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Some parents are either too strict or too fond of their children.
Children with strict parents are likely to grow into rebels, and spoiled children may lose their ability to take care of themselves.
The conjunction and was changed to while.
3, you can consider encouraging children to do their best, do their best, followed by doing something, such as trying to learn English well. Here you can try to motivate children to grow up in the right way.
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