Jin Rong

Yangpu senior high school

"Your seven strings are like the sound of the cold wind in the pine forest." On the moonlit night, above the hill, pines burst, and the sound of a clear moon came in the distance. This is not a dream, but the lofty artistic conception brought by Guqin, ranking first among all kinds of music.

Seven strings, from the ancient sound of seven strings, touched my heart. Perhaps, with the rapid development of modernization and the impetuousness and haste of modern people, the fate of Guqin is doomed to be forgotten and abandoned by most people. But it is full of ups and downs, so that I have always maintained my attachment to "her" since I met her for five years.

Listening to guqin at night is the best. First, it is convenient for you to calm down and feel. Second, with the night, the sound of guqin can sneak into the night and nourish your heart. "Look" at the gurgling stream and turbulent river flowing in the moonlight, sometimes as gentle as a pot of fragrant tea, and sometimes as turbulent as waves, in which the extreme of high mountains and flowing water is all. A song of flowing water brings out the eternal dust sound, and the heart is as calm as water, and the heart remains unchanged.

"In the middle of the year, he was sentenced to the East City, and his spirit remained unchanged. I play the piano and play Guangling San. " When a song "Guangling San" passed through Ji Kang's fingers, the concept of ancient and modern heroes rose from my heart. Isn't such a stirring voice a sign of our life?

Delicate ancient sounds, such as clouds in the sky, such as moonlight, are indifferent and indifferent; Savor this ancient voice, such as phoenix nirvana, such as wintersweet proud snow, awe, awe. How can I abandon her? How can you be disloyal to her?

Teacher's comment on writing:

My heart is still a fictional topic, but the author is good at "putting it into practice". Starting from a landscape, thousands of years of thinking have given a powerful and detailed description of the character and voice of Guqin.

The language is simple and beautiful, the feelings are deep and warm, and the literary spirit is ups and downs. There is almost no transition in each natural section, but it can be changed freely, step by step and step by step. Generate, a literary trend of thought, finally reached a thrilling climax.

Writing the passage of guqin performance makes full use of the literary skill of "synaesthesia" and writes "listening" with "seeing", which is free and easy.

The second paragraph of the article examines the fate of Guqin in this hasty and impetuous era. From the author's unique love and hate, we can see the strength and profound meaning of the article.

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