Some people will admire the vastness of the sea, some people appreciate the vastness of the sky, some people will praise the towering trees, and some people will sigh the beauty of nature. On the other hand, I like you alone.
-nameless plum blossom.
Chinese plum
-You don't have the beauty of peony.
There are no delicate and charming roses.
Not as colorful as roses.
Not as noble and elegant as lotus.
However, I like you better.
I like you-this frosty plum blossom!
In winter,
In winter, only you-plum blossoms bloom against the cold wind!
In this day of freezing and snowing in Wan Li for thousands of miles, only you-
Plum blossoms are in full bloom proudly!
Colorful flowers, white as snow, red as fire, yellow as gold, pink as chardonnay.
Dancing in the cold wind, Bing Xin jade bone.
When I smell it carefully, a fragrance can't help coming at me. It is fragrant and fresh, which makes people feel relaxed and happy. ...
Since ancient times, seclusion, pine and bamboo have been known as "three friends of the old and the cold", sung by poets, portrayed by painters, carved by artists and yearned for by tourists. When summer ends and winter comes, you can fight the cold in the cold wind, survive in the frost and snow, and flourish from time to time, which fully reflects your strong vitality of not being afraid of difficulties and pressure. Isn't that what we should learn?
So I want to praise you-
Chinese plum
Praise you
-Shuang Ling is proud of snow and is not afraid of difficulties and obstacles.
2. Composition 1 I hope my answer is helpful to you.
My hometown is Lingshan, where the seasons are like spring and the scenery is beautiful. Rich in products, outstanding people. It is a famous land of fruits.
Lingshan is a good place with beautiful scenery and many scenic spots. There are famous Liu Feng, Dalu Village and Longwu Li Xiang Garden. If you have never been to Lingshan, I will take you on a trip.
Liu Feng, near the county seat, is a scenic spot composed of several rocky mountains. After entering the gate, you can climb up the steps made of stone bars, and you can see many places of interest, including the Beidi Temple, Baoshan Square, Guanyin Pavilion, Sanqing Palace, Huanghua Bookstore and many other scenic spots with the most incense. There are towering old trees, majestic peaks, grotesque caves and fantastic crafts in the scenic area. There are six peaks in the mountain, such as "dragon head, phoenix tail, crane stand, turtle back, security guard, running at night", so it is called Liu Feng. When you climb the top of the bug, you can enjoy the scenery of the whole county. The buildings in the street have become smaller, and people have become as small as ants. Climbing high and looking far to point out the mountains and rivers, people are in a particularly good mood at heights.
Not far from the county seat, there is an ancient residential village-Dalu Village, which has the reputation of "the first village of Guangxi couplets". You can see ancient trees, ancient buildings and ancient cultures here, which are the architectural communities of Ming and Qing Dynasties. Ancient folk houses are large in scale, beautiful in ecological environment and rich in folk culture, which is a good place for people to wander back and forth.
Lingshan is located in the subtropical zone, rich in all kinds of fruits, and fresh fruits are on the market all year round. Litchi is a specialty of Lingshan, and is known as "the treasure of China" and "the king of fruit". There are varieties such as March Red, Black Leaf Litchi, Fragrant Litchi, Guiwei, Glutinous Rice Paste, etc. A large number of fresh Litchi fruits are on the market from early May to late July every year. Besides litchi, Lingshan is also rich in longan, mango, banana, watermelon and other fruits. Lingshan is a famous fruit town in China. Every year, a fruit fair with litchi as the theme is held.
This is my hometown. Although I live in Nanning, I often go back to see it. I love my hometown. This is a beautiful place!
Teacher Macey comments: Your hometown is beautiful, and all the teachers like it. You must have collected a lot of information to write it, didn't you? It is better to write the composition in your own language, which will be more appropriate and childlike.
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3. Write an animal composition according to the description. My family has a lovely puppy. It has yellow hair and a black nose. I tied a bell on it. Speaking of you, you must think it's cute. You want to hug it. I remember once I finished my homework and then reviewed it. After the review task is completed, I can relax and play with the glass ball, playing very hard. I ran to the dog and saw a glass ball in front of it. I think it must have been found by the puppy. I was very happy, stroking its smooth fur. The puppy is too sensible. Once when I came home from school, I wanted to play a joke on my dog. I went to the kitchen and got a chicken leg from the dining table. Then I went to find the puppy. The dog saw the drumstick in my hand and jumped over to eat it. I'll start over. This time, the puppy crouched down a little, and then jumped at the drumstick with all his strength. I raised my hand a little, and it was already late. It has taken away the chicken leg and is willing to eat it with relish. This puppy is so innocent and lovely. I love my little dog. It's my good companion.
Students who write expository articles, I want to introduce a kind of fruit to you, that is strawberry.
Strawberries, also known as red berries, broken berries and so on. It is heart-shaped, delicious, tender, juicy, sweet and sour, and full of fragrance. It not only has color, but also has pleasant fragrance that ordinary fruits don't have. It is a kind of precious fruit with good color, fragrance and taste, so it is often called "the queen of fruits". Carrot contained in strawberry is an important quality of synthetic fiber A, which has the function of improving eyesight and nourishing liver.
It also contains pectin and rich dietary fiber, which can help digestion. Strawberry has a certain nourishing and conditioning effect on gastrointestinal tract and anemia.
Strawberries can not only prevent scurvy, but also prevent arteriosclerosis and coronary heart disease. Strawberry is a plant rich in tannic acid, which can absorb and prevent the absorption of carcinogenic chemicals in the body and has the function of preventing cancer.
According to research, women often eat strawberries, which have health care effects on skin and hair. Strawberries are called "magic fruits" in Germany.
Strawberry can also lose weight, because it contains a substance called aspartic acid, which can naturally and gently remove the "residue" in the body. According to China medical science, strawberry is cool and sour, and has the functions of moistening lung, promoting fluid production, clearing heat and cooling blood, strengthening spleen and relieving hangover.
According to the determination, every100g of strawberry pulp contains 8-9g of sugar, 0.4-0.6g of protein and 0.00mg of vitamin C 50-100g, which is 7-10g higher than that of apples and grapes. The contents of malic acid, citric acid, vitamin B 1, vitamin B 12, carotene, calcium, phosphorus and iron are 3 to 4 times higher than those of apples, pears and grapes.
Taiwan Province province calls strawberries "living vitamin pills", while Germans call strawberries "magic fruits", which makes sense. Buy strawberries with bright colors, luster, large particles and strong fragrance.
Be sure to wash and disinfect before eating. First, remove the leaves, rinse them with water, then put them in a clean container, dilute potassium permanganate with the ratio of 1: 5000, soak strawberries with disinfectant for 5 to 10 minutes, or replace them with salt solution, and finally soak them in cold boiled water for/kloc-0 to 2 minutes before eating.
It is said that 500 grams of strawberries, a little sugar, and frozen soda water 100 ml are mixed into juice to drink, which is effective for acne. The nutrients of strawberries are easily digested and absorbed by the human body, and eating more will not catch a cold or get angry. It is a healthy food suitable for all ages.
5. Write a short essay to explain the enlightenment of skating. I remember one Sunday afternoon in my fourth grade, my father took me to the roller skating rink in Lanxi, and I was very happy.
On the way, the flowers nodded to me frequently, and the grass waved to me, as if to say, "Have fun." When I entered the skating rink, I saw people on the skating rink, sliding back and forth.
Some squatted down, some flew like swallows, some pulled into a row to play "snake slide", and some beginners moved their feet trembling. I saw it and was very excited.
I quickly bought a ticket, changed my skates, and staggered to stand up with the railing. Alas, these shoes are so heavy! "Hey!" I lost my footing, slipped forward a few times involuntarily, leaned back and fell on my feet.
I touch * * *, while thinking; It hurts. If I had known it was so difficult to learn, I wouldn't have come. Dad seemed to see through my mind and came up to me seriously and said, "Lingling, you have to learn one thing to the end." Only by perseverance can we achieve our goals and achieve success. "
"After listening to my father's words, I seem to understand something. I stand on the railing and observe those who can skate. I found that they all leaned forward slightly, their feet were splayed, and they didn't lift high when sliding, focusing on their sliding feet. I saw it. I learned to slide forward like that, fell down again, got up, fell down again, got up again, fell down again and again, and finally learned some essentials.
Through skating, my father's words have been deeply imprinted in my mind: if you learn one thing, you must learn it to the end. Only by perseverance can you achieve your goal and succeed.
6. With regard to explanatory writing, food is the most important thing for the people. China has been famous for its unique cuisine since ancient times. No matter what the eight cuisines are, cooking and frying are, China cuisine is always favored by people all over the world. Needless to say, the golden and delicious Beijing roast duck, as well as the delicious and tender Nanjing salted duck, there is also a famous local dish-stuffed goose in our small town in the south of the Yangtze River.
I think strangers will complain, "isn't it just a goose?" What's so strange! " Well, you're right. This goose is really ordinary, not magical, but it does show its strangeness in the ordinary. Listen to me slowly.
Yang Ren's stuffed geese were very popular during the Republic of China. Although its ingredients are ordinary, this production process is not ordinary. The master of goose making will first choose a goose of moderate size, kill it, remove its hair, gut it, then wash it, put its head and feet into the stomach, put it into the pot, pour in cooking wine, and add onion and ginger to cook for a while. Then adding spices, such as fennel, fennel and mixed skin; Jade laurel, ruby, etc. Then add soy sauce, oil, salt, monosodium glutamate and other strong flavors and continue to cook. When you can drill a hole in the goose's leg with chopsticks, it means that the goose is almost ripe. Simmer for another ten minutes. When the fragrance fills the whole room, you can turn off the fire. You can stew it for a while. The goose is brown when it is cooked. If you really can't help it, just cut a small piece with a knife and put it in your mouth to savor it. The fragrance is beyond words, and it has been fragrant to your heart, making you want to eat it again.
It is precisely because of this that geese are so loved by hometown people and foreign guests. People usually put a pot of Yang Ren goose on the banquet. Those guests from other places ate once and asked for it the next day.
At the same time, geese have also brought certain economic benefits. Now, there are about a dozen goose stalls on the streets of Yang Ren, attracting tourists from all over the world. Moreover, some vendors boldly innovated and invented stewed ducks and chickens. And their sales are also good. However, it is still the most popular goose, and the biggest stall sells more than ten a day!
After listening to my introduction, I believe that people who have eaten or have not eaten gooseberry will like it.
I believe that in the near future, with the continuous innovation of people, there will be more and more exchanges between China and the world, and our geese in Yang Ren will also go to the world and face the future. Let those foreigners praise it very well!
7. Does the composition about description and explanation methods help you? Common interpretation methods include giving examples, classifying, enumerating data, comparing, drawing charts, defining, explaining, making metaphors, imitating appearances, quoting materials and so on.
We should choose the best method according to the characteristics of the explanatory object and the purpose of writing. The following are explained separately.
(1) example. Cite practical examples to explain things, make the things to be explained specific and make readers understand. This interpretation method is called example method.
For example, most people always think that when they are old, their memory ability must be poor. Actually, it's not. Please look at the experimental results. The International Linguistic Society made a comparison between young people aged 9 to 18 and adults over 35 when learning Esperanto, and found that the former was inferior to the latter in memory. This is because adults are rich in knowledge and experience, and it is easy to establish extensive contacts on the basis of existing knowledge.
This connection is called "association" in psychology. People's memory is based on association. The more knowledge and experience, the easier it is to establish associations, and the memory will be improved accordingly.
Marx began to learn Russian in his fifties. After half a year, he has been able to read the original works of famous poets and writers Pushkin, Nikolai Gogol and Schederin with relish. This is due to rich language knowledge and ability to understand many modern and ancient languages.
The point of this article is that memory is not necessarily bad when you are old. To illustrate this point, the author first provides the experimental results and analyzes the reasons.
So far, it's all right, but it's not specific enough and convincing. So, let's take another example: when Marx was in his fifties, it took only six months to master Russian. This way, the content is specific and the persuasion is enhanced.
Illustration in expository writing and illustration in argumentative writing can make the content concrete and enhance persuasiveness. But there are differences between them.
Examples in argumentative essays are used to prove points, while examples in expository essays are used to introduce knowledge. To illustrate things or things through examples, we should pay attention to the representativeness and appropriateness of examples.
(2) classification. According to certain standards, the interpreted objects are divided into different categories and explained one by one. This method of explanation is called classification.
Classification is an important way to clarify complex things. When using classification methods, we should pay attention to the classification standards, and only one standard can be used at a time to avoid overlapping.
For example, "the collection of books in the library includes China, classics, foreign countries, science and technology, literature, modern times and political economy." There is more than one standard used here, so it is not clear.
The correct statement should be: according to the country, there are two kinds of books in the library; According to the times, there are classical and modern; By nature, there are science and technology, literature and political economy. In this way, only one standard is used for each classification, which is clear at a glance.
The characteristics and essence of some things need to be divided into several points or aspects, which also belongs to classification. Please note that by using the classification method, there should be no omissions in the listed categories.
(3) Column data. In order to make the things to be explained concrete, you can also use the method of column data to make readers understand.
It should be noted that the quoted figures must be accurate, and inaccurate figures must never be used. Even the estimated figures should have reliable basis and try to be approximate. (4) Make a comparison.
Explain that some abstract or unfamiliar things can be compared with concrete or familiar things, so that readers can get a concrete and vivid impression through comparison. The characteristics of things often appear in comparison.
When making comparisons, you can compare things in the same category, things in different categories, things can be compared horizontally or vertically. (5) draw a chart.
In order to explain complex things clearly, we can also use charts to make up for the lack of simple words and explain some things more directly and concretely. (6) definition.
Defining the essential characteristics of a concept in concise language is called definition. Definition can accurately reveal the essence of things and is a common method in scientific and technological discussion.
When defining, we can consider it from different angles according to the purpose of description. Some emphasize characteristics, such as the definition of "person"; Some emphasize functions, such as the definition of "fertilizer"; Some explain both characteristics and functions, such as the definition of "master planning method" and "applied science".
Man is an advanced animal, who can make tools and use them for labor. Fertilizer is a substance that can provide nutrients to make plants grow.
③ Overall planning method is a mathematical method to arrange the work process. Engineering technology, called applied science, is the knowledge of applying the basic theories of natural science to solve problems in production practice.
No matter from what angle, no matter in what way, as long as a definition is made, it is necessary to reveal the essence of things, and only such a definition is scientific. For example, someone said, "Man is an upright animal with two feet."
This definition is unscientific because it does not reveal the essence of things. "Man is an advanced animal that can make tools and use them for labor."
This is the definition of science, because it reveals the essence of human beings. (7) interpretation.
Explain some characteristics of things from one side. This method is called hermeneutics. Definition and explanation often adopt the language form of "what is so-and-so".
The form is the same, how to distinguish it? Generally speaking, the words on both sides of the word "yes" are interchangeable, which is the definition; If it is not interchangeable, it is interpretation. For example, the sentence "Man is a senior animal who can make tools and use them to work" is changed to "The senior animal who can make tools and use tools to work is a man", and the meaning remains unchanged.
The sentence "Snow is the solid precipitation formed in the cloud" cannot be changed to "The solid precipitation formed in the cloud is snow". It can be seen that the former sentence is a definition and the latter sentence is an explanation.
(8) For example. Using the similarity between two different things to compare, highlight the characteristics of things and enhance the vividness and vividness of explanation is called analogy.
The interpretation method of metaphor in explanatory text is consistent with that in rhetoric. The difference is that figurative rhetoric includes simile, metaphor and borrowing.
8. Write a composition starting with "The dictionary is my best", explaining the use and characteristics of the dictionary-my best teacher "Mom, I can't write this word!" "Look it up in the dictionary!" "Too much trouble!" Usually, I don't like looking up the dictionary. I don't like the reason why my mother always stares at my homework: as soon as I have free words, she shouts at me, "Are you so free?" Look me up in the dictionary! "I have heard this sentence 100 times, and I have memorized it. When I got angry, I smashed the dictionary on the desk and tore several pages. Poor dictionary, he seems to be crying at me, "why did you hit me?" "However, on one occasion, my mother was angry with me. She brought me a paper and said that if there were any mistakes, she would do another one. I have to do another paper. " At this time, the wind blew away a page of the dictionary. The dictionary is more anxious than I am, as if to say, "Little Master, use me." So I picked up my life-saving medicine and quickly found the word. The dictionary fought a beautiful battle! He seemed very proud and said, "I'll do it." All the papers were done correctly that day. My mother praised me and rewarded me. I was elated and thought, "It's all thanks to the dictionary." I like dictionaries-my best teacher.
9. Explain how to write a composition (1) to clearly explain the object. When reading a descriptive article, whether it is the whole article or the whole paragraph, we should first start from the whole and grasp what the article explains, that is, what the object is; When reading a narrative, you should be clear about what the article is saying. How to find the right person? 1. Look at the topic, many topics have indicated the object of explanation, such as the article "China Stone Arch Bridge". 2. Grasp the first enclosed sentence and the central sentence. Good explanatory articles often use this sentence to highlight the things and characteristics to be explained. (2) Grasp the characteristics of things, introduce their shapes, properties and compositions, and explain their causes, functions and relationships. They all have to master the characteristics of things. You can also start from two aspects: first, focus on the topic. Some titles point out their own characteristics while pointing out the object of the article, such as the majestic Great Hall of the People. The title points out that the object of the article is the Great Hall of the People, which is characterized by grandeur; Some headlines guide readers to grasp the characteristics of the object by asking questions, such as where does the food come from? The title points out the object "food" and guides the reader to read the text. It is not difficult to see that "food is a substance that can form the body and supply energy" clearly points out that the characteristics of "food" are "forming the body and supplying energy"; Some topics use vivid metaphors and anthropomorphic methods to illustrate the characteristics of things. For example, the article "Your Majesty the Weather" uses anthropomorphic rhetoric to call the weather "Your Majesty", which vividly and interestingly illustrates the prestige of the weather. Secondly, starting with the material analysis, that is, analyzing the characteristics of things introduced by the author paragraph by paragraph, and then summarizing them. The author has clearly pointed out the essential characteristics of some things in the article. Find out these key sentences when reading. For example, in the article "China Stone Arch Bridge", the sentence "This kind of bridge is not only beautiful in shape, but also firm in structure" and "China Stone Arch Bridge has a long history" points out the characteristics of China Stone Arch Bridge: beautiful in shape, firm in structure and long in history. Another example is the article "Suzhou Gardens", "Make sure that no matter where tourists stand, there is always a perfect picture in front of them". This paper summarizes the characteristics of Suzhou gardens: "beautiful picture scroll". Some discourses have no obvious key sentences, so they need to be carefully pondered and extracted when reading. For example, "Yongding River is in a violent state when it overflows. Before, the riverbanks on both sides of the river were often washed away, but this bridge has never had an accident, which shows its firmness. The bridge deck is paved with stone slabs with stone pillars on both sides. Lions with different postures are engraved on each stigma. " Some are as lifelike as listening to the sound of water. "There are no key sentences in this passage, but a comparative interpretation method and vivid description are used. For example, comparing the riverbanks on both sides of the river with the fact that the bridge has never had an accident is to illustrate the "solid structure" of Lugou Bridge; The rhetorical devices of parallelism and personification are used to describe the modality of the lion metaphor engraved on the stigma, so as to illustrate the "beautiful form" of Lugou Bridge. (3) When reading the explanatory text, mark the explanatory methods used in the article while reading, then summarize the main methods used, and then analyze the role of these explanatory methods in accurately explaining the characteristics of things. (4) Summarize the main points paragraph by paragraph, and clarify the explanation order. Pay attention to the function of the first closed sentence, the last concluding sentence or interrogative sentence, and the sentence that defines or explains the concept. These sentences can be sketched out when reading. It is best to use complete sentences when summarizing the main points, and the meaning should be concise. On the basis of summarizing the main points paragraph by paragraph, the full text is divided into relatively independent parts by the method of "similarity merging", and the general idea of each part is summarized to make it clearer. Spatial order is used to describe architecture; Introduce high-tech products or explain the relationship between things in logical order. (5) Perceive the whole and grasp the center. On the basis of clearly explaining the order, it is easy to see the basic structure of the article by analyzing the relationship between paragraphs and parts. If it is a fully fractional structure, we should also focus on the principle of partial combination of "points", whether it is parallel or progressive. There is still a total score relationship. The progressive structure should focus on how the meaning of each layer develops from phenomenon to essence, from individual to general, from result to cause. After mastering the structure, it is best to draw a schematic diagram of the structure. The center of explanation is to summarize an explanation article, explain the characteristics of the things being explained, or explain what things are. It is not difficult to generalize the interpretation center on the basis of clarifying the interpretation order and grasping the structure of the article. (6) The accuracy of understanding the language is the characteristic of explaining the language. Analyzing and explaining language is to see how words and sentences accurately explain the characteristics of the things being explained. Pay attention to the analysis of the role of keywords. The nine methods edited at the end of this paragraph (1) are the methods to summarize the explained objects. At the end of Strange Laser, this method is used: "Laser, as a unique light source never seen before in human history, not only greatly promotes the development of science and technology, but also provides a powerful tool for opening up new scientific fields, and also inspires scientists to produce more and more wonderful scientific fantasies: laser may be the key to an endless energy treasure house; Laser may make people see phenomena that have never been seen before; Laser may become the driving force of space navigation ... of course, it takes a long journey to turn so many possibilities into reality, and we still need to explore further. "Conclusion method can focus on the purpose and intention revealed by the author to readers, so that readers can have a general impression of the full text. (2) Exclamation is a way to express deep sigh after explaining the object. For example, at the end of poplar. This exclamation point is used at the end of the article, which is infectious and can be added.