Analysis: The key to material composition is to proceed from the material and make an argument and discussion closely. Material is the known condition of composition, the premise of thinking and the basis of argument. If you leave or deviate from the material, you can't judge the topic. The three images in the material: wind, helpless paper and flying butterfly, grasp the internal relationship among the three images: wind is the giver of force, paper and butterfly are the receivers of force, and the difference between paper and butterfly is that the paper is thin, pale, fragile and lifeless, and it can only be helplessly blown away by the wind and become the object at the mercy of the wind; Although the butterfly is thin, it has vitality and flying wings, which can hold itself in the wind and get rid of the control of the wind. Combined with real life, some symbolic or metaphorical meanings behind the three images are associated. We can associate one of the images, but it is best to combine several images and associate them into a whole according to their internal relations, thus revealing some truths of life. Lenovo can be placed in a specific field or scope of life, such as cultural construction, artistic pursuit, educational reform, personnel training, ideological and moral cultivation, the growth of personal wisdom and talent, and the independent development of the nation and even the country. "Wind", a common natural phenomenon, is everywhere and can be found without trace. The front is electricity, such as downwind, spring breeze, wind power (power generation) and so on. Can be used to refer to all kinds of beautiful times, favorable conditions, good social customs, ethos, etc. Negative is resistance, such as headwinds, cold winds, hurricanes (disasters), etc., which can be used to refer to all kinds of adversity, unfavorable conditions, bad social thoughts, bad style of work and so on. In the face of a good "wind", we should learn to follow suit, such as "a good wind will use its power to send me to the sky" and "be brave enough to take the lead in opening the atmosphere"; In the face of bad "wind", we should learn to resist (against) the wind, such as "letting the east, west, north and south wind" and "resisting the evil wind and keeping our true colors", instead of "blindly following the wind", "committing crimes against the wind" and "showing off" "Wind" can also be neutral, such as fashion and trend. Use well, benefit life, use badly, and endanger society. 2. "Helpless paper"-a common daily necessities, is light, thin, brittle, lifeless, brainless and "helpless" blown away, which makes people feel that people and things without ideological vitality, self-control and foundation can only be passively pushed around by external forces. Such as "without the support of life, you will always be passive", "you can't help yourself, you can only be controlled by others", "you can't dominate yourself, you can only be dominated by others", "you have no power and no potential" and "the unbearable lightness of life". The word "helplessness" can also be understood as the lack of external resources and external help, but it should mainly mean that there is no spiritual connotation. 3. "Flying butterfly"-a weak life is also thin and fragile, but it is light and agile, with life, soul and vitality, especially with a pair of beautiful wings, which can fly freely. When the wind comes, it can fold its wings and wait, or it can spread its wings and dance with the wind. It can dominate itself, control itself and control its own wind. The stunt of "flying" reminds people of those living, soulful, thoughtful, capable and powerful people. They can control their own thoughts and souls in the face of various external forces (including external environment and conditions), be independent, be independent, control their own motivation and direction, and not go with the flow. For example, "Only when you have vitality can you have determination", "Being tough in weakness depends on the vitality of life", "Dominating your destiny with your soul (thoughts and wisdom)", "People who strive for self-improvement will strive for self-improvement", "Prove their existence with strength" and "Practice a pair of excellent wings". 4. The relationship between wind, helpless paper and flying butterfly-wind and paper, wind and butterfly (external force and internal force, objective and subjective, etc. ), paper and butterflies (passive and active, passive and active, etc. ), thinking about the philosophical relationship between things, mutual opposition, unity of opposites, etc., and grasping the internal meaning of materials as a whole can make the argument more complete and the reasoning more dialectical. As far as the above four angles are concerned, it is difficult to conceive from the perspective of "wind" alone, and it is easy to make the mistake of generalizing. Focusing on "helpless paper" or "flying butterflies" will inevitably take the role of "wind" as a reference. If you lose the element of "wind", it is easy to lose the argument, and there is a gap between "paper" and "butterfly". In fact, it is not advisable to write from an image perspective in isolation. We must analyze the materials from the perspective of "universal connection" in order to make our thinking more accurate. A good composition emphasizes the unity of * * * and personality. The characteristic of * * * is that it is easy for everyone to think that the angle is general and the viewpoint is correct, which meets the requirements of normal conception, and it is not easy to make big deviations and mistakes, but it is also difficult to make a difference in conception; The characteristics of "personality" are: it is hard for everyone to think of it, with a special angle and a unique point of view. Some unexpected ideas are also prone to deviations and mistakes, which are risky and should be used with caution. A good way is to seek individuality in * * * and strive for the unity of the two. Only * * * sex, called ordinary, only personality called alternative. From the perspective of conception, structure, materials, language and other elements, the personality of conception comes from the accurate grasp of * * *, which is the personality refined on the basis of * * * *; Structurally, it focuses on the normality that conforms to reading habits, and strives to be clever between the beginning and end of the text and the transition, showing personality; The material should be typical, fresh and full of personality on the basis of correct, objective and appropriate basic requirements; On the basis of accuracy, fluency and standardization, language strives to show its individuality. Stylistic innovation should not blindly pursue the so-called personality. This composition highlights a common problem: the lack of effective analysis and accurate grasp of material images and their relations leads to inaccurate concepts of examination and discussion. It is embodied in the following aspects: 1. Random concepts, overhead discussions, and the suspicion of writing a set of questions-the most common concepts are: belief, belief, ideal, dream, goal, thought, perseverance, strength, self-esteem, wisdom, choice, pursuit, etc ... For example, on perseverance, 38 points, on ideals, 40 points. Faith is a rainbow, faith is a beautiful dream) 43 points, "Have a goal, be fearless" (the wind can take away the paper without direction, but it can't take away the butterfly flying forward-deliberately distorting the material and forcibly moving closer to the goal) 42 points, "The main load of the goal and motivation" (inexplicable) 43 points, and "Let the peanut root of faith sprout" 40 points. Fly over despair) 48 points, dream to fly 43 points, persevere 42 points, where is your dream, where is your hope 43 points, put wings on your dream 48 points, and put wings on it to be called "strong" 48 points. If you can naturally draw key concepts from the materials and discuss them closely, you can prove that they are correct, but you should use them carefully. For example, "people are there if you are interested" (butterflies are full of vitality, and a person with ambition can live "full of vitality") 52 points, "faith" (if you have faith, you can choose to stay or not to succumb to external interference; Faith is a spiritual pursuit; People should have their own principles and so on. ) 55 points "Only when you dream can you fly" (Total: Butterflies have the ability to fly and dream of flying farther, so they don't give in to the wind. Key points: you can fly only if you have a dream; With the ability to fly, you can fly higher. Ending: My future is not a dream. ) 52 minutes and 2 minutes. Subjective assumptions, unreasonable rhetoric, unreasonable words-helping others is strength, learn to give up ... For example, "I am always moved" is 35 points, "Stand high and see far" is 43 points, "For happiness" (a gust of wind blows pieces of paper and butterflies as light as a feather. Why are all the pieces of paper blown away and butterflies still flying freely in the sky? This is the power of happiness) 42 points, looking up to 42 points, foundation and development 46 points, helping others is a virtue 36 points, suffering consciousness (facing the wind, we should have suffering consciousness) 38 points, belief that the wind can't blow away (what makes the fate of a piece of paper different from that of a butterfly, I think it is faith) 42 points. Throwing away pieces of paper and butterflies actually describes hard rocks, water, leaves, etc ... For example, a small dream is powerful (a small snail, a slow but firm snail ...) 46 points away and stay (birdcage ... but rocks can't stop birds from flying ... but they can't stop the urge to run, but close one door ... but open another. Don't be a leaf, 46 points, "Hold on to the heart of hope" (the poem tells us that a butterfly has a heart of hope, and what it wants must be nectar in bud, so no matter how strong the wind is, it can't stop its longing), 42 points, "Try to fly" (how can it "try"), 48 points, "Hope is as light" (hope is like wild flowers and Gu Song). The third kind is like an eagle, we have to spread our wings like an eagle and fly in the wind) 45 points "Water can carry a boat, but it can also overturn it" 42 points "Flying in the wind" (adding the image of a bird) 5 1 4 points. Throw away the material, talk to yourself, or use the material as a dispensable ornament, lightly, lightly-such as "Taste Life" 42. 48 points, "Survival needs a skill" (the whole article did not mention the material) 46 points, "Power" (only the material at the end affects the pertinence of the discussion) 52 points, "We need a kind of concentration" (a director was jailed for accepting bribes because he was not focused; China, who is full of talents, has no Nobel Prize winner, and what is less is the determination in research; I didn't open the material until the end, and I couldn't see how the word "concentration" was derived from the material. If the word "determination" is introduced from the opening material, this article can hit the upper-middle level. 5. Insufficient, empty or outdated demonstration materials, or blindly piling up materials, lacking effective analysis and demonstration of materials, and lacking insights. Such articles are the most common-such as "Going against the wind, the best policy is also (the whole article is empty) 46 points" and "flower of life Blooming in the Wind" (Helen, Shi Tiesheng, Liu Wei, Liu Yong, Tao Qian, Xin Qiji, Zhu Ziqing ... There are too many lists to discuss well) 55 points. 6. Stiff thinking and blind innovation give people the feeling of making things up-for example, flying (my name is Fei, my name is Fei)) 50, one or two volumes, for example, "Control Your Internal Force" (how to meet the winds of various foreign cultures? First, we should strengthen the internal force of traditional culture, such as the essence of Confucianism; Second, make good use of the external forces of foreign cultures, such as Shanghai culture. ) 65 points "Mentality and Balance" (The wind blows the paper, but it can't blow the butterfly away, because it can fly, it has the will, and it wants to fly. Looking around the world, many thoughts beat our hearts like a breeze. We are tired and willing to go with the flow. But I know I can't. I must be an independent individual. I can't be dragged down by various things, so I need to stand in the wind and rain first, and then look north of Xiangjiang River. ..... The real balance is not in the form of indifference, but comes from a firm heart. When Fu Jian showed his flail to the public, he sang Ode to the Flail, which he wrote in prison ... Galileo muttered to himself on his deathbed: "The earth is still going around the sun" ... Martin Luther threw the Pope's edict into the fire and was wanted and hunted ... and a firm heart must be based on his own thoughts. Montaigne's essay: "Man's greatness lies in his manners and thoughts." ..... Persistence is painful, but it is an inner torture to hold an idea and not be understood. Su Shi was exiled in the Jianghu ... Van Gogh was poor and destitute ... Voltaire didn't look at his motherland in the end ...) 65 points of "A new life after the pupa is broken" (over the layers of wind and rain, many butterflies can finally fly with a smile, from celebrities such as Zhang Haidi and Helen to ordinary us. Without pupa-breaking training, how can a relaxed transformation last for a long time? ..... For us in senior three, the college entrance examination is a storm, and the process of breaking the pupa requires patience, perseverance and confidence. ) 60 points "Be a persistent butterfly" (sub-argument: Because you stick to your landing site, you don't go with the flow; Because we insist on the future direction, we don't want to be influenced by external forces; But some phenomena in reality are often disappointing: restlessness is everywhere, and people lose themselves; Ending: Leonardo da Vinci's godson in To Kill a Mockingbird: Never go to To Kill a Mockingbird, because it just sings to people with heart. I want to interpret, never try to change a butterfly in the wind, because it just finds its own direction, how happy it is! ) 60 points "Don't call me Cao" (with clear intention and expression) 60 points "Walking against the wind" (closely combined with real life) 60 points "Butterfly rhyme" (opening: "Little willow cotton blows on the branches", the wind blows off the weak posture of catkins; "Green, fat, red and thin", the wind suddenly blew off delicate flowers last night. "The wind can blow away helpless paper, but it can't blow away flying butterflies." ..... Butterfly rhyme makes a butterfly with ideological pursuit go against the wind and pursue its own beliefs. The Light of Butterfly-Zhu Guangya; Butterfly-Canadian Prime Minister jean chretien; The death of a butterfly-a person in the earthquake in Japan) 58 points "Watch" (She was watching, so she had hope and wings, but she never left. Watching is a choice ... watching is a realm ... Su Shi, Hawking and the ranger ... they are unfortunate, and the wind of life is blowing relentlessly, testing them and torturing them ... Look, it is actually a kind of personality persistence and a kind of spiritual persistence. ) 58 points "Don't go with the flow" (According to the spirit of Confucius, there are fewer "pure winds" and more "hidden rules" in today's society. Take Zhang Yunfei, an online celebrity, who paid a high-profile bribe of 9000 yuan, which attracted criticism and rejection. Take the TV program "Like Feng Lei" as an example. 58 points "The Weight of Life" (The meaning of life is far-reaching. Confucius ... with weight, we can build the thickness of life and plant seeds in our hearts, which are silent and fragrant; Hawking came back to life after he was paralyzed at the age of 17 ... so don't underestimate the value of life, because when he has life, he has strength, love and power. The weight of life is the smell of the wind. Even if the years fade and the fragrance is gone, it will remain in our hearts forever. Xu Zhimo "I left gently ..." I grew up gradually, and I know that the weight of life comes from thoughts; There is connotation and the thickness of life. Prosperity is exhausted, and the context of life is displayed one by one. Sow silently and blossom silently. ) 58 points "Flying Butterfly" (In any case, you must have your own ideas and choose your own direction, so that you will not be influenced by external forces and become the master of your own destiny. With the story that li jinxi asked three assistants to copy books and Lu Yao insisted on writing every day 16 hours) 56 points "Persistence" (The wind of modernization swept the city at its rapid speed ... So, the ancient city wall of Beijing disappeared and the quadrangles gradually faded out of people's sight ... However, the ancient towns in the south of the Yangtze River and Shanghai are trying to become flying butterflies, such as Zhou Libo's Shanghai style Qingkou and the World Expo. To be a flying butterfly, a city needs to stick to the original heart of traditional culture. ) 56 points "Learn to fly butterflies" (Helpless paper is blown by the breeze and floats everywhere; Flying butterflies face the strong wind and rush to the distance; Life chooses a person who has no talent, but his strength determines his fate) 54 points "Flying in Time" (feeling the prevalence of "wind", many people drift with the tide and have no judgment) 55 points for other topics and scores, such as "Let Life become a butterfly" 55 points "Survival of the fittest" 53 points "Good wind depends on strength" 54 points "Ren Er Shi" second, 55 points "Master" 56 points "Master of destiny" 55 points "Color of life" 55 points "Against the wind" 50 points "Faith is what the wind can't blow away" 50 points "A goal in life" 53 points "Dedicated to us who are about to take the college entrance examination" (The college entrance examination is a gust of wind, which can bring fragmentation and beautiful vision) 50 points: Flying to the other side of the goal 52. First of all, we should adapt ourselves to the living environment, and then find our own position) 565,438+0, the strength of life 50, divide setbacks into opportunities 565,438+0, and people should have their own opinions 565,438+0, the storm of life 50, self-reliance and self-reliance (positive Shi Tiesheng, negative Li, rich second generation) .56156.666666666665