1.① The "ugly woman" who was discriminated against and brewing revenge ② saw a psychiatrist and was influenced by Mr. ③' s charity.
2. Combine the context, use your imagination, imitate the tone of the psychological teacher, and enlighten the ugly girl.
2. The sunshine is warm and the smile is warm. I believe that my smile can affect the people around me.
3. Why is my husband "I" not proud but ashamed in paragraph 9?
3. lament your incompetence and attack social injustice.
Read the whole article and talk about your understanding of the meaning of the topic "melting snow in the palm of your hand"
4. A little warm, but very powerful.
Ask for an original composition of 900 words, entitled "Melting the Snow in the Palm", and the style is not limited! ! At that time, Ding Limei's family was really poor. Her father died of illness, her mother was fired, and her family was in turmoil.
(Reading Analysis) This is a topic with profound implications, but it leaves a lot of imagination for readers, such as warmth and melting.
The background of the event explained in the first paragraph of the article makes us understand that the author wants to write a warm truth through one thing.
The foreshadowing at the beginning of the article laid the touching tone of the article.
In winter, snowflakes float very close.
She really wants a warm down jacket to wrap herself up.
But looking at her mother's sad face, she put this desire into her stomach.
She wore a washed old cotton-padded coat to school, shivering with cold all the way.
She remembered Andersen's fairy tale The Little Match Girl, and she thought that if only she had a match to burn.
She is really, really cold.
(Reading Analysis) The main writing technique used in this article is psychological description.
Psychological description can further render the atmosphere of the article and people's emotions, and best reflect what the author wants to express.
Turning over the stout buttonwood tree on campus, a tree with silver flowers reflects a beautiful world.
She just stood and watched. The world is beautiful, but the cold is boring.
Suddenly, the young Chinese teacher came face to face. Seeing her, I was slightly stunned and asked, "Why are you wearing so little on such a cold day?" Look, your lips are purple with cold.
"She nervously replied," I'm not cold.
"Turn round and then flee, escape, crooked.
She is a child with strong self-esteem, and she is really afraid of being caught a glimpse of her poverty.
(Reading Analysis) The cold world is also beautiful. For the protagonist who has no money to buy cotton-padded clothes, it is hard to say.
The contrast between beauty and helplessness strengthens the touching atmosphere of the article.
The description of this dialogue accurately depicts the character's character.
In Chinese class, she took out her textbook and prepared to take notes.
The Chinese teacher suddenly announced: "In this class, we are going to have a scenery description competition to write about the snow outside.
There are generous prizes waiting for you.
"Exploded the pot in the classroom, the students were twittering with excitement, and everyone's nerves were guessing privately about the prize. What would it be? Soon, the students finished writing, and everyone used up their own good words and sentences.
She wrote it, too, but it was boring. She wrote: "Snow is beautiful and cold.
"She didn't expect to win the prize. She thought it was a distant thing, because her grades were always unremarkable.
Coupled with her poor family, she feels inferior to people with self-esteem, and she closes herself in an isolated world.
(Reading analysis) The use of characters' language and movements has further deepened readers' impression of characters: enthusiastic and understanding Chinese teachers; A sensitive hero with a rich inner world.
Another day, when writing a composition, she was surprised to see that the Chinese teacher approved a sentence at the back of her composition: "Snow will quietly melt into warm water in the palm of your hand."
"There is temperature, let her warm.
To her even more surprise, she won the first prize in the competition.
There is only one first prize, two second prizes and three third prizes.
The prize was moved to the podium. The first prize is a beautiful hat and scarf, and a pair of thick cotton gloves.
The second prize is a scarf and the third prize is a glove.
In the warm applause, she blushed and took her prize from the Chinese teacher.
She felt that the snow in a corner of her heart melted quietly, nourishing and warming her heart.
That winter, she wore that hat, wrapped in that big scarf and wore that pair of cotton gloves, and the cold never attacked her again.
She spent a winter safely until spring bloomed.
(Reading analysis) "This sentence has a temperature", using the writing technique of synaesthesia.
Is to put the temperature that life can feel on inanimate words.
Synaesthesia, a writing technique, can make everything be injected with the power of life and the taste of emotion.
This passage does not make clear the Chinese teacher's good intentions, nor does it describe the author's gratitude too much. On the contrary, such a faint narrative is even more touching.
From this, we can see that moving does not have to be expressed in slogan language, but in a perceptual style, directly expressed in the event, sometimes more strongly.
Later, she went to college and graduated from work.
With enough money, she can enjoy life comfortably.
Friends invited her to travel, but she didn't go, but she ran to the welfare home again and again and brought gifts.
Unlike others, when she got there, she left the gift and ate it. Instead, she gathered the children together and gently said to them, "Come on, babies, let's play a game.
"Her games are varied, sometimes riddles, sometimes reciting Tang poems, sometimes arithmetic, and sometimes hide and seek.
The child who wins the game will get her prizes-clothes, shoes, books, etc. These are what children need.
She made them feel that it was not charity, but the reward they deserved.
Warmth is like snow melting in the palm of your hand, quietly melting in the humble heart of a child.
(Reading Analysis) Love can be transmitted.
The author expressed this view with facts.
At the end, the author finally points out the beauty of this love-not charity, but return.
But when the protagonist conveys this love, it is pointed out that it is more natural and not rigid.
It seems that writing, don't rush to express your opinions, you must have a plan in your mind to make the article more beautiful.
Writing enlightenment counseling: 1, if you want to arouse readers' * * *, you don't have to express your views clearly. It may be better to infect readers with real narratives.
Of course, such a narrative should not be like "Plain Water", but should be as good at making full use of the foreshadowing of events, the psychology, language, behavior and flexible rhetoric of the characters as the author.
2. The choice of psychological description and language behavior should fully revolve around the center of the author's expression, which is very painstaking. It does not mean that the article will be vivid with psychological description and dialogue description.
Send you a cup of tea: there is a sun in your heart, and it will become brilliant no matter how gloomy it is.
It is best to illustrate homework help's 1 with concrete examples. The author described three short stories in the article, please summarize them in concise language. 1.① Being discriminated against, the "ugly girl" is brewing revenge. (2) seeing a psychiatrist and being influenced by Mr. (3) to give alms. 2. Combine the context, use your imagination, imitate the tone of the psychological teacher, and enlighten the ugly girl. 2.3. lament your incompetence and attack social injustice. Read through the whole article and talk about your understanding of the meaning of the topic "Melting snow in the palm". 4. A little warmth is powerful.
What is the effect of summarizing the main content of the article (about 80 words) in the first person paragraph in the palm of your hand? Try to find out the profound meaning of the following sentences and emphasize the words.
Turn and run away, the figure of running away, crooked.
Talk about the feeling that "she" won the first prize in Contact.
Please write the last sentence of the article about beauty.
Answer: 1.
Pointing to her family is an invisible help to the poor, paving the way for later Chinese teachers.
2。
"slanting" only writes her winter snow in a cold and silent way, and writes that she is afraid that the teacher will catch a glimpse of her inferiority and poverty panic.
Joy, pride and gratitude in return are complicated.
(reasonable) 4.
Sublimate the metaphor of the central image of the article and write about children's invisible enthusiasm to gradually change their inferiority complex.
1, combined with the content of the article, talk about the topic ",which means palm snow".
2. "The cold attacked her". What role does this sentence play in the article? 3. Analyze the changes and reasons of girls' personality before and after.
4, "put thick campus trees, sycamore trees, silver flowers, shake the world.
"This sentence is _ _ _ _ _? What is the role of? 5. This article has a beautiful language. Please find one you like and appreciate.
6, in the emotional article.
After reading this article, what inspiration do you have? Please talk about it.
Reference answer: 1, pun intended.
It means that the teacher helped the girl with silent love, warmed her cold heart and protected her self-esteem. Love is a kind of silent communication.
2, content: refers to the cotton-padded clothes to help girls resist the cold body, that is, girls wrapped in the cotton teacher's love and warm heart.
Structure: The little girl below is ready for a series of exercises.
3. Inferiority, indifference and self-esteem, self-confidence, warmth and concern.
Reason: Because of unattractive grades, poor family and low self-esteem, I closed myself in an isolated world.
Later, because the teacher once set up the first prize in the composition contest, she helped her teacher to love and warm her heart with her heart, let her know how to love and learn to love.
4. The scene described in Scenery is in sharp contrast with the desolation and loneliness caused by girls' inferiority and indifference.
5. For example: "In a corner, she felt that the snow in her heart was quietly melting away from her moist and warm heart.
Metaphorical rhetoric, subtle and ingenious explanation, careful teachers love girls who warm a lonely heart because of inferiority.
6. Focus on how to help others write.
(The picture is for reference only) Ding Limei's answer to "Melting Snow in the Palm". Talk about women in combination with the content of the article ...
The girl's personality has changed from self-esteem, inferiority and indifference to self-confidence, enthusiasm and love.
Reasons for personality change: Because her grades have been unremarkable and her family is poor, she has self-esteem and inferiority, and closes herself in an isolated world.
Later, because the teacher helped her silently by setting an essay contest prize, the teacher's careful love warmed her heart and made her understand and learn love.
The full text of Ding Limei's Snow Melting in the Palm is as follows: At that time, her family was really poor, her father died of illness, her mother was laid off, and her family was in turmoil.
In winter, snowflakes float very close.
She really wants a warm down jacket to wrap herself up.
But looking at her mother's sad face, she put this desire into her stomach.
She wore a washed old cotton-padded coat to school, shivering with cold all the way.
Turning over the stout buttonwood tree on campus, a tree with silver flowers reflects a beautiful world.
She just stood and watched. The world is beautiful, but the cold is boring.
Suddenly, the young Chinese teacher came face to face. Seeing her, I was slightly stunned and asked, "Why are you wearing so little on such a cold day?" Look, your lips are purple with cold.
"She replied nervously," I'm not cold.
"Turn round and then flee, escape, crooked.
She is a child with strong self-esteem, and she is really afraid of being caught a glimpse of her poverty.
In Chinese class, she took out her textbook and prepared to take notes.
The Chinese teacher suddenly announced: "In this class, we are going to have a scenery description competition to write about the snow outside.
There are generous prizes waiting for you.
"Exploded the pot in the classroom, the students were twittering with excitement, and everyone's nerves were guessing privately about the prize. What would it be? Soon, the students finished writing, and everyone used up their own good words and sentences.
She wrote it, too, but it was boring. She wrote: "Snow is beautiful and cold.
"She didn't expect to win the prize. She thought it was a distant thing, because her grades were always unremarkable.
Coupled with her poor family, she feels inferior to people with self-esteem, and she closes herself in an isolated world.
Another day, when writing a composition, she was surprised to see that the Chinese teacher approved a sentence at the back of her composition: "Snow will quietly melt into warm water in the palm of your hand."
"There is temperature, let her warm.
To her even more surprise, she won the first prize in the competition.
There is only one first prize, two second prizes and three third prizes.
The prize was moved to the podium. The first prize is a beautiful hat and scarf, and a pair of thick cotton gloves.
The second prize is a scarf and the third prize is a glove.
In the warm applause, she blushed and took her prize from the Chinese teacher.
She felt that the snow in a corner of her heart melted quietly, nourishing and warming her heart.
That winter, she wore that hat, wrapped in that big scarf and wore that pair of cotton gloves. The cold never attacked her again.
She spent a winter safely until spring bloomed.
Later, she went to college and graduated from work.
With enough money, she can enjoy life comfortably.
Friends invited her to travel, but she didn't go, but she ran to the welfare home again and again and brought gifts.
Unlike others, when she got there, she left the gift and ate it. Instead, she gathered the children together and gently said to them, "Come on, babies, let's play a game.
"Her games are varied, sometimes riddles, sometimes reciting Tang poems, sometimes arithmetic, and sometimes hide and seek.
The child who wins the game will get her prizes-clothes, shoes, books, etc. These are what children need.
She made them feel that it was not charity, but the reward they deserved.
Warmth is like snow melting in the palm of your hand, quietly melting in the humble heart of a child.
Read "Melting Snow in the Palm" to complete the exercise. Reference answer: 1. The Chinese teacher organized a special composition contest to help her, and specially let her win the first prize and prize-keeping out the cold, which not only protected her self-esteem but also warmed her heart.
(2) After she went to work, she returned to the society with gratitude. Like her teacher, she helped the children in the welfare home with rewards and let the warmth quietly blend into their humble hearts.
Think about some tips: summarize what two people have done to warm people's hearts. This question mainly examines generalization ability.
2.① Self-esteem and inferiority are contradictory. Because her family is poor, she wears very little, and the cold invades her bones. She doesn't want to admit her teacher's concern because she is afraid that poverty will be known to others. On the surface, it is self-esteem, but in fact it is inferiority. It is this inferiority complex that makes her close herself up and feel lonely and cold.
The teacher's love quietly melted her humble heart, and she enjoyed the warmth of love.
Train of thought: This question examines the meaning and function of important sentences in the context, grasps the key words, and understands them in combination with the context and meaning.
In order to help her keep out the cold and overcome her inferiority complex, the Chinese teacher adopted this method.
This is a good practice, which not only helped her skillfully in material matters, but also encouraged her spiritually.
Tips for thinking about key points.
4. It should be her.
Because "melting snow in the palm" is hereditary, she got special care from the teacher and passed this care on to others. The article revolves around her from beginning to end.
"Melting snow in the palm" is not only a clue that runs through the whole paper, but also the theme that the author tries to eulogize.
Tips for thinking points: this question mainly examines students' understanding and reading ability of the text.
The former question focuses on the relevance of the two stories; The latter question can be analyzed by combining the role of "melting snow in the palm of your hand" in the story, the theme of the article and your own reading experience.
5. Example: The world is popular with the strong and the superman. Those small people who are as small as ants and as fragile as glass need sharp eyes and strong hands to lead them out of the predicament.
Please don't turn your back and stretch out a hand, which can give each other a spring and let a heart recover slowly; A warm look, a gentle encouragement, and a small action are enough to turn a bee into a butterfly and dance, and become a green mountain and green water in a person's heart.
People with self-esteem and inferiority need spiritual care, and material care should be carried out simultaneously with spiritual care.
A person's heart needs warmth, just like snow melting in the palm of his hand and dripping crystal.
Tips: This topic mainly examines students' reading feeling and perception ability, and the foothold should be how to use appropriate methods to better care for others, better repay the society, and make contributions to building a warm and harmonious society without hurting the self-esteem of the helped.
The premise of the answer is to read and understand the text.
How to write an argumentative essay 1 What is the expression effect of the first paragraph of the full text? 2. Try to find out the profound meaning of the words with bullets in the following sentences.
Turned and fled, the figure of escape, crooked.
Contact the context and talk about her mood when she won the first prize.
Please write the beauty of the last sentence of the article.
Answer: 1. Point out the poverty of her family, and pave the way for the invisible help of the Chinese teacher later.
The word "crooked" not only describes her cold and silent mood in the winter snow, but also describes her fear that the teacher will catch a glimpse of her poverty, panic and inferiority.
3. The joy, pride, gratitude and other complicated feelings of being rewarded.
(reasonable) 4. Sublimate the article center; A vivid metaphor shows that children have gradually changed their inferiority in invisible warmth.
1, combined with the content of the article, talk about the significance of the topic "melting snow in the palm".
2. What is the function of the sentence "The cold never attacked her again" in the text? 3. Combining with the article, analyze the changes and reasons of girls' personality.
4. "Around the stout buttonwood tree on campus, a tree of silver flowers reflects a beautiful world.
"This sentence belongs to _ _ _ _ _ description? What's the role? The language of this article is beautiful. Please find a sentence you like and enjoy it.
6, this article is expensive in emotional people.
What kind of inspiration did you get after reading this article? Please speak.
Reference answer: 1, pun intended.
It not only means that the teacher warms the girl's cold heart with silent love, but also protects the girl's self-esteem, and it also means that love will be passed on silently.
2. Content: It not only means that cotton-padded clothes help girls resist the cold, but also means that cotton-padded clothes wrap the teacher's love and warm the girl's heart.
Structurally: it paved the way for a series of practices of the little girl below or laid the groundwork.
3. From self-esteem, inferiority and indifference to self-confidence, enthusiasm and love.
Reason: Because her grades have never been taken seriously, and her family is poor, she has self-esteem and inferiority, and closes herself in an isolated world.
Later, because the teacher helped her silently by setting an essay contest prize, the teacher's careful love warmed her heart and made her understand and learn love.
4. The description of the scenery compares the desolation and loneliness of the girl due to inferiority and cold with the beauty of the scenery.
5. Example: "She feels that the snow in a corner of her heart has quietly melted, moistened and warmed her heart.
This sentence uses figurative rhetoric and subtle and ingenious explanation. The teacher's careful love warms the girl's lonely heart closed up because of her inferiority complex.
6, around how to help others write.
Really? 1. The author described three short stories in the article, please summarize them in concise language. 1.① The "ugly girl" who was discriminated against and brewing revenge ② saw a psychiatrist and was influenced by Mr. ③' s charity. 2. Combine the context, use your imagination, imitate the tone of the psychological teacher, and enlighten the ugly girl.
2. The sun shines warmly on your body and your smile is warm. I believe that my smile can affect the people around me. 3. Why is my husband "not complacent, but ashamed?" 3. lament your incompetence and attack social injustice. Read through the whole article and talk about your understanding of the meaning of the topic "Melting snow in the palm".
4. A little warm, but very powerful. There is also fresh water OR2 1 on the seabed. The word "stress" in the underlined sentence in the second paragraph is concise and accurate. Please analyze it in detail.
22. Why did the Chinese teacher determine "Snow is Beautiful and Cold" described by "She" as the only first prize? 23. The image of the Chinese teacher in the selected text is vivid. Please analyze what kind of person the Chinese teacher is based on the selected text.
In paragraph (10), "she" went to the welfare home again and again to play games with the children and give them prizes. Why? 25. The topic of the selected article "Melting the snow in the palm of your hand" is metaphorical. Please contact the full text to talk about the meaning of "melting snow in the palm"
Answer, answer and answer 2 1. The word "stress" means that "she" knows the poverty at home, understands her mother's sadness, forcibly suppresses her inner desires and helps her family to decompress.
22.( 1) This sentence describes "her" own feelings, with simple and natural words and certain philosophy.
(2) It reflects the Chinese teacher's concern and love for her. At the same time, it also reflects the encouragement of the Chinese teacher.
23. Care for students; The educational method is scientific and ingenious.
24. Key points: ① Influenced by Chinese teachers; 2 Warm the child's heart with practical actions; 3 return to society; 25. "Melting snow in the palm" originally meant that the snow in the palm would slowly turn into water.
Here, teachers' subtle care for students can make students feel warm and encouraged.
Please indicate the source? It is best to illustrate the composition with concrete examples.