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Academic Summary of Doctoral Dissertation 1 xxx Dissertation "Analysis and Research on Data Model of Undergraduate Specialty Setting Prediction System Based on Data Mining" is selected from the undergraduate specialty setting prediction system project entrusted by the Ministry of Education of Sun Yat-sen University. The research results of this paper have certain guiding significance for the construction of undergraduate specialty setting prediction system in colleges and universities.
This paper mainly studies the data model of undergraduate specialty setting prediction system in colleges and universities. Firstly, this paper summarizes the existing data models of specialty setting, and analyzes their shortcomings in functionality, predictability, analysis and mining. Then, combined with the actual demand of undergraduate specialty setting in colleges and universities, data mining technology, data warehouse and OLAP are introduced to construct the data model of undergraduate specialty setting prediction system based on data mining. Generally speaking, the framework of the paper is clear, the logic is rigorous, and the writing reflects my own academic thinking and speculative conclusions, and I have my own unique opinions.
The writing of the thesis conforms to the standard of postgraduate thesis, and the academic level is good, which reflects the results of two years' study and can enter the defense procedure.
The paper is good at thinking and synthesizing, but it lacks consideration of actual needs and situations, such as users' demand for professional settings and the collectability and availability of data in data mining. It is suggested that a broader perspective should be adopted in related research in the future.
The second part of the academic review of doctoral dissertations is a novel topic, which is closely combined with clinical practice and reasonably designed. It belongs to the research hotspot of this discipline and the research work has certain theoretical significance and practical value. The content of the paper is basically consistent with the topic, with complete structure, standardized format, clear hierarchy, clear organization, fluent language and rich content. The collected literature is rich and detailed, basically covering the main literature related to this discipline, which has a certain inductive effect on the development trend of this discipline. Sufficient data, rigorous discussion process, clear thinking, comprehensive application of learned knowledge to solve problems, proper selection of analysis methods, and credible results. The paper is carefully written, the reasoning is logical, and the conclusions and suggestions are of practical significance. It is a master's thesis with high academic value.
This paper embodies the author's solid theoretical foundation, systematic professional knowledge and good scientific research ability in this subject. It meets the requirements of master's degree thesis, and it is suggested to arrange a defense.
Academic Summary of Doctoral Thesis The Master's Thesis "An Empirical Study on the Influence of Consumers' Online Shopping Website Experience on Online Shopping Intention" by three xxx students. Based on the research of related literature and the dynamic analysis of current events, it is of theoretical value and practical significance to study the elements of website experience and the influence of website experience on consumers' online shopping intention.
It is found that seven aspects of website experience, namely usability experience, usefulness experience, visual experience, price experience, commodity experience, service experience and reputation experience, can well explain the connotation of website experience. Using SOR model, it is found that website experience has a significant positive impact on purchase intention, and emotion and perceived risk are some intermediary variables between website experience and purchase intention. The paper uses normative analysis and empirical analysis to prove its own point of view, and the research method is more scientific. The innovations of this paper are as follows: firstly, a new model of website experience research is constructed; Secondly, using the empirical analysis method systematically, this paper analyzes the factors that affect the online purchase intention from multiple angles. This paper has considerable theoretical depth. The paper has clear viewpoints, clear and powerful arguments, sufficient and reliable arguments, accurate data, detailed information and rich and standardized literature review, among which there are some new views on the influence of website experience on purchase intention. The disadvantage is that the dimension of website experience is not comprehensive enough, especially the technical factors of the website. In the future, we can consider studying the interpretation of website experience by website technical factors such as network speed.
The structure of the paper is rigorous, with distinct levels, progressive analysis structure, smooth logic, clear organization and prominent focus. The format of this article conforms to academic norms. It shows that the author has strong independent scientific research ability. The paper shows that the author has mastered the basic theory and analysis method of enterprise management specialty, and the paper has reached the level of master's degree thesis. He agrees to participate in the thesis defense and suggests that a master's degree be awarded.
The fourth part of the academic review of doctoral dissertation studies the official accountability system, which can provide reference for solving the problems existing in the official accountability system in China. In the structure of the full text, firstly, the practical significance of the official accountability system is analyzed, then the dilemma of the official accountability system in China is deeply analyzed, and finally effective suggestions are put forward to solve the dilemma. The full text reflects the requirements of professional characteristics, meets the training requirements of administrative management specialty, and the references meet the needs of the paper's viewpoints and themes, and the practical demonstration is not enough. But there is not much real innovation. Generally speaking, it meets the requirements of graduation thesis.
Academic review of doctoral thesis. The idea of the paper is clear, the sentences are basically fluent, the levels are clear, and the opinions are expressed accurately. The author organically combines the basic knowledge of administrative management with the practical problems of inner-party supervision, and puts forward some better solutions to the practical problems of inner-party supervision. The literature consulted is closely combined with the theme, but the arguments in some places are not very clear and convincing, which generally meets the requirements of graduation thesis, some contents are not well combined with the theme, and there are also some minor problems in logical structure. Generally speaking, it basically meets the basic requirements of graduation thesis.
The sixth full text of the academic summary of doctoral thesis is xxx, with novel and practical topics. The full text has scientific and reasonable structure, strong logic and clear thinking, and the references consulted meet the requirements of the paper. The demonstration method is reasonable. The content of the argument is more convincing. The analysis of the problem is more thorough. In the process of demonstration, students can also combine the principles of administrative professional knowledge with social reality. Whether it is from the topic selection or viewpoint demonstration, it meets the requirements of the training objectives of administrative management specialty. But innovation is not enough.
Academic Review of Doctoral Thesis 7 This thesis has a novel topic and a unique perspective, which embodies a solid theoretical foundation of human resource management. In particular, the article can demonstrate and analyze the topic in combination with relevant cases, which has certain practical value. Through the review of the paper, we can see that the author spent a lot of time in collecting data and cases, and also put forward some profound views, but there are still shortcomings in the depth of theory and the citation of some arguments. Generally speaking, this is a qualified paper.
Academic comments on doctoral dissertations. The topic of this paper conforms to the professional training goal and can achieve the comprehensive training goal. The topic is difficult and the workload is heavy. This topic has high academic research reference value and great practical guiding significance. The student has a strong ability to consult documents and materials, and can comprehensively collect information about the examination system. In the process of writing, I can comprehensively apply the knowledge of the examination system and comprehensively analyze the problems existing in the examination system, and I have a strong ability to comprehensively apply knowledge. The length of the article fully conforms to the requirements of the college, with complete content, scientific hierarchical structure, prominent points, clear logical relationship and certain personal opinions. The topics are completely consistent, the arguments are prominent, and the discussion is closely related to the theme.
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