Daquan composition 1 Black hair, fair cheeks, she is my lighthouse in the dark, guiding me in the right direction; She is my winter sun, always warming my heart. Who is she? Is my dearest mother.
Mom, like a top, is as busy as a bee all day. Every day when I come home from work, I have to start cooking, washing dishes, sweeping the floor, mopping the floor and washing clothes ... I can't be idle for a moment. Besides, whenever I have any problems in my study, my mother will always teach me patiently until I understand, and never scold me or think I am stupid. Whenever I am sick, my mother is the hand that gives me medicine and takes my temperature. She always takes care of me.
Mom, I am in the fifth grade in a blink of an eye, and I have been carefully cared for by your warm wings. You are like my big tree, helping me to shelter from the wind and rain and enjoy the cool and rest. When I am helpless, you always show me the way; When I am sad, you always listen to me quietly. You always pay for me without regrets and always think of me. Your love for me is higher than the mountain and deeper than the sea! You cook for me every day, take me home every day, check my homework every day, take care of me every day, and do so many things for me without complaint every day. Be pregnant in October, change my diaper and feed me. You, the one who can only nag me, have dedicated your years to my life. This love is not for children. I easily reported them!
As the saying goes: "the tree wants to be quiet, but the wind will not stop." My son wants to raise, but he doesn't want to be close. " Filial piety should be timely. In this warm May, I want to quietly say to my mother, "Mom, you are the most grateful person in my life. Thank you for what you have done for me, asking for nothing in return. I love you forever! "
Standing quietly in front of the window, looking at a green tree, summer may be their season. Is there a season that suits me? Will heaven notice an ugly duckling?
"Spring rain breaks the bridge, people don't cross, boats support the shade", which is Xu Fu's spring; "Pear flower courtyard melts the moon, catkin pond is light wind", which belongs to the summer of Yanshu; "Stop and sit in the maple forest late, the frost leaves are red in February", which is the autumn day of Du Mu; "Hundreds of mountains have no birds, thousands of paths have no footprints." It was Liu Zongyuan's winter. Perhaps, only those celebrities, ancient and modern, Chinese and foreign, will have their own seasons, and only they will get God's care! As for a little me, I can only be a little me forever.
A lonely heart, what am I without my season? Suddenly I saw a stubborn little flower in the grass, holding this pink little flower, which was very obvious but insignificant in a piece of green. After all, it's just a little flower! "Give it up, don't belong to your season, never belong to you, a gust of wind blowing, can kill you, so desperately flowering, why? It's useless! " I think it's for the flowers and for myself. After a gust of wind, the petals really fell, some were blown away by the wind, but there was a little more pink on the grass. That flower still stubbornly holds the flower with only a few petals left.
I closed the window and turned my back, ashamed of my thoughts. God will never forget anyone. I believe there will always be a season for me, but it hasn't arrived yet!
wait for
My season.
After having dinner at my aunt's house, my cousin quickly took a few bites of rice, threw the bowl on the dining table and ran to play games, but there were still many rice grains in his bowl. Aunt ignored him and let him waste food.
I wonder what American children of our age are like. In order to teach children to cherish food, some schools take "recalling bitter experience and thinking sweet" as a compulsory course. Some schools also offer begging classes. At lunch time, most students dress up as vagrants, beggars or poor people and go to the cauldron opened by the school to get food. Not only do you not have enough to eat, but the quality of your food is not good. When children experience life, they feel the taste of hunger and learn not to waste food.
As a middle school student, frugality is also one of the traditional virtues of our Chinese nation. A porridge and a meal are hard to come by. Every grain we eat is planted by farmers. Is there any reason why we should not cherish food?
Daquan composition 4 1. The author can introduce his lovely xx to readers from the school gate to the teaching area (the giant flower bed in the teaching building) to the sports area (the big playground) in the order of orientation, which is distinct, selective and focused, and naturally reflects the vibrant atmosphere of the school.
2. The author combines the description of the scenery with the expression of feelings, and the scenery is integrated, highlighting the incomparable love for xx between the lines of pen and ink. The author focuses on describing the beautiful fountain, the grassy playground and the spacious and bright classroom, so that a beautiful xx can be presented to people.
3. With fresh thoughts, vivid appearance and beautiful writing style, the little author closely revolves around a word "green" and shows the beautiful scenery of xx according to the layout of "total score".
4. In this paper, figures of speech such as metaphor and personification are appropriately used to make the green vitality of xx in different seasons full of hope and fragrance.
5. The author grasped the unique scenery of xx in spring, wrote the beauty of xx accurately and aptly by using figurative figures of speech, and at the same time obliquely praised the hard-working gardener-teacher, which sublimated the theme of the article.
6. The little author's careful investigation, vivid and meticulous appearance and vivid metaphor personification make people feel immersive after reading it, and also make the author's mind and feelings like xx more natural and full.
7. Throughout the article, the style of the article is fresh and vivid, the appearance is vivid, and the news is combined. From the morning fog nearby to the sunrise in the distance, from the leaves in the air to the grass on the ground, from poplar trees to free-flying birds, the layers are distinct and distinct, making people feel as if they are in the air.
8. The spring in your works is rich and beautiful: red flowers, green grass, green mountains and blue sky. ...
9. It is very correct to grasp the characteristics of ""; "",give a person the feeling ".
10. When describing the scenery, I wrote my own understanding of the scenery and expressed my inner feelings. For example, I was surprised when I saw the first grass sprouting, I was delighted when I caught a glimpse of swallows nesting under their own eaves, I was amazed when I smelled the fragrance of peach blossoms, and I heard the teacher announce the' happiness' when the spring outing began ... These are all my feelings in my heart. As a landscape, it properly expresses the inner feelings and reverie, which makes the exercise vivid and more real, and also makes others impulsive.
1 1. Write what you see, hear, smell and feel about the beauty of spring into your exercise, so that your exercise is as vivid and beautiful as spring!
12. Flying kites is children's favorite sport, and their interest in it is obvious. Through detailed morphology, the colorful flight of kites in the sky is revealed.
13. After reading your exercise, we saw a lovely and innocent childlike innocence.
14. Grasping the characteristics of grass, trees and flowers in spring, according to the order of "",it depicts the scene of spring full of vitality and reflects its heartfelt happiness.
With the essentials of moving point inspection, the little author holds the morning color of xx vividly, and the lines are full of the little author's love for xx and nature.
Even the teacher's kind and natural language and amiable smile have narrowed the distance with the students. The atmosphere between teachers and students in the class is equal and harmonious. Let me talk about some opinions of our teacher after the joint evaluation:
First, the introduction of riddles to stimulate interest
Teacher Lian entered the classroom by guessing riddles, which not only stimulated students' interest in learning, but also taught students how to grasp the food, movements and shapes of animals to guess the bottom of riddles, paving the way for later writing guidance and playing the role of "moistening things and being silent".
Second, coherence is interlocking
Even the teacher made it clear in the whole class, one link at a time. First, she introduces the riddles that students are most interested in, and then instructs students to say their favorite animals. Then the teacher shows a model essay describing the kitten, so that students can understand how to grasp the central sentence and write clearly the characteristics of animals through specific examples. She also showed the fragments of white goose and white goose in the article, specifically guiding students how to grasp the details of animals' eating, activities, appearance and movements. Even the teacher showed sick sentences, so that students could understand how to write animals vividly in the process of modifying sick sentences. Finally, let the students write, complete the joint evaluation between teachers and students, and draw up the method of the topic for the students. These links are from easy to difficult, step by step, with clear levels and guidance in place.
Third, take your time.
Even if the teacher encountered courseware problems twice in this class, she didn't panic at all and could handle it calmly. So students can wait quietly and there will be no chaos in the classroom. It can be seen that the teacher has a strong ability to control the classroom.
Our teacher's opinion is:
Can the problematic paragraph presented by the teacher (that is, the little goldfish eating) be omitted? It is best to choose a well-written and problematic student work in the comment area for comment, so that students may be more impressed and have better effects. But on the whole, this is a successful composition class and worth learning.