Ma Yingqiu from Shanxian No.1 Middle School
People have their own personality, and literature naturally has its own personality. It is said that literature is like a person. However, under the situation of long-term exam-oriented education, it is inevitable that there are thousands of people, and many students will dilute or even lose their individuality when writing. So every time I revise my composition, there are always something similar in appearance, which makes people feel boring. Then, how can we make students' compositions show bright spots, show their individuality and dance?
An emotion pour with personality.
Thomas Percy Nunn, a famous British educator, pointed out in his book Principles of Education that everyone "goes his own way according to his own nature and strength". For writing, expressing your true feelings means going your own way in your own way.
In the composition of college entrance examination in 1998, there is a phenomenon that a considerable number of students have experienced the baptism of wind and rain in the days after "losing their parents" and become tough and strong. I don't deny that some students really wrote their true feelings, but I believe it is more melodramatic, in order to gain the pity of the marking teacher and get high marks. The result is just the opposite. False, artificial and stereotyped "emotions" can only dilute their own personality and make readers feel bored and bored.
Comparatively speaking, only personal experience or personal experience can push away one's most brilliant emotional flower and show one's personality. Such as "Qiu Si". The author Shi Tiesheng lived to be "the most arrogant age, and suddenly his leg was disabled." Fear, pain and despair swept through, and the unforgettable experience made the author unable to help but write: "My temper became furious and unpredictable. Looking at the array facing north in the sky, I would suddenly smash the glass in front of me; Listening to Li Guyi's sweet singing, I will suddenly throw my things on the walls around me. " "I gave these two hateful legs a good beating and shouted,' What strength is there in my life!' ""concise words drained the pain and despair of a once proud young man. Suffering makes people grow. In the end, the hardships of life made him reborn like a phoenix. I think, through words, his tenacious personality left a deep impression on each of us.
2. Infiltrate the point of view of individuality
For an article, especially an argumentative essay, a personalized point of view will always shine and make people unforgettable. The "personal opinion" mentioned here does not require students to think in reverse when conceiving writing, but emphasizes that students should think independently and deeply and bloom their own sparks. Pascal, a western philosopher, once said: Man is a thinking reed. Then, without your unique thoughts, the composition will become an empty shell without soul. Only by thinking deeply can you make your article dazzling. Of course, the formation of personalized opinions can not be separated from their own experiences and the accumulation of daily life. Only by being a conscientious person can the article shine with the brilliance of reason.
Third, the use of personalized language.
The formation of language style is also a good means to publicize one's personality. Its use is like a tempting sauce in a big meal, which makes people taste it again and again. Mr. Zhu Ziqing's freshness and elegance, Mr. Li Guangtian's earthy flavor, Mr. Feng Zikai's religious sentiment and Mr. Yu's rich charm are all fascinating.
In a word, life is a kaleidoscope and writing is a hundred flowers garden. Only by having your own unique personality can you show your most beautiful self.
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