The good words of spring are anonymous.
2. How to write the first paragraph of the composition ● The lake whispers slightly in the dry grass, and the flapping sound of one or two ducklings comes from time to time in the distance, making the lake more lonely and deserted on a moonlit night.
Countless white sails, like a few white feathers, flutter gently and flutter in this golden sea. The sea is full of Ying Ying. In the sunset, the waves jumped like naughty children, and the water was golden.
The lake is hard, like a flawless jade, shining with beautiful luster. The lake is quiet, just like a mirror, clearly reflecting the blue sky, white clouds, red flowers and green trees.
The lake is covered with a mist like blue smoke. Looking at the Weishan in the distance, you can only vaguely recognize the gray mountain shadow. ● The spray is a wonder of the sea, but she is more like a dancer. She can make people forget their troubles and enjoy themselves.
● The sea water is so blue that people feel that the color of jadeite is too light and the color of sapphire is too deep, which is hard to describe even by a master. The sun shines on the sparkling lake, like a layer of shiny broken silver on the water surface, and like a crumpled green satin.
The good words of spring are anonymous. Please adopt it. Thank you.
3. When writing a composition, how to write the first paragraph to attract people? The beginning of the article is the first step of the whole article, which is closely related to the full text. We often say that "a good beginning is half the battle". A good beginning of an article can not only drive the whole article, make the writing ideas of the article smooth and fluent, but also capture the readers and be fascinating. So how to skillfully write the beginning of a composition? The following are my views on the beginning of the composition.
1, cut to the chase
Cut to the chase, that is, directly put pen to paper to buckle the topic, always taking the lead and moving the whole body, outlining everywhere. It is easier to make the center stand out at the beginning of the article, and it is easier for readers to grasp the main points, grasp the content and deeply understand the theme.
2, the beginning of the scene description method
Scenery description can render the atmosphere and promote the plot development; You can pave the way for the plot and export the following.
3. Poetry, lyrics, aphorisms, etc.
Cleverly quoting poems, lyrics and aphorisms related to the article as the beginning of the article can make the article vivid, readable and attract readers. Here, the little author skillfully quoted the lyrics, and the beginning of the poem not only added vividness to the article, but also played the role of literary eye.
4. Lyric opening method
This initial language often expresses some feelings, praise, sadness, excitement, or joy ... in the process of lyric, many rhetorical devices are often used.
5. Attract readers to ask questions
At the beginning of the composition, asking questions can not only start the following, but also attract readers, arouse their curiosity and make them read the following hungrily. This kind of question is simple and clear from the beginning, and then it is logical. Expressing from different angles not only broadens the thinking, but also attracts readers.
There are many ways to write at the beginning of the article. The clever writing at the beginning of a composition varies from person to person and from article to article. In the actual composition, we should choose the most suitable beginning from the overall idea and central idea of the article, so that our composition can take the first step of success.
How to write the first paragraph of a composition? The proposition should be novel.
The title is the eye of the article, and the original title is the beginning of writing a good composition. When training at ordinary times, teachers should make students pay attention to the importance of writing topics. Students should be encouraged to create novel composition topics as much as possible in order to strive for the first good impression of getting high marks in their compositions. For example, in the face of the topic of "one scene _ _ _ _ _ _ _", some students can give people a sense of freshness by filling in "embarrassment". If it is a material or topic composition, it is necessary to draw up a good topic on the premise of carefully reading the material, such as topic composition: literary works with a sense of plot are intoxicating; Beautiful campus songs make people relaxed and happy; Exciting and fierce sports competitions are exciting; Movies and TV shows full of true feelings make people feel sad ... Please choose a composition from the following questions, complete the topic and write an article of no less than 600 words. (1) Read _ _ _ _ _ _ I really _ _ _ _ (2) Listen to _ _ _ _ _ I really _ _ _ _ _ _ (3) Look at _ _ _ _ _ _ _. Students understood the meanings of "reading", "listening" and "watching" when they carefully analyzed the topic tips, so a candidate in Shaanxi planned to write "I am really obsessed with reading", which made the composition have a successful composition topic and left the first "full mark" impression in the eyes of the reviewers.
Second, the beginning should be attractive.
A good start has a touching effect, that is, "if she turns her head and smiles, a hundred spells will be cast." When writing a composition in the examination room, you should carefully write the beginning, take the first sentence and the first paragraph seriously, and it is best to write the opening paragraph on the manuscript paper first, and then experience it several times by yourself. If you can excite yourself, you will certainly touch others. For example, candidates write the beginning of "Life needs applause most": "Life needs applause most. Many people often sigh: bosom friends are hard to find. What is a bosom friend? Isn't a confidant in life a decision maker? " This is the beginning of a perfect composition, which can make you excited, just like opening a floodgate and letting your writing fall like a flood. "A good beginning is half the battle." Writing it at the beginning will leave the reader with the impression that "half the battle is over".
Third, the content should be true.
When conceiving the content, we should impress people with true feelings. Don't be fake, big and empty, and don't write things you don't understand. If you can't touch yourself, you won't touch others. Therefore, when choosing writing content, you should choose what you are touched by, often your own personal experience and personal witness, often some trivial events and details; Or published in a book that I have read and have a deep impression. When writing, you can use the old content from a new perspective. Write your true feelings, such as "an embarrassing scene". Candidates write a detail: in the corridor, they passed the teacher and wanted to say "good teacher" to the teacher, but they didn't say it at last. Facing the teacher's smile, they bowed their heads and left in a hurry, feeling extremely embarrassed. This is a real and touching little detail, which reveals the truth of the author and is the essence of the article. The details of true feelings constitute the flesh and blood of the article, which is an important part of a good composition and the key to a high score composition, because good details can impress readers.
Fourth, the structure should be innovative.
Careful layout, innovative structural framework, establish a perfect overall image in front of reviewers, and produce clear results. For example, repeated parallelism, diary style, script style, subtitle style, lens combination, question-and-answer style and applied style are all innovative structures, and this new framework is very conducive to obtaining excellent impression of exam composition. For example, when the examinee wrote Wu's Symptom Report, the composition was structured with "disease", "cause" and "prescription", which gave the examiner a novel sense of structure, so this composition got full marks in the examination room.
Five, the handwriting should be neat
The neat and fluent writing feels like stepping into a clean and tidy venue. Read a neatly written composition, such as the beautiful Luo Fu, so that "the tiller forgets to plow, and the hoe forgets to hoe". Neat writing is a good intuitive impression of the composition in the examination room for the examiners. Moreover, neat handwriting is also a sign of politeness. Writing neatly, just like dressing neatly when going out as a guest, is a sign of self-esteem and respect for others.
5. What is the best way to write the first paragraph of the composition? I will pull up the pig grass with my mother. The ground is very cold, and last night's dew is still hanging on the leaves. I pulled some in a hurry. We hurried home to feed the pigs, and the pigs began to hum. When more than a dozen pigs were placed up and down, their bellies growled. We cooked, ate and cleaned up. It's past eleven o'clock and the business hasn't started yet. Doing the same thing every day, just like showing a movie, how boring it is day after day, but my parents, my dear parents, get up early and get greedy every day for this family. Although ordinary, they see greatness in ordinary.
Seeing that the sunshine was not bad, I took out two bags of shredded radish from my room, about 150 kilograms. They are yellow, thin and dry. While sunbathing, I asked my mother, "How long has it been like this?" "That's not a day or two!" Really, I only remember that every time I went upstairs to do my homework after dinner, I asked my mother why she went. She said many times, "go and pull some radishes back to dry." It seems that as a member of my family and my parents' daughter, I am really irresponsible. I am ashamed of my previous ignorance.
I asked my mother, "With so many radishes, how many radishes does it take to sun so much?" Mother smiled and didn't forget to stop her work. She said, "Last time I weighed it, it took about 100 kg of live radish to make 5 kg." Oh, my god, I froze. What a sharp contrast! So you won't lose money if you sell it? What if you lose money? You can get at least 1000 yuan by selling these! Can make up for the family, and now there is a lot of pressure! Well, when I saw my parents trying to make money, I couldn't wait to split a penny in half. My heart is really mixed.
6. How to write the beginning of the first paragraph of the composition When writing in the examination room, you must write the opening paragraph, firmly grasp the reader's eye, and let the reader follow your thoughts involuntarily. Generally speaking, there are many ways to start, and one of them is the most important, that is: concise and clear, and quickly get to the topic. Please look at the opening skills of the full text of the senior high school entrance examination in recent years.
Tip 1: Design suspense to attract readers.
I'm dying-
I was lying in a hospital bed, surrounded by darkness, very quiet, and only my faint breathing could be heard in the huge room. Nurses only come in when taking medicine or giving injections, and seldom talk to me. I'm used to it. I won't complain too much, because I know I'm dying. I stared out of the window and told myself to face death calmly. (Feel the Beauty of Life, the perfect composition for the senior high school entrance examination in Shaanxi Province)
Tips: There is a suspense at the beginning of this article: "I'm going to die". So readers can't help but be attracted and think, how could he die? What happened to him? What will happen next? This series of questions naturally brings your eyes to the following, making you eager to know the following. This way of opening captures people's curiosity when reading, and it is well designed to attract readers to read.
Tip 2: Cut to the chase and make your point clear.
My friend, how do you feel when you see mountains of garbage, streams and rivers stinking and harmful gases poisoning people? At that time, I was so angry that I wanted to shout loudly: "Please pay attention to the living environment of human beings!" (selected from the full text of Guangdong senior high school entrance examination "I pay attention to human living environment")
Tips: You must clearly express your opinions when writing argumentative essays in the examination room. It is a common but practical method to come straight to the point and make a clear attitude when writing. At the beginning of this paper, the way of asking questions and answering questions is adopted, which is concise and powerful, and clearly shows my own views, laying the foundation for the later development.
When you are in pain, you will go home and vent in tears; heart
7. How to write the first paragraph of a composition, using parallelism is a good method.
But there are more ways to start a composition: 1. Go straight to the point at the beginning and point out the people, things and things related to the content. 2. Metaphor uses the metaphor of one thing to illustrate another truth.
3. At the beginning of the question, the article starts with the question to inspire people to think and stimulate readers' interest in reading. 4. Ask questions at the beginning of suspense, pose contradictions and set puzzles, but don't answer them, so as to stimulate readers' interest and curiosity.
5. At the beginning of the discussion, the article begins with an intriguing philosophical and knowledgeable language to clarify its own views, opinions or opinions, and leads to the following. 6. At the beginning of the lyric article, I expressed my love and hate for myself or the characters in my works, which infected the readers emotionally.
7. The beginning of the scenery blending article depicts a special atmosphere and emotional appeal, which covers the whole article and is introduced into the article. 8. Quoting the opening quote some famous words at the beginning of the article can enhance the persuasiveness of the article.
At the beginning of the classic composition ● "Famous mountains and rivers, small bridges and flowing water can be pleasant; Cicadas sing insects, and wind and rain can make people happy; The waves rise from the clouds, the tides rise and fall, and the stars move, which can make people think deeply; Precious antiques, poems, calligraphy and painting can be enjoyable. " This colorful thing gives us the most intuitive cognition.
Low mountains and flowing water, adjacent to the horizon, have touched our bosom friends; Take Qi Mei as an example, we are moved by our lover. Family happiness brings warmth to our family. Isn't this an emotional experience? ● Time tells the elders what vicissitudes are, distance tells the wanderer what missing is, and the backpack on the shoulder tells us what honesty is: honesty is an flawless crystal, flashing the youth of life; Honesty is a blue sky, flowing with the brilliance of the soul; Honesty is a fertile ground, sowing the bright color of the soul.
"Integrity Backpack" ● When you look up at the starry sky, you will find that the sky is full of stars, but the faint is eternal; When you listen to the ticking water, you will feel that ticking, though small, has the perseverance to turn dripping water into stone; When you meet the spring breeze, you will feel that the dead silence brought by the severe winter has returned to its former style under the touch of the spring breeze ... ● There are countless farewell poems in Tang poetry and Song poetry that open the galaxy. Wang Bozhuang sang loudly: Why linger at the fork in the road, children touch towels. Liu Yong plaints: Where will you wake up after drinking tonight? There is a breeze and a waning moon on the bank of Yangliu.
Jiang Yan, however, Qian Fan put it in a nutshell: those who are ecstatic just leave. Some people beat their chests and feet: how can a whip be urgent! Today, there is Wang Guozhen's croon: how can you go back after a hundred years of life?
No matter where your ears are, just pray like water, like a boat. Xi Murong's gentle warning came: If parting can remind us of the details that we neglected because of gathering, is it really bad to leave? This kind of feeling is really beautiful.
Reciting the feelings of different times and different lives will have unexpected gains. ("Vientiane Life Insists on Yourself") ● What is beauty? I know that beauty is the first light that rises on the horizon. Beauty is a maple leaf hotter than fire in autumn, a red-crowned crane flying on the beach at dusk, and a sika deer flying on the grassland ... Baum Tong Jia agreed with me and added: "Beauty is perceptual knowledge, and studying aesthetics is the science of studying perceptual knowledge."
But Kant glared at me angrily and said, "One-sided, beauty is a purely subjective feeling of human beings and has nothing to do with the thing itself." I suggest you look at my judgment and criticism. "
I humbly and carefully studied his aesthetic works on emotion. When I was complacent about my mystery, Hegel poured cold water on me: "No, beauty should be the externalization of human nature".
Then, he proudly talked about his own aesthetic theory. Just when my second monk was at a loss, Marx whispered beside me, "Don't listen to him. He has turned right from wrong, don't fall into the mud of idealism. "
In fact, beauty should be the unity of human nature and free form. "What is beauty? I decided to leave Europe and go to the ancient oriental civilization to find a beautiful answer.
("What is Beauty") ● When the vast sky is dyed into a dark background and the vast sky is covered by the stars in the first month, I can't help thinking a lot. I asked the moon in the sky: What is loneliness? Once upon a time, there was Li Bai's "Until, holding up my cup, I asked the bright moon to bring me my shadow and make us three". Perhaps, loneliness is the feeling that there is a bright moon in the sky, the wind is like water, everything is silent, and we are inseparable! Once upon a time, Li Houzhu felt that "the bright moon is like a hook, and the solitary phoenix tree locks the deep courtyard in the clear autumn". Perhaps, loneliness is a deep palace courtyard, and the country is worried about the family and the people. Once upon a time, Chen Ziang lamented, "Before me, where have all those lost times gone?"? Behind me, where are the future generations? I think of heaven and earth, there is no limit, there is no end, I am alone, and my tears fall. " Perhaps, loneliness is an empty state of mind with the same grass and the same horizon. So, I, asking for the moon, the Chang 'e of Guanghan Palace, told me that loneliness is the "clear sky and clear night heart" of "the shadow of the mica screen is deep, and the long river is gradually falling into the morning star". What is loneliness? I can't answer this question.
Honesty is the courage to admit that you dare to cut down my father's favorite cherry tree. Honesty is the belief that you will not betray your comrades-in-arms even after you put your finger into the bamboo stick. Honesty is the persistence of caring for the parents of comrades-in-arms for twenty years ... ● Honesty is like water ● Honesty, enthusiasm and worry. An honest song, a singing song, a sword that laughs at the situation.
Honesty is a river that has been flowing for five thousand years. From the yellow-faced woman, the yellow land, and all the sentient beings in China. "Choose honesty, choose Chinese soul" ● When snow and ice cover, we need a fire to keep warm; When the night is boundless, we need a little starlight to keep warm; When the future is boundless, we need a navigation light to keep warm ... In the four seasons, what we can't filter out is worry and sadness, and what we can't get rid of is hardship and pain.
In cold weather, what can we use to warm ourselves and stand in the wind? Leave some sincerity to keep yourself warm! "Leave some heart to keep yourself warm" ● It used to be the voice of Confucian masters thousands of years ago, and it became worthless in intrigue and intrigue. It used to be the code of conduct adhered to by countless well-read people all their lives, and it used to be the coat for sinister people to thrive.
It's as simple as learning English.
8. How to write the first paragraph of the friendship composition? Living in this world is for friendship. At least I think so. Life is an undyed painting. Dyeing pens is a colorful friendship; At first, the soil was only black, dotted with green friendship.
When we are sad, friends can give us shoulders. Friends can make us happy when we cry alone. This is not Mona Lisa's mysterious smile, but friendship, a very simple and elusive friendship. Friendship has magical power and shakes us.
"There are several confidants in the world, and several friendships can last forever. May friendship always be in your heart and mine ... "Yes, the world is so big, but it's hard to find a friend to talk to. I really want to write down Bo's famous saying "However, China has our friendship and God has our neighbors". But every time I look up at the sky, how can I find so many stars ...
You can't find friends. I was accidentally "hit". When you help someone pick up a pen, you may get to know each other and become friends. Really, friendship is that simple.
As the saying goes, a bosom friend is enough in life, a thousand dollars is easy to get, but a bosom friend is hard to find. Friends are an important part of people's spiritual life. People without friendship are like living in a lonely wilderness. People who lack friends will feel lonely on earth. People need friendship, because sincere friendship can make people work hard, make people happy, make people happy and move forward. ...
The wealth of life is endless, but what is the real wealth? Is it money? Is it power? No, friendship. I don't know which philosopher said, "wealth is not a true friend, but a friend is a permanent wealth." Friends, when you know the value of friends, don't care too much about the trifles between friends. You should know that friendship is not temporary, but in peacetime; Not by age, but by heart. Friend, don't care too much. Let's join hands to see the beautiful sunrise. Let's fight together!
Only those who really make friends can get true friendship. Seeing friendship as a trader can neither produce true friendship nor stand the test of time. Harm set, harm get.
Is one of the most precious feelings in life. I don't know how many famous people in ancient and modern China and abroad used many beautiful poems to praise and praise it. A great man once said: "People who can't get friendship are poor loners all their lives;" A society without friendship is just a bustling desert. "Friends are the spokesmen of friendship. They never abandon anyone, give up anyone. And use your generous heart to tolerate and accept others, so that others can feel the warmth and care of friendship in them. In the midst of prosperity, friends met us; In adversity, we met our friends. This is what the celebrity Collins said about his friend. This reminds me of a report I read in Zibo Evening News not long ago. A couple of friends went climbing together. It happened to rain and the road was slippery. A man accidentally slipped and happened to have an abyss beside him. At this critical moment, his friend immediately rushed up and took his hand. In this way, they persisted for about two hours before the "death gate". During this period, the man in danger told his friend several times to let go so as not to fall and die together. But his friend said, "Hold on a little longer, and someone will come to save us. "Finally, it happened that three workers who went up the mountain saw it and saved them. But that friend's hand has become deformed, but he still smiled and said to his friend, "I told you someone would save us." "At this time, the man had tears in his eyes and cried with his friend. If this happens to people without friendship, they may turn a blind eye or run away. Collins is right. We met friends in adversity and their greatness. Friendship is felt and transmitted by heart. Only when you have experienced it yourself will you know the value of friendship.
Actually, I know the word "friendship" very well. This year's simulated Long March may be the first time for most of our classmates to hike, and it is also a big test in our lives. In this activity, most students can walk down, not necessarily by their own ability, perseverance and strength, but by mutual encouragement and support between classmates and friends. Every student has been encouraged by other students, and it is these insignificant encouragement and support that we will stubbornly come down. During the trip, when a classmate can't hold on a bit, the classmates around him will also lend a helping hand to help him carry his backpack, even though they are very tired. In this way, this hand is not only a helping hand, but also a friendship hand. Students may only get a smile or a look from each other, but they are also very happy because they know that friends don't need to return.
9. Writing a composition, how to write the opening of the article, that is, the first paragraph of writing a composition should be accurate, and the opening should be small (that is, the topic you choose should be small, so that it will not be generalized and out of the center). It is best to have a heart for the selected topic, which will help to write a good composition at the beginning.
Recommend several forms of the beginning of writing composition
1, cut to the chase (that is, directly point out the intention of the article at the beginning, show your point of view, show your attitude, and highlight the theme of the article), generally directly enter the narrative of the event and show the main idea; For a general argumentative essay or essay, you should make your point clear at the beginning.
2, parallelism into the topic (using a series of parallelism sentences, deducting the theme, a very common way)
3. Ascension (first describe other things or scenery in concise language, and then combine the theme of the topic)
4. Quote (start with a famous sentence or aphorism, point out the center, or quote the language of the characters, highlight the character, etc. Can make your point more convincing)
5. Dialogue import (without any preparation, the dialogue of the characters will be displayed at the beginning, so that readers can immediately enter the language scene you set)
6, case presentation method (that is, at the beginning with examples to illustrate the central theme, you can use examples to add parallelism, which is also a very common method)
7. Explain the theme (explain the theme and its extension, and explain the theme you want to express)
8. Ask questions at the beginning (such as "What is happiness?" Then you can use the following paragraphs to explain your question. You can say "happiness is" and "happiness is" in sections, and it is not easy to digress.
9. Story (tell a story, which can arouse the teacher's interest in reading, and the hidden truth in the story is what you want to elaborate below, which is the center of the article)
There are many ways to write the beginning, which are common, simple and easy to master.
I hope it helps you,