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There are always a lot of casual actions that people will never forget.
Put out a wisp of smoke.
Dad lit a cigarette, and a trace of white smoke curled up and slowly dispersed in the air like a cloud. The smell of smoke soon filled the whole living room. I raised my head buried in the newspaper and coughed a few times. That sound is very subtle. But dad seems to be very sensitive about this. I immediately put out my cigarette, fanned my hand in the air and gave me a sorry smile. In my heart, the moment of stubbing out cigarettes has long been eternal. There is a feeling that I am jumping in my heart. I don't know where the father's love is now, it's all in a wisp of smoke.
Turn around. Turn around.
"Study hard and listen carefully in class." This is the last thing my father said to me before he came home. In my eyes, my father will always be like this. He loves me so little. A friend said, "Parents always look back when they leave their children." But I never believed it. Looking at my father's drifting back, every step he takes adds a little disappointment to my heart. Suddenly, he stopped, steadied his bike, turned around and kissed my eyes in the air. He waved to me. Turned and rode away. When he got on the bike, I saw his white hair fluttering in the wind. Looking at his father's no longer young figure, tears crept into his eyes and flowed out quietly. Dad turned around and soaked my heart in warm water, which was warm. Where is Father's Love today? It's all in the moment of looking back.
Pass a white umbrella.
I was running in the rain and suddenly there was no rain overhead. I looked up and saw a white umbrella blooming like white flowers in the rain. Dad reached out and hit my umbrella on his head, holding me in the rain. Take me around the puddle and avoid the traffic all the way. At the end of the school gate, he handed me the white umbrella with his gentle big hand and turned and walked into the rain. Where is Father's Love today? Everything is in gentle hands.
I still remember a sentence my father gave me when I was six years old: If I love you, I will hold you in my palm.
The actions of love, dribs and drabs, ordinary but great, are full of love, and I will never forget them.
Teacher zw.Liuxue86.com commented:
The advantages of using what you see and hear as writing material are: easy to get, true and natural, bright red and persuasive. Many essay topics encourage students to contact their own experiences and feelings about life as much as possible, and show their personality with unique feelings. We should pay attention to this new trend of materials and materials.
"Stuffing a cigarette, turning around and handing a white umbrella" are all based on daily life and are all manifestations of love. At the same time, the author uses montage to organize the article, which makes the pen and ink more economical, the picture more concentrated and concentrated, and at the same time makes the material more abundant. More subtly, the flexible conversion of the picture will give people a sense of vitality and color, and it will also produce freshness.
Love, some people in the world say, friendship is like spring rain, nourishing the earth; Some people say that friendship is like sunshine, which warms people's hearts. I use this pair of eyes eager to bathe in spring rain and sunshine to find human love. One day, a train started from the city railway station. There is a strong festive atmosphere on the train. Many passengers here are visiting relatives in Beijing-including her, a little girl over one year old. However, in this laughter, a child's crying broke the harmony in the car like a bolt from the blue. Because-she put her tender little arm into the instant noodle box filled with boiling water. Hearing the child's crying, Wen Xun was the first person to come. Knowing what happened, he quickly reported the matter to the train conductor. When the train conductor arrived, he learned that the child's wound was not treated with medicine. But there is no medicine for burns in the car. The child is still crying, crying and vomiting. The situation is not optimistic. At this point, the train conductor immediately dialed the telephone number of the next stop and informed them to prepare the scald ointment immediately and wait at the next stop. Passengers have taken out their own medicines to train conductors and flight attendants. Although the medicine for treating burns has not been found yet, and the current medicine is not very effective, everyone's enthusiasm has comforted mother's heart a little. After a long wait, the train finally arrived at the next station. The medicine was successfully loaded on the train and applied to the child's red wound. The child stopped crying, the mother smiled with relief, and the train conductor and flight attendant quietly left. ...
I think I have found what I am looking for-love is in people's hearts. Isn't it love that gushes from the enthusiasm of train conductors, flight attendants, train broadcasting station staff and passengers to actively find medicine for their children? The train continued to run, but there was one more thing on the train-a strong human touch. The train carries the friendship between people and rushes to the distance. ...
Teacher zw.Liuxue86.com commented:
This article mainly tells about a love incident that happened at the railway station, which embodies the friendship between people. The article comes from life, so the language is not so beautiful, but it is really touching and well written.
what is love ? what is love ? Love is selfless. Love is immortal. Everyone has love. Family and friendship will also bring us infinite happiness and laughter. There is a lyric in a song, which I still remember: love is a light, so wonderful. Yes, love is a lamp, the most beautiful thing in the world, and it always illuminates all of us. Encourage us to go forward and never give up.
We should cherish the priceless love that money can't buy around us.
Love is flawless. Love gives us happiness and warmth.
We should also pass on love to others, so that others can feel the happiness and warmth of love. How painful it is for a person who needs care and help from others, but no one pays attention to it? We need to know what love is. Actually, love is very simple. Love is sharing.
When someone needs your help, you lend a helping hand to help him. This is love for strangers. When you devote yourself wholeheartedly to your career, it is your love for it. When you throw a piece of garbage into the trash can, or pick up a piece of paper and throw it into the trash can, it is your love for the environment and the home where we live. When your family comes home, thirsty and tired, you bring a glass of water to help him or her rub his or her back. This is your love for your family. When you meet stray cats and dogs in the street, don't avoid them, but give them food or adopt them. This is your love for stray animals. Even if your parents go home and you bring a cup of hot water, it is also a kind of love, love for your parents!
Love is actually very simple. It is ubiquitous in the real society. It depends on whether you have found it or not. "Send a rose and leave a lingering fragrance in your hand."
Love is not just given to you by others. True love is given by you, and you give it to others.
Teacher zw.Liuxue86.com commented:
This is an article about love. The author interprets love from different angles, and finally reveals that love is giving, and love is giving. The language is fluent, natural and vivid, which is a good practice.
The color of love "Does love have color?" Some people will ask. But love is always colored, colorful, colorful, and all love together becomes color.
Love is pink, just like peach blossom in early spring, and it is warm. I remember that time, my brother and I had a little conflict and got angry. At this moment, my mother came over gently, stroking my brother's head and said to us, "Don't be too stingy, man!" " ! I believe you can all understand each other, right? "My brother's eyes are intertwined with mine, and my hands are tightly held together. This home has returned to its former warmth.
Love is green, full of vitality and represents life. One spring, I planted a pot of hyacinthus orientalis, which was not much different in size. The stems are covered with flowers and bones, densely packed and neatly arranged. A few days later, the blue-purple flowers are in full bloom and full of vitality. This autumn, it suddenly withered. Mother said, "Son, I lost it. It will grow again next spring! " "I listened to my mother and didn't throw it away. This winter, it grew buds ahead of schedule and looked full of vitality. It is indomitable, just like "boundless grass on the grassland, which comes and goes with the seasons". "My mother asked me to study hard its indomitable spirit, and I will not live up to her expectations.
Love is white, pure and selfless. It is said that the place where this kind of love exists will be the purest place in the world. That day, I was sick and didn't go to class. Later, the next day, as soon as I arrived at school, I was dragged by the teacher to make up lessons. The teacher patiently told me every question, even a word. In class that day, I found the teacher was ill, and I was deeply moved by the teacher. That day was the most serious day I ever had, and it was also the most difficult day for me.
Love is blue. During military training, we were all very tired. It is the mentor who gives us support and hope. The instructors hung a red and a blue badge on their chests. Red represents hope, and blue represents support and confidence, which makes us brave difficulties, bear hardships and stand hard work, and show outstanding performance in military training.
Love is everywhere in this world, it makes the world warmer!
Teacher zw.Liuxue86.com commented:
This is a composition about "love" written by junior one students. Love is described by different colors, and different colors represent different meanings. This idea is bold, original, unique and imaginative.
Love and care are the sweetest in the world —— Some thoughts after reading Anne of Green Gables. If someone asks: What is the sweetest in the world? I will not hesitate to say: love and care are the sweetest in the world! After reading the article' Anne of Green Gables', I realized more deeply that caring can make others extremely happy and bring me infinite happiness, so I think love and caring are the sweetest in the world!
Anne of Green Gables tells the story of Matthew's adoption of Anne, who is lively and lovely, innocent and fond of fantasy. She keeps making trouble, corrects her mistakes, grows up happily and leads a happy life under the care of friends, family and teachers. Annie is a little girl with red hair, so she feels inferior, but when she feels the warmth from her relatives, she is already a happy child. She is constantly criticized for her distinctive personality, but every time she describes her mistakes, her relatives and friends, such as Matthew, Marilla and Diana, will comfort her, encourage her, give her care and teach him how to face and correct his mistakes. It is precisely because she lives in such a warm atmosphere full of love and care that she will not feel lonely and lonely, and finally embark on the right track of life.
Love and care are sweet. Whether you accept love or give love, you will feel extremely happy and happy. Looking back on the articles I have learned, my concern for the' only audience' middle-aged and elderly people has made the author a musical genius; In The Poor, Sang Na was helpful and saved Simon's child's life. The concern of the disabled youth for the author in Don't starve to death that horse makes the author feel at ease. Susan and Tommy are equally happy in "listening attentively", whether giving or receiving.
We live in a world full of love and care. Students help each other, teachers patiently guide, parents subtly care, and neighbors are humble to each other ... All these make our life full of color and the world full of love!
Love and care are the sweetest in the world! Love and care are bridges for good communication between people. Love and care make people extremely warm, and love and care make people live in a happy world!
Teacher zw.Liuxue86.com commented:
After reading Anne of Green Gables, the author realized that "love and care are the sweetest in the world". At the beginning, the author puts forward his views and goes straight to the point. Moreover, the author can summarize the stories in the book in concise language, which shows that the young author has strong writing ability. In the process of writing, the author can illustrate his point of view with examples to make the language of the article convincing. At the end, the author sublimates the theme, and uses "love and care ..." three compound sentence to increase the language momentum, closely following the center of the article and arousing readers' thinking.
At the moment of love, the wind tore at the old tree's calendar, and I heard them sigh when they landed. That calendar should be the memory of the old tree, right? So, in my long memory, is there that calendar?
The shadow of dusk drifted gently on the road. I was wandering on the road when a mother and son caught my attention. They were rendered intoxicating faces by the afterglow of cinnabar. At this time, the mother held her son's hand tightly. Never relax for a moment. At that moment, I saw selfless love. Her universality leads to her commonness, her plainness makes people ignore or even despise her inner greatness, and her tolerance makes people ignore her taste, understanding, consideration and cherish. Suddenly, my heart was hot.
That morning, when I opened the window, the elegant lavender morning glory climbed near my bedroom. It is moistened by dew, fresh, and reflects a touch of touching crystal with golden sunshine. I saw two little girls walking hand in hand, talking and laughing. Inadvertently show pure friendship. If friendship is an evergreen tree, it must be watered by a clear spring from the heart; If friendship is an unbeaten flower, then it must be the rising sun in my heart. Suddenly, I felt a warm current flowing through my body.
A ray of soft moonlight shone through the window and landed on the windowsill, as if it were plated with silver. An adult woman is leading a child on the road, and the child's immature voice rings in my ear through the window: "Teacher, thank you for correcting my composition and taking me home so late. Teacher, why did you do this? " "Because I love you!" The woman fondly touched the child's head and led her by the hand. Teacher's love is selfless dedication to others. Flowers withered, but left a wisp of fragrance; The candle burned out, but it left a bright light; The thunderstorm passed, but colorful neon lights were left behind. Suddenly, I was moved to tears.
On the long road of life, our young minds have to load too much, learn to learn, learn to face setbacks and learn to enjoy life ... but please don't forget a compulsory course for young people-learn to discover and experience love.
Teacher zw.Liuxue86.com commented:
This essay is "scattered in form and gathered in spirit", which has a strong ability to control the article, and the whole article is completed in one go. The moment of love in the article is fixed in the author's mind: the love between mother and child is between merciless hands, the love between friends is between girls' laughter, and the love between teachers and students is between students' gratitude to their teachers. The article is full of wishes, and the lines reveal the delicacy of your thoughts and feelings. I hope you will make persistent efforts in your future writing and form a landscape of your own!
Love in the soul is like water in the soul of a fish, flowers in the soul of a bee, blue sky in the soul of an eagle, and you in my soul!
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When I was a child, I didn't know grandma's history of aggression, and I didn't know how lonely and helpless you were. You are far away from me, and you are a stranger to me.
I was lucky enough to visit your former residence, the Summer Palace in Beijing this year, and I seemed to see you.
The famous Royal Garden, covering an area of more than 350 hectares, condenses the most representative scenic spots in China, and consists of sweat, tears and blood of countless people.
You are the crystallization of art and the treasure of the world! You have magnificent palaces and exquisite pavilions; You have an active market and rural scenery ... walking in it is like traveling around and enjoying Chinese and foreign places of interest; Wandering in the meantime, as if in a dream, unable to extricate themselves!
Inadvertently, my hand touched your broken arm and foot, and a burst of heartache swept over my heart and swept my whole body.
10.6, these hateful robbers ran roughshod over the territory of China and did whatever they wanted. They broke into Yuanmingyuan, plundered all the treasures in the garden and wantonly destroyed them. What can be broken and what can be destroyed ... In order to destroy the criminal evidence, more than 3,000 people were ordered to set fire to the garden. The fire burned for three days and nights, and smoke enveloped the whole of Beijing and filled the hearts of all China people. In this way, a treasure house of world culture was destroyed under the hateful clutches of the invaders.
Walking out the door and facing you, my heart can't be calm for a long time. Now I understand grandma's excitement when she talks about you, because the scar that goes deep into the bone marrow has cast you into our souls! Although the scar has formed a scab, but it will not be smooth, it has been deeply branded in our hearts-China people! Even if one day, we are far away in the end of the world, wandering in its corner, the same, or that red heart!
China, I have you in my soul!
Teacher zw.Liuxue86.com commented:
The article begins with a topic and the language is impassioned, which can arouse readers' thinking. The article has clear clues and prominent themes, and is closely related to "love in the depths of the soul". The content of the article is novel, the structure is reasonable, it is fluent and coherent, and the ending is just right.
Love your friend deeply, don't cry, let me gently hold your face, dry your tears, and listen to me tell you gently. ...
I know your suffering, your family is in decline, your parents are unemployed, and your family can't make ends meet. You are deeply worried and anxious about these, and you are worried that if you fail the college entrance examination this year, your family will survive that long year. As a result, you study hard and review hard, but tears always fall from your eyes.
Why can't you get good grades in the exam after working so hard? Why can't you do a problem that you can't do ten times and others do it once? Why can someone get laurels and honors easily?
It's not fair! You vent your dissatisfaction and resentment in front of me. I just want you to listen to other people's stories.
Athletes in Paralympic Games have training experiences that ordinary people can't understand: swimmers with broken arms can only hit the timer with their heads; Tennis players with severe disabilities can also reach the final of the Paralympic Games with broken arms; Basketball players who can't walk will always have high morale on the court. ...
Is life fair to them?
Van Gogh, a European artist, has unparalleled talent but can only live in a simple country, but he is not depressed. That sunflower is a symbol of his spirit. Brilliant and hot, warm and dazzling, the golden sunflower contains his infinite love for life, and how high the soul can be compared with the sage!
Did he ever ask if life was fair? There is also a genius in Europe named Galois, who has extraordinary attainments in mathematics. However, his three papers have not been taken seriously, and that brilliant article can only endure the fate of being discarded as garbage. Galois didn't lose heart. He arranged all these things in detail and gave them to a friend for safekeeping. He believes that his efforts will get due respect one day. At the age of 20, Galois died early because of an accident, and later mathematicians lamented that his death had slowed down the development of mathematics for at least decades.
After listening to so much, I believe you have understood that no one is born with everything, and everyone is incomplete, but as long as your mind is not incomplete, you will be able to welcome the day when spring blossoms.
Teacher zw.Liuxue86.com commented:
This article is shocking to read, but fortunately, I can understand how to love life through it. "That golden sunflower contains his infinite love for life. What kind of soul height can be comparable to a saint? " This is worthy of recognition.
Mother's love My mother is a doctor. She has a Zhang Yuanyuan face, a pair of big eyes embedded in her face, a pair of glasses on her high nose, and her mouth slightly upturned. She looks like a Maitreya.
My mother is busy taking care of patients in the hospital every day. She went to work early in the morning and came back late at night. She hurried home from work to do housework, clean the room, mop the floor, buy food and cook, and supervise my homework every day. Once I found a mistake, she asked me to correct it in time and urged me to review what I had learned recently every once in a while. My mother will take the initiative to buy me books and periodicals related to my study. I often buy some extra-curricular books to cultivate my reading habits and interests. My mother gave me a library card and read an extracurricular book every week. Now I have a good academic record and like reading books very much. I have finished reading 42 stories about Cpaing, which are very interesting. Uncle Zheng's imagination is really rich! I also like dancing very much. My mother signed me up for a dance class. I practice dancing every Sunday afternoon. I want to be an excellent dancer when I grow up.
In life, my mother also cares about me. In order to make me eat well, she cooks for me in different ways every day, paying great attention to nutrition collocation. I remember once, I was sick and rested at home. I had a high fever of 40 degrees in the afternoon. My grandmother called my mother at once. When my mother found out, she drove back soon and bought me medicine to reduce the fever. However, after taking the medicine, the fever did not go back, and I was very confused. At that time, my mother was almost crying, and she quickly sent me to the hospital for infusion. It was over 10 at night after infusion, and the fever was gone. I feel much better, but my mother hasn't had dinner yet.
I have grown up now, and my mother still takes care of me. I also understand that my mother's strictness, love and nagging are all for my own good. I will study hard and be a good boy who is obedient, sensible, conscientious and open-minded. Let my mother trust me and work with peace of mind.
Teacher zw.Liuxue86.com commented:
This is an article about people. The little author described my mother's care and love for me from two aspects: study and life. The article comes from life. Although the language is not very beautiful, it is true and simple, and it is well written.
Everyone gives a little love "love", a word with few strokes but profound meaning, like a ray of warm sunshine in the cold winter, shining into people's lives and hearts.
If everyone can give a little love, will there be a merciless tragedy in the world? Don't! Tragedy doesn't happen, you know: sunshine always melts ice and snow.
Do you know Uncle Guo, the "modern living Lei Feng"? For more than 30 years, he has been proud that he is a descendant of Lei Feng, helping others without asking for anything in return. In the case that family life is not rich or even poor, we have donated more than RMB100000 to Project Hope, and subsidized 180 poor students before and after, sending them a vision for the future and letting them bathe in the sunshine of love. At that time, the total monthly income of him and his wife was less than that of 600 yuan. In order to help children in poor mountainous areas, today, their family of three still lives in a white-gray hut less than four square meters.
Some people will ask: What is love? I will answer: selfless dedication like uncle Guo, that is love! Seeing people in need, it is also love to lend a helping hand decisively! Love is a ballad floating in the night sky, which brings solace to the lonely people: an old man, with his children crossing the ocean and alone in China. When he saw an unknown woman adding sugar to his coffee and slowly stirring it, his heart was full of warmth. Undoubtedly, this woman also gave the elderly sincere care and love.
A small act of kindness will affect a person's heart.
Love is a seed, and love is a fruit. When you scatter the seeds of love far away, you will smell the fragrance of love.
Love is a beautiful ballad, which makes bored people feel the happiness of life and lonely people enjoy the nourishment of their hearts.
Love is a sweet spring, which makes unfortunate people forget the bitterness of life.
Even the love that each of us can give may be just a drop in the ocean for the vast number of people in need, and it will converge into an endless ocean like a trickle. Let's all give our love and live together in a world full of love!
Teacher zw.Liuxue86.com commented:
This is an argumentative essay written by a junior one student. The title of the article is "Everyone gives a little love". The viewpoint is clear, the argumentation level is clear, the structure is clear, the thinking is simple and intriguing, the language is well-founded, the power is strong, and the literary talent is vivid.