2. Write a scene description composition at the beginning of the scene (composition guidance) open sesame-Meet you happy composition At school, in the classroom, in the street, in the market ... There are often many interesting scenes, such as the Dragon in the sports field, the neon flashing in the street at night, the laughter on the playground, and the bargaining in the market ... Choose a scene that you are most familiar with and write it down.
Pay attention to the combination of point and surface to reflect the characteristics of this scene. Golden Finger-Give you the trick of "turning the stone into gold" ● Fengtou-Write the opening 1 Directly explain the time, place and people of the live event.
A. Today, our composition training class held a special wrench competition. Everyone is eager to try.
B, Thursday's 10-minute team will become an ocean of joy. We played an interesting game-passing packages.
C, Thursday, sunny. Teacher Wang took us to the new playground for a special relay race.
In today's composition class, we played an interesting game-sticky nose. 2. Describe a close-up.
A, you see, they just hold each other's hands tightly and pull hard to their side, deadlocked. Some of the audience on our field waved and shouted for refueling, some stamped their feet in a hurry, and some looked at their trembling hands and shouted, "Come on, come on!" " To tell you the truth, we are having a wrench competition! Hey, come and see the students in our composition class! Both boys and girls are sweating profusely.
Oh, so they are comparing wrenches. C. The students held their breath, sweated palms, and looked at the deadlocked players with rapt attention.
The air seems to be solidified, and it seems to be constantly expanding and expanding. As long as there is a little spark, it will explode ... our relay race is in full swing, very intense and tense ... D, "Let me do it, let me do it!" Several students shouted. It turns out that my classmates are playing the game of "nose to nose".
The game is played like this. The teacher drew a big-headed doll with hair, eyes, ears and a big mouth. The fly in the ointment is that it has no nose. This nose needs us to stick it on.
E, "Ha ha ha ....." The classroom has been shrouded in this laughter, and every member is surrounded by joy-the teacher is teaching us to play the game of "sticky nose". 3. Start with cheers and laughter.
A word, "Come on, come on ..." A burst of shouts came from our classroom. We are having a wrench competition. Come and have a look! B, "Ha ha ha ..." There was a burst of laughter from time to time in our classroom.
What's going on here? We are playing the game of sticky nose! C, "Come on, come on." I heard a crisp and loud refueling sound. This is the fourth grade relay race of our sports meeting. It's really wonderful! Aren't you going to see it? Never regret. 4. Let's talk about the students' reaction to the news of wrench strength. A. In the composition class on Thursday afternoon, Mr. Yang announced that the whole class would carry out "pull strength" activities.
As soon as Mr. Yang's voice fell, some students jumped up happily, and some students began to prepare. When the class began, the teacher smiled and walked into the classroom and said, "classmate, today we are going to play the game of passing parcels."
The students were overjoyed. Today, in the composition class, Mr. Huang said that he would introduce a game called "Sticking Nose".
Everyone talked noisily: strange! We have noses. How do we post them? Everyone looked at Miss Huang with curious eyes. 5. Write down your feelings at that time.
A, the students looked forward to it and finally came to the autumn sports meeting of our school. The sports ground is full of fierce competition, especially the relay race.
B, the last event of the sports meeting-the head-on relay horse race has started. I am excited and excited, because I am also a member of this project ● Pork belly-write key paragraphs. First, let's watch two clips together: clip one: the kite competition has started, and colorful kites are scrambling to fly into the blue sky. Hey! There are many styles of kites: mandarin jackets, one-legged swallows, dragonflies, goldfish, butterflies and the Monkey King ... all show their magical powers in the air, which makes people dizzying.
Look how beautiful this flying "red butterfly" is. It seems to say proudly, "I am the king of butterflies, and my beauty is unparalleled." Look at the Monkey King's "the Monkey King", with a golden hoop in his hand and golden light in his eyes.
Among them, Wang Weimin's The Yellow Jacket is the highest. He is calm and calm, sometimes slowly retreating, and sometimes pulling back hard.
Kite seems to understand the owner's mood to participate in the competition, and the more he flies, the more excited he is. Segment 2: One afternoon, under the grape trellis on campus, some students were watching the ball game.
The students who participated in the competition stood next to two small partners: one was ready to count and the other was ready to time. At this time, I saw the referee teacher holding up a small red flag and shouting, "Go!" " I saw the students reaching out and patting the ball up and down quickly, only to hear the ball "snapping" on the ground.
"come on Come on! " The onlookers cheered. This game is very tense.
Some put the racket high, some put it low, and some accidentally put it at someone else's feet, which caused a burst of laughter among the friends. Xiao Fang squatted down and patted the racket, which was very short.
"One, two, three, four ..." When the cashier shouted, she was absorbed, her eyes were fixed on the bouncing ball, and sweat was oozing from her head. Suddenly, she slipped and sat down on the ground, and the ball jumped high.
Just as her classmates were sweating for her, she suddenly stood up again and continued to clap the ball with her hands. "7 1, 72, 73 ..." The voice of the tellers became louder and louder, and the onlookers cheered and laughed from time to time.
Then the referee shouted, "Stop!" At the end of a wonderful game, the teacher announced: "Xiao Fang took a lot of photos and won the first prize!" " "Friends ran to her and congratulated her. The first paragraph depicts the lively scene of the kite-flying competition.
First, make a general description of colorful kites, such as: "Hey! There are too many styles of kites.
3. Write a scene description composition at the beginning of the scene (composition guidance) open sesame-Meet you happy composition At school, in the classroom, in the street, in the market ... There are often many interesting scenes, such as the Dragon in the sports field, the neon flashing in the street at night, the laughter on the playground, and the bargaining in the market ... Choose a scene that you are most familiar with and write it down.
Pay attention to the combination of point and surface to reflect the characteristics of this scene. Golden Finger-Give you the trick of "turning the stone into gold" ● Fengtou-Write the opening 1 Directly explain the time, place and people of the live event.
A. Today, our composition training class held a special wrench competition. Everyone is eager to try.
B, Thursday's 10-minute team will become an ocean of joy. We played an interesting game-passing packages.
C, Thursday, sunny. Teacher Wang took us to the new playground for a special relay race.
In today's composition class, we played an interesting game-sticky nose. 2. Describe a close-up.
A, you see, they just hold each other's hands tightly and pull hard to their side, deadlocked. Some of the audience on our field waved and shouted for refueling, some stamped their feet in a hurry, and some looked at their trembling hands and shouted, "Come on, come on!" " To tell you the truth, we are having a wrench competition! Hey, come and see the students in our composition class! Both boys and girls are sweating profusely.
Oh, so they are comparing wrenches. C. The students held their breath, sweated palms, and looked at the deadlocked players with rapt attention.
The air seems to be solidified, and it seems to be constantly expanding and expanding. As long as there is a little spark, it will explode ... our relay race is in full swing, very intense and tense ... D, "Let me do it, let me do it!" Several students shouted. It turns out that my classmates are playing the game of "nose to nose".
The game is played like this. The teacher drew a big-headed doll with hair, eyes, ears and a big mouth. The fly in the ointment is that it has no nose. This nose needs us to stick it on.
E, "Ha ha ha ....." The classroom has been shrouded in this laughter, and every member is surrounded by joy-the teacher is teaching us to play the game of "sticky nose". 3. Start with cheers and laughter.
A word, "Come on, come on ..." A burst of shouts came from our classroom. We are having a wrench competition. Come and have a look! B, "Ha ha ha ..." There was a burst of laughter from time to time in our classroom.
What's going on here? We are playing the game of sticky nose! C, "Come on, come on." I heard a crisp and loud refueling sound. This is the fourth grade relay race of our sports meeting. It's really wonderful! Aren't you going to see it? Never regret. 4. Let's talk about the students' reaction to the news of wrench strength. A. In the composition class on Thursday afternoon, Mr. Yang announced that the whole class would carry out "pull strength" activities.
As soon as Mr. Yang's voice fell, some students jumped up happily, and some students began to prepare. When the class began, the teacher smiled and walked into the classroom and said, "classmate, today we are going to play the game of passing parcels."
The students were overjoyed. Today, in the composition class, Mr. Huang said that he would introduce a game called "Sticking Nose".
Everyone talked noisily: strange! We have noses. How do we post them? Everyone looked at Miss Huang with curious eyes. 5. Write down your feelings at that time.
A, the students looked forward to it and finally came to the autumn sports meeting of our school. The sports ground is full of fierce competition, especially the relay race.
B, the last event of the sports meeting-the head-on relay horse race has started. I am excited and excited, because I am also a member of this project ● Pork belly-write key paragraphs. First, let's watch two clips together: clip one: the kite competition has started, and colorful kites are scrambling to fly into the blue sky. Hey! There are many styles of kites: mandarin jackets, one-legged swallows, dragonflies, goldfish, butterflies and the Monkey King ... all show their magical powers in the air, which makes people dizzying.
Look how beautiful this flying "red butterfly" is. It seems to say proudly, "I am the king of butterflies, and my beauty is unparalleled." Look at the Monkey King's "the Monkey King", with a golden hoop in his hand and golden light in his eyes.
Among them, Wang Weimin's The Yellow Jacket is the highest. He is calm and calm, sometimes slowly retreating, and sometimes pulling back hard.
Kite seems to understand the owner's mood to participate in the competition, and the more he flies, the more excited he is. Segment 2: One afternoon, under the grape trellis on campus, some students were watching the ball game.
The students who participated in the competition stood next to two small partners: one was ready to count and the other was ready to time. At this time, I saw the referee teacher holding up a small red flag and shouting, "Go!" " I saw the students reaching out and patting the ball up and down quickly, only to hear the ball "snapping" on the ground.
"come on Come on! " The onlookers cheered. This game is very tense.
Some put the racket high, some put it low, and some accidentally put it at someone else's feet, which caused a burst of laughter among the friends. Xiao Fang squatted down and patted the racket, which was very short.
"One, two, three, four ..." When the cashier shouted, she was absorbed, her eyes were fixed on the bouncing ball, and sweat was oozing from her head. Suddenly, she slipped and sat down on the ground, and the ball jumped high.
Just as her classmates were sweating for her, she suddenly stood up again and continued to clap the ball with her hands. "7 1, 72, 73 ..." The voice of the tellers became louder and louder, and the onlookers cheered and laughed from time to time.
Then the referee shouted, "Stop!" At the end of a wonderful game, the teacher announced: "Xiao Fang took a lot of photos and won the first prize!" " "Friends ran to her and congratulated her. The first paragraph depicts the lively scene of the kite-flying competition.
First, make a general description of colorful kites, such as: "Hey! There are too many styles of kites.
Spring Festival is a traditional festival of our Chinese nation. At this time, every family will get together for a reunion dinner. Migrant workers are busy packing their bags, ready to go home, holding a year's salary, and their hearts are warm; We children who have achieved good results are in high spirits, waiting for their parents' praise ... Streets and alleys, community supermarkets, everywhere is a scene of jubilation and excitement.
Today is New Year's Eve. In the early morning, the golden sun shines all over the earth. My mother and I went shopping happily, and the street seemed to change overnight. The streets are full of lanterns and colorful decorations, which are very lively. Every household posted "Daofu", couplets and red lanterns. People dressed in festive costumes, with smiles on their faces, went to various markets, some shopping, some watching, and there was a happy and detailed scene.
At 8 pm, the Spring Festival Gala begins. Our family sat in front of the TV to watch the Spring Festival Gala. The program of the party is wonderful: beautiful and moving songs, humorous sketches and funny cross talk. All kinds of programs dazzle me.
"Dangdang Dangdang ..." As the New Year bell rings, fireworks will ring together. My father and I took out the fireworks we had already prepared and lit the fireworks tube. We only heard a loud noise. A fireworks bomb rose into the air and exploded in an instant. The exploding fireworks look like a beautiful lotus with petals flying in the air. At this time, fireworks are ejected from the fireworks tube, flashing in the sky like countless bright and dazzling meteors ... There are other fireworks in the sky, some of them. Loud firecrackers, brilliant fireworks, flying in the sky, all kinds of colors, embellishing the sky into a flower, the night sky suddenly became dazzling. At this time, the scene was surrounded by the melody of laughter, firecrackers, shouts and music. It's really lively.
5. The beauty of nature is described in the composition.
Nature is beautiful, and the world is beautiful.
Maybe you hate rainy and humid weather. But it's different when you look at them with your heart.
When it rains outside the window, the room is quiet. At this time, you just need to calm down. Sit on a cane chair, with spiritual food on your legs, and take a sip of steaming scented tea. The refreshing air outside the scented tea window blends into one, slowly and slowly sneaking into your heart. Soft violin music holds your hand and takes you into a beautiful dream. When you wake up, you can. Cooking smoke rises from the low house in the small village, and the lights are lit up, which is hazy in the drizzle. Smoke, lights and rain in Mao Mao make trees and grass grow. Does everything in nature make you friends with them? I think this is what Mr. Zhu Ziqing felt when he wrote Spring Rain!
Of course, it can't rain every day. There are sunny days in Wan Li.
Clear sky in summer is a kind of pride, and the sky is the most beautiful in four seasons. However, you must be worried about the hot summer sun, but as long as you make friends with them with your heart.
6. Point-to-point description of the composition view of the closing ceremony of the Beijing Olympic Games-1 0, 9, 8, 7, 6, 5, 4, 3, 2,1,0! As the number of fireworks counted down to the last second, beautiful welcome fireworks bloomed like flowers over the Bird's Nest. In the shocking sound, 200 drum performers lined up in a circle on the steps of the central ceremony stage, dancing in the sky and beating gongs and drums.
Under the call of drums, 1 148 bell ringers gathered around the central ceremony stage to greet the ancient days with warm songs. The grand Beijing Olympic Games is coming to an end! With the end of the athletes' entrance ceremony and the handover ceremony of the Olympic flag, an athlete who is about to embark on his way home in the center of the stadium stepped onto the gangway. Looking back affectionately, he slowly took out a beautiful scroll from his backpack and slowly opened it.
At the same time, the touching moments of athletes struggling to realize their dreams are slowly spread out on the display screen above the Bird's Nest. With hard work, sweat and infinite love for the Olympic Games, the athletes left unforgettable Olympic memories for the Beijing 2008 Olympic Games.
With too much nostalgia and reluctance, the athletes slowly rolled up their scrolls. The flame of the Beijing Olympic Games is also slowly extinguished.
Then, wonderful programs such as "Eight Minutes in London" and "Big Carnival" came into people's eyes one after another, which really made people feast their eyes. I think, although the flame of the Beijing Olympic Games has been extinguished, the Olympic fever in our hearts continues. The Olympic Games held at home this time brought not only wonderful Olympic games, but also the inherent sports enthusiasm and fighting spirit of the Olympic Games.
But you don't have to say goodbye to Beijing, because we will meet again in London! Exciting moment June 1 is an exciting moment. It is not only a long-awaited Children's Day, but also a day for Yichang to pass the torch.
People stood early in the place where they could see the grand occasion of the torch relay and could not wait for the arrival of the torch. I am no exception. Early in the morning, my grandparents and I came to Zhenjiang attic to watch the torch relay.
1 A quarter of an hour has passed, and half an hour has passed ... The police car has passed, but the flame still hasn't arrived. Impatient spectators often regard the police car and traffic police patrolling in front as torchbearers, waving their flags and shouting: "Come on, Beijing! Olympics, come on! Yichang, come on! China, come on ... "Just know it's a few police cars, and they all burst out laughing. With the commotion of the crowd, the flame finally came! Olympic floats and torch-guided vehicles are coming slowly.
After the motorcade passed by, we finally met the torchbearer. He is full of vigor and vitality, holding the torch high in his right hand and waving to the audience in his left hand. The crowd suddenly boiled and colorful flags flew all over the sky. "Come on, Beijing! Olympics, come on! Yichang, come on! China, come on ... "The voice echoed throughout Yichang.
The old man's face glowed with youthful brilliance, and the children burst into bright smiles. The peace, friendship, light and hope symbolized by the Xiangyun torch will remain in our hearts forever.
Exciting moment-comments on the opening ceremony of Beijing Olympic Games "10, 9, 8, 7, 6, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1!" With the rhythmic beating of the rectangular array, the beautiful welcome fireworks circled the field and bloomed over the Bird's Nest like flowers. In the shocking sound, 29 huge footprints made of fireworks are coming straight to the National Stadium. The long-awaited Beijing Olympic Games has been grandly opened! At the beginning of a short film, a huge 70-meter-long scroll slowly unfolded in front of us.
On this picture scroll, pen and ink are full of aesthetic feeling, which in turn shows the representative cultural symbols such as evolution, ceramics, bronzes and so on in the process of the origin and development of China culture. At this time, a group of dancers dressed in black came to the front of the scroll and used their limbs as ink, showing the free and easy of China's ink painting. With the dancer's movements, undulating ink lines appeared on the white drawing paper.
The paper that does not exist on the ground is lifted by the air, and a staggered ink painting appears in front of us. Subsequently, wonderful programs such as writing, opera, Silk Road and athletes' entrance ceremony came into people's eyes one after another.
Then, by Liu Huan and Sarah? Bleiman's Olympic theme song "You and Me" flutters slowly in the Bird's Nest. The exciting moment has finally arrived. The last torchbearer, Prince of gymnastics Li Ning, held the Xiangyun torch high and flew to the main torch. The flame is lit, * * * is lit, China is lit, and the world is lit.
Come on! Let's cheer for the Olympics and China! Happy Children's Day. I look forward to it. Happy Children's Day has finally arrived. In order to celebrate the arrival of Children's Day on June 1, the school specially held a "June 1 Celebration" with rich forms and wonderful contents in the school playground.
At nine o'clock in the morning, the grand celebration finally officially began. The first item is to raise the national flag. With the majestic music, rows of neat steps suddenly "bang!" On the playground. The crisp voice is very pleasing to the ear. The flag bearer tied the national flag to the flagpole and waved his arm vigorously. The warm spring breeze blew slowly, and the bright five-star red flag immediately fluttered in the air.
Then, the campus group dance competition began. I saw that with the beautiful music playing, the whole playground suddenly entered a sea of flowers, colorful, and students of all classes danced one by one.
Even the audience sitting next to you can't help but give a thumbs up. Then, there is a "parent-child race".
It is not easy to win this competition, because every student and his parents' feet are tied together, which requires the joint efforts of students and their parents and the same pace. You see, some students ran too fast, made mistakes and fell down; Some students fall behind because they run too slowly.
Finally, several students and parents finally defeated the enemy with the cooperation of Qi Xin, and finally won. Finally, the teachers and students of the whole school sang the earthquake relief song "Let the world be full of love". With the teacher's command, "Hold your face gently and dry your tears …" immediately reached my ears, which was deafening.
Although I don't know whether the children in the disaster area can have a happy Children's Day like us, I know that with the love of our/kloc-0.3 billion people, the people in the disaster area will be able to rebuild their beautiful homes.
7. Landscape composition combining point and surface 1. Beauty of nature
Nature is beautiful, and the world is beautiful.
Maybe you will hate rainy and humid weather. But looking at them with your heart is different.
It's raining outside the window and the room is quiet. At this time, you just need to calm down. Sitting on a cane chair, with spiritual food on your legs, drinking steaming scented tea, the fragrance of scented tea and the freshness of the air outside the window blend into one, and slowly and slowly sneak into your heart. Soft violin music holds your hand and takes you into a beautiful dream. When you wake up, you can put on your coat, put on your umbrella and go for a walk outside. You see, the low houses in the small village are smoking, with lights on and hazy in the drizzle. Smoke, lights and drizzle, trees and grass. Did everything in nature make you friends with them? I think this is what Mr. Zhu Ziqing felt when he wrote Spring Rain!
Of course, it can't rain every day. The sky is clear in Wan Li.
Clear sky is the pride of summer, and the sky in all seasons belongs to it. But you must be worried about the scorching sun in summer. However, as long as you make friends with them.
There are no impurities in the blue sky in summer, only lovely white clouds are dotted. Cicada sings the beauty of summer in the shade.
You can sit quietly by the stream, the tall and lush trees stretch out their arms to shield you from the sun, and the green grass weaves a fluffy and soft blanket for you, as early as spring. Lying on the blanket, you look up at the blue sky, and the stream plays Adeline by the water rhythmically for you. When you are completely intoxicated in the beautiful world, a breeze caresses your face, raises your long hair and lets it go. At this moment, does the song of freedom ring in my ear? Do you feel that you are a member of this blue sky, dancing with the cloud babies in a cheerful and beautiful group dance? The sun has set. Let's get on our bikes and go home. In the distance, mother sunset is waving to you with a sweet smile in the colorful, beautiful and elegant sunset!
Autumn.
The difference between early autumn and late autumn is that one is close to warm spring, and the other is accustomed to walking with winter.
Of the two, I prefer the latter. Late autumn is a barren meaning, but it contains another meaning.
Late autumn is a bleak season everywhere, with bleak leaves and pedestrians in a hurry, surrounded by noisy silence, which is addictive.
In late autumn, there is no helplessness and desolation in winter, and there is no deep cold in winter. What it brings is only a maverick style, changeable, which can be gloomy or bright and warm. Those tender and delicate little things seem willing to fall into the autumn cup, and then flow in every autumn day, silently, but lingering.
It is another autumn, and in every autumn day, I always find a unique feeling in my heart.
The high spirits of spring, the restlessness of summer and the quietness of winter all seem to converge in the blood of autumn. The books I read occasionally are mostly pictures of late autumn, and the world is yellow. Those dull paleness are surrounded by dazzling yellow, and they feel a kind of peace emanating from the bottom of my heart, just like the one they found at the beginning.
Those beautiful romances are like free autumn. Gentle and independent autumn wind kept blowing long black hair, and eyes kept scanning the surrounding scenery. Elegant voices on the leaves are the best accompaniment. Two hearts without impurities meet in a gorgeous moment, writing different stories, either happy or sad.
Autumn is a lonely season, which makes people suddenly feel that the world is an opposite square. When they go far away, they can't see the steps ahead. This season can only be described as quiet. All kinds of feelings are constantly intertwined, becoming silent or more difficult than before, and the most beautiful ones are silently hidden in the bottom of my heart.
Autumn belongs to the scenery of the past. I always feel so insignificant when I pass by. Only when I am far away, will I understand that this is the real beauty, and the real beauty will be appreciated after I lose it.
Those wrapped autumn days, once upon a time, with the temperature of a cup of coffee, were calm and warm, and also with an unexplained mellow, carefully slipped down my throat and swept into my heart. The ever-changing temperature of the heart becomes stable in this autumn season. It is always warm, just like someone's palm in memory.
Autumn, like a yellowed white shirt, has penetrated into the bottom of my heart. Although it is not eye-catching, it has a familiar fragrance.
Autumn. It is a tree beside the railway track, which has experienced a lot of wind and frost and contains a lot of beauty.
Autumn seems to be the most suitable word for quiet and far-reaching, quiet and silent, and many monologues are constantly communicated with the feeling of mutual affinity.
Accustomed to looking for that indifferent fragrance in the autumn air, smelling it deeply, let it stay in front of the gasp and become eternal.
In autumn, there is no burden in silence, but it floats gently and leaves silently. Only lingering memories are left.
Autumn is a cruel color, only black and white; Autumn is a colorful candy, leaving only greasy bitterness.
Appreciate the world with your heart. God created them with his heart, how can he be worthy of his old man's kindness?
8. The 600-word scene description composition combining dots and faces is very quiet late at night.
"DuDu, DuDu, DuDu." Three crisp whistles pierced the silence of the whole valley and woke me up from my dream. It's three! Emergency assembly! I'll pull the light rope. "Don't turn on the light!" I don't know where it came from Lights are not allowed to be turned on during emergency assembly.
At this moment, the barracks where we live can be "bombed". "Hey, where are my clothes?" "flashlight, take a picture!" "What time is it now? I haven't slept well! " "Don't bother, just three minutes!" ...... "Hey, come back, you are wearing my shoes!" "Hua!" "Is the bed broken?" "What are you shouting? I knocked over the washbasin! " ……
At this moment, I can't describe it too much with ants on hot bricks. I managed to piece together all my clothes at random, but I couldn't hit my backpack. My forehead is sweating. I broke it, I broke it, and I tossed it for two or three times, but I couldn't get it right. I panicked, and even my fingers were entangled. Finally, I simply gritted my teeth, "tied" the quilt and walked on my shoulder.
In the description of scenes, there must be more characters than one, with the description of characters as the mainstay and the scenes as the supplement. Scene description should serve the performance of the characters and highlight the center. Scene description can not be separated from scenery, psychological activities and language of characters.