He is over 50 years old. Wearing a pair of glasses with high myopia. He carefully took off his glasses and wiped them with the hem of his clothes. "Uh-huh ..." He was about to speak when he suddenly remembered something. He fumbled in the plate, then quickly reached into his pocket and took out a box of matches. Only then did he say "uh-huh" again, stood up straight and said in a particularly loud voice, "Now start watching the teacher do the experiment!"
There is an unpleasant smell of smoke in the classroom. Teacher Mao stood at the door panting. His head was steaming, and there were several glistening beads of sweat on the tip of his nose. His eyebrows were raised angrily, but his mouth smiled. Seeing us, he blinked in surprise, and the muscles on his face suddenly froze and did not move, just like the "freeze" in the movie. We were all nailed there like wood.
The old man's hands are dexterous. In just a few minutes, a clay figurine was born in his hands. Watch him pick up another lump of mud, knead it into a circle first, and then rub it gently with his hands to make it soft and slippery. Then, rub on it and gradually separate the head, body and legs. He held a clay figurine in his left hand and fiddled with his right hand on his head. Soon, the clay figurine put on his hat.
2. The detailed description of the 400-word composition details is mom's inquiry after school. The details are that dad said he would go to bed early after finishing his homework. The details are the teacher's eyes when he finished his homework. The details are the detailed notes handed over by his friend after he got sick.
Although the details are small, they are timeless. We are all just ordinary people, sometimes even mediocre.
Life is connected by trivial details, not as sensational as the plot in the soap opera at eight o'clock, but with more real and touching details than the TV series. Meng Jiao wrote down the details of "She sewed carefully, she made up thoroughly, and she was afraid that the delay would make him go home late", which made countless wanderers cry; Wang Wei wrote down the details of "advising you to drink more wine, there is no reason for people to leave Yangguan in the west", which made countless pedestrians sigh; Su Shi wrote down the details of "Xiao Xuan window, dressing", which made fans all over the world lament.
Just details, not just details, it contains the deep feeling behind the details themselves. Often moved by Rembrandt's Jewish bride, the couple wore beautiful clothes and looked gloomy and restrained. In the dark background, two people snuggled up to each other, without looking at each other, without ups and downs, only holding hands, as if in a casual moment, they caught the painter's heart and left it on the canvas. Even after hundreds of years, they still depend on each other silently, and this feeling will never change.
For the viewer, no matter how gorgeous the clothes are, it is their deep affection, the life course they have walked together and will continue to walk, and the promise of "holding your hand and growing old with your son". This is such a cool and affectionate detail.
The same affection is often found in life, including a cup of hot tea and a knitted sweater presented by my mother to my father; There is a hot water bottle filled by my father and a basin of washing water poured by my mother; And they prepared three meals a day for me, and I patted them on the back. We can't expect life to be great, we just want to make the details better.
"In a word, the love of a lifetime", the lyrics sometimes reveal the truth of life so easily. True warmth is only silently transmitted in the details; People who really love you will only show their love in the details.
Just like mother, father, teacher, friend and lover. This is an exam composition, and I got 57 points.
The author firmly grasps the word "ordinary" to write details, so that the details that are often ignored by us in life can enter our field of vision one by one and show the feelings behind the details. And through ancient poetry and Rembrandt's paintings, further highlight the details, so that a drop of water fully reflects the brilliance of the sun.
The full text is fluent, the sentence is beautiful and the meaning is endless. [Example 2] Anatomical details Hu Ceng, Class 4, Grade 3, Pinghu Middle School, Zhejiang Province, flashed across the starry sky like a meteor, and I missed the details of my wish; When the waves beat against the rocks, I missed the details of prayer; I missed the details when you told the story.
But I won't miss it again. I will seize the details and wait for the miracle of life. The detail is the sewing needle in the mother's hand. Needle and thread is full of love, and mother uses it to light the flame of hope. The detail is a small screw on the machine. When it gets to where it is most needed, the machine will run freely with it. Detail is a dazzling little star in the vast starry sky, which guides us to the palace of success.
Details attract countless eyeballs with their charm. Life is full of surprises because of details! Painters draw the details of life into pictures with colored pens, and writers feel and experience the details with their hearts, and use them to create the most attractive chapters; Photographers capture details and make countless unforgettable details exude unparalleled fragrance.
Lu Xun's details are on the road of "there is no road in the world, and more people will become roads". With his enthusiasm and persistence, he climbed up the ladder and opened up the road to success in life. The details of Zhu Ziqing are looming in The Back. "Blood is more and more attractive", but the details are hidden in it. Affection is hidden in "thinking of relatives twice every holiday season" Friendship grows and blooms in details, and love breeds in details ... accumulate small details in study and pay attention to small details in work. Your life will be more full and perfect.
Don't ignore the details, if you put it aside, you give up the beginning of success; You should grasp the details of success. Over time, every detail is in your diary. When you open it, you have your efforts, your ups and downs. It turns out that you have been working hard, trying to find your miracle and trying to ignite your hope.
Gently pick up a maple leaf on the road, just a small maple leaf, but it records the past of life. Grasp the details of life, with the details on the road to success, you will have the motivation to move forward and a beacon of hope.
One day, when you suddenly look back, you will be delighted to find that so many details around you have paved the way for life. Dissect the details and you will learn to nourish life.
Grasp the details and appreciate the miracle of life! [Brief comment on examples] If you don't elaborate on details, you can't ignore details in life, because details breed success. By expounding the importance of details, the author makes everyone understand that we should firmly grasp the details, dissect the details and ignite the fire of hope in life.
The full text is profound, sentence by sentence, patchwork and full of power. [Example 3] Details-the Source of Beauty and Eternity 3 14200 Lu Minjie, Class 4, Grade 3, Pinghu Middle School, Zhejiang Province People say that it is as short as morning dew, and it will be fleeting when the sun disappears; Eternity is like the sun, rising and setting day after day.
The whole process of all living things is only a moment in the universe for the creator with infinite power. We really feel the flow of time and try to slow it down or even stop it-but who can do it? Poor man, where can I find that tree and fix my short-lived self in the chain of history and become an eternal existence? Actually, it's all around us, the details.
The details are the stones that make up the pyramid, and the sleepers that are peaceful when laying the railway. Only by paying attention to details, grasping details and deducing details can we grasp life and destiny.
Every door-to-door service of Xu Hu is so ordinary and ordinary from an individual point of view, but it is these countless details that have made his glorious image and made him loved by people. There is no denying that Einstein's genius created the theory of relativity.
But when people opened his manuscript, they found that there was no complicated calculus, no subtle syllogism, only tens of thousands of seemingly ordinary times.
3. Detailed Description Composition 400 My classmate (character description fragment)
Look at her dark face, revealing an indomitable character, with a pair of glass ball-like eyes shining under her thick black eyebrows, carefully observing her opponent's every move, alert and flexible. The uneven outline outlines her unremitting pursuit of table tennis. Although she is short and not strong, she is still crazy about sports. Just like her shocking name-Thunderstorm Point, the thunder keeps coming!
Her opponent is now classmate Q. She lifts the table tennis board without weakness, shrugs habitually, twists her neck, squats professionally, raises her head slightly, reveals daunting eyes, and smiles and says softly, "Serve!" The yellow ball shot at her quickly, and she bent down without hesitation, waved her arm and hit it back with a bang. Who knows, the opponent is not to be outdone, and it is a direct shot. She frowned warily, stepped back with her left foot and gave the ball a hard push with her right hand, never leaving the ball for a moment. The opponent directly "killed the ball", which made her hard to prevent and lost a goal!
"Damn it!" She gritted her teeth, reached for the towel, wiped her sweat and threw it back.
"Boy, not bad!" She clenched the board, gently threw the ball into the air and lifted it at lightning speed, leaving two crunches. The opponent is a capable person and difficult to deal with. Time has passed for a long time, and there is no winner. She is a little worried that the yellow ball is like a small flame, which makes people panic. Although she flashed left and right, her opponent did not move.
She was annoyed and the sweat on her forehead was burning. She roared, her eyebrows sweated together, and the ball "brushed" and hit the opponent's key, and the opponent staggered back. Suddenly lost a goal!
4. With regard to the composition of the detail description fragment of 3-400 words, you can recall the texts you have learned, such as Zhu Ziqing's Moonlight on the Lotus Pond, many details, and the fragment of his father buying oranges in the background. 1. Description of the scene details.
(1) On the grass behind the sawmill, Prussian soldiers are practicing. (Dude's last lesson) (2) We boarded the ship, left the trestle, and sailed far away on the calm sea like a green marble desktop.
(Mo Bosang, "My Uncle Yule" (3) In front of us, there seems to be a purple shadow coming out of the sea in the distance. (Mo Bosang's "My Uncle Yule") The description of the social environment in the above sentence (1) truly and simply shows that a person's country has been occupied by the enemy.
In this lush land of France, the enemy practiced trampling here, which greatly destroyed the beautiful scenery of this small town in northeast France. This detail reveals the social roots of the tragedy of The Last Lesson to readers. The scenery descriptions in the second sentence and the third sentence are in sharp contrast, showing the different moods of the Phillips before and after seeing Yule, and using the environmental description as a foil.
Sentence (2) is lively, showing their happy and proud mood. Sentence (3) is gloomy, which shows that they are full of disappointment and depression.
2. Description of clothing details. For example, (1) is wearing a gown, but it is dirty and torn. It seems that it hasn't been mended or washed for more than ten years.
(Lu Xun's "Kong Yiji") (2) This Mr. Fujino is said to be too sloppy in his clothes and sometimes forgets to tie the knot; ..... What they said is probably true, so I saw him not wearing a tie in class once. (Lu Xun's "Mr Fujino") The above sentence (1) describes that the gown is dirty and torn, and it is not washed or mended for a long time, which not only shows that Kong Yiji is poor and has only one gown, but also shows that he is lazy and refuses to wash and mend his clothes.
He refused to take off such a robe because he was afraid of losing his status as a scholar. The detailed description of this dress reveals Kong Yiji's laziness and face-saving, and profoundly reveals Kong Yiji's social status, ideological character and education.
The second sentence is an anecdote about Mr. Fujino. On the one hand, it shows Mr. Fujino's frugality, on the other hand, it shows his easy-going, informal, careless and careless character. 3. Description of language details.
For example, (1) mother often said, "As long as this kind Yule comes back, our situation will be different. He is really a man with a way. "
(My Uncle Yule by Mo Bosang) (2) My mother said unhappily, "I'm afraid of hurting my stomach. Just buy a few for the children, but don't eat too much, you will get sick. " Then he turned to me and said, "As for Joseph, he doesn't need to eat this kind of food. Don't spoil the boy. "
(Mo Bosang's "My Uncle Yule") The above sentence (1) shows that the Philippians heard that Yule had made a fortune outside, and changed their views on him because of his economic status, pinning their hopes on him, hoping that he could change the economic situation at home and looking forward to his early return every day. It fully shows Phillips' personality characteristics, such as selfishness, greed, vulgarity, ruthlessness and mercenary.
Sentence (2) is the mother's grandiose expression: in front of two girls and son-in-law, she seems to cherish herself and care about others; Loving children and paying attention to the essence of education are for face and money. Hypocrisy and meanness are exposed.
4. Description of operation details. For example (1) Kong Yiji panicked, stretched out five fingers to cover the plate, bent down and said, "Not much, I don't have much."
(Lu Xun's Kong Yiji) (2) If he doesn't answer, ... he will pay a lot of money. (Lu Xun's Kong Yiji Volume 3) "... Ye Linde, help me take off my coat, ... Damn it, it's so hot, it looks like rain ..." (Chekhov's chameleon) (4) "Oh! ... Brother Eldrin, put on your coat for me ... It seems windy and cold ... "
(Chekhov's chameleon) In the above sentences (1) and (2), the verb "cover" accurately describes that Kong Yiji gave one of his small fennel beans to the children, and the children refused to leave after eating fennel beans, showing his kindness. The action of "Pai" vividly reveals Kong Yiji's pedantic character, who is ostentatious even though he is desperately poor.
The "military coat" in sentences (3) and (4) is a special symbol of the czar's police dog, a symbol of Ralph's identity, and a tool for him to put on airs and scare people. The action of "taking off your coat" shows not the hot weather, but the timid psychology of "judging" the wrong dog and sweating all over. The action of "wearing a coat" does not mean that the weather is cold, but covers up the cold and chilling psychology of insulting the general just now.
The details of "taking off" and "wearing" outline the ugly state of the tsar's slave who bullies the weak and fears the hard and flatters. 5. Description of psychological details.
For example: (1) I wonder if you realize how attached a child is to you standing there! (My Teacher by Wei Wei) (2) Should they force these pigeons to sing in German? (Dude's last lesson) The sentence (1) expresses his thoughts and feelings for Teacher Cai, and shows that a primary school student's inner feelings for the teacher are extremely excited. When the young Frenchman heard the cooing of pigeons on the roof of the school, he showed deep feelings of contempt, hatred and cherish for the language of the motherland. There are many kinds of detailed descriptions, so I won't list them one by one.
Every detail in the article contains new ideas, thought-provoking, thought-provoking, and we must carefully ponder its wonderful points when reading. Detail description refers to grasping the subtle and specific typical plots in life and describing them vividly and meticulously, which is reflected in the description of people, scenery or scenes.
It is the most vivid and expressive technique, and often tells the truth, goodness, beauty and false ugliness of characters with wonderful pen and ink for readers to appreciate and evaluate. For example, a detailed description in the article My Uncle Mr. Lu Xun: "They helped the rickshaw driver to the cart, one squatting and the other kneeling. Dad took tweezers to break the glass for the rickshaw driver, and uncle washed it with boric acid water. "
This description vividly shows the care and love of uncle and father for workers.
5. A vivid composition describing my little Embryo Cat in 400 words. My family has a little Embryo Cat, whose name is "Zaizai".
"Zaizai" is gray all over, with a small nose and mouth, watery eyes, sharp ears and a thin tail. How cute! Zaizai woke up early in the morning. When I went to have breakfast, he had jumped into the chair. Zaizai didn't eat in the morning, but made him dinner at lunch. He eats a small bowl of rice and a little fish every meal, and jumps into the chair when cooking dinner at night. The chair was under the table, which made him look safe, but as soon as he pulled out the chair, he fell to the ground at once. In the sun, it always squints and stretches from time to time.
It has the best relationship with me, and sometimes it follows me everywhere. Last time, I put a toy train on the ground and drove it. I was scared away at once. Gradually, it became bolder and bolder, overturning a carriage of the toy train.
Once, when it was playing at the gate, a big dog found it and the big dog came running at once. "Zaizai" ran to its nest, which was really thrilling! Boy, it would be great if you could understand people. I have a lot to say to you, but unfortunately you don't understand.
6. How can there be a detailed description of the fragment or composition? About 400 words, 10 skipping competition. Today, it is a skipping competition that can improve speed and gain reputation. Everyone can resist their feelings and duel with class 5 1.
At first, President Chen shouted class by class. I hope to get to our class quickly, but I hope to be slower. Time is racing against my ideas. Soon, President Chen said, "Please gather under the big banyan tree in Class 52."
I feel like I'm playing drums. Bang bang bang.
No amount of relaxation can stop my heart. At first, the boys jumped around, and when the teacher blew the whistle, they twisted their necks like crazy cats, but in the end, they were as tired as a dog sticking out its tongue.
The teacher suddenly said, "There are still ten seconds." People are afraid again.
After the dance, it's the girl's turn. I looked at the sky as if nothing had happened. But I still have to face it, so I have to walk slowly to the place where I jump rope. I looked at my cousin. She looked relaxed.
I looked at the teacher again, and he was all smiles. I thought: I must win glory for my class. I won class 5. 1.
The teacher added, "Let's try first." Just jumped a few times and then stopped.
The teacher said he was ready first, and then blew the whistle. We will show rabbits jumping around.
Jump faster and faster. Within a few minutes, my whole hand was stiff, and the rope in my hand was like a sledgehammer, pressing me hard. I really didn't have the strength to shake it.
No matter how fast I jump, I can only show the tortoise jumping method, and the more I jump, the slower I jump. The teacher suddenly blew his whistle.
This is the end. I am like a deflated balloon, and my whole body is soft.
I sighed and said, "It's finally over." The two sisters who helped me count also reported the results to Teacher Fan.
Then the teacher asked us to go to class. Be reasonable.
I finally understand a sentence now: where there is a will, there is a way.
7. Help me find some essays about details of about 400 words and be a detail-oriented person.
Sometimes, details can often determine a person's success or failure. If you don't pay attention to details in life, then he will encounter many bumps in his life.
And buying a pen today made me deeply realize the importance of details.
In the afternoon, when I was doing my homework, suddenly, with a bang, my pen accidentally fell to the ground. I picked up my beloved pen and found its nib bent. Alas, this will cost my personal property again. So, willy-nilly, I quickly ran to the Wu Shang fan store. In a short time, I ran to the place where pens were sold in the mall. After my careful selection, I finally chose a pen I like. When I paid the bill, I touched the pocket on my trouser pocket. It's over. There's nothing in it. Most of the time was wasted, so I had to go home helplessly, take a breath, take the money, and then come to the mall to buy a pen. After a long journey, I, I'm worried that I haven't got rid of my bad habit of not paying attention to life. Thinking of this, I remembered the lesson of this math final exam and didn't worry. All the mistakes in the test paper are caused by carelessness. I didn't expect a person who doesn't pay attention to details to encounter so many troubles in life and study.
I think: I must get rid of this problem and become a perfect person in the new year.
The details of flowers in life
Sometimes, an accidental detail in life will take you a lifetime to experience and feel.
I remember once, after the evening self-study, I happily went home with my schoolbag on my back. When I was walking on a field path, I saw it was dark in front of me. I took a closer look, and it turned out that there was a power outage here. I have no choice but to grope my way forward in the dark. Because my eyes are a little short-sighted, I stepped on the standing pond as a road: "Mom, how can I be so unlucky!" " After that, I took out the paper from my schoolbag and dried the water under my feet, but it was dark ahead and there were pools in some places. I really don't know where to waste it. Just when I was depressed, a beam of sunshine shone in. I looked back and saw my savior coming. I was really happy, but when that person came over, I saw that she was not my acquaintance, and I was a stranger. Seeing this scene, my mood suddenly fell from heaven to hell. The man seemed to see my mood and came up to me and said, "Little sister, what are you doing standing here?" You can't see the road clearly. Why don't you go with me? " I nodded, so she cleared the way in front and I walked behind. After a while, I finally saw a large piece of sunshine and came to the door. I said thank you to my sister, and she left with a smile. It is impolite to remember that I didn't ask her name when I went upstairs, but I thank her from the bottom of my heart.
If a little thing will take you a lifetime to experience, I think it's worth it.
Look at her dark face, revealing an indomitable character, with a pair of glass ball-like eyes shining under her thick black eyebrows, carefully observing her opponent's every move, alert and flexible. The uneven outline outlines her unremitting pursuit of table tennis. Although she is short and not strong, she is still crazy about sports. Just like her shocking name-Thunderstorm Point, the thunder keeps coming! Her opponent is now classmate Q. She lifts the table tennis board without weakness, shrugs habitually, twists her neck, squats professionally, raises her head slightly, reveals daunting eyes, and smiles and says softly, "Serve!" The yellow ball shot at her quickly, and she bent down without hesitation, waved her arm and hit it back with a bang. Who knows, the opponent is not to be outdone, and it is a direct shot. She frowned warily, stepped back with her left foot and gave the ball a hard push with her right hand, never leaving the ball for a moment. The opponent directly "killed the ball", which made her hard to prevent and lost a goal! "Damn it!" She gritted her teeth, reached for the towel, wiped her sweat and threw it back. "Boy, not bad!" She clenched the board, gently threw the ball into the air and lifted it at lightning speed, leaving two crunches. The opponent is a capable person and difficult to deal with. Time has passed for a long time, and there is no winner. She is a little worried that the yellow ball is like a small flame, which makes people panic. Although she flashed left and right, her opponent did not move. She was annoyed and the sweat on her forehead was burning. She roared, her eyebrows sweated together, and the ball "brushed" and hit the opponent's key, and the opponent staggered back. Suddenly lost a goal!
9. There are fragments of detailed descriptions in the composition. The 400-word composition "Dangdang Dangdang-"came home from school. I knocked at the door as usual, and then I heard that my grandmother at home should be "coming!" "
The door opened and grandma was sweating profusely. Sweat dripped from the tip of her silver hair. Although she was very hard, she forced a smile: "You came back so early today! The food is not ready yet. " Then I went to cook again.
As usual, I put my schoolbag on the sofa, ready to watch TV, but suddenly I thought of the new text "Back" and the touching father in it, so I had a whim to see if grandma was equally touching. Walking to the door of the kitchen, grandma really turned her back on me and was frying cabbage.
Grandma is very fat and perspires easily. Besides, she was sweating heavily in the thick oil smoke, as if she hadn't wiped her body after taking a shower, but she still tried to control the spatula to turn over the cabbage in the pot with her palm. I approached to observe more clearly, and saw grandma's face was sweaty and her eyes were almost closed, so I didn't notice that my oil smoke was too thick. If I were you, I wouldn't have the heart to let my face stay in such thick oil smoke for a few seconds, not to mention grandma has been stuck in it for so long. My nose hurts when I suddenly think of all this grandma has done for me. I tried to get closer, but a hot oil bead in the pot saw my arm. I was unprepared, so I shouted, "Ah-". Grandma heard this, turned around and saw that I was burned. She looked worried and hurriedly applied cold water. I thought: how many times did a person suffer such pain when she was so close to the pot?
The cabbage at noon today is very delicious. It is the best fried cabbage I have ever eaten. And ate some silver hair. Seeing them, my tears flowed down defenseless, and I remembered grandma's cooking action again. I quietly put those pieces of silver in my pocket, intending to keep them forever, because they contain grandma's deep love for me.