Approaching "psoriasis"

The heavy snow fluttered in the sky, and the whole world suddenly became silent. Those snow-white flowers fell on the road, on the roof, and on the cars parked by the side of the road. Everything, soon immersed in a world of snow.

I don't know where a wind blows, saying that it is to maintain the city appearance, ensure the city's sanitation, and clean up the advertisements posted in the streets. It's not dawn yet, and the snow is still floating. A cleaner is cleaning the wall. He is about forty or fifty years old, wearing a military coat and sleeves, but he can't cover the patches on his cuffs, and his skin looks darker against the snow. He tore at the advertising paper clinging to the wall, and his hands were red with cold, like flames, as if to melt the snow. The trouble is that these papers seem to have taken root on the wall, and he has to scrub the wall with cold water again and again. It's almost dawn, and the wall has been cleaned, leaving only the last one. The cleaner raised his right hand and was about to tear it off, but his hand suddenly froze in mid-air, as if frozen. Finally, he shook his head, packed his tools and walked away.

Grandpa who took part in morning exercises came here on time. He was amazed by the scenery along the way, not because of the heavy snow-snow is nothing in this northern city, but because the work efficiency of this city is amazing. Overnight, "psoriasis" was much less. He stopped in front of the wall that the cleaner had just cleaned. He was attracted by the "psoriasis" left behind: which careless cleaner forgot to tear it? While watching, he stretched out his hand to tear the last piece of advertising paper, but just tore off a corner and stopped. He also shook his head and left.

It was already dawn, and a girl who looked like a primary school student skipped to school, humming a nursery rhyme that she had just learned from the teacher. She was also attracted by the advertising paper. She stopped to look at it carefully for a while, then opened her bag, took out the tape, glued the corner that had just been torn back, and then hummed children's songs happily and ran to school.

The snow doesn't seem to want to stop, and the bright white is particularly quiet and dazzling in the morning light. A beam of morning light shone on the paper, and four striking characters were written on the paper: "Mother-seeking notice"

Review opinion

This article has three beauties: First, the plot is beautiful. In the rectification activities of caring for the environment, people of three different ages have the same attitude towards a piece of "psoriasis", which can not help but confuse people; The author raised questions layer by layer, and finally took out the reasons, and the emotions suddenly exploded like a blowout. The second is the beauty of language. The description of the scenery at the beginning and the end, as well as the detailed description of the three characters concerned about psoriasis, all show the author's extraordinary writing skills; Like the cleaner's "shaking his head", the old man's "tearing" and "stopping" and the little girl's "sticking", the mental outlook of the characters is vividly on the paper. The third is emotional beauty. The three characters pay attention to this small piece of paper because they pay attention to urban sanitation, which is a kind of public morality beauty; The three characters stopped acting because of the contents of this note, which is a kind of beauty of caring for others. Of course, the son's act of looking for his mother behind the note is a family beauty worth promoting.

From Honesty in 200 1 to Choice of the Mind in 2002, from Relationship between Emotion and Cognition in 2003 to Suffering Frustration and Enlarging Pain in 2004, and then to Tolerance and Pride and Ordinary in 2005, we found that although the topic is changing every year, in order to attract readers, Mr. Ba Jin once said: "A nation should move from backwardness to modernity, and complete the broad-minded and spiritual leap." The development of science has provided mankind with rich material wealth, but if we do not pay attention to the construction of spiritual civilization, the richer the material, the more empty the human mind will be. The topic "Sticking to the Spiritual Home" emphasizes the importance of spiritual life to individuals and society, and it is necessary to show the praise and pursuit of a better spiritual life through the lines. The second is to closely follow the theme to find typical materials. Whether discussing the relationship between matter and spirit or expounding the importance of keeping spiritual home, there must be concrete examples and real feelings, and we can't generalize. There must be a clear point of view and enough typical examples. Looking back at history, people with lofty spirit are respected by the world, so we remember Qu Yuan, Tao Yuanming, Wen Tianxiang and Zhu Ziqing. People with low personality are spurned by the world, so we lambasted Qin Gui, Yan Song, Cixi and Wang Jingwei.