Once upon a time, someone did an experiment: they put a flea in a glass box and covered it. Then observe the flea's reaction in a glass box. At first, the fleas kept jumping in the glass box, but they didn't jump out of the glass box every time, and finally ended up hitting a wall and being disappointed. So the flea figured out the height of the glass box and would never jump to this height again. Just then, the experimenter took off the lid of the glass box, but the flea, because of his experience, would never jump out of the glass box again.
Many people in society are like this flea, trapped in the cage of experience and unable to extricate themselves; However, some people dare to knock over this cage and get up the courage to try. Most of these people have succeeded.
Bill. Gates is a good example. Bill. Gates studied in a world-famous university, but he dropped out of school and founded Microsoft with some friends. This kind of practice makes everyone incredible. Many people used their own experiences to persuade him: if you don't study, you may not succeed, and even if the research is successful, it may not be popularized. But bill. Gates didn't listen at all. Finally, no one advised him again, leaving only a string of sighs. Bill. Gates finally tried, and he finally succeeded. Now, almost every household has a computer and is using Microsoft products, Bill. Gates also became the "richest man in the world" at that time.
Sometimes success requires not only 100% experience, but also 100% courage.
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This article is an argumentative essay. Put forward opinions straight to the point, and use the "flea experiment" to put facts and reason, demonstrate clearly and make people think deeply. Combining with the successful case of Bill Gates, the author demonstrates his own views layer by layer and draws a conclusion, which is very convincing.
The courage of the tree of life can be regenerated by cutting off branches; Grass can grow back after being burned. A pine tree on the cliff is flourishing and doesn't need anyone to fertilize and irrigate. A seed can overturn the stone holding it down and grow tenaciously ... plants cherish life very much and don't give up any chance of survival. They overcome many difficulties with courage and strive to grow. Although they may not grow luxuriantly, I have to admire this perseverance and courage.
During the holiday, my mother and I went to Tianmu Mountain National Park. We followed the guide along the winding stone road. There are towering old trees everywhere. From time to time, there were a few crisp birdsongs in our ears, and we could hear the gurgling water.
"Come and see this tree!" The guide's shouts took us to a slope. I looked up and couldn't help exclaiming, "Wow!" A tree actually grows between two huge stones, with a thick trunk and lush green leaves. Roots are inserted obliquely between stones, and the gap between two stones is actually separated by roots. I measured it with my hand, and I could put a palm in the gap.
This is a tree! Maybe it was a seed blown into the gap by the wind many years ago. Facing the barren environment, it did not feel discouraged, but silently took root and sprouted, and its trunk stubbornly grew out of the gap, upward, upward, upward! How hard it is to go up! Wriggling, every inch of bark is scarred, and every inch is several years old. However, it finally stretched its branches. You see, its roots get in through the cracks in the stone and come out from under the stone, criss-crossing, grasping the soil under the rock like talons.
Whenever I see those small trees that hold their heads high in the wind and rain, I will tell myself to cherish life, to have the courage to overcome difficulties like them, and to make the light of life full of happiness and hope.
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The article throws out the viewpoint at the beginning of the article from beginning to end, and takes an old tree that grows tenaciously in the rock as an example in the narrative process. When describing ancient trees, the author observes carefully, can grasp the key points, describes vividly, depicts the image of tenacious life of ancient trees, and further leads to the philosophy that life should be tenacious and brave enough to overcome difficulties.
I have had many dreams, but none of them have come true. I have been thinking, what makes me unable to realize my dream and lack experience? Don't! I always can't figure it out. It seems that all I have in mind is a beautiful vision for the future. Never really acted. I know that no matter what I do, I will get something, but I always sit where I am and wait for a better life. I also know that if we wait like this, even if we die of old age, we will not achieve real success.
At present, I am confused and seem to see a bright continent. I suddenly realized that the real reason why my dream didn't come true was because my future and my dream were just fantasies. What I lack is the courage to stick to my dream, but I always get cold feet. Of course I understand that after the storm, there will be a rainbow. However, I can't walk out of that difficult first step, and I don't have the courage to walk through this tortuous road to realize my dream, let alone succeed!
I know all this, but I can't convince myself to break into a new world that belongs only to me. I happened to see a sentence, which aroused my courage to stick to my dream, but … after all, it was only "three minutes of blood". I think, even if this courage is eternal, but I don't know the direction of my efforts, how to break through? In the end, it's not "draw water with a bamboo basket-with a sieve". However, I will always remember that sentence that inspired me to stick to my dream. "Regret is better than no regret." Yes! I firmly believe that I can find the direction of my dream, and that sentence will definitely arouse my courage to persist in my dream, which will be eternal!
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The language is plain, the center is not prominent, and the expression is inaccurate.
Courage In life, we need the joy of success, the pain of setbacks, laughter and the courage to go forward. Courage means daring to think and act without fear. There are many kinds of courage in life, which can prove whether an individual is courageous or cowardly under various conditions. What does a successful person have? Wisdom? Talent? No, it is their indomitable courage.
If a person has no courage, he will lose his fighting capacity, his spiritual support and his original self-confidence. There is a saying that we all need courage in the face of gossip. Yes! Everyone needs courage to face all successes and failures, right and wrong, and everything.
Throughout the ages, how many things have not been done with courage?
When a person makes his own choice, what makes him do it? It is courage and confidence.
Man is the tallest animal in the world, such as Helen Keller, Madame Curie and Zhang Haidi. Why can they succeed? It is because they have the courage to overcome difficulties and urge them to challenge life and the future.
When you decide to do everything, it's half done, because you have the courage to face it. Show courage in the face of difficulties, show your courage, courage and confidence! With these, you will stand on the starting line farther than others.
In life, we need the joy of success, the pain of setbacks, laughter and courage to go forward. Courage means daring to think and act without fear. There are many kinds of courage in life, which can prove whether an individual is courageous or cowardly under various conditions. What does a successful person have? Wisdom? Talent? No, it is their indomitable courage.
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The argument (quantity and content) is improper, the argument (truth and fact) is outdated, the argument technique is single, and the discussion language is not infectious.
What is courage? Courage is opportunity. If you can't stand the test, you won't have infinite courage. However, if you don't have the courage, you will inadvertently miss opportunities again and again. Therefore, it is really priceless, and nothing is as precious as her. Maybe you haven't found it yet. In fact, it flows in everyone's blood, but some people don't know how to cherish it. Therefore, each of us should reflect on whether we have awakened it and stopped it from sleeping.
This should be the difference between people! People with different experiences may have different ideas, and people without courage can't overcome their inner obstacles. In other words, I have experienced too little, my mind is too fragile, and I often wander in contradictions, so I can't control my thought rhythm well. In fact, I feel the same way now, so I am quite clear about this complicated feeling. However, I always remind myself that confidence without courage is not enough. Only when the two are integrated, that is the real winner. I must send out the courage flowing in my blood, and send it out incisively and vividly to infect those numb sleepers.
If you want to gain something or strive for it, if you want your courage to master it, if you want to realize your ideal, you should try boldly, don't be afraid of failure, and don't just think about success. The higher the expectation, the greater the disappointment and the heavier the blow. Maybe! This is the power of courage, a power with great potential!
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The argument technique is single, and the discussion language is not infectious.
The courage you gave me-the first-grade class teacher is fifteen years old. I thought my world was completely black, but because of your appearance, it became black and white.
At least, it is always accompanied by suicidal thoughts, but it has never been put into practice. ...
At the age of seventeen, I was about to take the senior high school entrance examination, and I was very scared. "Dad" said that if I can't get into a key high school, I can't study. I was so scared. Because of you, I am no longer confused. ...
Entering the third year of senior high school, I feel all kinds of maladjustment, study pressure, and … all kinds of pressures, which almost suffocate me. Thanks to you, I have a chance to catch my breath. ...
When I was eighteen, I dropped out of school secretly and didn't tell you, but I was afraid to tell you for fear that you would be disappointed. ...
When I told you later, you were still so calm ... I thought you would scold me, but I didn't expect you to say nothing. You said I was an adult and I should try to decide something for myself. You also said that not everyone can make that decision. After all, it takes a lot of courage. ...
You said that I took that step, which proved that "I really grew up" ...
It's just that you don't know that I thought about it for a long time, but I didn't dare to decide until … later, I was afraid that I didn't have the courage, so I blocked the road and filled in "drop out" instead of "drop out" …
I am 19 years old and have just worked for less than a year. I'm sorry to tell you that I seem to have missed the third chance. I finally got it through the supervisor interview this time, but I seem to have screwed up again. ...
You are still so calm, I said I can't be as calm as you. ...
After you said you missed it, all we can do is to face it calmly and enrich ourselves harder, and we will always meet the next opportunity. ...
I don't know when I can learn. You are calm ... maybe you can't learn. ...
Tang Feng and I, perhaps, I am most disappointed in you. ...
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Courage is persistence and never giving up. Today, my mother took me to learn the piano. Because of playing inexperience, mistakes are often made, and fingering often deviates from the teacher's requirements. Every time I make a mistake in fingering, the teacher knocks my hand to correct it, and I sigh "Oh, my God".
On the way home from school, my mother remembered my sigh in class and mentioned the picture book called Courage that she told me last night. The book says, "Courage is to get rid of bad habits; Courage is knowing that there are still mountains, so you must conquer them. Courage is the grass that breaks through the ground under the ice and snow ... My mother asked me what courage is, and I blurted out that courage is never giving up. Oh, my mother almost exclaimed. My mother is very happy. My mother had to look at me again in her heart. I have grown up and have my own thoughts.
When I finally decided to buy your long-awaited piano, my mother once told me that learning piano is a very happy thing, but it is also a very hard thing. Happiness lies in acquiring a skill and being more confident after learning. The difficulty is that the process of practice is very bitter, and it needs constant hard training to master it. Mother wants me to choose whether to study or not. If you don't want to learn, it's not too late. If I choose to learn, I must stick to it, and I can't give up halfway, because under the conditions of our family, I don't have enough money to learn the piano with a try mentality. I thought about it, nodded and told my mother firmly that I would study and never give up.
At that moment, when I solemnly said that I would not give up, my mother suddenly felt that I had grown up a lot. My mother is very happy that I have become a little man.
There are many choices in life. Learning piano should be my first choice in life. I have the courage to choose it. I believe that you and I will have the courage to persevere and never give up.
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My youth, my courage, my youth, is the most dazzling color in the morning glow, the most brilliant drop in the vast sea, and the most vibrant bunch of grass all over the mountains.
Children are birds that will eventually leave the cage. Every parent, every family, is just a temporary shelter for children. Ships that want to explore always go out to sea, and the storms they have to experience are inevitable after all. There are many roads and dark nights in life, and they can only face them themselves. Parents can't replace and undertake their children's lives.
I control my youth. Mom and Dad, please give up your doting and let your children wander on the road of frustration. As children born after 1990s, the times have given us too many opportunities, let us bravely unload our burdens and move forward lightly. Although the road is full of thorns, ravines and night, we are not afraid. The power of youth can resolve all disasters and meet all kinds of challenges.
Although in this environment, we have no reason to say no, the academic burden is too heavy, too heavy, too heavy. ...
What you can't finish reading is books.
What you can't finish listening to is nagging.
What I am afraid of is the report card.
What you can't do is homework in all subjects.
Young people should also meet the selection of exams with a positive attitude. After all, study is also for a better life, and examination is only an important means to select talents.
The courage of my youth, in life, we should be novel, changeable, publicize our personality, let the water of life boil, we should be standardized, stable and curb our impetuousness. In the face of ups and downs, inner peace, in youth, with restraint and publicity to express our love. A drop of water is enough to make the sea roll, and a piece of hay will also make the green hills dim. Don't forget to make public, and don't forget to be introverted. The road to youth will not be smooth sailing. Since you choose youth as your own master, you must have extraordinary speculative ability and step on everything.
My youthful courage, my road, since I have chosen, will continue to extend, without end.
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The argument (quantity and content) is improper, the argument lacks hierarchy and coherence, and the discussion language is not infectious.
Courage is a boat, wisdom is a sail. When I first read the introduction of Robinson Crusoe, there was a question that kept lingering in my ear. How did Robinson overcome this ordeal and finally return to his hometown? I didn't know the answer until I read this book carefully-fearless courage and strong listening perseverance kept Robinson alive.
Robinson's courage to overcome difficulties is really admirable. 1659 On September 30th, Robinson was killed and capsized at sea. No one else survived, but he was stranded on a desert island. Think about it, if you lost your courage at that time, what would happen if there were no people, no beasts and no savages in that isolated situation? Everything is strange. What will happen without help? Although Robinson also had periods of fear, it was a miracle that he spent nearly 28 years on the island by relying on courage instead of sitting still.
However, courage alone is not enough. It is difficult to sing with one hand. Must be matched with wisdom. Robinson can survive without wisdom, and wisdom is his second weapon. With his wisdom, he created "country huts" and "seaside huts", planted rice, domesticated sheep … and managed his own life. But if there is no wisdom, it is likely to be futile and it is likely to encounter misfortune.
Robinson's courage and extraordinary wisdom to overcome everything remind me of my fearlessness in the face of various difficulties. Take my third grade as an example. That summer vacation, I went to an ecological farm and went to a place to play. My mother told me to walk a tightrope and bravely walked over. But when you encounter difficulties, you are anxious, your mind is blank, and you can't calm down. Compared with Robinson, this is really a difference of 108 thousand Li.
Courage is as indispensable as wisdom. He is a good partner. Courage is a boat, wisdom is a sail. Only when they are strong together can sailboats sail on the sea.
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Dull language