The article must be targeted at the beginning, don't generalize. You can put forward your opinions at the beginning, but generally it is not recommended, because taking a position at the beginning may have these problems:

1, readers feel that the emergence of views is too arbitrary and unconvincing; There is nothing right or wrong here, mainly to make readers feel that this view is strongly supported;

If readers feel abrupt, they will question how the author got it.

The model essay is as follows:

Self-analysis is to analyze your strengths and weaknesses, and then develop your strengths and change your weaknesses. As for my own advantages and disadvantages, please listen to me slowly.

Advantages aside for the time being, after all, I am almost covered with shortcomings.

Disadvantages 1: like reading novels and comics; Risk index: three and a half stars; My parents think this is a big hidden danger, but I don't think it matters. Maybe I can write novels one day, but should I correct this shortcoming?

Disadvantage 2: I always want to whisper to my classmates before and after class; Risk index: four stars; This shortcoming must be corrected, or you may drop out of school because of this shortcoming in the future.

Disadvantage 3: arrogance; Risk index: four and a half stars; This thief is hard to change, because I will be arrogant as long as my scores surpass those who have surpassed me in the past, whether it is quizzes, monthly exams or final exams.

Disadvantage 4: laziness, this must be corrected, but it can't be corrected, which gives me a headache. I am basically too lazy to do anything that I am asked to do, so it is a bit troublesome to correct this shortcoming.

Writing here, one of my primary school classmates reminded me: "where do you have so many shortcomings?" You still have many advantages. " Yeah! Don't I also have some advantages? The following is …

Advantages 1: modesty; Praise index: three stars; This should be regarded as an advantage. After all, when I introduce myself to others, I often say that I am a fool.

Advantage 2: study well; Praise index: four stars, I think my study is still good. If Chinese is not included in each exam, I can get a full score of 120, and I can get a score of 100.

Advantage 3: Rich poetry storage (relative to Grade One); Praise index: six stars; Because I especially like learning poetry, reciting poetry and writing poetry, I can say that poetry is a rainbow in my life, and I hope to participate in China's good poetry in the future.

In fact, I still have many shortcomings that I haven't written down, but this is me, a junior high school student with more shortcomings than advantages.