learning target
1. Knowledge and ability: Learn and master one of the six common types of ill sentences stipulated in the examination syllabus-improper word order.
2. Process and method: knowledge points are given, combined with practice, and gradually mastered.
3. Emotional attitude and values: It is the key to cultivate a sense of language and apply what you have learned.
Types of improper word order: 1, improper attribute word order 2, improper adverbial word order 3, improper predicate word order 4, and improper related word order.
5. The subject and object are in the wrong order. The communication sequence is incorrect. The order of clauses is incorrect.
1. Correct order of multiple attributes:
+Phrases indicating attributes or time and place refer to names or quantities+verbs or verb phrases+adjectives or adjective phrases+nouns or noun phrases.
Excellent female basketball coach with more than 20 years' teaching experience in the national team.
Excellent (descriptive) female (noun) basketball coach, the national team has been teaching for more than 20 years.
Many nearby women, old people and children came to see them. The number of "many" should be close to the central phrase.
2. The multiple adverbials are not in the right order.
The correct order of adverbials:
Object-oriented phrase indicating purpose or reason+noun or object-oriented phrase indicating time or place+adverb indicating range or frequency+object-oriented object-oriented verb or adjective.
Many students had a heated debate with him in the classroom yesterday.
Many students had a heated (modal) debate with him in the classroom (place) yesterday (time).
Every ambitious young man hopes to be a person who contributes to the four modernizations in the future.
"Future" should be changed to "become" after "self".
3. The order of predicates is incorrect
(1) the factory staff discussed and listened to the director's report on improving management.
Comrades seriously overcome and find shortcomings in their work at any time.
4. The related words are out of order.
Thanks to Xiao Li's hard work and skillful skills, he completed the annual production task in half a year. Xiao Li due to
Although English is difficult to learn, I still got good grades. Although English
5. The order of subject and object is wrong.
The name Bethune is familiar to the people of China. The people of China are interested in the name Bethune.
Scientists point out that heavy drinking is closely related to the occurrence of cancer. Cancer and alcoholism
6, the corresponding sequence is improper
The relationship between thought and language is the relationship between form and content.
(2) China's war against Japan was a great contest between justice and injustice, aggression and non-aggression.
7. Incorrect clause order
He can not only use these theories to guide his work, but also thoroughly understand Marxist theory.
He can not only thoroughly understand Marxist theories, but also use them to guide his work.
We should be good at solving problems, and we should also be good at finding and analyzing problems.
We should be good at finding problems, analyzing them and solving them.
Feedback exercise
1, one of the following questions is (c)
We humans should not only transform the environment, but also adapt to it.
B The Great Wall in Wan Li, China, which is famous at home and abroad, is not a recent event, but tourism has developed recently and the number of tourists has greatly increased. People are even more amazed at its grandeur.
C, this idea was thought for a long time before everyone came up with it, and he refused it easily.
D, not only traditional Chinese medicine can compete with general antibiotics, but also has small side effects and low cost.
2. In the following sentences, choose (D) correctly.
A. Archaeologists have studied the newly unearthed cultural relics in Mawangdui No.1 tomb in Changsha more than 2,000 years ago, and have a further understanding of the era when the tomb owner lived. "More than two thousand years ago" should be placed in front of "cultural relics"
B. He not only loves playing Weiqi, but also is good at studying the development history of Weiqi. He not only loves ...
C, for their own way, they are exploring, they are judging, they are looking for, they are thinking. Think, judge, explore and seek.
D Mr. Kan Kan, although his voice and smile have not changed, the wrinkles around his eyes seem to imply the hardships and unhappiness of these years.
3. In the following sentences, there is no language disorder. There is a sentence (d)
1. As textile workers strive to improve the quality of production, China's cotton exports are well received by customers all over the world. Export cotton
B, military enterprises cooperate with local enterprises, give full play to their respective advantages, and jointly produce and develop high-quality civilian products, which are favored by users. Development and production
C. The chef who is proficient in Cantonese cuisine may not be familiar with the usage of Xinjiang cookers, or he may be nervous. Anyway, the kebabs are not ready. I didn't make mutton kebabs.
D this collection of essays includes not only the masterpieces of China's ancient and modern masters, but also the classic masterpieces of famous artists in different periods in Asia, Europe, America and Africa.
4. Among the following sentences, the sentence with poor language is (a)
First, the document has made detailed provisions and profound exposition on some issues in the economic field in theory and policy. Profound explanations and detailed regulations
On March 6, 2007, six IOC members were fired for bribery scandal. The next day, the world's major newspapers reported in detail this event that shocked the international sports world.
C, the US Federal Bureau of Investigation arrested professional spy Em, and uncovered a major scandal in which American on-the-job intelligence personnel provided confidential information to foreign countries.
D. Many masterpieces of China's calligraphy and painting art are not only the artistic treasures of the Chinese nation, but also the treasures of human art..