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1. This paper organizes materials around …. The language is accurate, vivid and vivid, and the content is extremely rich and concrete. It is a successful work.

This article may not be particularly attractive in the story, but it is still a successful work. On the one hand, it depicts the characters well, and on the other hand, the language is vivid and rich, which plays a good role in expressing ideas.

This paper reflects the characteristics of … well, and profound themes and novel ideas complement each other.

4. The design of the work is ingenious, and the writing is concise and smooth. The imagination is bold, creative, novel and attractive to read.

5. The theme is concise, concentrated, profound, powerful and shocking.

6. The article is realistic, three-dimensional, readable and interesting. Fairy tales, with keen social insight, reflect the dark side of reality and vivid language, depict a series of greedy existence, which is profound.

7. The article is concise and the language is plain and simple.

8. The full-text narrative is concentrated, the language is concise and smooth, and the feelings are sincere and touching.

9. The full-text language is concise and the structure is natural. ... the article is well-structured and echoes from beginning to end.

10, the three major successes of this article are: first, paying attention to selecting the most beautiful fragments to write, second, using accurate words, and third, the structure of the article is compact.

1 1. Make things clear, use verbs correctly, and use metaphors appropriately and vividly. Make suggestions and get education from them after reading them.

12. This article expresses sincere praise for the beautiful mind with concrete examples, vivid and beautiful language and novel and unique writing style.

13. By enriching the characters' language and actions, the characters' ideological quality is set off. The article is reasonable in imagination, natural and vivid in narration, compact in structure, coherent in connection with nature and prominent in center.

14. The main features of this composition are concrete narration, true details, vivid description and sincere feelings, and the use of rhetorical devices such as metaphor and personification makes … very vivid and expresses … love for ….

15, the clue of the article is clear, the theme is prominent, and the poetic language at the beginning and end of the article is full of imagination and rhythmic beauty, which makes people want to read, love to read and reluctant to let go.

16, the article is not long, but the process is clearly described, the activities of the characters are also described in detail, authentic, vivid and interesting, the full text structure is compact and complete, and the writing style is smooth.

17, a series of verbs expressing the actions of characters are used accurately and well.

18, concise language, clear center, reasonable concept and clear writing level.

19, the center of the article is clear and the structure is complete.

This article shows readers with rich imagination and colorful language ...

2 1, the full text is hearty, full of joy and expectation, sincere and touching. At first, it was extraordinary.

22. The language is humorous and interesting, the plot arrangement is tortuous and vivid, and the first and last echoes are clever. Although the length of this article is short, the content is vivid and concrete, the paragraphs are clear and the language is easy to understand.

23. This article is based on real life, which is appropriate, innovative, clear, natural, interesting and readable.

24. It is really commendable to be able to write the inner activities of the characters very vividly and leave a deep impression on people.

25. There are many wonderful sentences in the full text, which add some literary interest to the article.

26, can lead to a reasonable imagination, reflect meaningful philosophy, ... The writing is smooth and concise, giving full play to one's imagination, which is a good article ... The article is elegant, fluent and coherent, especially the humor of the characters' language, coupled with the use of some subtle words, which invisibly adds a lot of interest to the article.

27. The article is vivid and sincere, especially the article about the right to use is very infectious and thought-provoking.

28. The material of this article is novel ... It is full of rural life and children's interest. It makes people feel very happy and comfortable after reading it.

29. This article takes … as a clue, which is clear and natural. At the same time, through the comparison of specific cases before and after. Attack ..., the language of the article is vivid and rich, and it is readable.

30. Simple and natural childlike innocence is reflected in the article, which makes the article exude a fresh and lively atmosphere.

3 1, the article is very convincing and thought-provoking. In writing, the plot is vivid and the article is magnificent, which is very instructive to read.

32. The vivid and detailed description of ... is one of the characteristics of this article, which also reflects the author's keen and meticulous observation. This is a major factor in the success of the article.

This article is a mature narrative work. The whole process of the experiment was shown in accurate and fluent language, which was full of ups and downs and interesting. The little author carefully observes and narrates in order.

34. The article is well-founded and convincing, highlighting the personality of the characters, natural context, clear organization, coordination from beginning to end, and finally pointing to the theme and highlighting the central idea.

35 ... it is required to express a philosophy through fictional stories.

36. On the basis of folklore, the article carries out reasonable imagination and vivid description, deduces wonderful fairy tales and makes them interesting to read.

The characteristics of this article can be summarized as cordial, warm and meaningful.

The ... described in the article is fresh, lively, cheerful and clear. The childlike innocence between the lines makes the article have vitality.

39. The content of this article is vivid and rich, the language is novel and refreshing, and the structure is unique and reasonable.

40. This is a very original … article with ingenious conception and simple and natural language.

4 1. Although it is a trivial matter, it is vividly described by the author, and an indispensable stroke at the end highlights the theme of the article. ——

42. The beginning is simple and natural, the structure is clear, and the psychological description is true, which reflects the author's good language control ability.

43. The full text has a lively rhythm and fresh language, and it is always full of humor and fun to read.

44. It is very characteristic to borrow scenery to express feelings and ask for things.

45. The process of this paper is concrete, clear and coherent. At the same time, the author added appropriate psychological description to fully express the author's feelings.

46. imaginative and innovative. Introduce yourself at the beginning, and introduce yourself below. In addition, the language of the article is concise and humorous.

47. The author is meticulous in observation and rich in imagination, and uses personification and metaphor to make it lively and arouse readers' interest.

48. The vivid description of details reveals the inner world of the characters in a useful way, which is the success of this paper.

49. The beginning of the article is very clear, which plays the role of general manager. The last few sentences show the author's lofty ideals and firm confidence in exploring the mysteries of science, which is inspiring.

50. Clever use of foreshadowing is a major feature of the article. The first paragraph of the article laid an excellent foundation for the development of the whole story. This idea is very clever and can be used for reference.

5 1. The words used in this article are accurate and rigorous, the language is plain and natural, and the use of rhetorical devices such as metaphor and personification makes the article even more icing on the cake.

52. You are very good at grasping the characteristics of things and describing them in detail, which shows that there is affection between writing and writing.

53. The article is narrated in children's language, which is natural and simple, just like a clear spring. The finish line played the role of finishing touch.

54. The plot is lively and interesting, the narrative is clear and complete, and it also shows the author's intelligence and wit, full of family life interest, and his writing is fluent and vivid.

55. The description of experimental phenomena can be pertinent, detailed and comprehensive. The article embodies the interest and knowledge of natural science and is very interesting to read.

This paper has three main advantages: 1 This paper can closely follow the requirements of the topic and write the process of … completely. 2. The structure is rigorous and focused. 3. The language is concise and fluent, and the beginning and end are natural and accurate.

57. This article adopts the first person writing, which makes … have great advantages, plays a good role in shaping the characters and showing the center, and is friendly, natural and credible to read. Clear thinking and lively rhythm.

58. The author observes … carefully, describes it delicately, uses vivid language and has novel expression.

59. The article ends with …, which is concise and full of charm.

60. The full-text language is vivid and accurate, and the plot is wonderful and tortuous, which seems to bring readers into a happy paradise and make people smile. The full text is easy to understand and interesting.