Teacher Ye Shengtao explained the inherent laws and training methods of article writing to us with cordial and sincere words. Today, careful reading of Mr. Ye Shengtao's words that tell the true meaning of writing can help us solve many puzzles in writing.
First of all, do your own questions.
Mr. Ye Shengtao said: Don't take writing as a special thing, just like talking. This is nothing special. Composition should not be regarded as boring, just like a spring, long or short, curved or straight, naturally has different uses. We should combine life with composition, practice more and do the topics by ourselves.
The topic is rooted in meaning and emotion, so we should develop the habit of expressing meaning and emotion in our usual compositions. This requires you to do your own topic in addition to the composition topic drawn up by the teacher. Teacher Ye Shengtao listed many composition topics that middle school students can usually do, such as going to class, going to sports, going to games, whose skills are like, and what interests are topics; I was moved by reading biographies of famous people. I read interesting novels, which stimulated my imagination. Experiments and observations in natural science, meetings in schools, etc. It is also a very interesting and writable topic.
It can be seen that as long as we pay attention to observation, we can find that writing can be seen everywhere in our lives. Mr. Ye Shengtao said that as long as we can reflect at any time, we feel that our chests are by no means empty, and there are some feelings flowing in them at any time, with all kinds of waves. At this time, we must capture these fleeting thoughts and leave a mark on our lives with our written words, so that our lives will be more valuable. This is similar to the idea that teachers and students write essays and tell life legends advocated by cutting-edge network teachers. When we let students and ourselves practice writing several times like this, our writing and students' writing will be improved at a higher level.
Mr. Ye Shengtao specifically mentioned the significance of keeping a diary. As we all know, diaries can make the childhood of the soul last forever, and diaries can keep the childhood that is gone forever. Bing Xin once said: Keep a diary, as long as you can freely write down your true feelings about everything around this day, leaving traces of your heart flowing. Everyone knows the benefits of keeping a diary, but few people can stick to it. As a regular composition, diary can not only help children form a good habit of careful observation, but also help children learn to capture materials, consolidate what they have learned and improve their ability to use linguistics, which can be described as killing two birds with one stone. We can ignite students' interest and confidence in keeping diaries from several aspects.
The first is to enhance the ritual sense of diary with personalized diary. Parents respect their children's choices, and teachers encourage students to choose personalized diaries. Give the diary a very unique and loud name, write it on the title page of the notebook, and you can also match it with beautiful pictures. Choose-name-with pictures, students do it themselves, we can write a preface and send a message to the children, and a unique diary of our own is born. I believe that students will cherish such a grand ceremony, and they will be more serious and cherish it in the process of writing diaries.
Second, primary school students can keep diaries with picture books to enhance the interest of diaries. How can students be interested in the same diary? Students like reading picture books, comic books and drawing stick figures with words. Students like this illustrated picture book expression, record things with classmates and family members, and even make up fairy tales in the form of picture books. Especially for some students with good art foundation, the diaries written are more pleasing to the eye.
Third, you can use the platform to record. With the popularity of mobile phones, computers and other electronic products, students not only like to play games with them, but also like to browse social platforms such as WeChat, QQ and Weibo, and some even write their feelings on these softwares, which is actually another form of diary practice. This new media diary conforms to the characteristics of the times. Through these platforms, we can guide students to understand current events, broaden their horizons and encourage them to write "new media diaries" with the help of their own platforms such as WeChat, QQ, Meipai and other new media products.
Diary is a kind of private record, so you should pay attention to what you really see, hear and think. Just like Teacher Ye Shengtao said: We should combine life with composition, practice in the form of diaries and do our own topics. Over time, you will feel that composition is a part of life, a kind of development and a kind of enjoyment.
Second, access and impassability.
How does Mr. Ye Shengtao define an article as "passing"? "Words" are used properly and "chapters" are organized properly, which is "communication". On the other hand, the use of "words" is absurd, and the organization of "chapters" is disorderly and unreasonable. So when we finish writing an article, we should ask ourselves two questions to examine and judge whether our article is "passing" or "passing". Question: Are all the words used appropriate? The second question: Are "sentences" and "chapters" in order?
To answer the first question, we should ask ourselves whether the words quoted in the article are appropriate, which requires us to consider the words in the context, and the common carelessness is negligence, which is often the reason for delaying things. Think about it carefully, it should not be because the usual things are untrue, and the meaning of the words is not really known. This requires us to consult the dictionary frequently to know which "words" are appropriate and which are not. Mr. Ye Shengtao also reminded us that we would rather avoid those "words" whose meaning and usage are unknown. No matter what happens, many mistakes are often avoided with caution.
Regarding whether "sentence" and "text" are harmonious, we need to follow grammar and turn what we know into the habit of speaking. In other words, we should learn excellent articles. The article says that people are usually taught to write, and if nothing else, they just say that they should read through a few articles. A speech is an article that leaves no trace. When you make the sound of idioms, they will disappear as soon as you finish speaking. Without training and correct habits, they will make mistakes at any time. When we write an article, we only need to read it several times, and naturally we will find out what is wrong and know how to correct it.
Mr. Ye Shengtao said: "Words" and "chapters" are smooth, so it can be said that our article is undoubtedly "smooth". The "Guo" and "Guo" mentioned here are just words, assuming that there is no problem with the thoughts and feelings inside. To avoid ideological and emotional problems, we must enrich the whole life.
Third, good and bad.
? How can I make an article "good"? The two words that Mr. Ye Shengtao emphasized were "sincerity" and "precision".
Honesty means that what you express is consistent with your own thoughts, temperament and environment. You can observe them from the articles you describe. In writing, "honesty" means "what you say, what you think in your heart, and how you write with a pen.
Many people think that writing is dishonest, as long as it is written correctly, it can also be regarded as a "good" article. It is difficult to write a "good" article that is "dishonest", because it is self-deception, and the inner guilt will never be washed away. No matter what we do, it is easy to be "good" because it comes from ourselves and is close to ourselves; Fiction is often in vain.
I remember a sentence in Capote: "If your work is to impress people, it must be true first". Being true doesn't mean being 100% true, but at least the feelings should be sincere. We want to write the word "good", but we leave our own thoughts, temperament, environment and so on. Instead, scribble in unfounded and uncertain places. How can I realize my wish?
Accuracy means that words should have meanings and feelings that the author deeply sees and deeply feels, and can be written without losing authenticity. Words must have the meaning and feelings deeply felt by the author, and written without losing authenticity, so as to be worthy of the word "essence" and at the same time, this is a "good" article.
Mr. Ye Shengtao said: It is a habit to express yourself honestly, not just at the end of the composition. Writing a composition requires "honest" observation of foreign objects and "accurate" expression of feelings, which is not conducive to "cramming Buddha's feet." We want to enrich the whole life. Although we are not prepared for writing, there is no doubt that "honest", "accurate" and "good" articles will come from a full life.
I read several articles in Mr. Ye Shengtao's classic collection of Chinese education, and learned the inherent laws and training methods of writing. Next, I will try to use what I know about the passing and failing of writing, good and bad standards to standardize and guide my daily writing and my children's daily writing, and strive for change and improvement.