The team leader beat the African drum between his feet, surrounded by a carefully carved fish-shaped float with several performers standing on it, and there were performers wearing clown fish behind the parade, which was very special.
This team makes ordinary intersections very lively, and also makes the scenes in hot summer days particularly happy.
Write a composition with the structure of total score. The lively Anyang 750 words always mean the central meaning. The meaning you want to express.
Sub: Hierarchical narrative is generally a structural way to express the relationship between general narrative and sub-narrative.
Total score is always a structured way to analyze articles during reading and writing. Put forward the argument at the beginning (straight to the point), several sub-arguments in the middle, and a general argument at the end (or reiterate the argument or summarize the quotation). Several sub-arguments can be parallel, hierarchical and comparative. , but they cannot be inclusive or cross-related.
Total score is always a common structure in argumentative writing, which has several variants, such as total score, sub-total score and sub-total score. A general introduction is a short beginning, or the cause of the following content, or the general introduction of the following content, which is generally expressed in general language. Then there is the argument. There are two versions. One is the juxtaposition argument, which juxtaposes with each other without obvious traces of time, such as several different sides of a person, several aspects of one thing and several different things under the same center. The second is coherent argument, and there is obvious time lapse between the two, such as different stages of things' development, different things for several days in a row and so on. No matter which form it is, it is composed of fragments, short and pithy, independent of each other and subject to the same main line. Between several fragments of a sub-sentence, it can be expressed by subtitles, displayed by spaces, or like ordinary fragments, but it has obvious jumping. The end of the article is also a general statement, which can be an echo of the opening or a summary conclusion. The total score method exists not only in the relationship between sentences but also in the relationship between paragraphs. The total score method has three basic forms. Let's first look at a passage in Flying a Kite (five volumes): There are more and more kites in the sky, which is very lively. The golden "little bee" erected two green wings, as if flying around among the flowers. Bright red "big goldfish", wagging its tail, seems to swim in the water. There is also that exquisite "small satellite", shining with golden light, as if flying in the universe ... The first sentence of this passage generally says "there are more and more kites", which is very lively, and then the second, third and fourth sentences describe three kite-flying scenes in detail, which obviously constitutes the relationship between the first and second. There is also a passage like this: "The meat of squirrels can be eaten, the hair on their tails can be used to make brushes, and the skin can be used to make clothes." The squirrel is really a lovely and useful little animal. " Is the relationship between the first points and the total. Another way is to summarize first, then divide and then summarize, such as the last section of the sun. The total score structure of classification is divided into three types: parallel, comparative and hierarchical progressive. (Take strong as an example) A juxtaposition: There are four kinds: (1) strong is ××(2) strong can be ××(3) we are strong, because ××(4) is strong, we should be ×× B contrast: first positive then negative. First of all, talk about the advantages of being strong, then spend time in the middle (however ...), then talk about the disadvantages of not being strong, and finally sum up the C-level advanced (more flattering, have something to write, and appear more profound in thought): What is strong-why do you want to be strong-what do you want to do if you want to be strong-what does it mean to real life?
Natural revelation composition 300 words total score general format natural revelation.
Nature is sacred and worth learning from each of us, because it brings us a lot of enlightenment.
As we all know, the plane invented at the beginning can't stay in the air. Humans invented the helicopter by learning from hummingbirds.
Man invented the ship and can walk on the water, but what is the underwater world like? So people think they can invent boats that can dive. However, there is still a problem to be solved. When the submarine tested the water, the experimental submarine "plopped, plopped" twice, but it could not float. So, a scientist dissected the fish and found that there was a "small bag" filled with air in its belly-swim bladder. When the fish surfaced, he knocked it. This is why human beings should learn from nature.
Humans have learned a lot from nature, such as studying frogs and inventing "electronic frog eyes", and being inspired by bats and inventing "radar" ... and so on.
Nature is magical. There are many new things worth learning. We must learn from this teacher.
Write 300 words of mother's memory-write a letter to mother in heaven-write a letter to mother in heaven. Today is the tenth anniversary of my mother's death. I want to say to every friend who is a child: You must be filial when your parents are alive. I don't regret it for half my life, I don't care about my parents' wealth, just remember them. ...
Write a composition describing the scenery according to the format of the total score. As the saying goes in the fourth grade, "There is heaven in the world and Suzhou and Hangzhou in the world." The beautiful Hangzhou has become world-famous.
There are ten scenic spots in the West Lake in Hangzhou: the old ten scenic spots are Su Causeway Xiao Chun, Quyuan Fenghe, Pinghu Qiuyue, broken bridge snowfall, willow waves warming, Huagang fish watching, Leifeng sunset, Shuangfeng clouds, Nanping Evening Bell and Santan silver moon. But now the top ten new scenic spots are also very different from before: Yun Qi Bamboo Trail, Manlong Guiyu, Tiger Run Mooncherry, Longjing Tea, Jiuxi Tobacco Tree, Wushan Tianfeng, Ruandun Huanbi, Huanglong Cui Tu, Jade Emperor Feiyun and Baoshiliu Gorge. At present, there are three comments on the ten scenic spots of the West Lake: Lingyin Zen, Liuhe Tingtao, Moon Qixia, Lakeside Sunny Rain, Qiancibiao Middle School, Song Wan Academy, Di Yang Jingxing, Santai Yunshui, Meiwu Chunzao and North Street Dreaming.
The West Lake in Hangzhou is a must for many foreign tourists. There is a zigzag bridge on the West Lake. Many people who live in Hangzhou will take a walk on the Jiuqu Bridge after dinner, or sit on the edge of the Jiuqu Bridge to have tea and chat with people they know and enjoy the beautiful night view of Hangzhou.
Hangzhou is beautiful all year round. In spring, the willows on the embankment grow new green leaves, the grass on the grass grows small heads, and the ice on the lake melts. In summer, the foliage is lush, and many tourists like to enjoy the cool in the shade. In autumn, the trees are full of fruits, and everyone comes home with a full load. In winter, it is covered with snow, and the whole city seems to be covered with snow.
Let's talk about food after reading it. Dongpo meat is a famous meat in Hangzhou. If you don't try Dongpo meat when you come to Hangzhou, you will come to Hangzhou for nothing. The origin of Dongpo meat is said to have been created by Su Dongpo, a poet in the Northern Song Dynasty.
Beautiful Hangzhou, our Hangzhou, do you know Hangzhou? Hangzhou is our home, we should protect this beautiful Hangzhou!
Write 350 words about the ends of the earth in Hainan. Some people say: "I don't know if I don't go to Shanghai, and I don't know if I have less money." I don't know if I don't go to Beijing, and I don't know if I am in good health. It's always boring in the boring summer vacation, but this year is different. Finally, I can travel to Hainan Island, which is known as the "Oriental Mansion". My heart is really full of flavors. ...
On that day, my mother, my aunt ... all my relatives and friends set off in a mighty way and stepped into the plane. I jumped up and down at once. It was my first time to fly, my first trip, my first time to leave Hong Kong, and the first time ... An hour later, the flight attendant told us that we had arrived in Hainan Island. Ah! Sure enough, as I expected, looking down from the plane, there are countless seas of "Oriental Hawaii", just like huge blue gems embedded in the land of Hainan Island, and the mountains are like a great guardian guarding this island. As soon as we arrived in Hainan Island, we came to the most famous scenic spot on the island, and everyone was familiar with it. The sea stretches like a blue ribbon, from light blue to dark blue, with white sand grains, quiet and comfortable. It really deserves to be' Oriental Hawaii'! A big stone stands on the white sand of the beach, which is very spectacular. Hainan Island has another name-"Hometown of Coconut Trees". Of course, I won't miss the coconut trees at the ends of the earth. Coconut trees stand in the Woods, tall and beautiful, thriving, like a ladder reaching into the sky, weathering every day. Coupled with colorful flowers, the sun and the moon fly like a shuttle, time is like running water, and people are dying. I'm afraid this beach will eventually be polluted, human! Cherish the earth!
How to write a diary about illness in the form of total score? It's different in peacetime recently. It looks listless. Why? Because there is a "war" in my body without smoke-a cold, I have to fight with it to death every day. There are successes and failures in this process.
I don't know when this war started. I didn't feel anything at the time. At first it was just a cough. I don't think it matters much. I will get better gradually. However, I was wrong. A few days later, my illness worsened and I began to feel weak. My parents quickly asked me to take medicine, and from time to time they eagerly asked me, "Are you better?" I said, "Much better!" When parents heard this sentence, they were relieved. Under the action of drugs, the cold was tamed and no longer naughty. I think it's over.
Unexpectedly, a few days later, the cold returned, which caught me off guard. I began to have symptoms such as cold, cough and weakness. This cold actually reduced my appetite, and my appetite was not very good. I asked my mother why this happened. My mother told me earnestly, "It doesn't matter, it's just a side effect of medicine. It's normal to have a bad appetite when you are sick." After listening to my mother's explanation, I felt a little relieved, but I was still worried that I would not give up this cold. I didn't sleep well all night because of this cold.
The next morning, my mother came to see me and saw that my face was so red. She said to me, "My dear son, why is your face so red?" I looked in my mirror. Wow! Red as an apple. Mother touched her forehead again and said doubtfully, "My dear son, are you running a fever?" Hearing this, I felt uneasy and stammered to myself, "Do I … have the flu …" "I'm worried! Just when I was thinking, my mother took my hand and said, "Go and show it to grandpa! " "
When I arrived at my grandfather's house, he saw my red face and listless appearance and asked my mother what was wrong. My mother told my grandfather everything. Grandpa took out his thermometer unhurriedly and took my temperature. He looked at it carefully: "37 degrees, no fever." At this time, the big stone in my mother's heart fell to the ground, and my grandfather told me to lie down and rest. Then he kindly said to me, "How are you, son?" I said happily, "Not bad!" But my symptoms kept grandpa busy and couldn't stop for a moment. Finally, grandpa took out the "killer"-a needle and a drip bucket, and gave me an injection. Grandpa inserted into my foot in a brisk way and entered my body bit by bit. I imagine: those who find the cold "nest" through intravenous drip, then stop the cold, kill the cold army with 18 hands with unique skills, and finally destroy the body, I am relieved. Sure enough, many things have happened, and my illness has been cured.
After these days of hard work on the battlefield, these damn "invaders" were finally driven away.
General format of composition total score. Unforgettable things
In my memory, many things keep appearing ... cheerful, interesting, sad and regrettable. The most unforgettable thing is the following one. I remember it was a scorching summer day, and the sun stung people hard to open their eyes. Walking out of the house is like walking into a steamer. I was looking at the house that day. The room was stuffy and my mood changed with the weather. I thought, "this day! Moreover, my mood will be suddenly enlightened. " Peace of mind is natural and cool. "Wanted to think, I called a basin of water and began to tidy up the room. When I saw my spotless dresser, bright windowsill and bright furniture, I was unhappy. I imagined the happy scene when my mother came back to praise me ... when I was in the mood, I accidentally put my mother's. I'm devastated. The broken sound of this vase came into my mind like a bolt from the blue, which made me look flustered and at a loss. I thought, "What if my mother knows that I broke something she loves and scolds me?" Flat ... "I dare not think about it any more. Just when I was in a hurry, I was caught off guard and my mother came in from the outside. When she saw the vase broken, her knife-shaped eyebrows stood upright and she was shocked: "Who broke it?" "At that time, I wanted to tell my mother about it from beginning to end, but I didn't dare. I really answered that sentence-the heart is willing, but the strength is weak. I muttered, "It was broken by my 5-year-old brother next door. "As soon as my mother heard that she was a child who was not sensible, she never pursued it. But I could see from her eyes that she was very unhappy, so I avoided her everywhere, and of course my interest in cleaning the house was forgotten. I came to the yard listlessly. I feel as if the moon is not as bright as usual, the breeze is not as gentle as usual, and the flowers and plants are not as lovely as usual. They all seem to be accusing me of my unrepentant behavior. I went into the house in frustration, thought for a long time, and finally decided to confess it to my mother. I bowed my head to my mother and admitted my mistake in a low voice. I think my mother will definitely scold me. But what I never expected was that my mother said to me very kindly: "Son, as long as you can boldly admit your mistake, it is more precious than thousands of vases ..." Whenever I make a mistake, I will think of it. I know it has taken root in my life and will never forget it!
Write the composition of the scenery in spring, summer, autumn and winter, and write the beautiful riverside park with the total score.
Binjiang Park, located in Yizheng, our hometown, is a fascinating attraction. The trees, rivers, paths and sunset there are particularly beautiful and charming.
The trees in Binjiang Park are very distinctive. Willow branches are dense, rows are neat, and they look lush in the sun. Peach blossoms are really beautiful and charming. It's light pink and deep red. Smells fragrant from a distance. Under the reflection of the river, it is very cool and beautiful. Maple leaves are as red as fire, which reminds people of the poem "Jiang Feng catches fire and sleeps".
The river surface of Binjiang Park is particularly refreshing. People walk along the riverbank in groups of three and five, and the cool river wind blows over their faces, which makes people feel refreshed and comfortable. On the wide river, the boat is even more handsome. The ship passed quickly, leaving waves on the river. These ships are big and strong. I found its anchor like a hook, which is very interesting. We can see it from a distance, just like a leaf floating on the water. There is also a big ship with a small boat on it. Looking from a distance, swimming freely like a mother duck with a duckling is very spectacular.
The trails in Binjiang Park are also unforgettable. There are wide dikes, winding cobblestone paths, green grass, light green lotus leaves and unique pavilions. There are not many tourists in the meantime, and it looks very quiet. The park at this time is like a sleeping doll.
The sunset in Binjiang Park is particularly red and bright. Watching the sunset in Binjiang Park is really spectacular and beautiful.
Binjiang Park is really a beautiful and charming place! I believe that the future Riverside Park will be a more attractive tourist attraction.
Write the composition of Duan Lin in Shaanxi Province with the total score. I like autumn best all the year round, because it is colorful and fragrant. The earth changed into colorful clothes. In the orchard, after a summer, the apples were suffocating, but it was still very hot outside, and I left my keys at home, so my face flushed. Grapes want to learn to swim, and they have been holding their breath and turning purple. Persimmons imitate lanterns and hang red on trees, trying to bring a glimmer of light to the earth. Chestnuts couldn't stay any longer. They jumped to the ground, fell into the soil and climbed out. In the garden, small flowers are in full bloom. Sunflowers have been looking at the sun and want to know the secret of the sun. Chrysanthemum is as red as fire, as pink as chardonnay and as white as snow. It is very beautiful. Flowers are swaying from time to time, as if welcoming Miss Qiu. In the forest, the leaves are naughty! They play hide-and-seek with Mother Tree. One by one, they hid at the foot of their mother's tree so that "mother" could not find them. Ginkgo garden is like handfuls of small fans; Maple leaves are red like burning fire, and they are soft when walking on the road, because there are leaves! Ah! What a beautiful autumn! I like autumn!