A. Improper collocation of subject, predicate and object, and improper collocation of head and modifier

Found that there are parallel components, we should pay attention to collocation.

Example:

Many mainland teachers have gone to Xinjiang with ideals, creating a magnificent picture of aiding Xinjiang through education in the new era.

The series of CCTV's "Great Country Artisans" received great response, and the craftsmen's spirit of Excellence and selfless dedication triggered extensive and enthusiastic discussion and thinking.