Supporting the topic will have a good effect.
Based on years of teaching experience
Learning experience and practice,
The author finds that the concession paragraph is very suitable for IELTS five-paragraph composition.
In this article,
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Experts from the writing group of the research center will systematically summarize the main writing methods of concession paragraphs:
One.
Used for the third body segment in the five-segment type.
In a five-paragraph masterpiece, the three main paragraphs are usually based on
"
unilateral
"
The way,
"
Tilt to one side
"
Support a point of view
Point.
And if the last main segment is written as a concession segment,
We can not only consider each other's arguments,
But also more conducive to further
Support and strengthen the ideas in this paragraph, thus strengthening the discussion:
obviously
Not every celebrity is generous. some
indeed
Keep all their money.
By themselves.
but
over there
be
human
like
bill
Gates
who
be
good
known
for
manufacture
donation
join
merciful
function
and
take
part
exist
a
range
about
activity
that
support
human
fewer/ lesser
Lucky than them.
We must use tables when writing concession paragraphs.
"
transit
"
Conjunction, commonly used are
but
however
however
in spite of
Wait a minute. Sometimes we can also use adverbial clauses to guide concession paragraphs, which involves
These conjunctions are:
no matter
exist
ill will
about
although
although
even
although
even
if
Wait a minute. Here, here.
In this example,
We see that the author used
2
A simple sentence to describe a negative view,
For sentences that describe negative opinions,
Langer Overseas Examination Research Center suggested that
1
—
three
The sentence is appropriate, and the length of the sentence after turning is usually greater than.
The previous sentence. Let's look at a concession area:
Title:
Few students know the value of money and how to use it.
however
This is an important life skill and should be taught as part of the school curriculum. Do you agree?
This statement?
It may be true that schools can try to make children understand all the importance.
These areas
But the children are too young to foresee the future or predict it.
They need.
The above concessions are very concise,
Please pay attention to the sentence patterns used by the author:
"This may be true.
that
. "
this is me
Sentence patterns commonly used by children at the beginning of concession paragraph. Let's see how to use adverbial clauses to guide concession paragraphs:
although
pay attention to
TV
or
Performance, style, etc of playing; Play (music)
computer
match
do
enrich
Children's
redundant
time
and
Broaden their horizons to some extent.
A sedentary lifestyle reduces healthy outdoor activities.
and
will
have
long-term
medical
result
for
Kid.
One; one
increase
figure
about
children
suffer
from
fat
and
nearsightedness
be like
a
result
about
pay expenses
also
many
time
exist
front
about
a
A flashing screen.
In this passage,
The author uses adverbial clauses,
Continue the discussion
"
settle down
"
This lifestyle is healthy for children.
Before the disadvantages, let me talk about its advantages.
And then refute it, so as to have a sharp contrast effect,
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This lifestyle has done great harm to children's health.
Two.
Five-segment type, each segment uses a concession segment.
This writing style belongs to the non-mainstream writing style,
Candidates are required to have certain writing skills.
Grasp the argument properly.
this
This way of writing is similar to the way of questioning the rationality of the argument in the comprehensive writing in the new TOEFL.
For students who are aiming for high marks, you can try it.
Just try it. Let's look at an example:
those
opposition
this
use
about
animal
test
ask
that
it
be
Cruel
arrive
use
animal
exist
Experiment.
I
disagree
Totally.
it
will
be
many
more
Cruel
arrive
test
new
medicine
exist
children
or
Adults.
flat
if
it
exist
possible
it
will
also
take
many
Longer
arrive
see
potential
effect
Because we live longer than experimental animals such as rats or mice.
Rabbit.
Opponents of animal experiments also claim that these results do not apply to humans. this
probably
be
to a certain degree
That's right.
some
medicine
have
have
arrive
be
uncommunicative
no matter
Testing.
however
we
There is no alternative test method at all. The computer model is not advanced enough
Experiments on plants are even less applicable to humans than experiments on animals such as monkeys.
Until we have a better system
We must use animal experiments.
A
ulteriorly
main points
often
raise
opposition
animal
test
be
that
it
be
Cruel.
some
about
this
test
It looks painful.
But most people on this planet eat meat or wear leather.
Without any guilt. Where is their sympathy for animals? and
Animals obviously have no feelings.
Like humans.
Scientists are careful to minimize the stress on animals.
Because of this
Will undermine their research.
This composition is about whether animals should be used for experiments.
The author supports continuing to experiment with animals,
Before him.
In each body portion,
He first talked about the point of view of an opponent,
And then refute it.
Please pay close attention to the author of each issue.
Sentence patterns used in the first sentence of the main paragraph:
"Those?
Objection.
.
ask
that
. "; " opponent
about
..
also
ask
that
. "; " Another point is usually
opposition
.. that is.
. "
. front
2
This sentence is an object clause, and the last sentence is
From the choice of subject, the author also spent a lot of time using different word combinations in the first sentence and the second sentence respectively.
But the meaning is the same.
Therefore, Langer Overseas Examination Research Center suggests that you might as well write the first sentence of the main paragraph at the beginning.
Imitate his writing first.
Next, let's look at the sentence pattern of the second sentence:
"I totally disagree"; "This may be.
to a certain degree
True ";" some
about
this
..
cheese
. "
. These three groups of sentence patterns also achieve cadence, the first sentence
Qi is the strongest, and the tone of the last two sentences is obviously weakened. For such an arrangement, I don't think it is necessary to follow his model.
It depends on the arrangement of your views in the three paragraphs.
But generally speaking,
The strongest or most important point of view,
Either put it in the first paragraph,
Or put it in the last paragraph.
I suggest putting the most important point in the first main paragraph.
Discuss it.
All in all,
Concession paragraph has become a common paragraph development mode of five-paragraph composition at present.
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The above discussion is instructive for everyone to write concession paragraphs.