I don't know if you told the teacher euphemistically when you sent the email before that you wanted him to modify it, or did you just send it? Did you pay a New Year call? If you haven't, ask by the way on the pretext of New Year's greetings. Blablabla The Year of the Sheep was a great success. I wonder if the teacher read your paper the other day. I think there are still many defects and I don't know how to modify them. Ask the teacher to take a look at it for me in a couple of days. I don't know if it's suitable. I'm sorry to bother you during the Spring Festival. Thank you for reading my email in your busy schedule. Happy New Year to you again! However, it is still the Spring Festival. If it's not urgent, it's better to wait for two days. In the process of "correction", it means that the two sides should be between people with high technical level, so it is not difficult to understand that it should be a contest between "masters". If it is communication between classmates and people at the same level, use "elegance" and "correction"-meaning * * * with appreciation, and the other party will point out different views on your work with appropriate sentences. The younger generation gives it to elders, students give it to teachers, beginners give it to experts, and authors give it to editors. It is more appropriate to use "teaching" and "teaching" because it means asking for advice with an open mind. This makes it easy for the other party to accept you ... hello, Mr. X! The paper has been published, but there are still many shortcomings. I hope the teacher will criticize and correct me.