I guess the topic of the composition is about losing weight. You can explain the pros and cons of losing weight first, and then show your opinion.

about

lose weight

at present

lose weight

have

become

popular

In ...

young

and

middle-aged

Woman.

In ...

order

arrive

manufacture

themselves

Beautiful,

they

attempt

many

different

way

about

lose

Weight.

some

go to

exist

a

Diet,

some

take

Exercise, some

eat

medical science

, others

even

turn

arrive

operate

for

Help!

be like

a

Result, a

many

about

product

have

come

Go into ...

Existence, like this

be like

special

Drugs,

tea

and

Equipment.

they

be

second-hand

exist

different

way

and

work

The difference is that,

but

some

have

One side, one side

Effect.

In ...

my

Opinions,

it is

apprehensible

that

woman

seek

Beauty,

but

they

should

do

it

exist

a

appropriate

Way.

take

utilize

be

this

way

that

I

most

Favor.

but

this

other

way

be

possible

arrive

do

harm

arrive

popular

health

more

or

Less.