The most difficult thing in writing is "expressing true feelings" and "being natural in arts and sciences". As Su Dongpo said: Flowing clouds and flowing water, there is no definite quality at the beginning, and it stops at what should be done. This is also the new trend of Chinese composition scoring standard in college entrance examination in recent years.
As far as the topic itself is concerned, the depth and size of 201kloc-0/Shanghai college entrance examination Chinese composition topic are suitable. At the same time, two diametrically opposite famous sayings are listed, which are intended to break blind obedience and lead dialectical and independent thinking. Whether this article can be written in one go and put away freely is the touchstone of students' vision and realm.
Know what you are doing and write a chapter. To write this article well, we must understand the meaning of "will pass" and "will not pass". Behind it are several groups of relationships: temporality and eternity, phenomenon and essence, matter and spirit, origin and end. Phenomenal and material things are often like passing clouds, which is the "end"; On the other hand, the essential and spiritual thing is "Ben", which is often eternal and does not repeat itself from time to time. Before writing, you should make a good judgment of facts and values: what will pass, what will not pass, and why? What should let bygones be bygones, what must be remembered forever, and why?
On the premise of clear thinking, it is best to concretize abstract truth. You can cut in from the place you are most familiar with and feel. You can talk about personal failure and success, honor and shame, and you can also talk about the disaster and revitalization of the country. It can be written in a wide range. So when I get the topic, don't think about what form I write and how to fill in the "three paragraphs".
The first thing I want to think about is how I should look at this problem and from what angle. As long as it is sincere concern, not only the writing is hearty, but also the marking teacher can read it freely, and the score will naturally not be low.
There is no limit to the specific writing techniques. Can use electricity evenly; You can also focus on an interview and naturally point to the other side; You can also say one side in public and the other side in secret. But it is not appropriate to talk about one side without considering the other.
The examples reviewed here are all good articles for reasoning about specific images. What these authors have in common is that they read a lot, have a wide range of knowledge, have clear ideas, are full of humanistic care, and have no traces of "pretending to be empty" or "copying sets".
Now, some people, even some teachers, mistakenly think that as long as there is a set of routines and several modes to deal with the college entrance examination, it can become a panacea, such as what three stages, how to start, how to end and so on. In fact, this habit not only restricts the thinking of the article, but also is not conducive to the spiritual maturity of students, and it is even more impossible to get the favor of marking teachers in the college entrance examination.
In recent years, the relevant departments have begun to train marking teachers for the college entrance examination, and are trying to correct the "Chinese set" that is bent on getting high marks without making real efforts, so as to improve the fairness, reliability and validity of the examination, and strive to break the vicious circle of pattern training with the correct orientation and stop the rigid and opportunistic style of study. Nowadays, the fairness of marking is developing in a healthy direction. ks5u
When you are comfortable, you can distinguish yourself from others. It is hoped that teachers and students' daily composition training will take advantage of the situation, pay attention to reading accumulation, cultivate self-cultivation, encourage telling the truth, tell the truth and express their true feelings. Only in this way can we fundamentally win the examination room and truly become useful materials. In this way, the country is fortunate and the nation is fortunate!
The voice of reason will never be silent.
Sun Donghao? Shanghai Datong high school
German Chancellor Angela Merkel has apparently not escaped a storm recently: because she is studying Ben? After bin Laden was killed, he expressed "great" happiness in public, but was questioned by German intellectuals. Although she has apologized many times and hoped that the storm would pass quickly, it seems that it is still difficult to calm public anger, and even a judge is prepared to sue her for this. I didn't have the habit of taking exams at first.
As the leader of the Christian Democratic Party in Germany, Merkel should know that according to Christian teachings, any life is equivalent and should be respected, even if it is a criminal. It is precisely because she made such a seemingly small common sense mistake that even though she is an authoritative leader, she can't get past the bottom line of German intellectuals in the end. Bin Laden should be punished, but he cannot be "very" happy. Have original opinions. This is the "voice of reason". )
Still in Germany, still related to Merkel. Not long ago, the alleged plagiarism of the doctoral thesis of the former German defense minister caused an uproar in Germany. In order to protect this promising political star, Merkel argued that "we need politicians, not academic researchers", but 20,000 German professors signed a letter against it, directly expressing the attitude of German intellectuals. Fearing that this would be an excuse for academic misconduct in the future, they failed to give Merkel face again, and once again let her plan of "everything will pass" continue to be ruined. (profound insights, rich accumulation)
I am moved by the existence of such a group of rational voices, and I am glad that it is precisely because these intellectuals can adopt this "omnipotent" attitude towards any authority that they have finally achieved the fine tradition of rigor in German academic circles. (Theme debut, natural)
However, why does such a rational voice shine only in Germany? Has it ever been silent in the land of China, which has experienced five thousand years of glory and five thousand years of darkness? (With a stroke of a pen, I went to China)
Despite the political pressure at that time, Liang Sicheng "demolished a wall in Beijing, which is equivalent to ripping off one of mine."
The sound of landing today is still ringing in our ears. When we face the fact that Beijing is no different from other cities, when we see that the ancient city of Beijing only lives in words, photos and memories, we can't help but sigh Mr. Wang's foresight and admire his desperate rational cry. Perhaps political oppression once buried Mr. Wang's crying and let it all go, but the torture of history will never let the mistakes go. (Gu Nian Guo Yun, affectionate)
Looking back at history, when many rulers tried to bury the truth with authority and an attitude of "everything will pass", how many intellectuals resolutely stood up and answered with a sentence "everything will not pass". (sense of responsibility)
"Nothing will pass", which is the voice of reason and will never be silent; "Nothing will pass" is the cry of intellectuals and will never be silent! (Ask questions again, with personality and regularity)
As a quasi-intellectual of a society, when we face the ever-changing changes and development of the motherland, isn't it really sad if we turn a blind eye to the dark side of society and surrender to the superficial harmony, but dare not uncover more disharmonious elements hidden under this superficial harmony? (bearing)
I sincerely hope that when people of insight hear that "everything will pass", they can defend the truth with the chorus of "nothing will pass" in order to be firm.
Hold the last line. Because this is our responsibility, we are the conscience of society. (That's good)
Comments: What is the atmosphere and what is profound? Here it is! A middle school student looks at the world, looks back at history, pays attention to reality, is impartial, and emphatically analyzes how valuable it is that "the voice of reason will not pass"! Although the article focuses on "nothing will pass", it implies a criticism of some people's luck. This is a very attentive student. I am so happy after reading the article! There are people in our next generation!
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Zhang Shanghai Jiao Tong University Affiliated Middle School
David's inscription is: everything will pass. This is his courage to overcome suffering in the face of the past; Chekhov's inscription said: Nothing will pass. This is his deafening cry after understanding the changes of life.
In my opinion, facing directly is far from being as simple as experiencing. Face-to-face power is of great benefit to ourselves and future generations. (interjects)
In his later years, Ba Lao did not leave time for his retirement, but reflected on himself through Random Thoughts. He recalled the painful history of the Cultural Revolution, instead of criticizing the times, he regarded himself as the object of reflection, praising and stepping on his "scarred" soul. What's your comment on this answer? Put the comments away. _ 1 uevpeq { zoom: 1； Background color: # fff border: 0; margin-bottom: 10px； Fill: 30px 0 20px 42px Location: Relative. _ 1 uevpeq . EC- 184 1 { padding:20px 0 }。 _ 1 uevpeq . 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