Sentence, the former is called grammatical error, the latter is called logical error. Common ones are: word order inversion; Inconsistent; Incomplete composition; Unknown reference; Punctuation error; Misuse of related words; Repetition; Improper collocation; Incorrect classification; Inconsistent with the facts, etc.
Examples of sick sentences
Example 1 One of the following sentences with complete structure is ()
A. He has been interested in languages since the day he went to school.
B. Because American universities ignore the application of theory, the number of useful scientific and technological talents in the United States is decreasing year by year, resulting in a talent crisis.
Deep in the dense forest of C Nature Reserve, waterfalls can be seen everywhere, and it has the title of "Hometown of Waterfalls". D. She described to me that on New Year's Eve, farmers kept jiaozi up late, and the whole family ate jiaozi and set off firecrackers in the early morning of the first day.
C is correct, A and B lack subjects and D lacks objects.
The subject of the sentence is hidden in the prepositional phrase, and "he" is placed before "cong", so the subject is exposed and the components are complete. Sentence B should be the subject word. The imperative verb is used before the sentence, which makes the sentence lack of subject and deletes "yes" Sentence D describes the lack of things and complements people's "situation". (You can also delete the "because" in sentence B, so there will be a subject. )
Example 2 Delete the redundant elements in the following sentences by symbolic method.
A. I've been thinking about this problem for a long time, and I haven't found a good solution. B once the switch is turned off, the current can be prevented from passing.
C. no one can deny that the earth does not revolve around the sun.
D. seeing the progress of students, the teacher is happy from the heart.
Analysis A deletes "ideologically", B deletes "no longer", C deletes "no" after "earth" and D deletes "from the heart".
One of the reasons why coaches create "redundant elements" is semantic repetition, which often leads to the repetition of attributes, adverbials and headwords. "Consideration" must be in the mind, so delete "in the mind". Another reason for "redundant ingredients" is the use of negative words, which leads to the opposite meaning. If B turns off the switch, it should prevent the current from passing. More use of "no longer" becomes a switch, and the current passes.
Example 3 The following sentence with proper collocation is ()
A. There are orchards everywhere on both sides of the road.
B. all kinds of reading sounds converge into a beautiful singing voice.
C. the snow-white walls are swaying, which makes people unable to open their eyes.
D at the party, the actors performed music, dance, qigong and other cultural programs.
Analysis on the unreasonable collocation of planting and orchard. B, it is not properly matched with singing skills. D qigong is not a literary program. C, that's right.
The collocation of nudge words is mainly analyzed from the perspective of grammar and logic. Usually, whether subject-predicate, verb-object, attribute, adverbial and head word, complement and head word are collocated or not is an illogical question. The connotation of the concept of literary programs does not include Qigong.
Example 4 Choose the correct word order ()
A. The wolf has nothing to say about the argument between the wolf and the little goat.
B. The Palace Museum exhibited newly unearthed cultural relics more than 2,000 years ago.
C. we resolutely implement the education law and study hard.
D. We had an extensive exchange of views on improving the quality of teaching.
D analysis is correct, and the word order of A, B and C is improper.
Dial item A and put it before "None". Item B, "more than two thousand years ago" should be before the cultural relics were placed. Item C should be studied before implementation, which is logical.
Example 5 There is no language disorder ()
A. Wang Gang and Li Ming met on the road. He told him that he bought a set for reviewing for Grade Three yesterday.
B. intelligence and cleverness are not born, but acquired through practice.
C. two people negotiated for a long time, but there was still no result.
D after listening to Zhang Haidi's report, I was very inspired and educated.
What is not wrong is item B.
Dial a, the reference is unknown, and who is he? I don't know. The semantic scope of item C "negotiation" should be aimed at organizations and individuals. This question is a misnomer. Item d, mixed sentence, mixes the words "I listened to the report" and "the report gave me great inspiration and education", resulting in structural confusion.
Example 6 Modify the following sentences. (Change the original text with standard modification symbols)
A. Wu Xiong's feat resonated with the audience and was deeply educated in extreme excitement. B.what a rich and silent subtext there is behind this sentence.
C. criticism and self-criticism are effective ways to raise awareness.
D. despite the teacher's criticism, his mistakes never change.
The analysis of component A is incomplete, and the theme "Everyone" is missing. Component B is redundant, so delete "silent". C improper order adjustment will shift "consciousness" to "effectiveness". D typo, change "although" to "regardless".
Correcting sick sentences by nudging is a supplement to what is missing, and makes up what is missing in the ingredients. Delete more points, delete redundant components, adjust the wrong order, and correct typos.
The revised result should meet the grammatical rules and logical requirements.
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