Fan Wenyi:
This guide mainly puts forward suggestions on the first draft of the paper submitted last time.
Firstly, the overall framework and materials of the paper are affirmed. In addition, it is pointed out that the brackets are omitted in the first draft and the words of thanks should be placed after the bibliography.
Secondly, the language expressions in English abstracts are modified and polished, and the idiomatic expressions are pointed out. Finally, it is pointed out that there are grammatical errors such as singular and plural numbers and spelling mistakes in the paper, and it is required to read it several times to check and correct the grammatical errors.
Fan Wener:
The topic of this paper is meaningful. On the basis of absorbing academic research results, I have my own experience and put forward my own views. The argument is correct, the material is substantial, the narrative is clear and logical. Clear pronunciation and mellow voice are extremely smooth. Writing conforms to academic norms.
In the future, we should further sum up experience, compare music education modes and teach music better. The paper can be submitted on time, and after careful revision, it meets the requirements of undergraduate graduation thesis. The learned knowledge solves problems, and the obtained data is reasonable, the conclusion is correct, and there are innovative opinions. In addition, the format of the paper is correct, the text is standardized, the organization is clear and the language is fluent.
In the future, we should further sum up experience and compare moral education models, so that moral education can be carried out better. The paper can be submitted on time, and after careful revision, it meets the requirements of undergraduate graduation thesis.
Fan Wensan:
During the three-month graduation project, students can successfully complete the whole graduation project and thesis writing under the strict requirements of teachers. The program can run correctly, the interface is arranged reasonably and the paper meets the requirements.
In the whole process of graduation design, I have a correct attitude, study hard and arrange my time reasonably. I can get to the lab on time, and there is no reason to leave early or be late. Can basically complete the corresponding tasks at each stage, but also take the initiative to work overtime, so that time is tight before it is loose.
Of course, there are also some shortcomings and areas that need improvement. For example, the knowledge is not wide enough, the ability to deal with problems and apply knowledge needs to be improved, and it is impossible to actively communicate with teachers about the work process. I hope this student will pay attention to these problems in his future work or study and strive for greater improvement and progress.