Application of "Point" Material
"Point" material is mainly used to prove a point in argumentative writing by a person (not limited to people).
First of all, flashback argument
"Point" material: Ji Xianlin looks after the bag for ordinary students, leaving no name.
This "point" material is used in an essay with full marks in the college entrance examination. The topic of the college entrance examination composition is "honesty", and the candidates start like this:
A clever man.
An old man who can stroke the years with a white beard and eyebrows.
In the autumn wind, I keep the promise of a suitcase. One stop is more than an hour.
When the owner of the suitcase learned the identity of the old man, he was startled, but the old man smiled and patted the young man on the shoulder lovingly.
Honesty and heavy wealth are deeply engraved in the heart of this white-haired old man who is over sixty. What can we say except moving?
A short story uses six natural paragraphs, uses flashback method, finally names people, and then directly discusses the topic of "honesty"; The language is very concise, and even boldly uses the monologue of "wise man", which is enough to make critics "love at first sight".
Material turning
Theme: bold and elegant
[Point] Material: horse painted by Xu Beihong
Application: Famous painter. It is famous for drawing horses, horses in the heart and people's ideal swift horses. He said, "People should not be arrogant, but not arrogant." He combined Chinese and Western paintings into one furnace, and created such large-scale paintings as "Yu Gong Yi Shan" and "Tian Heng 500 Strong Men". He deliberately painted himself in Tian Heng 500 Strong Men. An audience saw it and asked him why. He said: "I am an admirer and follower of Tian Heng."
He slept in the farmhouse for painting. He has more tenderness for horses, and he has a deep understanding of every bit of horses, a sadness and a joy, and he writes meticulously. He is Xu Beihong.
Subject: Access
The material of "point" forest protects the ancient city wall.
Application: A heroine. A generation of talented women who love ancient buildings. In the cold wind, she stroked the ancient Beijing wall and saw that it was about to be destroyed. Her heart ached. She shouted at people. She broke into the office of Mayor Peng Zhen. She and her husband Liang Sicheng shouted day and night. She is Lin.
Integrate into it and study Chinese and western architectural civilization in depth; In addition, I have innovated my own personality design, worked hard for the design of the Great Hall of the People and monuments, and felt sad for the protection of ancient civilization and silent history. If you can get in, you can get out. Construction and insurance are together.
Theme: Keep.
The material of "point": persistent Confucius
Application: Great Sage. Grab your own resources. Xingtan gives lectures and Gong Xue gives lectures. Mount Tai is on the chessboard. The autumn wind blew his messy hair. Hit a wall, ridicule, ridicule, loneliness, and even hunger. However, he never turned his back, cared about the road and didn't teach a lesson. Seventy-two sages grew up swaying, leaving a copy of The Analects. He is the most sacred Confucius. Hold on to a piece of soil, hold on to all my heart, and hold on to my faith.
Second, four-character parallelism description and discussion
Many college entrance examination compositions have two characteristics in the use of materials: one is four-word description, and the other is discussion and comparison.
Four-word description example:
1, Li He, a native of the Tang Dynasty, often recited a skill, went out to travel, and was inspired all his life. He immediately wrote it down, put it in his bag and put it under the bright moon oil lamp. The scattered notes merged into a beautiful sentence, which made the legend of "Shi Gui" come true.
2, Yuan Tao Zongyi, a farmland nap, occasionally a good word, personally picked leaves, put them in a stone urn and buried them. 10 years later, the leaves in the urn were compiled into a 30-volume record of dropping out of farming.
These paragraphs are summarized in four sentences at the beginning, which are concise and extraordinary.
Examples of discussing parallelism:
1, "I forgot ..." A powerful and deep voice sounded in my ear, it was overlord! "I forgot that Liu Bang is also making progress. I forgot Liu Bang's advisers. " Oh, forgot how to park here? You forget the advice of the Holy Father, you forget the loss of Hong Men, and you forget that you thought you had the eyes of the world when you were in power. If you succeed, you will forget everything, no shortcomings, no internal troubles and foreign invasion, no whole world, only enjoyment, and of course the jade bucket that Liu Bang gave you.
Van Gogh was destined to be a star, so he was always lonely. But why didn't God even give him the loneliness of "it's too cold at the top"? Why does he even think that he is a millet and is not qualified to be respected by others? I don't understand! Why did the genius pull the trigger and get the title only after the blood spilled all over the paper? I don't understand!
Material turning
Theme: Persistence and Flexibility
"Point" material: forest protects the ancient city wall
Application: Lin, a talented woman, loves architecture, learns Chinese and western things, and is persistent in life. In the 1950s, she advocated protecting the ancient city walls of Beijing. The city walls are magnificent, Zhong Ling is beautiful and the treasures are bright, and the cultural heritage should be protected from generation to generation. She gave a speech at NPC and broke into the office of Mayor Peng Zhen to argue.
She is persistent, persistent in her career, persistent in Sri Lanka, comforting her heart and staying in Sri Lanka all her life. A sense of responsibility rose from Lin's heart. Persistence is a mountain and persistence is a river. Her behavior will always be admired.
Thirdly, poetry imitation.
Yu Guangzhong, a poet in Taiwan Province, is a fan of Li Bai. His poems inherited Li Taibai's legacy and were deeply influenced by his personality. He has a few words to write Li's poems, which are very free and easy:
Wine enters the intestine,
Seven points for moonlight,
The remaining three points roared into a firm but gentle voice,
Embroidered mouth spit is half a prosperous Tang Dynasty.
These poems capture Li Bai's kindness and boldness. Poetry is bold and bold, and it is vivid on the paper. Taking "wine" as the condition, it leads to causality, with clear structure and flexible form. Why don't we imitate it?
Material turning
Pushkin: Strong feelings and bold poems ∕ One heart shapes a lover ∕ Another heart condenses into a poem by Eugene onegin ∕ which is burning under a feather pen.
Yue Fei: Tattooing to serve the country/Blood spilling in the desert sky/Tears complaining lonely storm pavilion/Strong feelings and intense feelings converge into a red river.
Beethoven: If you play the keys, 90% are sad, the rest 10% is peaceful, and the fingers are symphonies.
Ba Jin: Taking out your heart/love has created the brilliance of your home/your conscience has been dedicated to 150 random thoughts/dreams will also be the light to illuminate the future.
Tao Yuanming: Living in seclusion, picking chrysanthemums, enjoying the lotus in the morning and planting it in the Peach Blossom Garden.
Su Shi: I rolled up my carving bow ∕ I shot nine arrows into the distance ∕ I shot only one arrow into Sirius ∕ I spent the rest of my life just for Feng Tang.
Sprinkle half a cup on the ground to tell that the heights are too cold, and the rest lament the joys and sorrows, a misty rain for a lifetime.
Lu Xun: Love is about China/Half of it is made into fraternity/The remaining five points are condensed into Zhang Hua/Knife-shaped eyebrows are the backbone of China.
Tan Sitong: Before the guillotine, blood condensed into flags, roared into sharp arrows, and last words became the swan song that stirred the century.
The spread of "noodles"
"Face" is to use parallelism to demonstrate and enhance the coverage of the material. In argumentative writing, if you can use more materials and write more examples of parallelism, you will definitely improve your score.
Such as: Jing, this tree, by many people in their own hearts, takes root, grows leaves, blooms and bears fruit. Shi Tiesheng meditated in the quiet altar, watching the subtle changes of ant cicada slough; Cao Xueqin's ten years of adding and deleting "The Story of the Stone" has caused extraordinary blood and tears. Hugo interprets the beauty and solemnity of human nature through Esmeralda in Notre Dame de Paris. Rousseau's Confessions was written in a small room in the suburbs. He sincerely and frankly analyzed his life. Lu Xun "hid in the small building and became a unified one, and Xia Chunqiu took care of him in winter", quietly watching everything, frowning coldly and inspiring zhanghua. ...
Quiet as a mountain, quiet as a lake, clear as water, quiet as a tree, quiet as a forest. Nature is a static ontology. "Lan Zhi was born in the mountains and forests, and no one is not fragrant; Gentleman Xiu De, don't change for being sleepy. " There is dignity and authenticity in silence.
To create a beautiful "face", we must pay attention to three levels: the central sentence-the example of parallelism-the viewpoint of kickback.
Application 1: I love my teacher, which is a kind of civilization inheritance, a kind of learning, a kind of respect and admiration, and a kind of heartfelt love and attachment. In middle school, Hua once boldly questioned the teacher's mathematical solution. He cherishes the feelings between teachers and students, but he loves truth more. Liang Qichao benefited from Confucius. The Analects of Confucius is memorized by heart, and Confucianism is profound. However, he did not fully accept it, but put forward his own opinions on some viewpoints and understandings. He said, "I love Confucius, and I love the truth even more." Zhao Yi benefited from Li Bai and Du Fu, and his poems are full of spirituality. However, he stated his views like this: "Du Li's poems are passed down from mouth to mouth and are not new so far; Jiangshan has talents and has been leading the way for a hundred years. "
"I love the truth more" is a social responsibility, a necessity of development, a pursuit of life, and a kind of pain and abandonment.
("I love my teacher, and I love truth more")
Application 2: Everything is complacent when watching.
Cao Xueqin meditated in Hongyi Garden, and the fate of twelve women in the Red Chamber was so pitiful. Don Quixote is also thinking on the quiet riverbank, why the rich always bully the poor, and the strong always bully the weak, so my spear should play a role! Jane Eyre also realized in Silent Night that you and I are equal before God, and I want to pursue my freedom. The Old Man and the Sea is the crystallization of Hemingway's calm thinking about life. On the vast sea, at the critical moment of life, after 85 days of fighting, the old man in San Diego said, "People can be destroyed, but they cannot be defeated."
Sit still and think about life in silence. ("Everything is smug")
Combination of "Point" and "Face"
Argumentative papers in the examination room must be unified in "point" and "face" in order to get extra points. In several perfect compositions in 2008, the relationship between "point" and "face" was properly handled.
Full score composition: curiosity
There is a kind of "curiosity" that is most common in Lu Xun's articles: it is curiosity that drives people to watch "decapitation programs" and curiosity that drives "revolution", but the "heart" is lost. This kind of "curiosity" is based on prying into the sufferings of others, and it is based on the darkness and ignorance of an "iron house". If this is really "curiosity", then there is no such thing. (Point: Take Lu Xun's article as the point)
What about the world? Such "curiosity" is also everywhere. Joan of Arc on the stake is full of curiosity of medieval people. Such "curiosity" is written in ignorance, mediocrity, decline and lifelessness. (Face: Face with "Fire" and "quasimodo")
Full score composition "Colorful Achievement Harmony"
Tap on the door of the red chamber and look for the dream that has been longed for for for a hundred years. You said there were so many different images in A Dream of Red Mansions, and Zhong Ling had so many beautiful daughters. Who is the reader's favorite? It has always been difficult to adjust, but it has always been a taste for both refined and popular tastes. Stroking the slightly rolled pages, we seem to hear the propaganda of "I came late and didn't meet a distant guest"; The sadness of "flowers fall and people die" and the cry of "love brother, love brother" have merged into a harmonious movement, which is endless ...
Thousands of years ago, in the war years of the Spring and Autumn Period and the Warring States Period, an unprecedented and amazing cultural feast was staged. The voice of a hundred schools of thought contended through time and space and stayed on the floor; Thousands of years later, Mr. Cai Yuanpei's famous saying, "Don't bind others with your own thoughts, and don't bind yourself with other people's thoughts", awakened many people in China who are pursuing it. Therefore, please respect different views, please understand and care for real harmony with your heart. (Face: Give examples of "a hundred schools of thought contend" and "Cai Yuanpei". )
Full score composition: "After the national mourning, only strong"
In the face of disaster, it has inspired us and the whole world unprecedented love, the beauty of human nature and the beauty of the country. The national flag is shocked by the fall of civilians, the vigil of candles burning for the deceased, the scene of teachers and students embracing and dying ... The softest side of human nature has been touched, and unexpected disasters have frozen so many sublimation, solidified so many sacredness and detonated so many touches. (Face: Introduce the love of China people in an all-round way. )
A girl who was amputated in Beichuan Middle School was only 12 years old. She said, please don't call my dead classmate a bud that has fallen before it opens. They didn't fall, they have blossomed. (point: quote a sentence and touch people's hearts. )
In the face of disaster, the living cherish it more. Bi Shumin, the author of Reminding Happiness, went to Beichuan to give a class to students. She reminded herself and everyone that being alive is happy and should be cherished.
In the development of our country, medical representatives gradually deviated from the initial role expectation and moved closer to the role image