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Appreciation of Peach Blossom Water in March
As Chinese teachers, we not only teach, but also love Chinese. We should appreciate every text as a masterpiece and forget the identity of the teacher. In this way, we can better convey what we understand to students, teach them more methods, and let them interpret the content of the text by themselves, instead of mechanically instilling it.

"Peach Blossom Water in March" is a skimming text of Unit 1 of Grade Four in primary school. The author of this article is Liu Zhanqiu. As a skimming article, it is not that the article is bad, but that each learning section has its own learning section goal. The sentences in this essay are particularly beautiful and I like them very much.

The reason why I choose to skim the article is because the children in the fourth grade of primary school don't have too many requirements for the beauty of language, but they should learn to use rhetoric and learn the writing structure of this article, focusing on autonomous learning. Because it is beautiful, it is more suitable for students to explore independently and use the reading methods learned in previous lessons to perceive the beauty of the article, the beauty of the peach blossom water written by the author and the author's praise and love for the peach blossom water.

To interpret an article well, it is inseparable from the understanding of the author. Liu Zhanqiu wrote many essays in his life. It focuses on expressing emotions and life, with exquisite brushwork and flowing water, and has its unique aesthetic prose style. The literary circles in Taiwan Province and Hongkong spoke highly of his prose. His works have been translated into English, French, Japanese, Russian, Italian and German.

Liu Zhanqiu has always been praised as "the king of lyric poetry" by college students. His works are fresh and ethereal, full of modern consciousness, novel and free, based on expressing feelings and emotions, facing life and transcending time and space. He believes that modern life makes people "live very tired". He advocates "light poetry", "light prose" and "light lifestyle", and advocates "from light to heavy, from light to tired". He is "neither tired of fame and fortune nor suffering from adversity" to himself, that is, he looks at people's prosperity and gains and losses with a normal heart, like a water mirror. Desalinate the rigid, rigid and inhuman lifestyle brought about by seemingly serious preaching.

Liu Zhanqiu's prose is regarded as the representative of modern mountain literature by domestic and foreign literary circles because of the pastoral beauty of his works.

He is not only an excellent prose writer, but also wrote 22 kinds of poems, such as Joy of Life, Untitled Lyrics, People, Love and Scenery, Prose Poems, Distant Guitar and Essay Melody of Lyrics. Some works have been translated into English, French, Japanese, German, Italian, Russian, Spanish, Korean, Yugoslav, Bulgarian and other foreign languages.

Not only that, Liu Zhanqiu also wrote a good hand.

As can be seen from the picture, Liu Zhanqiu's calligraphy also appeals to both refined and popular tastes, not to mention running script, regular script and cursive script.

It can be seen that our famous essayist is really versatile, a poet, an essayist, a translator and a calligrapher. I really admire his talent!

Although the article is short, there are seven natural paragraphs, but the sentences are exquisite.

At the beginning, two interrogative sentences were used one after another, with metaphors in the sentence, comparing the sound of peach blossom water to bells and the luster of peach blossom water to silk. It seems that you can hear the clear water from the words and touch the silky spring.

An "ah" and an "awakening" wrote a scene in which winter went and spring came, everything revived and rivers thawed. What a surprise! Just like a kind mother's joy when she sees her child wake up from a deep sleep.

The anthropomorphic rhetoric of "dancing" makes the river come alive instantly, reflecting a beautiful sunrise, which makes people feel as if they are in nature and enjoy this "water reflecting the sunrise", which is beautiful.

The author compares the blossoming waves to "peach blossoms" and the whirlpool in the water to "dimples". What a clever metaphor. It seems that what I see is not a spring water, but a flowing peach blossom. Where the spring water flows, I seem to see peach blossoms falling in the water and flowing eastward with the spring water. Rolling waves, under the rendering of peach blossoms in March, are like ten thousand peach blossoms, which makes me confused whether it is like water or like water. I also want to be one of them. How similar vortex and dimple are in appearance, and what a subtle metaphor. It seems that what I see is not a spring water, but a picture of a beautiful woman smiling with dimples, which makes me admire the exquisiteness of this word.

This passage obviously uses the structure of the score, and it always sounds like a "harp". Then write the sounds in detail, with waves as strings, waves as rhythms and other sounds as accompaniment. What a beautiful "Haruka"!

"Respond", "whisper" and "pour out", personification reappears, and the sound of water lapping on the shore is like "the bell of wheels rolling", which makes this "peach blossom water" alive again. I seem to watch peach blossom water with the author, listen to her whisper, watch her nourish everything and listen to her surf. What a sentimental beautiful "peach blossom water"! I can't help falling in love with this "peach blossom water".

How clear the peach blossom water in March is, like a mirror, reflecting everything. What left their beautiful images? How smooth the structure of the total score is!

Oh, swallows, weeping willows, girls ... leave their beautiful images. Swallow's wings are wrapped in white clouds, wicker is covered with long hair, and the girl's reflection is red lotus in the water, charming and graceful, what a charming rural picture scroll!

This "peach blossom water" is more expensive than gold, because it moistens everything, is brighter than silver, and reflects beautiful spring scenery!

Then use exclamations, such as green grass and willow leaves like eyebrows, and use two metaphors to express your admiration for "Peach Blossom Water"!

Grab a handful, taste it, what true feelings, feelings sublimate again, such a beautiful "peach blossom water", even I want to taste it!

The author applies rhetoric such as parallelism, personification and metaphor to the extreme, and concludes the overall behavior structure.

Such a beautiful article makes me burn!