Let's first outline the main idea of this composition material: female singers think that "beauty mainly depends on temperament" (key sentences), and different netizens have expressed different views on this (beauty mainly depends on temperament). Then, we extract the core idea and composition from the general idea of the material: 1, which should be discussed around the viewpoint (or this matter) that female stars think that "beauty mainly depends on temperament"; 2. The opinions of netizens are the reference ideas provided by the proposer. You can choose one of them to write a composition, or you can put aside your reference ideas and put forward your own opinions. As long as it is within the scope that female stars think that "beauty mainly depends on temperament" or this matter, it is in line with the meaning of the topic. On the contrary, some students put aside the limitation of the main content of the material and only grasp the sentence that the material "caused such a big discussion", which means "freedom of speech" and "different people have different opinions", which is wrong.

Temperament is from the heart, not external.

(50 points for opinion questions)

After the female singer in the material sent a personal photo of eating a hamburger, she thought that the beauty lies in "mainly temperament". I am deeply puzzled by this. Can temperament be seen from a person's appearance? In my opinion, temperament is from the heart, not from the outside. (The opening part briefly summarizes the materials and puts forward opinions)

Temperament refers to a person's overall charm, which is unclear and intangible. Temperament is not shown by appearance alone, but by what people say and do. Nowadays, some network celebrities often appear on the Internet. They are popular because of their figure and appearance, but their appearance is often just a "flash of fireworks." This is because they lack inner temperament, and it is absolutely impossible to win attention only by appearance. On the contrary, the inner temperament is better than all external decorations. Yang Lan, a famous host of China Central Television, was named as one of the "world's charming women" for her kind hosting style and elegant manners. She dresses simply and never dresses up deliberately, but goes with the flow. It can be seen that temperament is from the heart, not external. The female singer in the material thinks that eating hamburgers is "beautiful in temperament", which is really a blasphemy against the word "temperament". (What is "temperament", comparative analysis, rebate materials)

Temperament is formed bit by bit, and it is not the same as appearance. Nick Hu Zhetian, a famous Australian motivational speaker, was born without limbs. He only has a short upper body, but with little effort and strong willpower, he learned to swim, play golf and ride a horse ..... Being discriminated against by others, he was embraced by millions of people and deeply loved his beautiful wife. Nick vujicic is ugly, but she has an extraordinary temperament. He said: "Even if you seduce me with millions now, I will never make any consideration to grow my hands and feet." . It is setbacks that make me unique and attractive. "Indeed, temperament can never just look at appearance. It originated from the heart and then gradually spread. ("temperament" is to be formed bit by bit, which is different from appearance. Theoretical analysis is less, mostly examples, so the analysis is shallow)

Throughout the moment, small fresh meat and small Hua Dan emerge one after another on the screen and are warmly welcomed, which fans call "extraordinary temperament". But is the temperament here really a real temperament? Some stars really need to improve their academic qualifications. "Drug abuse incident", "drunk driving" and "sasha jackson scolds fans in the street" ... Are these incidents very different from their self-proclaimed "temperament"? Yan value society is not good! (At the moment, some stars have a face value, not a "temperament". Theoretical analysis is slightly insufficient)

Let temperament and appearance bloom together. The actress Zhao is beautiful, but she never sells herself short. Don't forget your initiative and try to be an actress. Even though she is very popular, she is still a "desperate third sister". She tries to bring positive energy to her fans, and she is really a temperament beauty. As she said, "my efforts deserve my luck." Compared with the female singer's superficial self-promotion, Zhao is the real "temperament beauty". Let temperament and appearance bloom. Is also a simple example, lack of theoretical analysis)

Temperament is from the heart, not just external. I hope we don't fall into the same misunderstanding as the female singer in the material and mistake appearance for temperament. (rebate theme, rebate materials, concise ending)

Pursuing inner beauty

(50 points for opinion questions)

The female singer posted a personal picture of eating hamburgers on Weibo, thinking that her beauty lies in her temperament. Can such photos really show a person's inner beauty? Obviously, a photo can't tell everything. I think we should pursue inner beauty instead of commenting on our own temperament beauty by sending a photo. (The opening part briefly summarizes the materials and puts forward opinions)

Inner beauty is the beauty of spirit and soul. Inner beauty is not manifested in appearance, and a person's appearance beauty does not represent his inner beauty. The concept of judging people by their appearances is an aesthetic taboo. A person's inner beauty is reflected in his spiritual fullness and noble soul. A person's inner beauty can surpass his outer beauty. Didn't Malan Polondo, who was once considered the perfect godfather, sink in the end because of various bad behaviors? Beauty lies in appearance, only in natural beauty, not in inner beauty. The picture of a female singer eating a hamburger thinks that beauty lies in temperament, which is not only ridiculous but also absurd. (What is "inner beauty", comparative analysis, rebate materials. This theoretical analysis is sufficient)

Inner beauty needs us to pursue, and the pursuit of inner beauty can make us reach a higher realm of life. Inner beauty is the beauty of quality. Only by constantly pursuing inner beauty can a person constantly purify his mind and improve his spirit, thus reaching the realm of beauty. Beautiful in appearance and filthy in heart, then this person is still ugly; Ordinary looks, but high spiritual quality, then this person will also be considered attractive. What works is not admiration, but ridicule. If we just imitate the external beauty of others and don't learn the internal beauty of others, then in the end we can only be an empty shell of spiritual emptiness, and our hearts still can't be improved and we can't reach another realm. The significance of pursuing "inner beauty". This argument is very sufficient)

However, in today's materialistic world, many people only pay attention to material beauty and external beauty, but not to the cultivation of inner beauty. Most people think that external beauty is very important and want to do everything possible to make themselves more beautiful. The use of various cosmetics has become beautiful, but the inside is dirty. Don't some stars realize their usual temperament? But they do some disgusting activities behind their backs. Is it really beautiful? In this impetuous society, people often judge whether a person is beautiful according to his appearance rather than his inner nature, which deserves our deep thought. Is it ridiculous that the female singer in the material thinks she is beautiful with her own photo? (Criticizing reality, kickback materials)

The pursuit of inner beauty requires continuous learning and continuous improvement of one's spiritual accomplishment. Only by continuous learning can a person's thoughts be improved, and then his life will not stop at pursuing external beauty and reach the realm of inner beauty of spiritual beauty. Bi Shumin said: "A woman with no wrinkles on her forehead may have water in her blood vessels." External beauty will not remain forever, and one day we will grow old; But inner beauty can accompany us all our lives. Even when we are old, our spirits are still full and our souls are still noble. Isn't this beauty more beautiful? What we need to pursue inner beauty is our self-cultivation, our spirit and even the nobility of our soul. (what to do. This passage quotes a famous saying, which is also a heavy stroke in reasoning)

Therefore, we should all pursue inner beauty, and don't think that we are beautiful by a photo like a female singer. (rebate theme, rebate materials, concise ending)

The temperament of beauty is manifested in inner beauty.

(50 points for opinion questions)

Recently, a female singer posted a personal picture of eating hamburgers in Weibo, because in the process of interaction with netizens, she thought her "beauty" was "mainly about temperament", which attracted countless people to watch and comment. Some netizens think that this is quality leading life. Others think that this is an improvement, because aesthetics no longer pays attention to appearance. In my opinion, you can't see a person's temperament just by a photo. Mr. Yu once said: "A person's temperament is manifested in inner beauty rather than outer beauty. Its beauty lies in its spiritual sublimation, not material luxury. " This sentence tells the feedforward principle of human temperament beauty. It can be seen that the temperament of beauty is manifested in inner beauty. The repetition of raw materials, rather than conciseness, makes the whole paragraph too long. In fact, the material only needs to be summarized as follows: "I think the beauty of female singers in the material mainly depends on their temperament ...")

Temperament is the charm of people as a whole, which is like a shining pearl gem and attracts attention. Give a deep impression. Its beauty is like spring in March, better than flashing neon, so it has attracted people's attention and attention. What is "temperament"? However, lyrical metaphor is harmful to analyze what "temperament" is, and it can't really reveal the essence of "temperament", which is a very empty way of writing.

The temperament of beauty is manifested in inner beauty, which is not nonsense. Hua said: "If there is an ugly heart under a gorgeous appearance, then this person is disgusting no matter how beautiful he looks." This language shows us the charm of inner beauty. In life. People always pursue the beauty of appearance, worship the big-name stars who became famous in the world overnight, and praise the handsome guys and beautiful women who are absolutely charming and naturally beautiful. Look at people's faces and ignore the connotation. This seems to be human nature, somewhat recognized, but it is actually a fallacy. A person's inner beauty should be a place worthy of our attention. Only in this way, the inner beauty and beautiful phoenix will not disperse in the world, and the truth, goodness and beauty will stay in the world forever. Chen Xianmei, who picked up Yue Yue, Diao Na, who rescued the seriously injured, Wu Bin, a considerate driver, and so on, have caused great shock in today's society. People vote to learn their valuable qualities from these people. What makes them so likable? It is their inner beauty that makes them beautiful. Without this valuable temperament, can you achieve the same result? There is no doubt about the answer. This is like a golden key, which can open the door to success. The so-called "inner beauty promotes external beauty" is also true. The paragraph is long, but the content is substantial. It can be divided into two parts to make it more obvious)

Paying attention to the cultivation of inner beauty should not be underestimated, but why do so many people in today's society naturally let themselves slide to an ugly ending? For us personally, we don't know what the temperament of beauty is. Due to the interference of many external factors, we become addicted to fame and fortune and tend to be selfish. Other people's discussions in society have also given people a wrong guidance. There is a news report that says. A couple went shopping, and the man had a car accident, but the child quickly took out his mobile phone to take pictures and uploaded them to the space, indicating that his boyfriend had a car accident. They were very sad and didn't call for help in time. This is so chilling! What a sad moment! In China's education, students' achievements are always regarded as paramount, while the cultivation of their temperament is neglected, which is another big mistake. Looking back at the reality and analyzing the reasons, the example of the car accident is far-fetched.

In order to get rid of these phenomena, we must prescribe the right medicine. Individuals are aware of the importance of inner beauty. In society, education should also attach importance to the cultivation of inner beauty, and temperament is more important than other things (propose a solution, but it is very general)

Therefore, the temperament of beauty is manifested in inner beauty. (rebate theme, simple ending. This should be the rebate material)

Where is the beauty?

(topic 50 points)

Yu once wrote in Ruins: "A grandmother without wrinkles is terrible." At present, there are many people without wrinkles, so there is no need to be terrible. People say that this is an era of looking at faces, and all kinds of "beautiful women" and "beautiful pictures" are filled with our eyes, which makes us feel the aesthetic fatigue that men are all like Pan An and women are all comparable to stones. Quoting Yu's famous saying, it reveals that this is an era of looking at faces, which is as follows.

The era of looking at faces is not over yet, and a picture of a female singer eating hamburgers "mainly depends on temperament" is on fire. Female singers think that they are "beautiful", and "beauty" lies in temperament, not in face. Many critics and fans have entered an era of "temperament". (Brief materials)

However, the author does not think that female singers are beautiful. Can a person's temperament be judged by a picture or a beautiful picture? The female singer's action is nothing more than making noise and taking away the crowd. The comments of netizens only reflect personal values. (make comments. These three paragraphs are naturally written, but as far as argumentative writing in the examination room is concerned, it is too slow to enter the topic, which is not as good as the first three paragraphs.

"You are the most virtuous wife and the most talented woman," Qian Zhongshu said of Jiang Yang. /kloc-Jiang Yang, a 0/00-year-old man, still devoted himself to writing The Three of Us and sorting out Qian Zhongshu's works after seeing off her husband and daughter. She walks on the edge of life, inspiring and influencing millions of people, but this talented woman never thinks she is beautiful, but she can let people feel her beauty and her temperament through words. She didn't use her social circle to create momentum like a female singer, she accumulated it silently. Jiang Yang is very beautiful. Her beauty is not flashy, but an innate temperament. (for example, analyze an example. )

You are the wind, you are love, and you are the April day on earth. Lin, a talented woman who dumped all beings, sang. Lin, a peerless talented woman, studied China architecture with her husband Liang Sicheng. She silently supported her husband's career and devoted herself to the protection of architecture. She is beautiful, and the beauty from the inside out makes Xu Zhimo unforgettable all his life, accompanied by Jin Yisheng and insisted by Liang Sicheng. (for example, analyze an example. )

As the old saying goes, "Beauty is in the heart." The real beauty is not how beautiful your selfie is, but how wonderful your attachment is. In today's era of "a picture doesn't necessarily have the truth", we should re-establish our correct aesthetic view. For example, Huang Shuo, the wife of Zhuge Liang in ancient times, is his wife's wife. She is not good-looking, but she is also beautiful, beautiful in mind and feelings. Another example is Xiao Jiang's teacher, Jiang, who appeared in front of everyone today. She looks pure, but she never makes noise in social circles, but teaches silently for eight years. Jiang Ye is beautiful. She is beautiful not only in appearance, but also in heart and temperament. What is true beauty? For example. )

On the other hand, some people may think that a female singer is beautiful, but it is by no means what she calls "temperament". True beauty emanates from the inside out. Instead of making trouble in social circles, it is better to "quit the net" and let the real art exhibition appear in front of everyone. (counter-attack materials and propose solutions. This ending is natural. As far as the whole article is concerned, the arguments are rich, but the reasoning is lacking, and there is no clear idea to advance at different levels)

Second, "On" argumentative writing skills

Last semester, just before the oil market, I put forward the argumentative skills of "On Theoretical Matters" and wrote an essay entitled "There is a poem and a distance". Later, I reflected that there is nothing wrong with "focusing on theoretical matters", but that argumentative essay in the water can't show the argumentative skill of "focusing on theoretical matters", but it is just a low-level argumentative essay that focuses on piling up examples rather than on thorough reasoning. As far as theoretical matters are concerned, we must first make an accurate idea and get a clear truth (viewpoint), and then analyze this truth (viewpoint) layer by layer. In the process of analysis, we will continue to rebate and analyze the topic materials. When demonstrating, the theoretical analysis of each level must be sufficient, and then the case analysis. Only by being reasonable and giving examples can we gain real persuasion. An argumentative essay with simple examples is an inferior argumentative essay without discussion thinking. "Righteousness", once we thoroughly understand the theory of Tao at all levels, the following examples will be natural, simple and coherent. More or less, some paragraphs in the above four exam compositions conform to the skills of "theory". Next, I want to show the argumentative skills of "on theoretical matters" by comparing two poems with Far Away. The revised edition of Poems and Distances also has many shortcomings, but it is more in line with the argumentative skills of "on theoretical matters" than the original.

And poetry and distance.

(moral title)

Gu Shaoqiang's cross resignation letter "The world is so big, I want to see it" reminds me of Gao's famous saying: "Life is not just the present, but also poetry and distance." I think so, too. We should still have poetry and distance. Summarize the materials, quote famous sayings, and start with some questions.

② Poetry and distance mean poetry and dreams. Gu Shaoqiang's "The world is so big, I want to see it" implies the pursuit of poetry and dreams. As a middle school teacher for more than ten years, her heart yearning for poetry and dreams gradually became bored, so she went with the flow and "walked away" to look at the world smartly. This move of hers really makes me envy and yearn for the people who are trapped in "getting by" and want to escape. (Combined with viewpoint analysis materials)

(3) There is poetry and distance, and life is full and complete. Materialized reality makes us live well, while spiritualized poems and dreams make us live well. Life without poetry and dreams is doomed to be deformed and shriveled. In Another Island of the English, Bernard Shaw mercilessly mocked the life without poetry and far away: "I have worked on his land all my life, that pig;" As a result, I became a piece of soil and a pig. " On the contrary, if there is poetry and distance in life, life will become rich and complete. The charm of ernesto guevara is not only that he is a revolutionary, but also that he is full of poetry and dreams. He likes literature, travel, photography, cigars and watches, and he has romantic revolutionary dreams. All this made his life rich and complete, even though he died. Isn't this rich and complete life Gu Shaoqiang's poetry and dream of "seeing"? (the first layer: why; The importance of poetry and distance. )

Poetry and distance are so beautiful. However, in the materialistic reality, we are squeezed and struggling. How many people can transcend reality and bravely pursue poetry and dreams? The ideal is full and the reality is skinny. In a materialistic society where poems and dreams are scattered, countless people put them out and are willing to "get along in front". When the "gold digger" prevailed and the "little age" prevailed, it was hard for the "ant tribe" and "dwelling in humble abode" not to give up their poems and distant places. Because of this, when Gu Shaoqiang's "Cross Declaration" appeared, those of us who once had poems and dreams were so moved and infected that some even took a trip like her. (Layer 2: Why; The reason why poetry and distance wither in material reality)

⑤ Just, can you find poetry and distance only by "looking"? Do we have the aesthetic misunderstanding of "there are scenery in the distance"? "The world is very big, I want to see it", is it a seemingly free and easy irrationality? After resigning, Gu Shaoqiang broke the promise of "no endorsement" and finally endorsed the travel company. Is this a kind of self-denial and correction to his pursuit of poetry and dreams? (transition section. Questioning poetry and distance, thus introducing the next deepening and sublimation theme)

6. I think deeper poetry and distance are not elsewhere, but in the present. Cherish the present and find poetry and dreams in the present, which is the true meaning of enriching a complete life. Life is small and material, but as the soul of all things, we can create great and poetic dreams by cherishing it. Kobayashi in the Japanese film "Cadre", despite his humble and dirty career, poured love and respect into the makeup of everyone who died, thus making the gloomy and terrible death full of warmth and poetic beauty. In Joy of Life, Lin Yutang listed Liu Chan, clothes, taking a nap and other words written in Li Yu's Essays, praising the poetry of China's traditional life and the beauty of his dreams. These words written by Li Yu are ordinary trivial things at present, but because we cherish the present, we find poems and dreams from them. Compared with Gu Shaoqiang's "walking" to find poems and dreams, isn't it more practical and profound to cherish the present poems and distant places? (The third layer: pushing up the theme and analyzing the profound meaning of poetry and distance)

⑦ If we cherish the present poetry and distance, our life will no longer be full and complete, and we will gain a profound life feeling far beyond Gu Shaoqiang's "the world is so big, I want to see it"! (rebate theme, material, concise ending)