This article describes that Zhu Ziqing's grandmother died and his father lost his job. After the funeral, my father wanted to find a job, and Zhu Ziqing wanted to go back to school, so they went together. When Zhu Ziqing was going to the station, his father planned to let the waiter accompany him, but his father changed his mind temporarily and personally sent Zhu Ziqing on the train. His father was going to buy oranges for his son to eat on the road, but he had to cross the railway track to buy oranges. His father is very fat and climbs up and down.
After reading it, I found out how much Zhu Ziqing's father cares about him. When they arrive in Nanjing, his father intends to find someone to send him and then find a job by himself. He thought that finding a job was the most important thing, but Zhu Ziqing's father finally saw him off in person, worried about the children who were away from home. In addition, from the back of Zhu Ziqing's father buying oranges, we can see his sincere and meticulous care for his son.
Although the article does not describe his father's words and deeds in detail, it only mentions his father's "back" many times, which reflects a father's anxiety, care and love for his children who are away from home, as well as his son's gratitude and yearning for his father.
I also have a loving father who has made many efforts to arrange my life and study for me. Sometimes I fail the exam. Instead of blaming me, he comforted me and helped me find out the reason. Every time I see more and more white hair on my father's head, I think of his hard work for me. When I grow up, I feel this kind of deep fatherly love more and more.
Thoughts on Reading Zhu Ziqing's Back-Yu Huiqing
The Back is a very famous article written by Mr. Zhu Ziqing in his early days, and it is also a famous prose in the history of modern literature. The full text is only 1500 words, concentrated on a fragment, but touching and well-known. In the past, this essay has been selected as a teaching material for a long time, as Mr. Wu Han said: "This essay was selected as a middle school Chinese teaching material. In the eyes of middle school students, Zhu Ziqing has been combined with his back. "
After reading it, my first impression is that the author tried his best to show the deepest feelings in the world-the sincere love between father and son, which always shows delicate, true and profound feelings.
The Back was written in 1927, which recorded the back of my father in my memory. It happened on 19 17: My grandmother died, and my father's job as director of Xuzhou Tobacco and Alcohol Company was also handed over. After the funeral, the father and son went to Nanjing together, and my father sent the author to the north by train. This happened in the winter when the author was twenty years old. On that particular occasion.
This sincere feeling between father and son is vividly expressed by the author. He never trusted the waiter, but wanted to deliver it himself. From choosing a seat, never talk; From buying oranges in person, it reflects dad's love. All kinds of things are extremely trivial, but the feelings expressed from them are extremely precious, which makes the author unforgettable for a long time, and readers can't help but be moved by it after reading it.
The author wrote a lyric prose to express his feelings through simple narration. Everything written by the author is shrouded in emotion. It is very different from objective narration, but uses narration as a lyric tool. Between the lines of writing, the affection between father and son is revealed, which is exactly where the article can impress readers. Although they are memories ten years later, they are all described according to the situation at that time. In all these beautiful things, a father's love for his son is everywhere. The father still treats his 20-year-old son as a child, but his son is not satisfied. He thinks his behavior is "not very pretty" everywhere. At that time, the son could not understand his father's affection. The author gave a hint in the truthful narration: "I think about it now, it was really smart at that time!" I was really smart then. In my memory, I blame myself and understand the fault of not understanding my father's mood. These places have enhanced the lyricism and appeal of the article.
The author can express his feelings so profoundly, which is inseparable from his deep feelings. If the author didn't have such a life and experience, he would never have written such an article. Of course, when we read it today, we may feel that the author's feelings are too delicate and lingering, and the tone of the full text is too low, but this is related to the author's thoughts at that time and the times. The author wrote that his father and son left after family changes, and his tone was naturally low. In fact, it also reflects the gloomy world at that time. The expression of father and son in this article is simple, healthy and natural! The lyrical methods and techniques are superb and skillful, which can be used for us to learn.
After reading the back, my second impression is that the whole article uses the technique of line drawing, and the artistic foundation is superb.
According to my understanding, the so-called "sketching" means to reproduce the scene in front of the reader with simple words without metaphor. In the words of Mr. Lu Xun, it means "true meaning, whitewashing, less affectation and no ostentation". This is from the essential characteristics of sketch.
The full text focuses on the father's back, so the word "back" is also the title of the full text. It must be explained that this is the foreshadowing of writing back in the middle. Without all kinds of indispensable explanations, it is impossible to describe in detail the background of this special situation and special occasion.
It is common to talk about father's back; But this time, what I want to write is not common at ordinary times, but it touches the author's back very much on specific occasions. The author wrote about his father's posture and clothes at that time, mainly about crossing the railway when buying oranges. "My father is a fat man." The author described his father's back without any modification or foil, and only presented the scene at that time to the readers. This line drawing is light and easy to read.
The mood behind is bleak and gloomy, and the text sketched by the author is also very dull, which is in harmony with the mood of the full text. But when writing oranges, a strong modifier-"scarlet oranges" was added. This incongruous vermilion is in sharp contrast with the artistic conception of the full text. At that time, the family suffered a change and the father and son separated. This kind of cinnabar was used to set off the tone of the full text and increase.
In the article, I wrote my father's back twice, but both of them were described in detail with a pen, which shows the hidden power. At the moment of parting, the back was sketched, and only one sentence was mentioned: "His back was mixed in the crowds coming and going, and I couldn't find it, so I came in and sat down, and tears came again. The author didn't describe this back again, but the feeling of "looking back at me after a few steps" and "urging again and again" has made me reluctant to part with my son for a living.
After reading it, my third feeling is that the language of the article is concise and clear.
Ye Shengtao believes that Zhu Ziqing's early prose is "a bit artificial, paying too much attention to rhetoric and hiding from nature." Later, what he wrote was spoken English, which has the charm of modern spoken English. This view is of course correct and conforms to the reality of Zhu Ziqing's prose. However, the language of this early prose "The Back" is somewhat different from others. It is not artificial, does not emphasize rhetoric, but uses simple nature. It shows the real content. In addition to the description of the father's back, the full text is all narrative, clear and natural. The whole article is 1500 words, with little description and modification, and even few difficult words. Looking back on the past ten years ago, telling the truth, the true feelings are naturally revealed. The language used later is determined by the content, and the author uses line drawing.
The language of "Hui" is very concise. After reading the full text carefully, I feel that the text is clean and there are no redundant words and phrases. The article is well written. For example, the full text recorded his father's words in four places, namely, "Never mind, they can't leave well!" "I'll buy some oranges. Just stay here and don't walk around. " "I'm leaving, write to me there!" "Go in, there's no one inside." It's not that my father only said so many words that day, but these four sentences are typical of my father's mood at that time. The author loves ink like gold, and a few simple words reflect his father's thoughtfulness, love and reluctance at that time. Win more with less. We not only realized the meaning, but also seemed to hear his father's voice at that time. For example, it can also explain the conciseness and essence of Zhu Ziqing's language. As for the narrative, description and lyricism of the article, the language is very concise and can be called a model in prose. The article "Back" is the representative work of Mr. Zhu Ziqing's prose. Although we cannot use it to represent all of Zhu Ziqing's prose, it does show some important aspects of his prose style. People often refer to Zhu Ziqing's prose as "back". This is not unreasonable. When commenting on Mr. Zhu Ziqing's prose, someone once said that his prose "elegance comes from simplicity, humor comes from frankness, and massiness comes from plainness". Although this is a comment on all Zhu Ziqing's prose, some aspects can still be confirmed later.
People say that maternal love is great and selfless, and I think so. But it was not until I read the back that I felt that fatherly love was also great and selfless. The father in this article did an extremely common thing for his son-buying oranges, but it was not so easy for him. You can feel it from some words and phrases in this article, such as stumbling, leaning, climbing, shrinking and leaning. However, he still had to. This shows how much he loves his son. The son couldn't help crying when he saw his father doing this for him. However, at the last parting, the father did not show his reluctance to the child, but simply said two words: Go in, there is no one inside. I wrote him a letter there after I left. The father doesn't talk much, but he shows his love for his son and selfless fatherly love everywhere.
Yes, the role played by father is always severe and abusive, but who can see his gentle side? Therefore, you should know more about your father, because there is a fragile heart that loves you behind the sternness and scolding.