Life is wonderful because of persistence, and the world is gorgeous because of persistence.

What is persistence? Maybe I can't give an accurate answer, but I know that in my persistent dictionary, hobbies are not persistent and stubborn! Persistence should have such contents: persistence is a kind of tempering, persistence is a realm, persistence is a kind of strength, persistence is a catalyst, and persistence is a lifelong pursuit. It varies from person to person, from small to large, from late to early.

Persistence is a kind of training. It's the bow and arrow in Hou Yi's hand when he shoots the sun. It is the paddle in the hand of Dayu San when he passed the house; It is a pole on Gong Yu's shoulder when moving mountains; It is the scepter in Su Wu's hand when he is herding sheep. It is the tears in Xin Qiji's eyes when he looks north at his old country; It is the black water in the pond when Wang Xizhi practiced calligraphy; It was a crutch in Mao Zedong's hand during the Long March. This is the tungsten wire on the table when Edison did the experiment. It's a stone in Lincoln's mouth when he practiced eloquence.

Persistence is a state. Persistence is Qu Yuan's loyalty and a towering monument in the history of vilen. Perseverance is Wen Tianxiang's determination that "the heart is like a needle stone, which does not mean that the South will never stop", and it is the source of his strength to overcome difficulties. Perseverance is Zheng Banqiao's self-confidence that "the green hills are not relaxed, but the roots lie in the broken rocks", and it is also his firm and tenacious spiritual pillar after being crushed and beaten. Persistence is Tan Sitong's swan song of "I laugh at the sky with a horizontal knife, leaving two Kunlun mountains in my liver and gallbladder", which is his spiritual portrayal of protecting the law with blood. Persistence is the integrity of Lin Zexu's "standing on the wall, wanting nothing" and his personality embodiment of putting an end to selfish desires.

Persistence is a kind of strength. "How can the water of the Yellow River move out of the sky and into the ocean, and never return?" If it is not persistent, how can there be such a torrent? "A thousand hammers cut out the mountain, and if the fire burns, it will be idle." If you don't persist, how can you have such arrogance and backbone? If you don't persevere, there won't be a man of iron. If you don't climb the mountain persistently, how can you have the heroic momentum of "reaching the top, the other mountains all appear dwarfs under the sky."? If you don't keep climbing the peak, you won't have a broad vision of "but going up a flight of stairs will broaden your horizons by 300 miles". If you don't forget to write persistently, how can you be ecstatic about "one song and two tears" If you don't forget to write persistently, how can you have a broad mind of "writing nothing"? If you don't persistently forget calculus, how can you overcome Goldbach's conjecture? If you are not obsessed with deicing, how can the "Beijing-Zhuhai-Xiangtan Expressway" run through?

Persistence is the catalyst. Because of his persistence, Sima Qian devoted all his energy to the writing of Historical Records, "learning from the changes of ancient and modern times and getting married", thus completing his father's legacy and creating his wonderful life. Similarly, because of his persistence, Cao Xueqin wrote A Dream of Red Mansions, which was full of absurd words and bitter tears, thus reappearing the history of the decline of feudal families and leaving his masterpiece. Because of his persistence, Li Shizhen wrote Compendium of Materia Medica for 30 years, which enriched the prescriptions of Chinese medicine and became a must-read book for learning Chinese medicine. There are seven versions in the world. Because of his persistence, Yuan Longping led his scientific research team to cultivate hybrid rice, successfully developed hybrid rice seed production technology, and popularized hybrid rice in a large area, making great contributions to the grain industry in China and even the world.

Different people have different persistence. "I am willing to sweep the streets for Ningbo all my life" is a kind of dedication, permeated with a deep sense of responsibility for my job; "Julian Waghann is determined to celebrate the Central Plains Day in the north, and the family sacrifice will not be forgotten." This is a precious persistence, full of deep love for the country; "The monarch is a rock, the concubine is a reed, and the reed is like silk, and the rock does not turn." This is an eternal persistence, full of sincere feelings for lovers. "Falling red is not a heartless thing, but turning into spring mud protects flowers more", which is a kind of persistence that is willing to be a ladder and dedication; "Once you climb to the top of the mountain, you will see that all the other mountains look short under the sky." This is an ideal of aggressive and persistent pursuit; "Scattered into mud, ground into dust, only the fragrance remains the same" is a kind of persistence that does not give up and refuses to degenerate. Tao Yuanming doesn't bow down for five buckets of rice, Li Bai doesn't bow down for dignitaries, Gu is not a senior official of the Qing Dynasty, and Zhu Ziqing doesn't eat food to help the country. Persistence is Liu Hulan's head in the face of the hay cutter, and persistence is Jie Jiang's firm step towards the execution ground. Bruno, who lives in the fire forever, persistently shouted "The earth goes around the sun". Archimedes, who was deeply immersed in research, persistently shouted out the strong voice of "Wait a minute, kill me when I finish studying this problem". These people are persistent and resolutely strive for their persistent spirit. Their persistent spirit is not for themselves, but for the country and the nation, which is in line with the interests of the broad masses of the people. In order to protect their own share of the world, some people can't do it, some officials can't do it, some people can give up their lives, and some people have really achieved the point that "wealth can't be lewd, poverty can't be moved, and powerful people can't bend". Some people like this have left beautiful talks from generation to generation, admired by future generations, and will never disappear from the hearts of the people.

Persistence is a persistent pursuit and a persistent exploration; Persistence is dedication and selfless dedication. We are obsessed with the exploration of nature, love and feelings, hobbies, and the pursuit of ideals ... we should always stick to it. Although the harvest is late or early, small or big, please believe that persistence itself is the best interpretation of life.

Life is wonderful because of persistence, and the world is gorgeous because of persistence.

Teacher's comment: At the beginning of this article, five sentences "Persistence is a kind of ……" are used to form a set of parallelism sentences, which makes the language of the article magnificent; Then, typical examples from all over the world are cited to prove such sub-arguments as "Persistence is a discipline", "Persistence is a realm", "Persistence is a strength", "Persistence is a catalyst" and "Persistence is a lifelong pursuit", which makes the whole article form a set of parallelism sentences, from which we can see that this article has clear thinking and rigorous structure. After reading these sub-arguments, the author deepens the theme with a short word 16-"Life is wonderful because of persistence, and the world is gorgeous because of persistence", which summarizes the whole text, giving people a natural feeling, making readers irrefutably accept this view and making them feel this emotion involuntarily. This is the author's superb place.

In addition, this paper belongs to the horizontal structure, which is often used in argumentative writing and is also a useful structural form for candidates to get high marks in the college entrance examination. I hope to read more such articles, imitate them and use them flexibly, and your articles will certainly shine. Just try it.

Simulation score: content 24+expression 24+development level 10 =58.

It should be said that the idea of this topic is not difficult. "Persistence" is also called "persistence". Originally a Buddhist term, it means to stick to something and not be detached. Later, it refers to stubbornness or rigidity, and it also extends to a kind of perseverance, which has become an important spiritual quality that people yearn for. The reason is that as long as you have perseverance, you can realize your life ideal and achieve the goals you set!

When writing, focus on "(correct) perseverance is the premise of success". Both discussion and narration should emphasize the importance of persistence. Around this idea, his writing ideas should be well grasped.

If you write an argumentative paper, you can express your own views and opinions on "persistence", and try to choose classic and typical examples and famous sayings as facts or rational arguments to make your arguments fully powerful and show depth. If we can have factual arguments that keep pace with the times (such as stories that touched China characters, deeds of advanced characters, etc.). ), it will make the traditional topic of "persistence" novel and unique, and it will certainly produce the excellent effect of "new wine in old bottles".

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