This is my absolute private domain-my bedroom. My bedroom is rectangular.
Open the door, opposite is a big window, from which the sun shines into my heaven, making my heaven full of warmth. The curtains are light blue, with lovely rainbow cats and naughty Lan Tu on them. At night, they quietly watched me fall asleep.
I filled the windowsill with building blocks, and I always realized my various "designs" there, including parks, playgrounds and military bases ... The walls on both sides of the window became bookcases, filled with my "treasures". There are Snow White, The Water Margin, The Journey to the West, The Storm of the Republic of China and Yi Zhongtian's Three Kingdoms ... I often hold these "treasures" to the bedside and read them slowly and savor them. This is definitely a kind of enjoyment, intoxication and happiness! Under the window is my bed. After learning every day, I jump into its warm arms and sleep sweetly.
Above the bed is a beautiful Mongolian mosquito net, which is a sharp weapon to prevent mosquitoes from kissing me. Next to the bed is my big desk. There is an eye protection lamp above the desk. There are some study reference books, reading machines, pencil sharpeners and pen containers on my desk ... they accompany me to learn and grow every day.
This is my bedroom. I like it. I like to study, play and rest in its arms. This is my paradise.
2. Who has a sixth-grade composition about the writer, 400 words? On New Year's Eve, spring is blooming, and it seems that there is such fine weather every day. Because everyone in the family is busy preparing for the New Year on this day.
In fact, very early on, the elders were rushing to buy fireworks. When they brought all kinds of fireworks back one by one, my eyes sparkled. I looked forward to the moment when they were lit-a meteor-like flash flew out of my hand, suddenly bloomed with the stars at the end of the night, and then dissipated gorgeously, shining like a flower-and I couldn't help but be extremely excited. Only by waiting until the night of the Spring Festival can we relieve our depressed expectations.
In my impression, the tradition of the Spring Festival is not as much and interesting as the tradition of drama before the Spring Festival. If nothing else, just paste the Spring Festival couplets, which is fresh enough and memorable enough.
My uncle brought paste and some newly bought Spring Festival couplets and horizontal batches. On the 30th, the old things must be removed. People in the countryside expect these to bring them good luck and blessings.
My cousin set up a ladder by the door. First, he tore off the faded and incomplete Spring Festival couplets with his bare hands. Then everyone was busy handing him tools: my brother handed him a sieve, my cousin held the paste for him to use at any time, and even my nephew, who was only five years old, helped him with the red Spring Festival couplets. Always so happy and harmonious.
After a busy morning, brand-new "bumper harvest" and "safe passage" appeared in an old house, but who doesn't know that it has a history of decades? Still waiting for the beginning of the year to bring back the lost years?
In some places in the east, with the arrival of the four seasons, thousands of kinds of interest-bearing and homes have been born. It also adds a color to the old life, that is, "red"
I want to tell my mother that the first paragraph goes straight to the point. I want to tell my mother this composition. Dear mother, I want to say to you, dear mother: hello! You have always been the greatest and kindest mother in your son's heart.
You always teach your son to be self-respecting and self-reliant. From you, my son saw what is beauty and what is diligence.
You told me: time is fair to everyone. It's like an hourglass. In a minute or two, it will slowly flow away. Whoever can run ahead will win the final victory. Numerous times of spring and summer alternation, countless times of dry-Kun cycle, many times of disappointment and excitement alternation, and many days and nights of hardships and hopes, my son once thought about giving up and being lazy. It was your earnest teachings that flowed through my heart, washed away my inertia and awakened my diligence.
Mom, you are a beautiful statue in your son's heart. Just like Venus, although you are not perfect, your neat and refreshing dress, gentle and kind heart and independent and strong personality will always be the most beautiful scenery.
When a colleague has something to do, you are always at the forefront, but when something happens or you are sick, you always support yourself and never disturb others. In your words, you would rather suffer than be happy. Your actions are your son's best first teacher and an interpretation of the truth, goodness and beauty of this world.
Mom, although you are just an ordinary woman, you don't have Tao Yuanming's mind to do everything, and you don't have Soong Ching Ling's all-encompassing and eloquent knowledge, but you are you, the most ordinary worker who serves the people. You warm your son's caring heart with endless love, and you create miracles with hardworking hands. Your time, your efforts are always spent on everyone who needs love and care, but you never complain, never shout tired, you smile at life and face setbacks, and you tell your son that mentality determines fate, and negative and pessimistic people are useless, because they can't afford the burden of life and the obligations entrusted by society; A positive and optimistic person will have a happy life, because he has the courage to go against the current, the ability to dare to meet challenges, the courage to break away from convention and carry out innovative thinking ... In short, mom, you let your son know what love is, what gratitude is and what courage is ... You make lonely people feel warm and happy. How great you are.
Mom, my son is going to junior high school soon. Facing the quiz, my son has enough confidence and courage to stick to it. Because you are your son's best spiritual pillar, you have set up a hard-working, self-motivated and brave life style for your son and taught him how to face the philosophy of life.
Because of you, my son is full of confidence in building a brilliant future. My son believes that through our joint efforts, our ideal will finally come true.
At the same time, the son will win your happy smile with a best result and draw a satisfactory end to the primary school era. Therefore, no matter how long the road is, my son is not afraid. Riding the wind and waves is my son's firm belief.
Step by step towards the ideal shore is the son's ultimate goal! Wish: good health, all the best, happy every day and always young.
4.400-word composition describing sound should come straight to the point. What happened one day when the north wind roared made me unforgettable. This unforgettable event came from a young grandmother.
It was a cold winter in the past few years. At that time, the snow as white as jade was flying all over the sky, and it was snowing, which was really biting.
I'm freezing, waiting for the pedestrian green light across the street. At the green light, I just want to walk over. A white-haired and scrawny old woman took my hand and walked to the other side of the road. I was at a loss and followed this old woman.
I don't understand: why did this old woman go and hold my hand? My face is full of questions. After taking me across the street, grandma patted me on the shoulder and laughed and said, "The car can hit me, don't hit you!" " "At this time, although I was cold, I felt the endless warmth around me.
I was dumbfounded when I watched the old woman leave. The old woman cares about me like a relative, and my eyes are full of heat at this time.
Until now, I still remember those warm hands; I can still feel that warm heart; That warm smile; Warm my grandma.
5. What excellent compositions do this? Many argumentative papers are often "discussed" because of "things" In the form of expression, articles always quote examples at the beginning and then discuss them. Articles such as "being good at building a new world" and "opposing liberalism" are very rare in middle school students' compositions. The argument is compelling. The following three paragraphs have such characteristics: (1) You should lay a good foundation in your study. "Deep roots can flourish", which means the importance of laying a solid foundation. If Sima Qian didn't "read thousands of books and follow Wan Li Road" when he was young, could he write Historical Records? If Leonardo da Vinci didn't work hard on painting eggs when he was a child, could he become a master painter in the future? Ince was mentally deficient when he was young, but he carried forward the spirit of "one person knows what he knows, I know it ten times, one person knows what he knows, and I know what he doesn't know", and finally climbed to the peak of science. Throughout the ages, countless accomplished scholars and experts have eloquently proved this point with their own experiences! (2) What does it mean to "worry about the world first, and enjoy the world later"? That's sacrifice. This kind of sacrifice is not for individuals, but for people all over the world, so it is noble and great! This kind of sacrifice is not for personal gain, but for the public interest of the country, so you can compete with the sun and the moon! What is sacrificed is fame and fortune, status and even life, but what is won is the prosperity of the country and the admiration of the people. (3) Inappropriate and untimely praise and criticism are enough to hurt a person, especially premature praise. Once the singing contest has come to an end, it can often be seen that the young contestants who won the prize are called "singing stars" and "famous singers" in newspapers and periodicals; Some players wearing such laurels are even students studying in middle schools! I wonder, what benefits will such publicity bring to young people's ideological progress and artistic growth? The underlined part of the above three paragraphs is the argument. We say that the beginning of the argumentative paper should be supplemented by the full text. A Qing dynasty Tang Biao said in the book Reading Composition: "The program of the whole article is in the first paragraph, and the first paragraph is in the ascendant, so the whole article is better." He refined his opinions into arguments, displayed them strategically at the beginning of the article, and began the full text. It is also conducive to the smooth flow of ideas and the discussion around arguments; At this time, the role of "every article is good" can not be underestimated. So, how to get to the point? First of all, according to the requirements of the topic and the feelings of discussing things, we should have our own incisive opinions and formal judgments, and have refined the arguments of the article. In other words, we have a clear idea before writing. For example, in the first paragraph, the author has made the center of the discussion very clear, and extracted the central argument that "learning should lay a good foundation" from the materials of Sima Qian, Da Vinci and Einstein. For example, in the second paragraph, the author got the enlightenment that "that is sacrifice" from the famous saying "worry about the world first, and enjoy the world later"; For example, in the third paragraph, the author witnessed many inappropriate "laurels" being worn on young players in newspapers and periodicals, and deeply felt that the seriousness of the problem lies in "inappropriate and inappropriate praise and criticism, which can hurt a person, especially premature praise". It is precisely because of the "answer" that he formed a clear opinion on the object of discussion, and confirmed that his opinion was in line with the meaning of the question or the meaning of the materials provided, which was of discussion value. "Secondly, to change your writing habits, the first sentence does not need narrative language, but uses argumentative language. That is to say, with a clear affirmative or negative sentence, the "argument" is suddenly opened. Some students are used to writing narratives, and there are often long narratives in argumentative essays, especially those who are not good at stating arguments and posing for discussion; Some students have no clue before writing, no matter what argumentative paper they write, they always start with notes, and even after a long narrative, they will concentrate on thinking about what arguments should be put forward; The above-mentioned writing habits greatly hinder the writing of argumentative essays. If you don't change them, you can't come straight to the point and make an argument clearly. Naturally, the writing method of "one thing, one discussion" at the beginning of the case, in which "thing" comes first and "discussion" comes last, is also an argumentative layout, but this layout is relatively common and easy to master, so it is difficult for us to get straight to the point, as mentioned above. If the author does not form a clear judgment in his mind in advance, or according to his usual style of writing, it will often turn into such a beginning: (1) Sima Qian, a great historian in China, read thousands of books when he was young, took the Wan Li Road, and finally wrote Historical Records, which will be circulated through the ages; Leonardo da vinci, a famous Italian painter, practiced painting eggs as a child and finally became a master of painting. Einstein, a great physicist, was mentally deficient when he was young, but he carried forward the spirit of "one person knows, I know ten things, one person knows ten things, and I know everything", and finally reached the peak of science ... (3) At the end of every singing competition, it is often seen in newspapers and magazines that those young winners are called "singing stars" and "famous singers" and put on such laurels. I'm thinking, what's the benefit of such publicity to young people's ideological progress and artistic growth? .
6. Write an article about my paradise. Let's cut to the chase. Write a 400-word essay. Friends, do you know where my paradise is? It is not a children's paradise in Jinjiang Mountain, nor a swimming pool in Wulongbei, nor is it Bandung Stadium. This is my absolute private domain-my bedroom.
My bedroom is rectangular. Open the door, opposite is a big window, from which the sun shines into my heaven, making my heaven full of warmth. The curtains are light blue, with lovely rainbow cats and naughty Lan Tu on them. At night, they quietly watched me fall asleep. The windowsill is full of building blocks, and I always realize my various "designs" there, including parks, playgrounds and military bases. ...
The walls on both sides of the window have become bookcases filled with my "treasures". There are Snow White, The Water Margin, The Journey to the West, The Storm of the Republic of China and Yi Zhongtian's Three Kingdoms ... I often hold these "treasures" to the bedside and read them slowly and savor them. This is definitely a kind of enjoyment, intoxication and happiness!
Under the window is my bed. After learning every day, I jump into its warm arms and sleep sweetly. Above the bed is a beautiful Mongolian mosquito net, which is a sharp weapon to prevent mosquitoes from kissing me.
Next to the bed is my big desk. There is an eye protection lamp above the desk. There are some study reference books, reading machines, pencil sharpeners and pen containers on my desk ... they accompany me to learn and grow every day.
This is my bedroom. I like it. I like to study, play and rest in its arms. This is my paradise.