In the morning, my dad pulled me over and felt the cocoon rubbing all the way. Is it my father? I was in tears-my mother didn't love me at all.
At that time, I was about seven years old, and I was so careless every time ... "At that time, I discovered that my father was like a mountain." But when I was a child, I said, "Mom is like a river, and I became fond of laughing. Only my mother and I are at home. Every time I hold his hand, my mother leads me to school? I'm too young to understand! She beat me in the exam today, too. She didn't understand her mother's hard work. Baby? Since that day? Are you calling me?
Later, I heard the teacher say? Just ... "Mother said here. In memory. But I heard my mother's voice behind me! "I was stunned for a while:" Come back, just express your love in different ways. Never gave me a smile at night? Memory, and then slowly walked over, quickly picked up the bag ready to rush out. Are those hands my mother's? I always call them by their first names I stood up angrily. " The exam questions should be optimistic: "Father is like a river:" You only compare me with others, but you jump into your mother's arms-warm arms. Father is like a mountain, mother comes here! "I saw my mother stunned for a while, and a pair of rough hands stroked me. I sat down with tears in my eyes and always felt the friction of cocoon. From small to large. " Soon, the third grade final exam, followed by a slap in the face; When I was in trouble, it was just ... "Then she smiled at me. My mother is like a river, my mother has changed! I'm going to be late, my mother is like a mountain! A loud reprimand angrily to "mom, I don't want to talk to her, you look at you? But I don't have time to think about it. It looks strange. I never thought her hands were so rough! "I slowly put the bag down. My mother is actually a story about me and my mother.
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It's really lively here. The method of writing a square composition should be summarized first, and then described in detail. As soon as the rest day comes, the street will be very lively.
You see, on the street, all kinds of vehicles are constantly flowing, blocking the road. There are fast cars, fast motorcycles, light electric cars and leisurely bicycles ... we feel like we are in the ocean of cars.
Vehicles also lined up in a long queue. Look, the street is crowded with people and everyone is smiling.
Young people are walking in groups in the street. They wear MP3 players, listen to music and can't help singing along.
Some young people are talking and laughing, and their laughter has been echoing in the street. The old people sat quietly on long chairs with crutches and bathed in warm sunshine. Really comfortable! The children are jumping and jumping, especially greedy, as long as they hear someone shouting, "mutton kebabs!" " Mutton kebabs! "Smelling the attractive fragrance, I couldn't help but let my parents buy a bunch, so I bought it! Listen, the horn of the car, the music in the shop and people's laughter are intertwined, like a symphony.
In the evening, it is more lively here. One after another, the lights are flashing, like little stars in the sky.
Ah! I really like busy streets! In a blink of an eye, 2007 passed quietly, and New Year's Day in 2008 appeared happily. New year, new beginning, new hope.
The festive street presents a scene of peace and celebration. Everywhere, lights are decorated, cheers are thunderous, and clothing stores and hotels are crowded and bustling.
In the street, vendors' cries and customers' entreaties. On the rest day, the street is full of excitement.
You see, on the street, all kinds of vehicles are constantly flowing, blocking the road. There are fast cars, fast motorcycles, light electric cars and leisurely bicycles ... we feel like we are in the ocean of cars.
Vehicles also lined up in a long queue. Look, the street is crowded with people and everyone is smiling.
Young people are walking in groups in the street. They wear MP3 players, listen to music and can't help singing along.
Some young people are talking and laughing, and their laughter has been echoing in the street. The old people sat quietly on long chairs with crutches and bathed in warm sunshine. Really comfortable! The children are jumping and jumping, especially greedy, as long as they hear someone shouting, "mutton kebabs!" " Mutton kebabs! "Smelling the attractive fragrance, I couldn't help but let my parents buy a bunch, so I bought it! Listen, the horn of the car, the music in the shop and people's laughter are intertwined, like a symphony.
In the evening, it is more lively here. One after another, the lights are flashing, like little stars in the sky.
Ah! I really like busy streets! In a blink of an eye, 2007 passed quietly, and New Year's Day in 2008 appeared happily. New year, new beginning, new hope.
The festive street presents a scene of peace and celebration. Everywhere, lights are decorated, cheers are thunderous, and clothing stores and hotels are crowded and bustling.
On the street, vendors' cries, customers' bargaining and people's laughter are intertwined, which is very lively. There is a newly-opened supermarket, with two tall flower baskets at the door and a red carpet on the ground. It is a big reward for opening, with a wide variety of goods and many preferential activities, and people are scrambling to buy them! We went to join in the fun, but it was full.
On the night of the festival, the colorful sparks in the sky become colorful, and the lights in Qian Qian on the ground are all red. The pedestrian street is very lively, with a sea of people, and people coming to shop in an endless stream. There are children laughing, laughing. Look here and there. Young people dressed in fashion come out this holiday to choose their favorite items; There are also old people with families and mouths, talking and laughing.
In wenzhou paradise, people have a good time. There are our favorite bumper cars and roller coasters, as well as thrilling rapids and bungee jumping! People are laughing and laughing everywhere.
It's really lively here. Every time it is a polder, it is the most lively market. On polder day, there are rows of buildings on both sides of the streets and highways-department stores, fruit shops and clothing stores ... cars on the streets and highways keep flowing, coming and going.
Although it is 8 o'clock in the morning, the sun has driven people out of their homes. The market is bustling and crowded.
The most lively markets are vegetable market and pork market, and there are many kinds of fresh vegetables. The boss is smiling and attentive.
Customers come and go, smiling. The pork market is more lively.
My mother and I were wandering in the street. What were so many people doing there when I saw it? My mother and I went over to have a look. Oh! It turned out to be a trap for throwing circles. A line has been drawn on the ground, which cannot be crossed. Six circles for one yuan, you can take it home.
There are many beautiful glass bears, plates and flower baskets on the ground ... a little girl can throw them out accurately. Five of the six traps were caught, and the children around her praised her for her accurate throwing.
Suddenly, there came the voice of Hawking. It was originally for candied haws, and many children rushed to buy it. My mother bought me a bunch and I took a bite. Sour and sweet, the more you eat, the better you taste. I went shopping with my mother for a long time.
It's almost noon, some vendors have closed their stalls, and some are still selling. My mother and I are happy to go home. On the way home, I thought: the market is getting more and more lively, which reflects that people's lives are richer.
In my memory, the Spring Festival is the most lively festival. Whenever I think of the Spring Festival, I will think of the scene where my father and I set off firecrackers last Spring Festival.
I remember years ago, adults were busy buying new year's goods, and my mother bought food, couplets and jiaozi. Our children are not as busy as adults.
On New Year's Eve, my mother asked me to post Spring Festival couplets with my father, and my father suddenly remembered that he had forgotten to buy firecrackers. My father and I decided to go downstairs to buy firecrackers together and came to the stall selling firecrackers. There are so many kinds of firecrackers! There are cupolas, rotating guns, barbed fireworks, wrestling guns, fireworks, black spider guns and big thunder.
Anyway, all kinds of firecrackers can't be put off.
Dad bought me a relatively safe throwing gun and barbed gun, and also bought a chip.
There is always a composition describing the lyric central sentence in the total score. I like my beautiful campus very much. This is a beautiful campus.
There is a small bamboo forest, which is very lovely. We can enjoy the cool here in summer. There is a green lawn next to the small bamboo forest, where the grass is lush and there is a rockery! There are many red morning glory in the flower bed, which is very beautiful!
When we walk into the school, we can see green white orchids. There is also a huge playground, where there are artificial lawns and red runways. There is a French phoenix tree on the playground, guarding our school like a famous soldier. There are many pear trees in the toilet. Flowers bloom in spring and pears mature in autumn, like lanterns hanging on trees.
4. Find a composition that is first summarized and then specific. Perhaps it's a lingering bond between me and Beidaihe, a beautiful coastal city in Qinhuangdao? Fate once again arranged for me to take a camera in the crisp autumn season.
This ancient and remote town has given me too much ... The first scene of Beidaihe is naturally the sea. Walking from the quaint town, you can see the junction with the sea that day in 50 or 60 meters.
Clouds outline soft and lovely lines. What a magnificent view! Stepping on the sun's temperature on the soft beach, quietly stepping on the waves.
One by one, one by one ... smelling the cool sea breeze, the taste of the sea at that time was salty and clear, spreading gracefully from a distance. A huge wave came, and a few naughty drops of water fell on my face and bloomed on my lips like flowers. The bitter taste is still fresh in my memory.
Sunshine beach is my eternal destination. Legend has it that the sun drilled from the sea is the source of all things. Without it, life will dry up and the earth will become less colorful! I finally had the honor to watch the sunrise today! It was a gorgeous morning, just after four o'clock, and we were waiting for the beautiful spirit with vitality in the most perfect place.
I stood in the almost shallow dawn, waiting. Suddenly, a touch of brilliant red appeared on the sea level, which was the blush on God's face! Gradually, the red semicircle danced like a shy girl at sea.
Like a half-broken jade plate, it has broken horns, but it is stunning. Oh, the jade plate is slowly complete, the sun shines gently on the earth, whispering happiness and sadness, melancholy and beauty to the sea.
Sometimes she laughs, sometimes she cries, sometimes she laughs, sometimes she is sad. On the first day of the fifteenth lunar month, the tide ebbed.
Fortunately, on the day we went, we caught up with a junior high school. The tide rises and falls, and the surging waves wash up countless small aquatic creatures. Shrimp, crab and small fish, I have gained a lot.
Beidaihe, a small town near the sea, is faintly melancholy in simplicity, gorgeous and enchanting in freshness, and thriving in freshness, which makes me deeply infatuated with this vast, beautiful and enchanting classical master.
5. Find a composition that is first summarized and then specific, and travel to Beidaihe, Qinhuangdao.
Maybe I have an indissoluble bond with Beidaihe, a beautiful coastal city? Fate once again arranged for me to take a camera in the crisp autumn season. This ancient and remote town gave me too much. ...
The first scene of Beidaihe is naturally the sea. Walking from the quaint town, you can see the junction with the sea that day in 50 or 60 meters. Clouds outline soft and lovely lines. What a magnificent view! Stepping on the sun's temperature on the soft beach, quietly stepping on the waves. One by one, one by one ... smelling the cool sea breeze, the taste of the sea at that time was salty and clear, spreading gracefully from a distance. A huge wave came, and a few naughty drops of water fell on my face and bloomed on my lips like flowers. The bitter taste is still fresh in my memory. Sunshine beach is my eternal destination.
Legend has it that the sun drilled from the sea is the source of all things. Without it, life will dry up and the earth will become less colorful! I finally had the honor to watch the sunrise today! It was a gorgeous morning, just after four o'clock, and we were waiting for the beautiful spirit with vitality in the most perfect place. I stood in the almost shallow dawn, waiting. Suddenly, a touch of brilliant red appeared on the sea level, which was the blush on God's face! Gradually, the red semicircle danced like a shy girl at sea. Like a half-broken jade plate, it has broken horns, but it is stunning. Oh, the jade plate is slowly complete, and the sun shines softly on the earth, murmuring happiness and sadness, melancholy and beauty to the sea. Sometimes she laughs, sometimes she cries, sometimes she laughs, sometimes she is sad.
On the first day of the fifteenth lunar month, the tide ebbed. Fortunately, on the day we went, we caught up with a junior high school. The tide rises and falls, and the surging waves wash up countless small aquatic creatures. Shrimp, crab and small fish, I have gained a lot.
Beidaihe, a small town near the sea, is faintly melancholy in simplicity, gorgeous and enchanting in freshness, and thriving in freshness, which makes me deeply infatuated with this vast, beautiful and enchanting classical master.
6. An essay with a general description and an individual description needs 400 words. I have a good classmate. She ranks first in every exam, and she is also the vice monitor of the class. Everything is fine. She always helps some difficult classmates. For example, some students didn't come to school on leave, so they couldn't write their homework when they came to school. She will help them finish their homework. It's like a teacher is teaching students.
I remember one time, my homework was not written well. She is the group leader of Chinese and is preparing to collect her homework. I don't have a clue, and I still need one. I thought she handed in her homework without waiting for me. No one expected that she actually put it down and came up to me and asked me, "Are you ready?" If you really can't write it, I'll hand it in! I can teach you! ""thank you! "She taught me how to write and gave me several examples. After I finished writing, I had a clue and a good idea, so I quickly wrote. In a short time, I finished writing. Although this is only a small matter, it also shows that she loves learning and helps students with difficulties.
She is also an example for me to learn! At the sports meeting, she managed her classmates so that they had no right to speak. She is also among the best in the 60-meter race and softball competition. If a classmate in the class is sad, she will run to comfort her and stop her from crying. Some students quarreled and threw the books out of the table. She will also go up and pick them up and put them on the table, and discourage students from quarreling. Enhance the friendship between students. Of course, she never fights with her classmates herself, and always reads carefully!
She is my classmate, the one who is among the best in all aspects.
7. Summarize first and then write a specific composition 450 Pastoral scenery I have been longing for the beautiful scenery of my grandmother's house since I was a child.
Today, I finally got my wish and went for a walk at my grandmother's house. Just arrived at the entrance of the village, several Danding chickens came into view.
Among those chickens, perhaps the rooster in camouflage and with its tail wagging is the leader. I saw it let out a fierce cry and pecked a chicken hard. Why on earth? I went in to have a look, for a few grains of millet. "Ha!" I smiled. It's really interesting.
It turns out that chickens can quarrel. Bypassing those chickens, I came to a Okawabe. The water here is very clear, and I can see the sand and stones under the water. The water here is so green, as green as a huge emerald.
Occasionally, several egrets fly by and touch the water. Suddenly, microwaves appeared on the water, and willows were weeping by the river. It's really "Jasper plays the role of a tree, and thousands of strands of green silk hang down." This is, you wash your face with river water, which is ten times cooler than autumn wind.
Walking across a small bridge, I will feel the fragrance of rural soil, and I will look around with it. Ah! Large tracts of rice are arranged neatly and orderly, like soldiers marching in parade, walking back and forth with neat steps, because it rained yesterday, and crystal drops of water hung on the rice, which is beautiful! The trip to the countryside of Rooster Snatching for Food, Clear River and Beautiful Paddy Field made me linger.
8. How to summarize the central idea of the composition in short language? Three sentences, nine words, quick and simple composition method The first part of the original article 1. What's the ingredient? Composition is a kind of thinking activity of asking and answering questions.
How to write a composition? Use questions to deduce and write. 1. Starting from children's paintings: Only by careful observation and careful inquiry can you write vividly.
2. The reporter can't interview without "nine words" to ask questions: only by asking questions seriously can we write concretely. 3. The elements of watching news: five elements, namely, 5W, time, place, people, things and reasons. 4. How do famous teachers guide writing? The method is to ask questions and deduce. This method is called "quick composition method with questions and deduction".
5. Write if you can speak: writing means speaking with a pen, and speaking is an oral composition. Export is writing, and writing is writing.
Or time sequence, or spatial clue, or logical relationship, around a center, follow a logical clue, so as to make the discourse center prominent and clear. To sum up, we know what a composition is and how to write it.
In short, writing is talking with a pen; How to speak, ask questions around the topic with "nine words". Second, how to write a composition 1, the relationship between thinking and language: the development of thinking content (concept, judgment and reasoning) needs language forms (words, simple sentences, complex sentences and sentence groups) to adapt to it.
Thinking is the core of writing, unfolding is the basic method of writing, and questioning deduction is unfolding. This expansion is a kind of thinking activity, and its genes are nine words. The composition combines the content of the article by clicking on people's thinking activities through nine main thinking words: who, what, what, how, why, when, how much and if.
2. The basic format of Chinese sentences consists of subject and predicate. The subject is the object of the statement: "Who" or "What", and the predicate is the content of the statement: "What" or "How". 3. How to use "nine words" to expand a sentence and expand a paragraph: The first way to expand a sentence is to ask the subject and object, what kind of person? What kind of things? How many people? How many things? ; The second is to ask more questions to the predicate: how to do it? When did you do it? Where did you do it? How's it going? Why are you doing this? The method of paragraph expansion is the same as that of sentence expansion. The difference is that on the basis of sentence expansion, nine words are used for association and imagination, so that sentences and sentences form a "net", that is, they are connected into complex sentences, forming sentence groups, and finally extending to paragraphs to form the structure of the article, thus making the expressed meaning more specific, richer and more perfect.
The process of writing is the process of asking questions: learning knowledge is closely related to asking questions. If you want to learn knowledge, you must ask questions and be good at asking questions. This will get twice the result with half the effort. The process of exercise is also a process of questioning and deduction. Writing is to say what you see, hear, think, why, to whom, what is the point, how to say it, what to say first, what to say later, what to say in detail, what to pass by ... after thinking through your brain, say it with your own pen.
Writing an article is to ask questions, deduce them, and connect the flow of thinking one by one, so that the thoughts and feelings to be expressed can be expressed smoothly. Only through questioning and deduction can we activate creative thinking and produce a good article with deep thinking and literary talent.
Zhong Ping's "reading disorder before going to bed" 5. Tao Xingzhi has eight friends, whose names are He (what), He (why), He (who, who), He (how), He (where) and He (when). These eight sages cover all aspects of human thinking activities. Compared with nine words, there are fewer "if" and "what" and more "where to go".
American Paul? Mr. kinsella created a simple writing method of "seven characters". These seven words are: how, if, what, when, where, who and why, what and how much less than the "nine words". The core of "seven-character" writing is to find the central sentence first. With the central sentence, it is easy to start writing, and it also limits the topic.
How to determine the central sentence of an article? He put forward three operational essentials: first, ask questions with a keyword as much as possible; 2) The central sentence must be independent and complete; 3) the central sentence must clearly answer the questions raised, not irrelevant questions. In short, the above two methods give us the greatest enlightenment that composition is a kind of thinking activity, and we should respect the daily thinking laws and processes.
The more simple and natural, the more clear and definite. 6. "Occam's Razor" and Einstein's Principle of Simplicity:14th century, William, a philosopher in ockham, England, advocated nominalism and thought that "if it is not necessary, don't add entities". He only admits what really exists, and thinks that those empty and ordinary concepts are useless and cumbersome, and must be ruthlessly "shaved off", which is often called "Occam razor".
It is highly praised by the great philosopher Russell and is considered as the most effective principle in the field of logical analysis. Later, Einstein extended it to simple reasons. Einstein has a classic saying: "Things should be as simple as possible, not just simple."
What is the goal of composition teaching in primary and secondary schools? Xia Gaizun and Mr. Ye Shengtao once said: "Writing, whether it is application or practice, should aim at appropriateness. Things are clearly remembered and the truth is clear; No grammatical problems, no theoretical problems, this is decent.
As for whether the writing is good or not, it is difficult to satisfy. A good article can only be written if you accumulate a lot of experience, have deep feelings and study hard.
In other words, a good article is a product of going deep into life. If the depth of life is not enough, you are unwilling to come. As the goal of composition teaching in primary and secondary schools, "appropriateness" conforms to the principle of "conciseness", and the composition method of "three sentences and nine words" is the simplest composition method.
The more simple and natural, the more clear and definite. The composition method of "three sentences and nine characters" is the simplest composition method. The first article of the second part of the method article, "Three Sentences and Nine Words", is a crash work.
9. How to specifically summarize the central idea of the article is to summarize and abstract the specific image and get several contents and understandings. Analyzing and summarizing the main points and central ideas of the article is two steps to grasp the article as a whole. Candidates should be able to summarize the specific content and sort out the complicated content. The so-called sorting is to sort out the order and grasp the main points. The analysis and summary of the main points of the content should be an overview of the full text, not limited to a few words. We should be good at grasping the central sentence, clarifying the relationship between paragraphs and summarizing it comprehensively, accurately and concisely. The central idea of the article includes two aspects, one is a high summary of the content of the article, and the other is the author's ideas and writing intentions. To analyze and summarize the central idea, we must grasp the full text, the relationship between the whole and the part, and then combine the author's writing intention, grasp the essence and summarize. Of course, sometimes the expression is incomplete. In order to be concise, multiple-choice questions in Chinese test questions often adopt incomplete expression. 1. Overall thinking skills of analysis, induction and generalization (1) If the specific content of analysis, induction and generalization is a single sentence, pay attention to the sentence structure; If it is a compound sentence or a group of sentences, pay attention to the relationship between the sentences; If it is a paragraph or full text, we can start with punctuation marks or start from different levels, and find out the key words or core words in the text (or sentence) through analysis, that is, words that can reflect the main ideas and ideological content of the paragraph (sentence), and summarize them with ready-made words in the text, which is accurate and labor-saving. (2) Thinking about how to interpret abstract content from the structure and correspondence. The key is to stick to the content, grasp the connotation of the concept, express it in plain language, and make the abstraction concrete. The basic principle of this work is to strive for accuracy and concreteness. The most basic method is to pay attention to the analysis of the structural relationship between sentences and phrases, clarify the relationship before and after, and straighten out the relationship. At the same time, we should pay attention to the analysis of their correspondence, pay attention to the requirements of the topic, and find the corresponding sentences from the original text according to the correspondence. To find out the answer. (3) Using stylistic features to think, we should pay attention to the object and characteristics of explanation. If there are multiple objects, pay attention to similarities and differences. In narrative style, we should pay attention to the narrative object, what to do, what to show and what to explain. In the style of argumentative writing, we should pay attention to what the author advocates, opposes and proves a truth. General principle: the main points can't be. To analyze and summarize the main points of the article, we should pay attention to the following points: ① pay attention to the central sentence of each paragraph, which is often the main point; (2) Pay attention to the transitional sentences connecting the preceding with the following; ③ For paragraphs without central sentences, it is necessary to analyze the relationship between sentences and grasp the key points of their contents; ④ When analyzing and summarizing, we should grasp it as a whole, proceed from the full text, be far-sighted and impartial. Five aspects (1) should be considered to summarize the central idea of the article. The research title and the head and tail title are the organic parts of the article. Some titles, such as "On Feuerbach Should Go Slow" and "Against Liberalism", directly point out the main idea and are the most concise summary of the central idea of the article. Although some titles don't directly point out the main idea, "What do these styles symbolize?" The answer to these questions is the central idea. Some articles have implied or implied central ideas at the beginning and end. For example, the first sentence of "Transforming Our Learning" by * * * is: "I advocate changing the learning methods and learning systems of our whole party." This is the central argument of this paper. (2) Grasp the main sentences and directly reveal the central idea of the work. It has a strong promotion ability. For example, there are two sentences in the article "Memories of Petty bourgeoisie": "Mr. Lu Xun has two poems:' Look at a thousand fingers coldly and bow your head as a willing ox.' This is a portrayal of himself and the embodiment of his whole personality as a great writer. "These two sentences are the keynote sentences of the full text, which can be summarized from two aspects: Lu Xun can hate his enemies or love his friends. Pay attention to the distinction when reading. The discussion part in the narrative is often related to the theme. Pay more attention when reading. (3) The following is an analysis of the emotional context of Xiongguan Fu: I yearn for Xiongguan (patriotism inspired by Xiongguan when I was a child) → I see Xiongguan (patriotism inspired by majestic momentum and dangerous terrain) → I associate Xiongguan (unswerving belief in the motherland is a real Xiongguan that no modern weapon can break. " Seeing Xiongguan paves the way for Lenovo Xiongguan (Heart Xiongguan), from which it can be seen that the focus of the central idea is not to praise the scenery of mountains and rivers, but to express love for the motherland and unshakable faith in the motherland. (4) Analyze articles that focus on writing people, and focus on grasping people when summarizing the central idea. For example, reading "Blessing" pays attention to Xianglinsao's "cheeks are still red" when she first came to Luzhen. Finally, when you die tragically, you can know that "Blessing" profoundly exposes the spiritual destruction of the working people by the landlord class and feudal ethics, and reveals the social roots of the tragic fate of working women in China. An article based on notes should focus on analyzing the essential significance of events. For example, For Sixty-one Class Brothers, through narration, rescues poisoned migrant workers, and praises the "one party is in trouble and all parties support", which embodies the superiority of the socialist system. (5) Contact the background of the work. The work is the reflection of society, and the content is the product of the background. There are many works. Only by understanding their background can we deeply understand the origin of the content and the author's intention and accurately summarize its central idea. For example, The Man with a Condom reflects the social life in Russia at the end of19th century. At that time, the workers' movement was gradually unfolding. The political party of the working class is forming, and the reactionary Tsar * * is facing an increasingly high revolutionary situation, trying to strengthen reactionary rule, which has caused a heavy depressive atmosphere throughout the country. The loyal supporters of the Tsar tried their best to maintain the rule of the Tsar Empire and hated all new things.