Athena Chu
Interpretation: refers to the experience or knowledge and skills in writing.
Out:
1, Zhu's Miscellaneous Knowledge in Qing Dynasty, Volume II: "Everyone has the experience of reading. Although the partners cannot reach an agreement, they cannot explain it. "
2. Lv Chunqiu Ji Xian: "So listen to what you have learned, and listen to what you have learned."
3. Lu Qingyi's "Cold miscellaneous knowledge, learning medicine should be cautious": "Cheng medical case, telling his life experience, has a lot of experience."
For example:
When I read "Like a drop of water on the tip of a needle in the sea, my days are dripping in the stream of time, with no sound or shadow", I had a profound experience. Yes, that little bit of time is like a drop of water, and that accumulated time is like the sea. We always think that there is nothing to make a fuss about wasting that little time, but think about it carefully, squeeze out a little time today and a little time tomorrow, and many a mickle makes a mickle. As the saying goes, "I would rather grab a second today than wait a minute tomorrow." I can't help thinking of myself. Every week, after I finish the homework assigned by my teacher, I will find my friends to play computer with. I play for two hours at a time and seldom do extra-curricular books. Until now, I didn't know how much two hours accumulated. In these two short hours, I can do a lot of extracurricular books, read a lot of excellent articles and review a lot of homework. Mr. Lu Xun said that there is no genius in this world, he just spends other people's coffee time at work. This is how Mr. Lu Xun works against time. Shouldn't we cherish every minute of study like Mr. Lu Xun?
2. Write a composition on the topic of feeling what is the best reward for harmony, happiness and deep strength.
Let our eyes gradually become peaceful and can see the inner life of things clearly. Wordsworth I came across such a flower.
I used to be a selfish person and never considered other people's feelings. Until that summer, my mother gave me a small potted plant as a reward.
I took the flowerpot with joy and saw a small stem standing in the middle. It stands quietly in the flowerpot. The dark green stems are thin, but very powerful. There are no redundant leaves, but it branches at the top and bears two floret bones.
I am very happy. Their petite appearance is like a baby who just landed, which really makes people fondle it. I watered them and watched them raise their heads slightly, scrambling to suck such nectar, and then surging around their bodies, as if to break free from the shackles of buds and fully bloom.
I waited silently and watered regularly to see who would win the silent game. After a while, they were in full bloom at the same time.
I lost my baby's appearance, just like two girls, holding their heads high and swaying with the breeze, dancing their graceful posture. Layered pink is their clothes.
The pale pink at the edge of the petals goes to the pink in the middle and continues to the pink at the bottom, like a riddle full of mystery, which makes me more immersed in it. After every watering, I am more cautious, afraid that such beauty will be too short-lived. One night, it was surprisingly quiet, with no wind and no birds singing. I went to the balcony and heard their whispers.
"I can't bear to part with you ..." "You must live well and live with my life!" I was very surprised. I think I must have heard something. The next day, they began to appear abnormal.
One holds her head high as usual, and one is weaker than the other, as if telling others that her parents are biased in the process of raising them. Until later, one flower became more and more beautiful and danced more beautifully than before, while the other flower became more and more listless and withered, but turned to that delicate flower, as if giving up and holding something affectionately.
"There is a kind of flower called Gemini. One is brilliant, but it has a flower. But as time goes on, one of them will constantly absorb the nutrients and essence of the other.
After all, a flower is delicate and charming, and a flower withers and withers. "I am amazed at such greatness, sacrificing myself to help others, and how strong the flower used to be to wait and suffer until it dedicated all its nutrients to its sister and was eclipsed in the world.
That weak and gorgeous life conveys to us what a grand life ostentation and extravagance. She finally hung her head and fell asleep. I saw another proud flower overflowing with tears.
..... That summer, I received the best return, and that long-lost flower made me really understand the true meaning of life-dedication.
3.600-800 words composition, understanding maternal love.
After the holiday, my parents assigned me a study task, that is, I should seize the time and review the lessons I have learned during the holiday. Don't make me do anything else.
At noon that day, my mother came home from work and cooked in a hurry. She prepared several dishes, including meat and vegetables, to strengthen my nutrition. I'm sitting in my room, listening to my mother's rhythmic chopping, feeling a little hectic than usual. Yes! During this time, my mother is very busy at work. She often puts down her chopsticks after dinner and goes to work. In order to give me more meals, I am naturally busier than usual
"Oh dear!" Suddenly, mother's crying came from the kitchen. I quickly put down my book and ran to the kitchen. I saw my mother's right hand just holding the fingers of her left hand, and blood gushed out between her fingers. I panicked, so I went back to my house to find a band-aid and handed it to my mother. Mother simply washed the wound with water, put on a band-aid and continued to be busy.
When eating, my mother is as busy as usual. Put down the chopsticks, told me, picked up the handbag and hurried to work. At home, I am alone. I stared at the food on the table and suddenly felt that I couldn't eat any more. The scene of my mother's finger bleeding just now came to my eyes and stayed for a long time. My heart is beating in panic, my eyes are blurred and tears are flowing. ...
I cleared the table blankly and went to the bathroom to wash my face. I looked at myself in the mirror, my eyes were still red, just looking at myself. Suddenly, a heartfelt voice seems to ring in my ear: you are a junior high school student, you should learn to do housework! You are at home on holiday now, helping your mother cook! Let mom eat slowly at noon, so don't be so nervous. Suddenly, I seem to have grown up suddenly.
I quickly sat at my desk and carefully wrote the homework of the day, which seemed to be more serious than usual, and the speed was much faster. I decided: from dinner, I will learn cooking skills and cook for my parents!
I came to the kitchen and began to wash vegetables and stew rice. My mind is searching for the way my mother usually cooks and imitating it. I want to recite the formula and do the same: cut the meat evenly; Shredding potatoes, and shredding; Don't forget to put sugar in the fried tomatoes; You should master the amount of water in rice.
Time is pressing, and my mother will be home at 5: 30 after work. Finally, the meal was served on the table before mom got off work. With the sound of opening the door, mother went home. She smelled the food and came over in surprise. She looked at me strangely as if she understood everything. Mom didn't put down her handbag or even wash her hands. She went straight to the table, picked up chopsticks and tasted them one by one: this dish is delicious, but low in calories; This is delicious, but there is no salt. This ... I saw a contented smile on my mother's face. My mother turned to me and said, tomorrow, I'll teach you how to do it.
I thank my mother. It was my mother who gave me life, who took care of me meticulously in my life experience, and who gave me endless obstacles. From this incident, I also slowly learned to repay my grateful mother.
4. The 600-word composition of "What" is different from love.
-The feeling of life
Mom brought us into this world and stood at the starting point of life. We cried and walked into the battlefield of life without hesitation. Life has given us different loves-success and failure.
Life is an endless struggle. Victory is not the ultimate success, and failure is not the ultimate rout. Because after the victory, we will face new challenges; Failure, there is no darkness in front of you. Only by unremitting struggle, success and failure are the indispensable garlands that adorn our lives.
Long journey, bumpy; Thorn life, we will face countless failures and successes; On the battlefield of life, there is a battle. Victory is indeed intoxicating, but there are still countless unknowns waiting for us. Perhaps recalling the eternal moment is the glorious moment of life. If you succeed once, what is the value of pursuing life? Failure is really frustrating, but this small failure should not stop the flow of life. If a failure can doomed the end of the struggle, then how absurd this end is.
In the face of accidental success, being complacent and thinking that you have achieved great success will only add to the regret of beating your chest and regretting the original. I have never recovered from my accidental failure, so the depression of my mind will inevitably make us face a failure.
Gou Jian, the King of Yue, endured humiliation and gave up his love, and finally destroyed Wu in one fell swoop, establishing a hegemonic position. Edison failed more than 50 thousand times and finally made lighting widely used. He said, "I will never allow myself to be a little discouraged at any time." Zhong Yong was brilliant in his childhood, but he gave up his fascination with success. Xiang Yu, the invincible overlord, committed suicide on the Wujiang River after his defeat, leaving the posterity with the eternal regret that "Jiangdong's children are versatile and it is unknown to make a comeback".
Every battle on the battlefield is not the last chance. Gorky said: "We came to this world to be uncompromising." There is no need to slack off in our life. Every kind of sadness, every kind of casual indulgence is an unforgivable mistake.
The devotion to life and the belief of no regrets hold up a bright sky. Mother gave us life, life gave us youth, and youth gave us * * *, and we will always strive for a prosperous tomorrow.
5. After reading, the charm of smiling
Smiles can be passed on. Give your classmate a smile when he is lost, and he will regain his confidence and continue to study hard; When your neighbor encounters setbacks, give him a smile and he will be very happy.
When parents come home from work, dragging their tired bodies and giving them a smile, they will immediately feel that they have eliminated most of their fatigue; When your grandparents are sick in the hospital bed, give them a smile and they will be refreshed immediately.
Smile at every stranger in the street and they will feel happy.
In the community, smile at every old man and their hearts will feel warm.
Smile at every patient in the hospital, and they will have the courage to fight the disease and continue to live.
Smile at the homeless beggars on the overpass, and their hearts will be warm.
Smile at the animals in the zoo, and they will understand what you mean and become more docile.
Smile not only at people and animals, but also at other foods.
If you smile at a basin of water every day and praise it, the clean pattern of water will be beautiful, on the contrary, the clean pattern of water will be ugly, which shows that water also needs words of praise and sweet smile.
The world is like a mirror. If you smile at it, it will smile back at you. If you can keep smiling every day, the world will become a better place!
6. Composition: What do you mean by post-reading? After reading a book, an article, a paragraph of text, a few famous sayings or a video, writing an article with specific feelings and inspiration can also be called reading notes, which is a commonly used applied style and one of the styles of applied writing research. Simply put, it is the feeling after reading the book.
The so-called "sentiment" can be the truth or subtle thoughts learned from books, the thinking and association inspired by the contents of books, the determination and ideal inspired by reading, and the attack and irony of reading on some ugly phenomena in society. The expression of post-reading feeling is flexible and diverse, which basically belongs to the category of discussion, but writing is different from general argumentative writing because it must be based on reading. To write an experienced, insightful, emotional and innovative summary, we must pay attention to the following points:
First, read the original text.
The feeling of "feeling after reading" is caused by "reading", which is the basis of "feeling" At first glance, you may not even understand what the original said. How can you have a "feeling"? Reading is superficial, of course I don't feel profound. Only by reading carefully can we feel something and feel deeply. If you want to read an argumentative essay, you must find out its arguments (opinions and propositions), or criticize any wrong opinions, think about what you are inspired by, and find out what the arguments and conclusions are. If it is a narrative, it is necessary to find out its main plot, how many characters there are, what is the relationship between them, and the year when the story happened. The social background involved in the work, but also to find out what kind of spiritual quality the work reveals, what kind of social phenomenon it reflects, what thoughts and feelings the author expresses, which chapters of the work are touching, why it is so touching and so on.
Second, be friendly.
As long as you read the original text carefully, an article can be written in many ways. If you have a deep feeling about the center of the original text, you can write it as a post-reading feeling, a post-reading feeling about other contents of the original text, or a post-reading feeling about individual sentences. In short, as long as it is the original content, as long as you have feelings about it, you can write a comment. In order to write a good review, you need to express what you know.
Third, choose the right feeling point.
An article can express many feelings, but a comment can only talk about one center and must not cover everything. Therefore, the next step is to screen and compare these many feelings, find out the one that you feel the deepest, the latest angle, the most realistic pertinence and the fluency when writing, as the center of review, and then demonstrate it in writing.
Fourth, the narrative should be short.
Since the feeling after reading is caused by reading, it is necessary to describe the facts that cause "feeling" in the article, and sometimes describe some examples that I think of. In short, after reading it, "Syria" is indispensable. But it is different from the requirement of "narration" in narration. The narrative in narrative pays attention to concrete, vivid and vivid, while the narrative in reading comprehension pays attention to conciseness and conciseness, and does not require "touching", but only reasonable and well-founded. After reading the original text, a beginner feels that the narrative is not short, but actually becomes a retelling. This is mainly because the author can't grasp the spirit and main points of the part to be quoted, so he can't be concise. Concise, not as few words as possible, but also concise.
Fifth, Lenovo should pay attention to form.
There are many forms of association, such as association (there are similarities between related things), anti-association (there are opposites between related things), association (there are similarities between related things), inheritance association (there are similarities between related things) and similar association (there are similarities between related things). Pay special attention to the use of the same association and similar association when writing the post-reading feeling.
7. Some thoughts on writing [My writing experience] My writing experience (10) Class Ge Tianyi To tell the truth, in junior high school, my composition was not very good, and the theme was nothing more than illness, mountain climbing and running. The composition is as plain as water, and my writing experience is a bit.
Even sometimes I'm afraid to write a composition. Fortunately, it was at this time that I came across an article that probably had the greatest impact on my life-Daughter Made of Water.
This is written by Hong Xinge, a boy in tianyi middle school Junior Class. The article describes Lin Daiyu's life and death. She is helpless and calm-"It is better to be clean than to be trapped in a ditch". Watching my daughter made of water return, I found her past life without thinking.
Attracted by the beautiful articles, I opened A Dream of Red Mansions, from which I realized the writing skills. The literary value of A Dream of Red Mansions is immeasurable.
She taught me how to carefully observe the inner activities of characters-mainly through sketching and the ability to master my own language; She introduced me to many ancient poems of China, such as "Good Songs" and "Funeral Poems", and she skillfully divided these poems and interspersed them in articles. She made me really fall in love with excerpts-I excerpted Lin Daiyu's looks and poems for more than 20 times, but I still worked tirelessly ... She gave me so much, my writing experience in senior three. After reading the book A Dream of Red Mansions repeatedly, I summed up several ways to improve my writing.
First, you can mark the words you don't know and look them up in the dictionary. You'd better prepare a special notebook to write them down. You can take it with you when you are waiting in line for dinner, running between classes, and waiting for the bus, until it is conditioned. When you see this word, you can think of a picture. Secondly, for the expression of poems and idioms, just pick out what you like and write it down. Even if you don't like it, you don't have to. After all, you are the subject of future creation, and it is very important to form personal critical thinking.
The most important thing is to understand the author's idea and grasp the context of the whole article to find the author's way of thinking. We should learn to make the past serve the present, jump out of the thinking of masterpieces and look at reality, because after all, it was a work of 100 years ago.
Finally, we should form the good habit of reading more useful books. The ancients said that reading is like writing.
Reading thousands of books and taking the Wan Li Road are warning people to read more books, absorb more nutrition from real life and refine materials. At the same time, I like The Scholar very much, because its way of thinking is closest to modern Chinese, which can help you develop the habit of independent thinking and inspire you to write.
If we combine the language of A Dream of Red Mansions with readers' thinking, we will not worry about writing our own good articles. This is my understanding of writing, I hope it can help you.