In our daily life, reports play an important role, and different reports have different contents. You can refer to the model essay before writing. The following is the teacher's comments on the opening report I compiled, hoping to help you.
1. This article meets the professional requirements and reflects social hot issues.
Therefore, the research on this subject is conducive to the further development of China.
The full text starts with the problem and then analyzes the reasons.
On this basis, the related-.
The full text has proper structure, clear thinking and basically correct views.
2. The focus of this paper is.
The topic selection is in line with the training objectives and professional characteristics of administrative management specialty, and has strong pertinence and practical significance.
The structure of the article is reasonable, the level is clear, and the related documents and materials cited in the writing are closely related to the theme, and the cited materials are relatively new. In the process of writing, the author can better use the basic knowledge of administrative management to analyze administrative management. In the process of argumentation, he mainly uses theoretical argumentation and factual argumentation.
However, the shortcomings of the article are unclear expression of some sentences, insufficient argumentation and insufficient innovation.
Generally speaking, it meets the requirements of graduation thesis.
3, research-such as the title, fully reflect the characteristics of the times.
It can provide reference value for solving administrative problems in China.
The full text is reasonable in structure, clear in thinking and obvious in viewpoint.
What can be taught well in the process of argumentation is to combine argumentation with case argumentation.
The disadvantage is that some arguments are not convincing.
4. The topic is contemporary and realistic.
The structure of the full text is reasonable.
The expression of views is basically accurate.
The full text closely follows the requirements of the administrative management specialty and fully embodies the characteristics of the administrative management specialty.
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But the main deficiency is that there are not many things that belong to their own innovation.
Generally speaking, it meets the requirements of graduation thesis.
During the internship in our unit, XXX students can obey orders, unite colleagues and apply the knowledge and skills I learned in school to practical work.
I am active, practical and willing to work. I have a good relationship with my teachers and colleagues. I study patiently and strive to improve my skills. It has been well received by everyone and I hope to carry forward my achievements in the future.
6. Over the past year, xxx students have been active and hard-working, and their relationship with teachers and colleagues has been handled very well. They studied patiently and worked hard to improve their skills, which was well received by everyone. I hope to develop their achievements in the future.
7. This paper takes-as the theme, and the topic selection has strong reality and application, which meets the requirements of the training goal of administrative management specialty.
The structure of this paper is basically reasonable, and the full text is divided into most parts.
The first part, on this basis, focuses on.
In the process of demonstration, students' reference materials are closely combined with the viewpoints and contents to be demonstrated, and the research methods adopted are mainly theoretical research and case study.
Words are basically accurate.
However, the main problem is that the arguments are not sufficient and convincing, and individual quotations do not indicate the source.
8. During the internship, the student worked hard, diligently and seriously, and was able to consult modestly and be good at thinking.
Love students, pay special attention to children with poor grades and behavioral deviations in the class, patiently make up lessons for them, give affirmation and encouragement, and win the love of students.
Good teaching quality, clear teaching objectives, neat writing on the blackboard, clear language, timely adjustment of teaching methods, and certain organizational ability.
Pay attention to the compilation and reflection of teaching plans and carefully correct homework.
I believe that in the future work, we will pay more attention to the pertinence of preparing lessons (preparing textbooks and preparing students' classrooms, organic regulation and effective breakthrough of difficulties, so that we can grow faster.
9. This paper studies the distortion of accounting information, which has strong practical value and provides a new basis for controlling the distortion of accounting information.
The author has clear thinking, rigorous discussion process, reasonable analysis and practical results.
The writing of the thesis is standardized and the sentences are fluent, which meets the requirements of academic proofreading of dissertations.
10, this paper studies the official accountability system, which can provide reference for solving the problems existing in the official accountability system in China.
In the structure of the full text, firstly, the basic principle of the official accountability system is analyzed, then the problems existing in the official accountability system in China are deeply analyzed, and finally, effective suggestions are put forward for the previous problems.
The full text reflects the requirements of professional characteristics, some of which are closely related to responsibilities, and there are not many contents that really belong to their own innovation.
Generally speaking, it meets the requirements of graduation thesis.
1 1. The reasons and significance of the topic selection and the research scheme (research status, research content, i.e. content framework, research purpose, problems to be solved and references) in the opening report must truly reflect students' grasp, thinking and information possession.
12, xxx students are active, enthusiastic, study hard and respect teachers. Over the past year, their technical theoretical level and operational skills have been greatly improved. I hope to continue to work hard to become a useful talent in the country in the future.
13. The research content is realistic and operable.
The topic is a hot social issue with a rigorous logical structure.
The views are clearly expressed and the discussion is comprehensive.
This language is concise and easy to understand.
In the process of argumentation, the principle of professional knowledge can also be well combined with practical problems.
But arguments are not enough.
Generally speaking, it meets the requirements of graduation thesis.
14. The title of this paper is novel and practical.
The full text has scientific and reasonable structure, strong logic and clear thinking, and the references consulted meet the requirements of the paper.
The demonstration method is reasonable.
The content of the argument is more convincing.
The analysis of the problem is more thorough.
In the process of demonstration, students can also combine the principles of administrative professional knowledge with social reality.
Whether it is from the topic selection or viewpoint demonstration, it meets the requirements of the training objectives of administrative management specialty.
But innovation is not enough.
15, the paper has clear ideas and fluent sentences.
You can make a good investigation ―― the existing problems.
The author has a certain understanding and familiarity with the content of the paper.
Clear thinking, clear hierarchy and reasonable logical structure.
The viewpoint is expressed accurately.
The research principles are appropriate.
In the process of demonstration, we can effectively combine professional principles with the topics to be studied.
The opinions demonstrated in some places are not very clear, and generally meet the requirements of graduation thesis.
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