What I want to write is what people should think about the structure of a philosophical paper and how to write it logically.
Freedom is mainly the category of existential philosophy. Specifically, freedom is related to people's needs or desires. We can discuss the essence of needs and desires first, or give a precise or philosophical definition of freedom first, and then discuss the conflict between human desires and needs in social collectives. It seems better to lengthen social harmony and social development.