hands. You should be in tears after the phone call.
Struggling hard, squeezing hard, pushing hard, screaming at the top of my lungs, frantic.
Scan your hands in turn, hide your face, be at a loss, be anxious, and refuse one by one.
Hair is messy and tattered, and it begins slowly in amazement.
I have accumulated a very good sentence:
1. Finally, at the entrance of Rome Avenue, women flew towards the road like a gust of wind.
She rushed to the carriage like crazy, shouting that no one could understand happiness or pain, crying and reaching for her child.
Content main idea:
"Education of Love" mainly talks about: Love, the greatest, can make flower of life bloom; It can make troubles disappear. ...
My feeling:
Honey. Like sunshine, it warms my heart forever. Honey. Just like a small umbrella, I can feel at ease in rainy days with heavy rain. Honey. Like a street lamp on the side of the road, it illuminates the wide road and my life. Honey. Just like my mother's encouraging eyes, I am full of confidence ... love! Is the greatest! Can't be measured by money! Can't use money to calculate. In fact, love is beside our voice! It has brought us countless happiness, countless humor and countless tears ... Let's cherish it together, right beside us, right beside us! Let's also thank the love around us, just around us!