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Classic composition evaluation daquan
Composition evaluation is not only the summary of students' composition achievement, but also the summary of teachers' composition teaching effect, and it is the link and intermediary between teachers and students. Therefore, teachers must pay attention to and write composition evaluation. Whether the composition evaluation is appropriate and accurate plays a vital role in improving students' writing level. I have summarized several kinds of comments below, hoping to help you!

Start an analysis class

Process analysis course

End analysis class

comprehensive assessment

Start an analysis class

Briefly describe the cause and effect and pave the way.

The beginning is touching and has real feelings.

Make full use of language, action and psychological description to make things concrete and visual.

Go straight to the point at the beginning, which makes people clear at a glance.

The article is novel at the beginning, which has the effect of pulling one hair and moving the whole body. Let readers have the impression of … as soon as they meet.

The beginning is extraordinary and attracts readers.

Nature connects the preceding with the following, and the detailed description highlights the quality of the characters and is touching.

Getting to the point at the beginning is also a way of writing.

Briefly explain the time, place, result …

Briefly introduce the situation and naturally transition to the next paragraph.

The beginning was very lively. The use of personification makes the beginning lively.

The combination of point and surface makes the article vivid, concrete and meticulous.

At the beginning, the text is very attractive.

The beginning of the article is fascinating and attracts readers. The combination of point and surface makes the article vivid, concrete and meticulous.

The beginning of the article is very clear, which plays a leading role in the full text.

The novel selection of materials in this article aroused readers' desire to read.

The beginning of the article is simple and appropriate, and it is very artistic to set off the emotions of the characters through environmental description.

More creative from the start. Explains the cause and effect.

The rhetorical question began to attract readers.

At the beginning, I used a scene metaphor, which is quite innovative; Flashback the beginning and render the artistic conception.

The opening is concise, concise and orderly; Pay attention to description ... leave a deep impression.

Situation description causes suspense;

The article is novel at the beginning, which has the effect of pulling one hair and moving the whole body. Let readers have the impression of … as soon as they meet.

Process analysis course

Describe passionately ...

Focused, detailed and appropriate, specific content.

The metaphor is apt and the words are vivid.

The language of the article is easy to understand, close to the reality of life and friendly to read.

..... He told us in a relaxed and happy tone that it was unforgettable.

The narrative is natural and vivid, with compact structure, natural and coherent connection and prominent center.

For the description of the scenery, the language is concise and accurate, while the association is touching the scene, and the scene naturally blends into one.

By enriching the characters' language and actions, the characters' ideological quality is set off.

Through vivid language description, readers seem to be in a dream.

Make full use of the combination of static and dynamic writing, supplemented by metaphor, personification and other techniques.

The little author observes carefully and narrates orderly.

The use of some subtle words invisibly adds a lot of interest to the article.

The article is elegant, fluent and clear-cut, especially the characters' language is humorous.

Through vivid language description, readers seem to be in a dream.

The article has clear clues, prominent themes, and focuses on ….

The details are quite ingenious.

A major feature of this paper is the meticulous description of the characters' language, demeanor and movements.

Delicate description, strong flavor of life, accurate wording and sentences.

The language is accurate, vivid and vivid, and the content is extremely rich and specific.

The examples are vivid and concrete, and the words and deeds of the characters conform to their respective identity characteristics.

The article comes from life, so the language is not so beautiful, but it is true and interesting. Emotional articles will be written in … detail.

The language is lively and interesting.

Use spoken English in daily life to make the article more natural and friendly.

The content is close to modern life, novel and unique, grasping the pulse of the times and showing the flavor of the times.

Emotions are true and natural, and there is no suspicion of affectation. Show your true feelings with a plain heart.

The description of the scenery is vivid and lifelike, the words and sentences are appropriate, the scenery and feelings are in harmony, and the scene is like a vivid sketch painting presented to the readers.

Psychological depiction is not vivid and concrete enough to effectively express the characters' thoughts, attitudes and likes and dislikes. Rationality: emphasize the author's point of view from different angles and aspects repeatedly, and the reasoning is thorough and clear.

The description of the event process is detailed and concrete, and although there are many contents, it seems to be orderly, which reflects the author's clear thinking and planning ability for the layout of the article.

End analysis class

The ending is the crowning touch, the center is just right, the language is concise and profound, and it is thought-provoking.

It starts with the feeling switch and ends with feeling. In this way, the article is coordinated from beginning to end, and the theme of the article is repeated, which is very infectious.

The praise of the characters at the end is sincere and touching.

The implicit ending of the article is both topical and intriguing.

The ending focuses on expressing emotions, giving consideration to the beginning and summarizing the full text. Coherent from beginning to end, in one go.

The vivid depiction of details reveals the inner world of the characters, which is success.

The article ends with …, which is concise and full of charm.

At the end of the article, it is revealed that the central sentence is really a clear stroke, and the summary is short and powerful.

The ending is full of expectation and enthusiasm, and the words are still unfinished.

The poetic language at the beginning and end of the article is full of imagination and rhythmic beauty, which makes people want to read, love to read and reluctant to let go.

Although it is a trivial matter, it is vividly described by the author, and an indispensable ending highlights the theme of the article.

Although the story is ordinary, it is sincere, rich and touching.

The end of the article is unconventional, giving people the feeling of wanting to rest.

The ending is clear and meaningful.

The topic at the end sublimated the theme of the article.

The ending is clear and meaningful.

The ending is just right, the center is clear, the language is concise and profound, and it is intriguing.

The end of the article is unconventional, giving people the feeling of wanting to rest.

At the end of the article, it is revealed that the central sentence is really a clear stroke, and the summary is short and powerful.

It starts with the feeling switch and ends with feeling. In this way, the article is coordinated from beginning to end, and the theme of the article is repeated, which is very infectious.

The praise of the characters at the end is sincere and touching.

The article ends with …, which is concise and full of charm.

The poetic language at the beginning and end of the article is full of imagination and rhythmic beauty, which makes people want to read, love to read and reluctant to let go.

The ending focuses on expressing emotions, giving consideration to the beginning and summarizing the full text. Coherent from beginning to end, in one go.

The ending is full of expectation and enthusiasm, and the words are still unfinished.

Summary evaluation class

The article is miscellaneous but not chaotic, but it can be detailed and focused.

This article fully and appropriately renders the atmosphere of … and gives a detailed and vivid description of the key points of the article.

... practical, containing simple and profound philosophy, exciting and moving to read.

This article is full of passion. Between the lines, we can understand the little author's love for …. The full text has distinct levels and fluent sentences.

The case narrative is vivid, concrete and interesting, which is in the same strain as the previous metaphor. Finally, the author expressed his feelings for … in a few words, which is touching.

The article is well organized and forms a complete image.

The language of the article is fresh and lively, the description can grasp the main characteristics of things, and the length is short and pithy, which is worth reading.

The content of this paper is vivid and rich, the language is novel and refreshing, and the structure is unique and reasonable.

The article is meticulous, orderly, vivid and concrete, which can be called a masterpiece.

The close-up is interesting. The full text is full of childlike innocence and interest, and it is very kind to read.

This article can read fresh and interesting language and descriptions … between the lines, it is full of childlike interest in childhood, and laughter is endless, which is a masterpiece.

Proper details and the combination of reality and fiction are the two characteristics of this article, and the content of … is richer and more vivid.

The full text is fresh and elegant, kind and euphemistic, simple and unconventional, which is worth learning.

The full-text language is vivid and accurate, and the plot is wonderful and tortuous, which seems to bring readers into a happy paradise and make people smile.

The full text is easy to understand and interesting.

The full text is clear, vivid and compact, and interesting.

Paying attention to observing specific things and developing appropriate imagination is the success of this article.

The article melts feelings into the scenery, expresses feelings while painting the scenery, and is good at using metaphors to make the article vivid and concrete.

The article is novel in content, reasonable in structure, fluent and coherent, and naturally accessible.

This paper is based on real life, with appropriate materials, very innovative, clear paragraphs, natural transition, full of interest and strong readability.

The full text is fluent in language and free and easy in writing, which can be called a relatively successful work.

Although the language of this article is not gorgeous, it is extremely accurate and vivid, with rich and true emotions, and it is interesting to read.

The structure of the article is concise and reasonable, and the author's understanding of the original text is also very profound and thorough. The full-text language is forceful, hit the floor, exciting and exciting.