2. The language of the article is fluent, which also shows the teacher's feelings. You are the teacher's bosom friend. I hope we can learn from each other and collect a bunch of fragrant flowers in the garden of literature.
Your handwriting is neat and beautiful, and the teacher should learn from you. If the material selection of the article is novel, it will definitely complement the writing style. what do you reckon ?
4. Great! Your article reproduces the simplicity and frankness of the northeast people, which makes readers feel refreshed. The language is extremely fluent, and the use of synaesthesia is particularly clever. Your writing style is conquering and attractive. Work hard and create more glory!
Your article is like a slow stream, delicate and smooth. Beautiful writing, sincere and delicate feelings, very personal style. May you continue to pick the waves of life on the road of writing and make your style more perfect!
6. It is wise for a teenager who is not deeply involved in the world to enter a complex society. The language of the article is plain and soft, and the description is very casual, as if leading readers to stroll on the Yuan Ye of the mind. The disadvantage is that the discussion is slightly angular. You know, incisive arguments can make the finishing point and make your article more profound. Keep practicing and you will be better!
7. The writing of this article is beautiful and fresh, full of certain philosophy. It is written that "I" walked by the sea, and the sea not only gave me the enjoyment of beauty, but also caused my meditation and association. It can be said that the sea gave me a swimming space, and "I" injected life into the sea, making the sea a "person" with noble personality strength. After reading this article, it gives people a sense of beauty and is thought-provoking.
8. School life seems dull except after class, but this paper is good at finding the extraordinary from the ordinary, and it is written with relish: in the tense morning, the noon of the battle, and the tired night, every paragraph selects scenes with great life interest. The fresh and lively language vividly shows the students' positive mental outlook.
9. This article is highly ideological and artistic, which makes people think for a long time after reading it. Ingenious conception, using comparative techniques to deepen the theme; The plot is also quite clever, and the whole story is both unexpected and reasonable. The language is unpretentious, and the author's love and hate are all contained in the narrative, which can make readers feel and think deeply.
10, the introduction of father in the article is comprehensive: from appearance to heart, from work to life; The introduction to the father is also focused: focusing on the feelings of the father. The characters are plump, real and full of life. Be proud of such a father, work harder and live up to his expectations!
1 1. You can associate snow with the pursuit of life. Starting from the details of life, the spirit of innovation is commendable. This article reflects your plain writing style. Who says "boiled water" is not the best drink?
12. The full text quotes some common sayings just right, with nostalgia as the clue. It just reflects your ideology.
13. Your article is very creative-complete the idea in the form of mathematical proof. The full text is very literary!
14. As a casual feeling, your article is quick-thinking and full of wishes. The rich life experience and delicate thoughts and feelings revealed between the lines surprised the teacher. I hope you will make persistent efforts in your future writing and form a landscape of your own!