2. Title error: quotation marks are not file names (not noun phrases). Revised as "Guangdong Provincial Department of Education's Approval of Guangzhou University"
Reply of holding short-term Chinese training courses for French college students, or reply of Guangdong Provincial Department of Education on the request of Guangzhou University to hold short-term Chinese training courses for French college students.
3. The year bracket in the document number is wrong. The new rule is to use hexagonal brackets (I can't type them here) and add "first, 0".
4. The text is not indented by two characters.
6. The quotation does not indicate the communication number and the date of receipt.
5. Terms such as "respectfully inform" and "appropriately refuse" confuse the direction of writing with the relationship between superiors and subordinates.
6. The suffix is wrong, it should be "this reply".
7. The issuing unit shall be a subordinate department of the education department, such as an office, a secretariat or an external liaison department.
8. The date of issue should be written in Chinese characters.
Because there is no image, other errors cannot be seen. But there must be other mistakes in such a document.