This article was written by grade five student Li Yu on 20 13. I studied at Dawan Primary School in Dawan Town, qingbaijiang district, Chengdu. It is a narrative about the feelings of teachers and students. By describing the little things that teachers correct and help students do their homework in daily study, this paper expresses the great kindness of teachers to students and the respect of students to teachers in a simple way.

This sentence uses a figurative rhetorical device to describe the teacher's kindness with clearer things. Metaphor is a rhetorical device that compares one thing with another according to the similarity between two different things. Metaphor aims to clarify ideas in vivid language, that is, to make people know and understand things they don't understand, understand, know or know through metaphor.

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Walk with the teacher's love

If the blackboard is a vast sea, then the teacher is a sailor on the sea. At the moment when the bell rang, you used the teacher's whip to turn the textbook moored in the harbor into pulp like a boat? Wu langxi is difficult to pile up, like a reef. Your posture is vivid like a wandering bird, waving a gentle arc on the podium-the ship only crosses ... there is no cloud floating in the sky, just like your bright heart, high above. Composition network junior high school

Involuntarily, I recall the scene when the teacher corrected our homework and tutored me late at night. ...

The leaves turn from green to yellow, they spin down and are soft; The leaves on the maple tree are red, like a big red cloud; Urged by the autumn wind, leaves danced in the air and finally fell into the river, floating around like paddles.

As soon as the bell rang, the students sat up straight, ready for the teacher to assign their homework. We rushed out of the classroom like caged birds. I packed my schoolbag and rushed out of the teaching platform quickly, but I forgot one thing-the math training book.

Back in pod winter, I began to do my homework. I finished my Chinese homework in a short time. When I was ready to do my math homework, I couldn't find my math training book. Suddenly, I will remember that I left my math training book at school, so I ran back to school and got my training book.

At this time, it was already dark. I boarded the third floor of the professor's education building and found that the light in our class was still on. My heart is full of questions: who is still in the classroom? I pushed open the door of the classroom with questions. Look! It's the teacher, still correcting our homework! I crept to my seat, holding a training book, and was about to slip out the back door.

The teacher stopped telling lies. "That lee is? Come here. " I was so scared in my heart that I walked slowly to the teacher and prayed silently not to be scolded!

Unexpectedly, the teacher not only didn't scold me, but also explained the key points, difficulties and difficulties in the class, which expanded my knowledge ... My heart was warm and moved with tears. I deeply realize that sleeping with Shi Ai is really happy!

Teacher, you are a magician, showing us a beautiful new world. You are a bridge, connecting the separated mountains for us and leading us to the peak of harvest; You are a green vine, tough and slender, which guides us to collect Ganoderma lucidum and ginseng at the top of the cliff.

You are an art pod. You sow with words, cultivate with colored pens, irrigate with sweat, and concentrate on moistening blood. You are the kindling, igniting the fire in students' hearts; You are a stone step, carrying the students to climb steadily step by step. Teacher, there is a you in the spark of my life!

Jiangsu Education Network-Composition Collection "Walking with Teachers' Love"