Fan Wen:
Today, great changes have taken place in our city. High-rise buildings have sprung up; The wide road is flat and clean, extending to the distance; The overpass is magnificent, and the traffic is endless ... these are all condensed with the hard work and sweat of migrant workers!
When winter comes, the whole city is almost surrounded by a cold current.
Walking in the street with my cousin, I saw many people lying on the edge of the flower bed in the distance, rows and rows. I wonder, who are they? I approached slowly and found that they were all migrant workers. Their tired bodies soon fell asleep, and even the horns and horns of cars on the road could not wake them up.
I approached them slowly and saw their mouths slightly open, and saliva flowed out from time to time. I thought: they are poor. They only have thin clothes to keep warm in winter, and they can't go home to reunite with their relatives when the Spring Festival is coming ... But how can I help them when they look at their dark skin and shabby clothes?
I felt in my pocket and there were only three coins. "The steamed stuffed bun, steamed stuffed bun! Hot buns! " Hey, I can invite them to eat a steamed stuffed bun. Too hot steamed buns always make people warm! So I bought steamed buns and sent them to everyone. Sorry, I only have three yuan, but I can't buy a lot. Let's make do!
I saw them tear the steamed stuffed bun in half and let the other half be wolfed down by friends. I have a smile on my face, so satisfied, and my face is full of joy. This is the first time I have seen them smile, because they were so tired before.
A little effort can satisfy a group of hard-working people. How much contribution have migrant workers made to us in this profit-seeking society? He doesn't even have a place to live in this snowy winter! I hope that the city they built with precious hands will become their home one day!
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