First, revise the composition.
For the evaluation of composition, Mr. Ye Shengtao put forward three criteria: first, truthfulness; The second is the feeling of tenderness, and the third is the essence of meaning. This reminds us that we should not only pay attention to the form, rules and skills of the composition, but ignore the ultimate purpose of the text.
? Correcting the composition, what should we change and what should we not change? Correcting teachers' own compositions means correcting students' own meanings and words. Correcting only pays attention to fallacious reasoning, and don't add unreasonable words to feelings. If so, we should not only attach importance to students' intensive reading, but also lose the purpose of teachers' guidance.
You must find the source to have sweet water to drink.
? When we write a composition, we should write honesty and our own words.
? As soon as students hear writing a composition, they are too big to say it, and there are no examples to write. If they want to break their heads, they will write "Give an umbrella and give up their seats". I was shocked to see this passage today. The root of the original problem is this:
It's no use saying "write your own honest words". You have to find its source, and only when you have the source will you pour real water. This source is very wide, we don't need to ask for it from the outside world, and we are self-sufficient. This is our full life. Only when life is full can we express our true and profound feelings.
? There is no end to the enrichment of life, because unlike a bottle, it has a certain capacity, but it can be expanded indefinitely and will never be too big to be enriched. I think the life mentioned by the author here includes two parts: reading and practice. Writing is a part of life.
? How can I enrich my life? Don't students have enough activities? I think a teenager has some life experience, but why is it so weak when it comes to writing? The author mentioned two ways to solve this dilemma: training thinking and cultivating emotion. That is, observe anytime and anywhere, try to test and gain experience; Understand life with emotion and experience.
As the author said: People are born with an emotional core. If cultivated well, they will germinate, their leaves will relax, beautiful words will bloom, and they will bear rich fruits. Life is always contained in emotions, and I think this kind of life is always full.