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The song of the sea writes a composition
1. The composition Song of the Sea was written in the first person. These 600 words may be because of Cao Cao's ambition, perhaps because of his ambitious view of the sea.

It gives me a mysterious feeling about the sea.

On the east coast, climb Jieshi Mountain to see the vast sea.

I like to see the vast sea. The sea is boundless. How many have there been since ancient times?

A poet writes poems to praise the sea? If it weren't for the magnificence of the sea

Qi, let Cao Cao's view of the sea have pride? If it weren't for the sea, let

Does Cao Cao's view of the sea have the essence of the real sea? Broad Sky was written by Cao Cao.

Wonderful, isn't it admirable?

The movement of the sun and the moon seems to come from the vast ocean.

I love the sea and never give up. Whether everything withers in autumn or in summer.

In winter in Wan Li, the scorching sun is still bitter. The sea is not afraid of failure, and he persevered through the spring and summer.

Autumn and winter. We are moved by the tenacity of the sea, because the sea knows that the road of life will not be smooth.

Smooth sailing. Isn't it worthwhile to write Poseidon vividly in Cao Cao's literary works?

Have to appreciate it?

Journey to the sun and the moon, if you go out. Han is a talented star, if you take him by surprise.

I like the broad mind of the sea. The ocean contains unlimited minerals, unlimited resources and stones.

Oil, natural gas, tuna, blue whale. The sea didn't give us all this.

Really? The ocean produces wireless resources and gives us human beings. No wonder Cao Cao said Sun.

The source of the moon is here, also to praise the vastness of the sea!

The beauty of the sea can't be described in words. Its beauty tells us the way of life.

Richard, tell us the basic principles of being a man. I love the sea! I also love Cao Cao's Looking at the Sea.

2. Write a prose poem imitating the song of the waves or the song of the sea.

I am a piece of gauze as thin as a cicada's wing. God spread me to the world, so the four seasons took me to make new clothes for nature.

I was a stream of thoughts from Athena, so people took me away and added vitality to the world.

I am happy and make people feel comfortable; I roared, people were afraid, and people were at a loss.

Dandelion and the earth are lovers, and I am a homing pigeon that conveys love between them: this one is extremely hot in his heart, and I will handle it; I'm going to comfort that upset man.

My roar is a precursor to the coming storm; The stillness of the tree symbolizes my departure.

I flew over the grassland, and thousands of boundless grasses bowed to me. Once I saw the injustice, I immediately roared, punished those restless people and perpetrators, and made them apologize to me.

In silence, I touched my wounded hearts with gentle hands and comforted them.

I am the aura of heaven and earth, the essence of all things and the masterpiece of nature. This is so similar to love: it is the aura of heaven and earth, the essence of everything and the masterpiece of nature.

3. Song of the Wind In many people's minds, the wind is an erratic spirit, always waving its long sleeves across the vast sky, and even delicate poets can't help chanting: "Which direction do you blow?" In fact, the wind has a voice, and it is a song in itself. When you mobilize your hearing, it will unveil the mystery. Everyone's favorite wind must be the warm spring breeze. Yi Yi weeping willows shyly whisper in the wind; Colorful flowers sway in the wind with songs; Children know how to fly kites in spring. When they run with strings, kites will float around in the blue sky and white clouds and dance with the melody of the wind. At this time, the songs they heard were all songs of vitality, including the sound of green shoots sprouting, the sound of bamboo shoots jointing, and the teaching language of "A year's plan lies in spring". When they went home and began to struggle with their pens, the sound still lingered in their ears. Trouble followed. An elder who was all-powerful in the shopping mall told his own experience: at that time, I lost my career and was heartbroken, and I was about to throw myself into the sea. When I closed my eyes and walked towards death step by step, the wind in my ear saved me. The sea breeze swept over my ears, and every time I heard the call, it disturbed my calm heart. I seem to hear the child sobbing and saying "Dad". I heard my mother and wife crying sadly, and my heart bled. I know, I was too selfish ... later I learned that the wind is a song, a sobering March. Those who work hard in the society might as well take time to listen to the wind, let the song of the wind relax your nervous nerves and cool your hot head. Isn't it? People sometimes lack such comfort and encouragement? Indeed, for different people, the melody and theme of the song of the wind are also very different. In his later years, his grandfather liked to lie against the wind and enjoy the charm of the wind. He said that the wind he heard was a long song. When he was a child, in the war-torn China, the people were in dire straits. When they are hungry, their ears echo the sad songs sung by the wind. The crops were reduced, but it happened that there was a strong wind. How many villages were swallowed up. Today, the wind has become much more lovely. Since the founding of New China, the wind has a breath of construction and has developed vigorously. With the reform, the wind is a progressive song! I am eager to hear all kinds of wind sounds like grandpa, but grandpa laughs at my stupidity and says, "Now, the song of the wind is the end for me, but it is a prelude for you, and the song of the wind will only get more and more beautiful." Yes, different mentality, different age, different content and rhythm. I learned to listen to the wind, so I want to listen all the time and everywhere. My favorite song. The song of the wind in the new century is peaceful. When the war ended and the smoke dispersed, the brotherly countries joined hands and sang. Every time I sing it, it makes people think and get excited. Wind is a song. When it is sung, we listen, think and act. The song of the wind lasts forever, just like the reproduction of human beings, the perfection of human nature and the development of society-accompanied by the wind.

4. General comment on the imitation composition of Song of the Yangtze River: The little author combined the ancient and modern times and integrated the feelings on both sides of the Taiwan Strait, sang a beautiful song of the Yangtze River and expressed his deep love for the motherland.

Imitation is an effective way to improve writing level. What I want to say here is that when students imitate writing, they should not only master the main content of the imitated article, but more importantly, they should also focus on the writing methods of the imitated article, tap the uniqueness of the article writing, and flexibly apply it to their own compositions, instead of circling around the "question type". This long-term continuous accumulation will certainly write excellent exercises.

Commentator: qzzl, you come from the mountains, and majestic is your spirit; You ran to the sea, and the waves were so spectacular. You use touching ties to string together compatriots on both sides of the strait; You sang the bright future of the motherland with the sound of running water.

We praise the Yangtze River, you are an endless source, we are attached to the Yangtze River, and you have the feelings of a mother! You came from ancient times, and the water is full of ancient elegance; You rush to the future and welcome the new century. You tell an old legend with the rushing river; You cross the new century with your strong body.

We praise the Yangtze River, you are an endless source, we are attached to the Yangtze River, and you have the feelings of a mother.

5. Have you ever seen the rough waves of the sea? Have you ever heard the roar of the sea?

In the morning, the sea was calm, and a red sun rose from the east of Ran Ran and dyed the whole sea red. White clouds are fluttering in the blue sky, and seagulls are flying happily close to the sea. It is really "the sea is wide and the fish jumps, and the sky is high and the birds fly"! Hard-working fishermen drove fishing boats and came here early to catch fish and kelp, and the sunshine clothed them with golden costumes. The sea is so beautiful and charming!

However, at the high tide at night, the belt becomes another look. It becomes like an endless battlefield. The sea breeze blew a sharp horn, and the waves, like thousands of fighters, violently attacked the coast and made a rumbling roar. The one-thousand-pound stone on the shore was gently brushed and sank to the bottom of the sea. At this time, the silver moon just smiled. Seeing this scene, it hid in the clouds trembling with fear, and the stars closed their eyes angrily. All this was seen by the tireless sea, so it slowly stopped rushing.

Night, slowly quiet down. The silver moon smiles from the clouds again, making the sea look like a circuitous bright belt. The stars couldn't hear the terrible sound, but also opened their eyes and blinked naughtily. The stars in the sky and the bright lights on the coast reflect each other in the water, so dazzling and refreshing!

Ah, the sea, I love you! I would like to become a seagull, fly freely over you and thrive under your care.

6. Write an article about the sea. Thank you. When we find a continent or cross a heavy mountain, another ocean or grassland will appear in front of us. This vast universe, no matter how fast we travel, is endless, because life is endless, struggle is endless, and success has no final destination. Faith is rooted in the heart, perseverance is immortal, pursuit is endless, success is endless, and life is more expensive. Life is still a line with a beginning and an end; Career is still a ray of light, with a beginning and no end. Many people have a good beginning, but few have a good ending. Therefore, in the long river of history, there are not many bright stars, but most of them belong to mediocrity. When they make mistakes, they are depressed, complaining, or complacent about their achievements, but forget that there is no end to success and no end to struggle. Life is like this. Your efforts and efforts are rooted in your radius. If you give up just because of one failure, you will lose confidence. Maybe you can't make a circle at all, but a broken arc. He does not have the beauty and harmony of the rainbow on the horizon, because the rainbow has experienced wind and rain, but he indicates failure. He doesn't have the broken beauty of Venus's arm, but indicates a kind of retreat and cowardice, because Venus's. If you are narcissistic at a small point, like a flower in the corner, like a frog at the bottom of a well, daydreaming all day and thinking that you are very big, I don't know that if your knowledge is frozen, it will be difficult to achieve great things; The only thing to do is to struggle, not do your best, but go all out to make your radius longer and longer; Make your circle bigger and bigger. People's pursuit should be as lofty as a mountain, and the sky is high and the sea is wide, because there are mountains outside the mountain, the horizon is endless and the sea is endless; This is like a man's career. It has no successful end-result. Only by constant pursuit, only by pursuing the limit, will life shine. Although there is no limit to success, it doesn't mean that you can start anywhere. He doesn't allow you to manipulate the starting point at will. It's important to start from scratch, but you just give up and give yourself a way out in a short life. Not this time, but next time, next time-how many times can you fight in life? How many times can there be next time? Changing your mind is likely to delay a beautiful life. Pursuit is the road to success, persistence is the foundation of pursuit, and persistence is an unparalleled beauty; Persistence is an earth-shattering song. The persistent story is not old, the goddess fills the sky, Jingwei fills the sea, Dayu controls the water, and Gong Yu moves mountains; Persistent poetry is immortal, adhere to the castle peak, never regret it, and you are not a hero until you reach the Great Wall; Perseverance is immortal. Always pay attention to your humble abode, and be loyal to your country's Yue Fei-persevere in pursuit, and you will have the capital for success. Pursue the limit and surpass yourself; Transcend yourself and create brilliance-this is the joy of life! About the beginning flashback: Now I am a sixth-grade student. I walk into the classroom in the evening and look at the children who just entered school. They are all happy to find their seats and are busy looking at their new schoolbags with the children they just met. At this time, I seem to see myself who just went to school. . The middle school student's model essay with the theme of "success" succeeded. A teacher said to a classmate with excellent academic performance: you won the first place in the primary school exam, which is nothing, and there are middle schools; You got the first place in the middle school exam, which is nothing, and there are universities; You got the first place in the college exam, which is nothing. You haven't worked yet. It's nothing if you have a good job. A good job does not necessarily mean a good position. If you have a good position, you may not be able to play your social role well. Only by winning social wealth with your knowledge, wisdom, courage and perseverance can you be considered successful, but this is not the ultimate success. The teacher said to a classmate with poor academic performance: it doesn't matter if primary school didn't get the first place in the exam, and there are secondary schools; It doesn't matter if you don't get the first place in middle school, there is a university; It doesn't matter if you didn't get the first place in college. You will go to society in the future. It doesn't matter if you have already joined the work and haven't found a good job, you can still find it; It doesn't matter if you can't find it temporarily. Try to do a few things, and you will find something about yourself. It doesn't matter if it doesn't work. Maybe this is a good thing, but it keeps you calm, not complacent, and maintains a good competitive state from scratch. There is no ultimate success in the world. This article is transferred from [China Chinese Teaching Resource Network]: