This sentence is a sick sentence, so it should be written as follows: After reading the text "Unforgettable Teacher", I received a profound education and learned the truth of respecting teachers and valuing Taoism. Reason: lack of subject, remove "yes" and the subject is "I".

Methods of modifying sick sentences:

1, complement grammar: it is often used to modify ill sentences with incomplete components. ?

For example, "I won the first place in this competition" (lack of subject) was changed to "I won the first place in this competition."

2. Delete method: generally used to modify redundant sentences, redundant components, improper collocation and improper classification. ?

For example, "I conclude that it may rain tomorrow." I'm sure it will rain tomorrow. ?

3, change the law: mostly used to modify improper collocation, improper use of words, unclear reference and other sick sentences. ?

For example, "his grades have improved significantly." Change: "His grades have improved obviously."

Extended data:

The cause of disease

1, attribute and prefix are out of order.

Excellent professor of Chinese Department in Peking University, with more than 30 years' teaching experience. Excellent professor of Chinese Department in Peking University, with more than 30 years' teaching experience.

2. The multi-layer adverbial word order is improper.

In order to write the paper assigned by the teacher, many students have been reading eagerly in the reading room in recent days. In order to write the paper assigned by the teacher, many students have been reading eagerly in the reading room in recent days.

3. Improper collocation of subject and predicate

People's living standards are constantly improving. (If the subject and predicate are not properly matched, the word "improvement" should be changed to "improvement")

4. The subject and object are upside down.

I'm not interested in math. In this sentence, the subject is "I" and the object is "Mathematics", which should be changed to "I am interested in mathematics".

5, the ingredients are redundant

The reason why I didn't do well in this exam is because I didn't carefully examine the questions according to the teacher's requirements. (The redundant subject "reason" is repeated with the following "because", and the "reason" or "because" is removed)

References:

Baidu Encyclopedia-Modify Ill Sentences