By describing a series of events and emotional experiences of Du Xiaokang's duck release with his father, this paper depicts the psychological growth track of a teenager and reveals the truth that setbacks can promote people's rapid maturity.

The significance of the novel "Lonely Journey" not only refers to the loneliness, loneliness and panic that Du Xiaokang felt in the process of following his father to release ducks, but also the process of Du Xiaokang's spiritual change, that is, the process from loneliness, loneliness and panic to strength and hard work.

Second, the structure content

This novel is divided into three parts.

The first part (from the beginning to "I have to follow my father to release ducks") describes the reason why Du Xiaokang released ducks. )

The second part (from "Duckboat Driving Ducks" to "Until Next Spring") describes the process of Du Xiaokang and his father releasing ducks in the reeds.

The third part (from Day by Day to the end) describes Du Xiaokang's hardships when he released the duck, especially the hardships brought by finding the lost duck and his own growth experience-growth and strength. Reveals the theme of the article.

Through the ingenious tailoring and layout of the story, the novel reveals the social problem reflected in the article-the necessity of educating children's suffering and frustration.

Third, the environmental description of this paper.

The paragraphs of environmental description mainly include: Part I, Section 9, Section 1 1 ~ 12, Section 20. These environmental descriptions strengthen the lonely atmosphere and enhance Du Xiaokang's panic and anxiety. Verses 23 ~ 24 depict a beautiful and quiet picture, suggesting that Du Xiaokang's psychology is gradually calming down, but he is still scared about the long loneliness in the future. Section 9 of the second part describes the scene in the storm. The harsh natural environment is a factor that promotes the transformation of Du Xiaokang's thought. The sudden storm made Du Xiaokang realize his responsibility and grow up quickly. Section 20, after a storm comes a calm, the beautiful night indicates the maturity of Du Xiaokang. These environments highlight the artistic conception of "loneliness", which is also the environment for Du Xiaokang to grow up. It has played a very good role in the change of characters and the expression of the theme of the article.

Fourth, delicate psychological description.

Describe the details of Du Xiaokang's growth process: For example, the first part, section 10, describes Du Xiaokang's initial confusion in the face of loneliness and unknown future. Section 20, Du Xiaokang's panic and timidity in the face of a more lonely environment. For another example, in verse 2 ~ 4 of the second part, lonely people become more and more lonely and gradually become a kind of spiritual oppression. Du Xiaokang naturally wants to go home, and this consciousness cannot be suppressed. 1 1, 16 ~ 19 are the mature and powerful processes of Du Xiaokang. He dared to look for the lost duck alone in the storm, fearless, and his strong sense of responsibility enabled him to bear the hardships and loneliness. Section 20 clearly reveals the growth of Du Xiaokang. "He felt that he had suddenly grown up and become strong." Du Xiaokang's psychological description is very delicate. In the face of loneliness, he went from panic to face up, and finally defeated loneliness. This mental journey shows Du Xiaokang's different feelings and also reflects the theme of his growth.

Example of instructional design

First, the overall perception

Introduce new courses and writers' works (omitted)

Second, read the full text.

Summarize the story of the novel in your own words and discuss it in groups. Language must be concise and clear.

Third, clarify the three elements of the article.

Character (hero): Du Xiaokang.

Plot: A teenager (Du Xiaokang) dropped out of school because of family circumstances and had to follow his father to release ducks. The hardships of life and spiritual loneliness oppressed him and tempered his body and mind. After a storm, he felt that he "suddenly grew up and became strong!" "

Environment: An endless reed field.

Fourth, how does the author show the growth process of a well-off society? And find out the relevant sentences to analyze.

Mainly through detailed description. Detail description is a concrete description of a small part of an event or a certain part of a person.

Describe it. It can successfully shape characters and reflect their personalities.

Sentence: (l) Du Xiaokang can't think about his Yau Ma Tei any more. Now, all he can think about is the front, how far to go and what is ahead? Unknown ahead. The unknown seems to tease a teenager's mind more. Sitting cross-legged in the bow, watching a piece of Wang Yang.

Analysis: I am at a loss about the future, but it also seems to contain a vision for the future.

(2) Du Xiaokang looked at it and saw the waves of reeds rushing straight into the sky. He was afraid-this was the first time he was really afraid since he went out. Reed surrounds the boat like a mountain. Du Xiaokang has a feeling that he will never escape.

Go to sleep.

Analysis: Du Xiaokang is afraid of reality and loneliness in the face of the reed field like "heavy mountain lock", which is also a unique psychology of a teenager.

(3) After dinner, Du Xiaokang calmed down a little from the panic.

(4) However, all this cannot completely dispel Du Xiaokang's panic. When he sleeps at night, he is close to his father and can't sleep.

Analysis: The cruel reality is that you can't drive away the fear in your child's heart.

(5) Father and son also feel that their greatest enemy is approaching them step by step: that is loneliness.

(6) A large number of words are omitted. This omission can only further strengthen the sense of loneliness that seems to fill the whole world.

Analysis: The inadaptability to unfamiliar environment has been replaced by a heavy sense of loneliness. I am afraid of loneliness and loneliness, but I can't escape this reality.

(7) Later, both father and son realized this in their hearts: it is impossible for them to avoid loneliness, which is better. After a long time, I will never panic when I face a cloud in the sky, this mighty reed and this wisp of smoke.

Analysis: At this time, the protagonist Du Xiaokang and his father have been able to face loneliness and reality.

Du Xiaokang is doomed to suffer here. It was the duck that he and his father took good care of and grew so fat that he was miserable.

He began to cry, but he was not sad. He said he didn't understand why he wanted to cry.

(10) Du Xiaokang conveniently dug a few tender reed roots, chewed them in his mouth and looked at the sky in a foreign land, thinking of his mother, mulberries and many children in Yau Ma Tei. But he didn't cry. He felt that he had suddenly grown up and become strong.

Analysis: After the test of this night's wind and rain, the hero can't avoid everything in front of him. In the predicament, he tempered his character, dared to face the reality, bravely overcame the storms of nature and life, and made his will stronger.

Summary: Du Xiaokang went from being afraid of loneliness to being able to face loneliness and then bravely overcoming loneliness. The author uses these detailed sentences to show the life growth process of the protagonist.

Verb (abbreviation of verb) discussion summary

Please talk about the significance of the topic "Lonely Journey".

Hint: There are two meanings. (l) Du Xiaokang's harsh environment in reality is not the happy environment of other teenagers; (2) It mainly points out that Du Xiaokang could not understand his father's difficulties at first, but later he was able to help his father shoulder the burden of his family and bravely face the harsh environment. He overcame the difficulties with his tenacity and fearlessness, and let himself really grow up.

Discussion and analysis of intransitive verb

The success of this article lies in describing the growth process of the characters with a lot of details, depicting the trajectory of the psychological changes of the characters, and the environmental description in this article also plays a certain role in depicting the characters, finding out the relevant sentences and analyzing them.

Sentence: (l) There are only grass beaches or depressions around, and there are no people.

(2) At dusk, the first smoke came from the small mud stove in the cabin, which is the only smoke here. They float to the surface in the evening wind, then stick to the surface and drift away slowly. The rice in the pot was cooked, and the river was trapped in the sun for a day and began to float like smoke. At this point, hot air and smoke can no longer be clearly distinguished.

(3) It smells good here. There are reeds everywhere, and when the summer is lush, the air is filled with fragrance. There is also an unknown herb among the reeds, mixed with the fragrance of reed leaves, which makes Du Xiaokang sniff hard from time to time.

(4) There are countless fireflies flying in the reed leaves near the water. Sometimes, dozens or hundreds of birds together can actually light up the water, so that Du Xiaokang can see a bird floating on the water.

That day was the worst weather they had ever encountered since they left home. It was dark in the morning. It was dark, the river was black, and reeds became a black sea. Du Xiaokang even felt that the wind was dark. Near noon, thunder rolled from the horizon like ten thousand chariots. Soon, the storm began to get hysterical. Suddenly, it was dark, as if the end of the century had arrived. Looking around, there is the whistling wind and the click of thousands of reeds broken by the wind.

(6) It's sunny after the rain, and the sky is brighter than any other night.

These descriptions of the natural environment have different functions in the three stages of Du Xiaokang's life. When the hero is afraid of loneliness, it sets off the inner world of the characters. In the face of loneliness, writing the stormy weather so badly also provides a possibility for the characters to grow up quickly overnight, which reminds people that the storms in nature are also storms in life. No matter how big or crazy, as long as you can face it bravely and work hard, what kind of "wind and rain" can't pass? The bright moon after the rain is Du Xiaokang's mood at this time, as bright and clear as the day this month. He tempered his will, and a child who is not sensible gradually became strong. The environment has created his character, but it also makes the environment less monotonous and lonely.

Seven. Summary and expansion

The author tells us how to face many things in life through the story of how Du Xiaokang, a teenager, grew up in difficulties.

More loneliness, how to make yourself a strong person in life, and become the master of your own destiny, these are all worthy of our consideration. Xiao Fuxing, editor-in-chief of People's Literature, said that "a straw house is a poem". The author is not a poet, but he created a poetic novel world with his sympathy and love for children's lives. The author regards the straw house as a beautiful symbol here.

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