Yesterday, Chongqing Evening News reporter contacted Qin Zhou (a pseudonym), a third-grade teacher of Coral Kangheng Primary School and the head teacher of Xiaoxi. Qin Zhou said that before school ended last Friday, she gave her classmates a task "Write about the people I know best". It's time to finish school. After she received all the compositions on the platform, she began to organize the school. The teachers looked through the students' compositions and were all moved by this composition.
"This is not the first time Xiaoxi wrote that Dad loves to play with mobile phones." Qin Zhou said that after reading the composition before, she found Xiaoxi to talk. "This composition is very good. In life, dad likes playing mobile phones so much? " Xiaoxi looked down and said nothing.
After Xiaoxi wrote for the first time that his father loved to play with mobile phones, Qin Zhou read Xiaoxi's composition in class and made a survey on the spot. As a result, more than one third of the children in the class raised their hands, indicating that parents often like to play with mobile phones and ignore them.
Yesterday, Xiaoxi's father refused the interview. He thinks playing with mobile phones is a common occurrence. At the same time, he told the class teacher that he would try to avoid playing mobile phones in front of the children and spend more time with them in their studies.
Chen Min, who lives in D7 Community of Dongyuan, Jiangbei, also encountered such a situation. A child who has just entered the middle class of kindergarten has finished an assignment: writing about his parents' work. Chen Min casually asked the child, "Do you know what parents do?" The child looked up at his mother, blinked and immediately replied, "Dad uses his mobile phone to check the information."
Chen Min froze. It turns out that in the eyes of children, parents are using mobile phones to work.
Primary school composition: I hope to have such a school, about 350 words. I like this school. The school grew up with me. It taught me a lot.
But I think there are still some shortcomings in the current school, such as: the school gate is not safe enough; The facilities in the classroom are not advanced enough; The playground is too small; Wait a minute.
I hope there is such a school.
At the gate, there is a light wave recognizer.
At the beginning of school, the information of all teachers and students in the school is input into the light wave recognizer, so that it can be monitored all day.
If the school teachers and students pass by, it will show a green light, if it is a stranger, it will show a red light and call the police immediately.
You must be thinking: What if the guests come? It doesn't matter, just add guest information temporarily, and don't worry that the light wave recognizer treats the guest teacher as a stranger.
I hope there is such a school.
Walking into the multifunctional classroom, many advanced equipments are installed on the walls here.
These devices can make our classroom warm in winter and cool in summer, and the air is fresh all year round. They can also adjust the brightness of the classroom automatically, and there are sound insulation boards! There are cabinets on the front, back, left and right walls. The front cabinet contains experimental equipment for science classes, the back cabinet contains music books and art books for music classes, and the left and right cabinets contain computers for computer classes.
You must think that the computer is so big that we primary school students can't move it.
Never mind, four hands on the wall will move the computer to the student seat for installation.
With these tools, you don't have to run around in class.
I hope there is such a school.
In physical education class, we came to the playground.
This playground has two floors, so that physical education class will not be too crowded.
The upper floor can automatically expand and contract, and the railings and the runway are new ... This playground has provided us with a lot of convenience.
I believe my dream will come true. To this end, I must study hard and strive to build such a school when I grow up.
How to write a good primary school composition? Please press: 1, total 2, writer 3, note 4, object 5. First, carefully examine the topic, clarify the meaning of the topic, and carefully clarify the requirements, main points and scope of the topic. This is the most critical first step in writing.
Second, determine the center and choose suitable materials. After clarifying the requirements, key points and scope of the topic, we must carefully recall the materials related to this topic, what are the most familiar and innovative things for everyone, and what ideas to express. This is the memory material, determine the center.
If the center is clear, it is necessary to choose the material that best expresses the center around the center.
This is around the center, choosing materials.
Third, list the outline, determine the details and determine the center. After selecting the materials, you should make a writing plan. What to write first, then what to write, there must be an order.
What is closely related to the center should be written in detail, and what is not closely related to the center can be simply written and prioritized without an outline and detailed description.
An outline is like a drawing of a building.
With good drawings, buildings can be strong and beautiful.
After the above three steps are completed, you can write a composition according to the outline. In this way, we can avoid the problems of improper selection of materials, irrelevant articles, chaotic structure, or top-heavy, regardless of priorities, or even no center.
In the exam, there are often cases where the composition is too late to be done, the composition gets stuck in the middle and the composition can't be finished, which greatly reduces the scoring rate of the composition to be tested.
However, if we can take some emergency measures, we can often win by surprise, save the defeat and relatively improve the score of the composition to be tested.
First, the grafting method.
It is to slightly modify and replace the original model essay or written exercise in the structure of the article, or the relevant figures, or the themes expressed, or the arguments listed, so as to make it conform to the propositions and requirements of the examination.
This can not only save writing time, but also improve writing quality. Use it not only when writing time is insufficient, but also when writing time is sufficient.
Second, direct substitution method.
In the exam, because the first half of the basic questions took too much time, the writing questions in the second half were in a hurry, so it was objectively not allowed to be carefully conceived.
Instead of writing half, it is better to deviate slightly from the proposition and requirements of the exam composition.
Because the reviewers attach great importance to the integrity of the composition, at this juncture, they might as well directly replace the articles that are impressive and similar in content and style on weekdays.
Third, the wrong way is wrong.
When writing an exam, sometimes you will find that the article is off topic or off topic because of carelessness in the exam, but if you redesign it, there will not be enough time.
In this case, instead of writing a few paragraphs in another way, it is better to complete the whole chapter by making mistakes.
Of course, it is necessary to be as far-fetched as possible, put the pieces together, work hard on deduction, analysis and summary, and work hard on lyricism and conclusion, so that the article can be destroyed and saved.
Fourth, the method of compiling the outline.
Sometimes during the exam, because I am busy attacking the basics and doing small compositions, there is not much time left for big compositions. No matter how fast it is, it is not enough. It's better to make an outline than just write a beginning or leave it blank.
Of course, the outline should be as detailed and specific as possible, at least let the reviewers see the structure, theme and general content of the article, and if possible, fill in the beginning and end to give the reviewers a glimpse of literary talent.
Fifth, leave blank.
When writing an exam composition, it is also common that you can't write it down because you don't make an outline in advance.
Most candidates often think hard and bite their heads to be continued. The more I think about it, the more I feel that time is tight, and the more I think about it, the more I feel that I can't contact.
At this time, it is better to leave blank, write down what you have considered in your own ideas first, and wait until the ideas are clear and the contents are recalled, or make up after the full text is completed, which is also the best policy for the article.
Six, rebate title method.
In any case, the deduction of questions in the composition is extremely important, not to mention it is particularly necessary when the exam composition can't be finished.
For example, in a city, the title of the senior high school entrance examination in a certain year is "an unusual exam". After describing a thing, once I can't think of a better ending, I might as well end it with "what an unusual exam this is for me."
With the end of such a deduction, the composition score may rise sharply.
Seven, take care of the beginning method.
Both narrative and argumentative essays pay more attention to the coordination of the beginning and the end. If the exam composition can't find a better ending, you can write it in a coordinated way at the beginning.
Eight, the finishing touch method.
In narrative writing, proper discussion can often point out and deepen the theme, but when the exam-oriented composition is too late to end, it is necessary to carry out relevant discussions to summarize the topic.
This is not only a last resort, but also an emergency measure.
I made a wish on the moon, over 600 words. It's as cold as a silver mirror, sparkling with stars and as quiet as water. I stared at the starry sky quietly and waited patiently for the arrival of the Leonid meteor shower.
I heard the old man say such a legend, as long as you make a sincere wish to a meteor, the meteor can help you get it.
Thinking of this legend, I can't help but think of all my wishes ... when I was in kindergarten, I always wanted to have candy every day, and I pestered my mother to buy candy almost every day after school.
I also fantasize about a "candy house", which has become my wish. This wish is naive, but sweet, because the little girl who dreams of "candy house" is only five years old after all.
The gear of time keeps turning, and that sweet wish gradually becomes tasteless.
When I was ten years old, I was a girl in Grade Three.
I remember when I learned that I had donated a pool for the "Mother of the West", so I had another wish. This wish is to let all people in the west use water as soon as possible. I rushed to the post office with a small money box.
I thought having money would make my wish come true. I once made such a wish that I could have a lot of money to satisfy all my wishes ... This wish was "great".
In this way, my sweet wish was replaced by a "great" wish, and I grew up in this alternation.
The gears of time keep turning, and the four seasons in the years seem fleeting. Now I am fourteen years old, and I no longer yearn for the "candy house" and have no illusions about having a lot of money. My wish now is to study hard and be admitted to a famous university. This wish is realistic and mature, because I am fourteen years old and know how to change my destiny with knowledge.
The gears of time will still turn endlessly. Maybe in my old age, my wishes have changed again. Maybe I want my old age to be peaceful, maybe I want my children to be happy. It is impossible to know.
But I know that my wishes change in the rotation of the time gear, and I grew up in the change of my wishes, from an ignorant child to me now.
Suddenly, a meteor crossed the night sky, and I gently made a wish to the meteor: let my impetuous heart be refined and sublimated in the ocean of knowledge.
I know that I have grown up after making this wish.
Ask for some primary school students' compositions in my harvest, hoping to get help. Thank you.
My harvest was a scorching weekend, and my aunt invited my sister and me to the museum to participate in the activities of visiting the museum organized by Straits Metropolis Daily.
Before nine o'clock, men, women and children who came from all directions to participate in the activity arrived, so they began to visit.
The museum is divided into four exhibition halls, and the guide aunt gave us a detailed introduction one by one.
Entering the first exhibition hall-on the water side, there are stories about Taiwan Province Province and our mainland.
The name of the second exhibition hall is the largest port in the East. It goes without saying that it is natural to introduce the story about the ship.
Walking, I saw a fake tree like a maple leaf, and after listening to the introduction of my aunt, I suddenly realized that this tree is a Erythrina tree! Erythrina trees have one characteristic, that is, flowers do not grow leaves; The long leaves didn't bloom.
Because there are countless Erythrina trees in Quanzhou, it is also called Erythrina City.
Oh, finally untied one of my knots.
Friends, have you heard of the top ten famous bridges in Quanzhou in Song Dynasty? You see, there are clearly listed Luoyang Bridge, Anping Bridge Bridge, Yulan Bridge, Su Dai Bridge and Puli Datong Bridge, as well as Dongyang Bridge, Stalagmite Bridge, Binhai Bridge, shunji bridge Bridge and Wuyu Bridge.
Coming to the fourth exhibition hall, South Xiong Feng, is more about the lives of many great men.
Such as: Shi Lang, Li Guangdi, Lu Wu, Zheng He ... Moreover, I also know that General Shi Lang was named "Jinghai Hou" by the Qing emperor; Li Guangdi was the last scholar and prime minister of the Qing Dynasty. Lu Wu is the last scholar in the state; Zheng He was a great man who made seven voyages to the Western Ocean ... As time went by, our activities drew to a close.
Today's tour really opened my eyes. Quanzhou is such an ancient and civilized city! I suddenly want to grow up quickly and explore the mysteries of the world.
People often say: "No pains, no gains.
"If you want to harvest, you must pay.
I remember a teacher said to us, "Because I don't know how to pay, I don't get much." .
"After listening to this sentence, I really feel ashamed. From the day I was born, I paid very little, while others paid too much for me. For example, my parents have paid for raising me, and my teachers have paid for educating me. Their efforts are not in a hurry to return.
What about us? Not only did I not pay, but I also hoped to gain something.
When we see others being praised, we also hope to be praised by others, but what we have done is not worthy of praise at all.
When we see other people's excellent grades, we also hope that our grades are excellent, but we don't study hard.
If this idea of "getting something for nothing" becomes a habit, then we will be very selfish and our interpersonal relationship in society will become very bad. Selfish classmates are not uncommon in our class.
When you find a mass of waste paper under your feet, no one wants to pick it up, only to kick it at the feet of another classmate.
And this classmate will not pick it up and pass it around. This scene is like passing the ball on the court, but unlike the athletes, none of us want this "ball".
It was passed around like this until it reached the feet of an enthusiastic classmate, and the paper ball could go to the trash can smoothly.
Sometimes the paper ball just stays in the middle of the aisle, and the students will turn a blind eye.
How much energy can you consume by bending down to pick up the waste paper ball? Why be stingy with such a little love? When we do something, what comes to mind for the first time? I just thought that I would suffer in the future.
If everyone thinks that doing so will suffer, who else will do it? If you want to gain, you have to pay, and if you pay, you don't care about the gain.
Primary school students say that maternal love is great and meticulous.
Gorky, a writer of the former Soviet Union, once wrote the article "Mother", and many people can sing "Only mothers are good in the world".
The word "mother" has long been synonymous with love and affection.
Today I'm not going to talk about maternal love, but another kind of profound but never publicized love in a broad sense-fatherly love.
Father, when this name is mentioned, two words will pop up in most people's minds, severe and cold.
In people's minds, the only way for a father to educate his children is to beat and scold.
There is seldom a happy smile on his father's face, and a serious cloud always hangs over his face.
In fact, fatherly love is a special kind of love, and it is a kind of love that is not good at expressing.
Father won't write love on his face like mother, he will always hide that love above all else in his heart.
Below, I will give you some examples of my father's "inner love".
For a while, I became very lazy. When I came home from school, I didn't do my homework first, but played happily for a while, watching TV and eating snacks until my parents got off work.
So my homework is written late every day, which affects my normal life.
My father reasoned with me again and again, helped me arrange the time and set the rules for me.
But as always, I can't overcome my bad habits.
Seeing this behind the scenes, my mother burst into tears.
Where's dad? He didn't cry, not even a tear in his eye. He just put his hand on his head, stroked his hair again and again after he left, and finally sighed deeply.
Dad showed that although there were no tears, I could see that he was crying inside.
Father is not a superficial phenomenon, not a casual emotion on the surface, but a thoughtful brain and a trembling and sad heart.
Father loves me. After my father hits me and scolds me, he always says, "Son, it's not that I want to hit you. I know you may hate me now, but I have no choice. For your own good, this is a last resort. "
"The first night after hitting me, he always came to my side while my mother was asleep. He knows I can't sleep. He sat quietly in front of the bed and said to me, "I'm sorry I hit you too hard." Please forgive me.
"In a short sentence, my heart was deeply shocked and I couldn't help crying.
Dad wiped the tears from the corner of his eyes and said nothing. He just tucked the corner of the quilt for me and got up and walked out of my room.
Fatherly love is a kind of guilt and self-blame, and it is also an tolerance for children.
Father loves me. When I was 6 years old, I learned to ride a bike. Every time I lose my way, I fall down.
Dad stood by and looked at me without any intention of coming to help me. I had to stand up, dust myself, straighten my bike and get back on it.
Out of the corner of my eye, I saw my father smile.
Fatherly love is a way of teaching and a great encouragement in times of suffering.
Father loves me. My father always pesters him when he comes home from work, but when he knows that I got 100 in a certain subject exam and my study has made progress, he is always ecstatic, with a bright smile on his face, constantly praising me and giving me a thumbs-up.
Suddenly, his fatigue disappeared, leaving only activity and excitement.
Fatherly love is a kind of heartfelt excitement.
Comments: The teacher was shocked when he saw this topic.
When I saw the following sentence, I was even more surprised that the perfect interpretation of fatherly love came from the mouth of a primary school student.
"Inner love", special love and unspeakable love, vivid examples show us your understanding of your father's love and express your deep love for your father.
Unique expression, concise language use and novel and reasonable structural design give people a refreshing feeling.
I hope every child who has read this article will say to your father, "Dad, I love you!" " "
My ideal is an inspiring goal, a weather vane in the sea, a snow lotus in the mountains and a stormy boat. Take us to the other side of success.
On the road of life, if you have no goal, you can't climb the highest mountain in the world; Without ideals, you can't pick the brightest pearls.
My ideal is to be an excellent dancer.
When I was a child, I didn't know how many beautiful ideals I had changed, but this ideal hit my heart like a spring rain, fell on a long-term drought field and quickly penetrated.
Whenever I see someone dancing, I stop and turn my eyes to the dancer. The graceful dancing and happy smile are amazing.
This action, a step, deeply attracted me.
My heart seems to have entered a colorful fairy tale world and moved towards a beautiful dance world.
I deeply fell in love with dance and formed an indissoluble bond with it. In this way, I took part in the dance class and embarked on the road of dancing.
Whenever sweet music rings in my ears, I will dance as I like, carefree, my hands swing gently and my feet beat slowly. Every movement is so skillful and beautiful.
Just like a bird, spreading its white wings, throwing away its troubles and soaring in the vast sky.
When I first performed on the stage, I lost my mind because of nervousness. Let success pass me by, let failure pass me by, my heart is broken. But I think everyone is eager for success, because it is praised and affirmed by people and makes them proud.
However, is there anyone who has always been successful? More success is accumulated by failure again and again. Failure is the ladder and the golden key to success. As the saying goes, "Failure is the mother of success.
"well! I am convinced that one failure does not mean the second failure.
I will get more praise, more recognition and more applause in the future! The door to dance is open to me. As long as I take one step, success belongs to me and always accompanies me.
Balzac said: The flowers of life will bloom only if you work hard.
Only if I work hard can I realize my ideal.
On this long road of learning, there is only one way, and that is: hard work.
In my study, I can only climb the other side of success by hard work, so I will try my best to realize my ideal.
Be sure to choose me! This article is original for the teacher and sister! No plagiarism! Be sure to choose me! This is a tough battle ~ ...
Pupil composition: I have a dream. Hello, everyone, the topic of my speech today is "I have a dream"! We gather together for a common dream, we inherit the blood of literature, and we carry our ideal backpacks.
We pursue a bright future, we pursue wisdom, we eulogize freedom, we express our feelings, and we use poetic language to shed surging blood.
Read a hundred books and live a hundred lives.
Nothing is more powerful to life than books.
Books are friends of the lonely, companions of the abandoned, happiness of the unhappy, hope of the desperate, happiness of the depressed, help of the helpless and dawn of the dreamer.
Today, I have a dream.
I hope that the students will pick up the colored pencils in their hands, draw a beautiful blueprint, take off from here, let your dreams fly, and pursue our dreams day by day like Kuafu.
You can't live without dreams. We are the pride of the times and the future of our motherland. I hope everyone will make progress, surpass themselves and embrace the world.
I hope every student can swim in the ocean of knowledge and fight freely in the spiritual world.
Bathe in the brilliant thoughts of sages and listen to the inculcation of benevolent masters.
The palace of literature is magnificent. We came here with a red-hot heart and a love for literature. We are fearless because * * * is unfinished.
As long as we practice, as long as we love reading, as long as we like writing, our spirit is free and our mind is open; As long as we work hard, as long as we pursue tirelessly, as long as we have firm beliefs, as long as we have the spirit of exploration, as long as we dare to act, I imagine that our dreams will come true and our pursuit will be rewarded.
I think! I will do it! I made it!
What do I yearn for? Pupils' 300-word composition can only be improved by thinking for themselves. I suggest you write a few points. 1. Know what the central idea is, that is, what this article mainly wants to say. 2. Write an attractive article at the beginning to make readers willing to read on. 3. Write a summary or sentiment at the end of the article.
4. Read the title impulsively. To write a good composition, there are at least these steps.
I hope I can help you.
Ask for a composition about 20 12 my wish, written by sixth-grade pupils. Time flies, time flies, 20 12 has finally arrived, which is destined to be an extraordinary year.
Kurt left a short work as a souvenir.
Here, I also clearly express my expectation for 20 12.
From birth to the moment in the past, I have never had any big wishes and ideals.
But looking at home and abroad, I have heard, witnessed and paid attention to storms (earthquakes), snowstorms, droughts, plagues, wars in other countries and internal struggles between countries in the past few years. I believe that people can't help feeling.
Ok, here I send my first wish 2 102: I wish 20 12 peace in the motherland and the world, with fewer natural and man-made disasters.
20 12 years, I can say that I entered adolescence and was one year older.
I will say goodbye to that confused childhood soon, which is the reason why I am confused; It's really because I feel suddenly old and sensible. Look at the past, Children's Day, Teachers' Day, Arbor Day and so on. What childish activities really make me feel a little uncomfortable now.
But fortunately, the experience is perfect! However, it may be because I am not sensible enough, because things are always so changeable, and so are people! Well, here is my second wish: I wish myself a good start in adolescence and make more and better friends.
By the way, plants have roots, and people have no relatives. I almost forgot to bless my relatives and friends.
Sheep kneel and feed back, and people will always get old. I send out my third wish of 20 12: bless my parents, even if they are one year older, but I wish them one year younger psychologically.
("Mom and Dad, I love you! I wish you two, our family (more right) happiness! " I told myself this in this halo article.
Even thinking about other people's relatives and friends, my parents taught me that most of my happiness comes from them, and it is true to think about it.
Then I unequivocally wish you, me, him (her) happiness! As the saying goes, the more happiness you share, the more you share.
Not to mention kissing? ! As the saying goes, "happiness" is not having more, but asking less! So, I made four big wishes in this world! Kong Rong has the virtue of making pears grow, and I am sometimes satisfied.
Teachers, please look! (This article has been written now)
My Ideal Everyone has his own ideal, and I am no exception. My ideal is to be a physics scientist. When I was a child, I was so naive that I never thought about my ideals. As I grew up day by day, I began to care about my ideals. I really want to be a physics scientist. My mother is a physics teacher. When I was a child, my mother began to cultivate my interest in physics and often took me to do some simple physics experiments. I am very interested in these experiments. From then on, I fell in love with physics. I admire scientists like Einstein, Galileo and Newton, who have great influence on the scientific community. Therefore, I also want to be a scientist like them and make great contributions to the construction of the motherland. I read a lot of books and learned many stories about great scientists like Madame Curie, which taught me a lot about being a man. Success is made up of hard work, persistence and talent. If I fail, I will persist, and then my ideal will come true. I keep learning knowledge and experience in my life and study. In my study, I listen carefully and speak actively. In life, I am strict with myself and do my own thing well. "The sky is vast, birds and flowers are fragrant." I am like a happy little fish, swimming freely in the vast ocean of knowledge, and making unremitting efforts to break through all difficulties, pursue and realize my ideals and win glory for my motherland!
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